Raghvi FF- BROKEN- Chp 9 Updated Pg 9 - Page 3

It will be further updated or not?? waiting for so long

Originally posted by: Fariha9283

It will be further updated or not?? waiting for so long

The story would be updated. I use my free time to update, but as my work schedule has been hectic recently, i am unable to do so.

this is really good

excited for upcoming updates

Just loving this plot so much....please update soon

Read all chapters in one go. Very well written. Can’t wait to read more.

CHAPTER 7

Raghav and Farhad stopped at the steps of the temple, to let the others out before proceeding to park on the other side. While exiting Amma said “make sure and come up Raghav, I’ll like to offer prayers with my entire family”. He nodded and drove off while the others went to purchase the necessary items needed.

The auto pulled up a few mins later. Pallavi took Aryan in her arms as he had fallen asleep and with Saira at her side they went ahead to the stairs. Since they walked with all the things needed for the offering, there was no need to visit the stalls.

The place was crowded today, and it became difficult for Pallavi to make her way through with aryan in her arms. When they reached the stairs, they decided Saira would stay with Aryan outside, while Pallavi went ahead into the temple.

Pallavi was accustomed with the stares she received because of her white sari. Some looked at her with pity, while others looked at her like she was cursed. On most days she ignored it. However for some reason today, she felt odd.

As soon as she stepped into the temple, she felt a chill run through her body. She looked around expecting to see people starring, but no one was paying particular attention to her. She shrugged it off, rang the overhead bell before joining the line with the other worshippers. Meanwhile, Amma and the others were almost to the front awaiting Raghav & Farhad.

Aryan had awoken, and was making a fuss when he didn’t see Pallavi. “Aryan baby, Didi will be back shortly. Please don’t cry" Saira cooed trying to ease his cries, while walking back and forth. She wasn’t paying much attention to her surroundings, and when she moved to turn direction she bumped into someone and stumbled forward. This caused Aryan to become loose from her hands. A scream of panic left her mouth as she saw Aryan falling forward, her arms unable to grab him to her. However before he hit the ground a pair of arms clothed in a jacket caught him. A pair of hands also was holding her from the back, which prevented her from falling forward.

The arms at her back steadied her. She looked at Aryan who was looking at the man intently, his cries gone. He lifted his tiny hands and pulled at the man’s beard, to which the man chuckled. “In about 20 years you’ll have one also" the stranger said to which Aryan giggled as if he understood.

“Thank you so much. I don’t know what I would’ve done if he was hurt. It was irresponsible irresponsible of me to not look where I was going” she said to the man holding Aryan.

The man at her back came and stood next to the one in front of her. Both were dressed in suits. The one that saved her wore a black suit and tie with a white shirt. He had a serious look on his face, he didn’t even glanced at her once. The man that held Aryan was wearing a 3 piece suit minus the tie. His chest was visible through his open buttons of his shirt.

Did he not know he was in a temple, she thought.

“That’s ok. Be careful in the future” he said while coming forward to pass Aryan back to her. Aryan however refused to leave his hand. He turned and hugged the man around his neck.

Raghav felt something, he couldn’t quite place the feeling when the little guy wrapped his tiny arms around his neck. “What’s his name?” he asked the woman in front of him.

“Aryan” she answered. Raghav observed her. She looked quite young, maybe early twenties. Her white attire told of her widowhood. “And yours?” he asked. “Saira Abdul” she replied.

She was a Muslim. He pulled the little guys hand and brought his face to his. “Aryan wont you go to your Ammi” he said while again trying to pass him back to his mother. However the little guy refuse to budge. “No Saira” he said shaking his little head.

Raghav looked at her. Her face was flushed with worry. “Is he not your son? He’s calling you by your name”. Raghav could tell she was hesitant to reply because of the way she bit down on her lip.

“No, he’s not my son, but that does not mean I think of him as anything less. Both of us stay at an Ashram not far away. We are here with another occupant. Aryan fell asleep and because of the crowd I stayed back with him, while she went up to the temple. I’m sorry for this inconvenience, but Aryan is a little fussy when he awakes. There’s only one person that can calm him down immediately and she’s inside" she said while trying again to take Aryan from his hands.

“Aryan, come on Didi is waiting for us. Let’s go to her”. At the mention of his “Didi" the little guy let go of Raghav’s neck and went to Saira. Raghav can see how his face lit up. He must love his Didi a lot.

She looked at him and Farhad. “Thank you both for saving us. Say thank you and goodbye Aryan”.

Aryan stretched to Raghav and gave him a wet kiss on his cheeks. “Bye" he said to Raghav smiling, who in turn ruffled his hair.

“Bye little guy. Be good to both of your Didi ok".

Raghav watchas she strolled off carrying Aryan. They went to a nearby stall, where she purchased some snacks and drinks. She sat with him on a bench and started to feed him.

“Let’s go Farhad" he said while he turned towards the stairs. Having gotten no response, Raghav turned and observe Farhads’ gaze on Saira and Aryan. “Farhad” he called again a little louder. This got his attention, and he turned to Raghav his face flush with embarrassment.

“Sorry Anna" he said. Raghav looked at him with a knowing smirk. “If you found her interesting, why did you not introduce yourself.”

This caused Farhad’s flushed face to turn a darker shade. “Its nothing like that Anna” he said softly. “But why didn’t you ask her what Ashram. It could be yours.”

“I did think to ask, but I’ll know tomorrow anyway right. Come now, let’s go, the others must be waiting”.

The others reached the front of the line, but Raghav had not showed up. With the Pundits approval, they stood to the side awaiting Raghav, while the other worshippers took their turn.

Pallavi was almost to the front when she felt that weird feeling from before. Her heart rate picked up. What was happening to her? She placed her hand on her chest and took some deep breaths. “Was she having a heart attack? She wondered.

Sharda Deshmuk saw her first. She looked at her daughter, dressed in a white sari. Her long hair flowing down her back. No jewelry except a pair of plain earrings. He face almost completely devoid of make up, except for some mascara that lined her eyes. She was holding a tray of items for her offering. Sharda blinked to ensure she wasn’t hallucinating.

Her beautiful daughter, dressed in a widow’s attire. Flashes of Pallavi dressed in colorful clothes and laughing danced before her eyes. Tears began to make it’s way down her face. She grabbed her husband’s hand.

Vijay Deshmuk looked at his wife when she grabbed his hands and saw the tears. “Sharda?” he questioned worried. When she didn’t move an inch he followed her vision, and was left shocked when he saw his daughter. He looked at her clothing and flashes of her wedding and the day he threw her out moved before his eyes.

Jaya Rao, getting no response from Vijay Deshmuk to further the conversation they were having, turned and saw his gazed fixed somewhere. She followed the direction and gasp. There stood Pallavi. However, it wasn’t the Pallavi she knew 2 years back. Gone was the twinkle in her eyes, the lines of laughter on her face & her colorful sari. The confidence in which she carried herself was also missing.

There stood before them was a shadow of the person they all knew. Kerthi and Harish also stood silently watching her.

Vijay Deshmuk was the first to come out of the trance, and started walking towards her.

After taking a couple deep breaths to still her racing heart, Pallavi moved ahead in the line, only to stop abruptly. There stood in front of her was Vijay Deshmuk!

She stood still looking at him. Her eyes then shifted to his right and she saw the others. Pallavi felt the tears building, but she fought to keep them at bay. He took a step towards her , but she took two steps back and put out her hands motioning him to stop.

She felt as though a hand was squeezing her throat. Stopping the air from flowing. This did not stop the images of the man standing in front of her, dragging and throwing her out unto the dark streets. She needed to get out of here, in order to breathe. She turned and ran out the temple. She heard her name being called by many, but she did not stop. She reached the stairs and without looking continued to run down.

She was halfway down when she felt as if she had hit a wall. The impact sent the tray of items into the air. She closed her eyes and grabbed onto the surface she hit, and felt the material bunched in her hands. She felt something being sprinkled on her, at the same time she heard the tray hit the floor.

Pallavi took a few seconds before she opened her eyes. She had to blink a few times as a powdery substance coated her eyelashes. She realised she has grabbed onto someone. She unclenched her fingers from the person’s clothing and went to move back. However a hand came around her waist and prevented her from moving away. She looked up and her breathe caught in her throat.

There stood Raghav Rao, his face covered in sindoor, holding her tight. Pallavi felt her strength leaving her body, she fought the darkness when she heard a tiny voice cried “Didi". However, it soon won as her world turned black.

They finally meet 😆 superb chapter!

What a beautiful update.

Loved that Pallavi ignored VD and others. Can't wait to see how the meeting between Raghav and Pallavi unfolds.

Will we get more of Farhad and Saira??

Eagerly waiting for next chapter

Woah! That was some meeting you prepared well👏

Loved how you changed the scene a little bit about the Sindoor sprinkled here just a tad different than the serial's take of it being thrown through the air at her

Can't wait to read further

Like your fan fiction a lot.

The latest update is really amazing. 😁

Waiting for the next update. Hopefully we will get it soon 🥺