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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hi guys this is Priya and I am back with my new fiction.

I am a big fan of serial Dharti ka Veer Yodha Prithviraj Chauhan .According to the serial Prithviraj and Sanyogita were first met in the Koteshwar yatra.At the end of the journey both of them became very good friends.They found each other in love.They shared an eternal bond. According to history or Prithviraj raso ,Princess Sanyogita had fallen in love with Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan . Sanyogita was the daughter of Maharaja Jaichnadra of Kannauj who was the biggest enemy of Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan.Despite of so many difficulties they got married but Maharaj Prithviraj chauhan was abducted to Afghanistan after the end of tarain second war in 1192 . Prithviraj Chauhan was So brave He killed Mohammad Ghori with the help of his close friend Chandra Bardai and Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan and Chandra Bardai stabbed each other.After the hearing the news of Prithviraj captivation His beloved wife Maharani Sanyogita committed Jauhar. I was highly fascinated by their love saga. I have always wanted to write Fanfiction on Prithviraj and Sanyogita.



I would like to thank you especially Golden_aura, coderlady , Saumya, Khyati55, Riya,paladhi, MistiSandesh, for your likes and valuable comments for my first and ongoing fiction I still love until the last breath. I have tried my best but could not resist my weird thoughts. This story is based only on two people who are totally opposite in personality.

The story has action, drama, comedy, emotions, and love. It may look like a south Indian movie but what’s wrong with a movie, every person makes an imaginary plot in their mind so I am.

What happens when opposites meet? When two completely different people find themselves drawn to each other? Can they really find happiness together?


I know kii aap sab ko eii plot dkh kar thodhi hassi ayyegi...but please trust me guys it just for fun 😂😂..

So let’s meet our main lead of the story



Sanyogita Aggarwal, driven away from her marriage, came to India from Singapore to find out her real parents. She is a bubbly, Cute, childish lighthearted girl. She accidentally meets Prithviraj Subhramanayam who was one of the business tycoons of Hyderabad and also India, a workaholic, serious, angry young man. What will happen when these two opposite people meet and will Sanyogita be able to find out her real parents? And why she ran away from her marriage?

This story has action, comedy, drama, emotions, and love. As usual, it is fiction and it has no relation with reality. All the plot, characters are the imagination of the author.

I don't watch many serials so I don't have any idea about Tv drama couples, you can also imagine your favorite pairs while reading this story.

From the character sketch plot, you will definitely understand it will have similarity with south Indian movie, when the concept of this plot hit my mind only this people face come in front of my eyes, although I am a huge fan of Prabhavs and Anushka‘s pairs I also like Allu Arjun.

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So friends should I continue this story or not ,

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Is she adopted? Whats her relationship with her adoptive parents?

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Is she adopted? Whats her relationship with her adoptive parents?

Thank you for your comment , yes you guess right but what's her relationship with her parents and everything will be revealed in the middle of the story, purpose of this story to entertain you people 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey Priya, congratulations for another one.

You are on fire, giving us one after the other FFs 🤪😁🤩

So the introduction was so nice, south indian actors you've decided, well let's see how the story unfolds...

Will be waiting for it.. continue soon ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saumya96

Hey Priya, congratulations for another one.

You are on fire, giving us one after the other FFs 🤪😁🤩

So the introduction was so nice, south indian actors you've decided, well let's see how the story unfolds...

Will be waiting for it.. continue soon ❤️

Thank you Saumya ☺️...nahi abhi utne share ekk saath nahi likh payungiii 😂😂..I will continue only I still love you my ongoing and this one..

Yes, I have chosen South Indian actor actress because filmy shilmy story haii 😂😂...I don't watch serials ...so I have selected them .

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey.... Yaar firstly no need to thanks for commenting because it's the sudden feelings we have while reading and if you all could take the trouble and give your valuable time to make us feel better then can't we just support you and do our duty😘😘😘...

And about the story then looking forward for it.. bring it on....👍👍👍👍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khyati55

Hey.... Yaar firstly no need to thanks for commenting because it's the sudden feelings we have while reading and if you all could take the trouble and give your valuable time to make us feel better then can't we just support you and do our duty😘😘😘...

And about the story then looking forward for it.. bring it on....👍👍👍👍

Thank you it's meant to me a lot 😊😊❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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DaringBaaz

Prologue

It was 9'0"clock in the morning in Singapore. A man who was continuously swimming at a pool came out after several hours. As he took the stair at the middle edge of the pool his bare skin was exposed, he has 6 pack abs, large masculine shoulder, he wept his face and hairs. He was wearing a black trunk shots swimsuit. He took a seat on a chair near the pool. Two girls sat beside him and he Embraced them by keeping his arm around either girl's waist. A man who was wearing a black formal suit came and stood in front of his boss who took a sip of the wine from the glass.

"Good morning Sherry 'the man wished his boss

His boss looks up"Why have you come to me this early morning"

The man remained silent, he was looking a little bit disturbing.

"What happened to Vikrant? Why are you looking very disturbed?"

Vikrant takes a deep breath and says " S..Sherry the girl has escaped with her boyfriend?"

'Which girl?

“Your finance”

Sherry stopped drinking wine and threw the glass on the floor.

The two girls who embrace him separate from him and go from there.

What??? when ??? he asked with an angry face

"Last night"

'The girl ran away last night and you informed me about this now"

He looked very dangerous. At that moment his sharp gaze can pierce anyone chest.

"Sherry I want to inform you but you are busy with a girl then"

Sherry closes his eyes and then said "Jao us ladki ki boyfriend ko mardaalo ..I want her at any cost,..She is min only mine"

"Relax Sherry I have already sent our people behind them within 24hours the girl will be at your hand"

Sherry looks at Vikrant and feels relief to some extent. He knew among all people Vikrant is the only one whom he could believe even with closed eyes. He has been working for him for the past 12years. Both Viraknat and he are from India. Sherry’s real name was Mallu, she came from the village after killing her father when at the age of 16. They came to Singapore and started working under a man. After a few years, he killed that man trickly and started an illegal business and within 10 years they became one of the rich men of Singapore.

“Where are her parents?”Sherry inquiry

Vikrant turned around then through gestured order a man to bring the couple to them

Two men holding the arms of the couple whose hands are knot tightening behind their back, their eyes, and mouth covered by white clothes.

Sherry by the gestures indicates Vikrant to remove the clothes from their mouth and eyes. Vikrant did as he ordered to do.

Husband:-Sherry I am sorry, I will return the money which you have given to me.

[Sherry moved close towards the couple ]

“I don’t want money. I just want your daughter,” Sherry said in a devilish tone.

Husband:-Yes, she is now your property you can do anything with her.

The lady said” How dare you?Kaise pita hai aap apni hi beti ko ise haiban ke hato swap rahe hai”

Husband:-Tum chup raho mujhe meri jaan sbase zada pyari hai”

“Tum husband-wife apni bakwas band karo “Sherry warned

Husband:- Sherry I am with you, I can do anything for you

Sherry bend down and moved close to him “really”

The husband nide his head.

Sherry gave a devil smile by looking at Vikrant

Then standing up, he snatched a gun from a man standing there and pointed it towards his head and shot him within a fraction of a second, the man lying down on the floor.

“Sherry never spare his enemy, sherry kisi ko nahi chodh ta nahi apne dushmano ko aur nahi dhokebazo ko”

The wife of the man growled in agony, her eyes full of tears. She broke down seeing her husband’s body lying adjacent to her helplessly.

Wife:-Hey Sherry tu meri beti ko kabhi bhi nahi pakadpyaega mere beti kaha hai yaih tu kabhi nahi jaan payega “

[Sherry looked at her ]”Hey pagal aurat aapni pati ki lash dekhkar sadbudi satak gaye hai kya teri”

[Wife smirik]”yeh toh mere pati ki papo ki kiye karmo ki saja hai jo aaj unhe mili , lekin yad rakh duniya mein agar tujh jaisa shaitan hai toh bhagwan ne kahin na kahi Tujh jaise papiyo se bachane wale Roksahk bhi behje honge .Yeh ek aurat, ek Maa ka shraap hai tujhe woh haar ush aurat ki hai lagi gi tujhe jiski zindagi tune barbaad kya hai . Tu marne ke liye tadpe ga phir bhi tujhe mukti nahi milegi”

“Yeeeeh,,paaagal bodhi,” Sherry's eyes getting bloodshot, raises his gun and continuously shots at her until his gun bullets become empty.

The floor where the two bodies lay was sprayed with fragments of skull, brains, and blood. Blood is everywhere, running along the ground and falling on the pool and mixed with water. Some drop of blood also fell on his face.

“Yai kya kiya Sherry yai hmara ek zariya ban sakti thi”Vikrant whishpher

“I don’t want anyone to help me reach my target, YESSS..SHE IS MY TARGET, sherry se dhokebaazi ki anjam kya hoti hai hai aab usladki ko bhi pata chalega . CHAHE DUNIYA KE KISI BHI KONE MEIN WOH MEIN USE DHON NIKALUNGA”

He growls, at that moment he is looking like a hungry monster who can kill anybody if they come in front of his path.


Toh abh sab jaan hi gayehonge ..story ki starting villain see ho Rahi hai😊..please let me know how is it? How the villain reached the heroin and where is she now? who is her boyfriend? you will get to know, in chapter-1...this story is just for fun..it has no relation with reality,

MEMBERSONLY]

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very interesting prologue dear🤗🤗

Story starts from Vikrant & Sherry the villan

Bg Singapore that is interesting

Ye kaun thi jo unko lapet ke bhag gayi 😯😯 poor girl but her dad deserve this

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: golden_aura

Very interesting prologue dear🤗🤗

Story starts from Vikrant & Sherry the villan

Bg Singapore that is interesting

Ye kaun thi jo unko lapet ke bhag gayi 😯😯 poor girl but her dad deserve this

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊

Thank you Goldie ❤️..I am glad you liked it 🤗...

Yes Story stated from Sherry and Vikrant..

Yes her father deserve that..

Let's see what happens next 😉

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