ShiVi OS: Serendipity - Page 3

pls tell what was under the gift box........

beautiful story......loved it

Oh my god. This was so beautiful❤️ Thank you for writing this. I wish you wrote the scene instead of the show writers. Your writing is so lovely! Honestly this just warmed my heart so much. Thank you for writing this and please write more soon! <3

Just amazing 😍😍😍 no words to say 👌👌😍 incredible!!!

I so wanted to read something where when they both were fighting for their lives. They should remember the moments they have spent rather than the song thing.

Nicely written🤗

This is beautiful and touching. I loved it. ❤️

The way you portrayed ShiVi is brilliant. 👏

The dialogues made me more emotional 😭

Man kiya bas yeh OS padti rahoon and yeh khatam hi na ho...

Do write more like this.....

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun

I know you've res'ed this... but just know you weren't the only emo one. It took me the entire day (I started typing this story at 9AM EST and finished at 6PM EST) because I kept bawling or didn't want to think about writing such a heavy scene. And on top of that, I looked up sad songs to set the mood. Luckily, my sister was the only one at home to see my emo-ness (she point blank ignored me since she knows I write fanfics)

I will have to read this again with some arijit as background - and literally cry my eyes out 😭 I unresed jaan but still feel I said too little

will be coming back to this os from time to time for sure!

haha my sister is the exact same way 🤣🤣

So, is soo beautiful ❤️

Absolutely beautiful. I loved Raavis prayers inbetween❤️

The Flashbacks were so cute, Shiva built her a swing and even spent time with her, so she wouldn’t go to Pandya Niwas😆

Wow kitna emotional hai iss OS written with a lot of emotion and passion, awww

Desiring and so touching

Pls write more

Much love

Jen

omg...you finally made it into a os🥳

This was amazing...it was so heart touching❤️

I actually teared up listening to Raavi's prayers that she doesnt want to die and give the relationship a chance😭❤️

The way you have expressed...your word play is too good👏

i loved this so much..one of the best reads here❤️

P.s please write a follow up or separate OS onthe aftermath in their room