Raghvi FF- BROKEN- Chp 9 Updated Pg 9

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Hello everyone! I've been a silent reader on IF a few years now. Came across this show via an instragram clip and fell in love. I rely on written updates and these lovely discussions ❤️to follow the show since I dont know Hindi.


This is my first attempt at writing a story. Please ignore the errors 🤗


BROKEN

CHAPTER 1

Pallavi banged at the closed door. “Baba please open the door. Believe me please. Raghav is lying Baba. Please believe me Baba” she cried. The door remain closed. She fell to the ground pulling her knees up to her chin, while the tears continued to flow down her face. “Baba please “ she whispered staring at the door.

The clasp of thunder woke her up. She had fallen asleep in that same position. She looked around confused, then everything came back to her. The vile words from Raghav, the heartbreaking words from Baba, her being thrown out the house, everything. She got to her feet and with one last look at the door, she turned and walked away.

No words were said between the two men on the drive back to RR mansion. Farhad kept staring ahead, while Raghav looked out the window. Both men were replaying the scene at Deshmuk house. Farhad sent a silent prayer to Allah to protect Pallavi, he knows deep down she can never do what the scumbag accused her of. If only Raghav believed the same.

Raghav on the other hand was silently battling his inner turmoil. He did the right thing his mind told him. He avenged his Amma’s and sister’s defamation. Pallavi reaped what she sowed. However his heart ached when he remember the look on her face of pure disbelief and disgust when he was saying those crude things about her. Stop it Raghav….he mentally scolded himself. Pallavi Deshmuk deserved every thing he did! No one would mess with his family without being punished. He was a Don…Hyderabad most dangerous…to mess with him or his family would only bring doom to yourself. He hope Pallavi Deshmuk remembers this all her life.

He turned an looked at Farhad. “Take me to Amma".Without uttering a word Farhad redirected the vehicle to the new destination. A bit miffed with Farhad's attitude Raghav snapped “ Is there something you’ll like to say?” Farhad turned to him, both men glaring at each other. “You did wrong today Anna, Pallavi didn’t deserved that. I pray Allah protect her from all the suffering she's about to go through because of you! I’ve been with you from day one Anna, and I was never ashamed of anything you did, or we did. But today I cant even look myself in the eye, much less Pallavi. You crossed all limit today and I hope when realization hits you are able to handle it. With one last look at Raghav, Farhadturned his attention back to the road. Raghav raged “ I don’t care what the hell you think Farhad, what I did to Pallavi, she deserved everything. Raghav Rao is never wrong! One more thing, becareful how outspoken you are in the future. This insubordinate attitude would not be tolerated.” Farhad eyes glared with defiance, but he did not respond. As angry as he was with Raghav, his loyalty would forever be with his Anna. They pulled up to Amma’s house. Raghav came out and slammed the door shut. Without a look to Farhad he walked up to the house.Farhad followed closely behind , being the shadow protecting his Anna like he always had.

The road was dark, wind blowing violently with constant thunder and lightning. Pallavi kept walking, her bare feet leaving droplets of blood along the way. She felt nothing. The tears have stopped, her mind was blank. A flying debris struck her above her eyebrow. She flinched as dark red liquid flowed down her face. However her steps didn’t falter.

She kept walking until her body had no strength left and she lost consciousness falling into a darkabyss.

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Awesome 😍😘😍😘 Can't wait for more 😍😍😍😍

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Omg this is such a great start...and you left us at a cliffhanger..update soon

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Waiting for the next update👌

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CHAPTER 2

Raghav knocked at the door and waited throwing angry glances at Farhad, to which Farhad ignored. The door was opened by Kerthi. Raghav could see the tear marks on her face, which brought his anger back . He took his sister into his embrace. At his touch she broke down with silent sobs. While rubbing her back to calm her down he stepped into the house. He saw his mother sitting at the small dining table. He looked at their untouched plates. “Shh” he whispered trying to calm her down. After a few minutes she finally calmed down and took her seat next to Amma. Raghav looked at both of them. Come on let’s have dinner. He glanced at Farhad who without a word knew what Raghav wanted. He walked in to the kitchen and came back and placed a plate in front of Raghav. Kerthi looked at Amma who nodded her approval, before serving her brother. Raghav looked at his mother “Amma please eat a little. Skipping meals is not good for your health.” She didn’t reply, nor even looked at him, but started having her meal.

They ate in silence. Kerthi cleared the table when finished. Raghav led his mother to the sitting area. “Amma the person responsible for defaming you and Kerthi have been dealt with. In a few days all this will blow over. Please don’t stress yourself out. I’m here to help both of you through this. Please come home with me.” She looked at him. “What to you mean by dealt with? What have you done Raghav?” Kerthi came up to them and sat with Farhad. Raghav bent his head when his mother asked this question. She put her fingers under his chin and brought his eyes to face hers again. “What have you done, answer me.”

“I’ve gotten justice for you both!” he snapped. “Justice, are you the law Raghav? Who did you punish? Jaya glared at her son. “They aren't important Amma. You and Kerthi are the only ones important to me.”

Jaya then turned to Farhad. ”What have Raghav done? And don’don't you dare look at him for approval to answer me.” Farhad was caught in between both of them. As much as he wanted to answer Jaya aunty, his loyalty will always be firstly to Raghav Rao. “ I’m sorry aunty" he said and bent his head. She turned to Raghav “Kerthi and I would leave Hyderabad tonight, unless you answer me. You have two minutes. If you chose not to answer show yourself out. Let’s go pack Kerthi.” Before she could stand Raghav held her hand, “Amma please, you and Kerthi are my only family, you cant leave. I’ll answer you.”

“Kerthi pictures were taken by Pallavi Deshmuk” stated Raghav dryly. Both Amma and Kerthi eyes went wide with shock. “Are you crazy Raghav?” shouted Kerthi. “It’s the truth Kerthi. I found the photographer who posted the photos. He confessed he was paid by Pallavi to defame you, in order to get back to me. Pallavi and I have been having a cold war for the past month. This was her way of getting back to me. She blames me for ruining her sisters life,so she tried to do the same to mine”! Raghav angrily blurted out.

Kerthi eyes filled with tears. “Oh God Raghav, what did you do to her” she cried. Turning to her mother she said" Amma you know what Pallavi have done for us, I’m scared for her. Jaya look Raghav. “Answer us please Raghav.” And finally he told them everything. How he plotted and defamed her in front of her family.

By the end of Raghav's explanation Kerthi was sobbing and Amma sat with her hands in her head unable to believe Raghav is capable of doing something so disgusting. “You call yourself a brother who felt your sisters pain? Yet you did this to a woman, a daughter, a sister? Have you no shame. Was anything you said to the Deshmuks about her character true?” “No" he answer flatly. “I never thought you would fall lower in my eyes Raghav, but you did so today. Let me tell you what Pallavi have done for us.

Your sister works for her, keeping her accounts. Kerthi is the one that made the fake accounts, because of her father's ill health. Do you know Pallavi studied business, and could have easily done her accounts herself? Do you know why she employed Kerthi, even though her business was in loss. So Kerthi and I could have food on our table. I never allowed Kerthi to use your money Raghav. It’s all in a bank account I made her transfer it too. We are able to eat and pay our rent because of that woman you just defamed. Also, who do you think donated that blood I desperately needed to survive the surgery?”

“What are you saying Amma? This cant be true” said Raghav shocked. “It is true Raghav, what you have done, even God wont forgive you” while saying this Amma couldn’t help the tears then. Kerthi hugged her mother “I’m scared for Pallavi Amma” she cried. “What must she be going through right now. Amma consoled her. “I pray her family believes her over this devil” she said, looking straight to Raghav.

Raghav couldn’t believe his Amma’s words. After all that Pallavi has done to him, this just cant be true. There has to be some explanation. He turned to Farhad, and wish he didn’t. Farhad eyes mirrored the disgust of Amma’s and Kerthi's. Without a word Farhad got up and walked away.” Amma, she may have helped you and Kerthi, but that doesn’t mean she couldn’t have taken those pictures. She did so to get back at me. We have been at war for almost 1month now. Trust me Amma, I did the right thing, she paid for her doings".

“Enough Raghav!” shouted Kerthi. “You have known her for a month, and think you know her better than us? I have known her for almost 2 years. She cant even hurt a fly, muchless do this to me, or anyone else for that matter. I cant believe you did this. Oh God, I hope they haven’t done anything to her, Amma I need to go to the Deshmuk’s.” Saying this Kerthi ran towards the door. Raghav grabbed her arm before she reached the door. “Let me go Raghav” she pulled her arms away. “You won't go anywhere, not at this hour” Shouted Raghav. She paid no heed and continued to the door. Farhad blocked the door. “Kerthi it’s too late for you to go out. It’s not safe. Listen to your brother".

“You don’t understand Farhad, Pallavi needs someone there for her, please let me go before something wrong happens . I need to explain to them that she is innocent” cried Kerthi.

Just then a phone started to ring. It was Kerthi’s phone which was on the table.Raghav got to it first, and saw it flashing Krishna. He pressed answer and beforehe could say anything, Krishna’s hurried voice came through “ Kerthi have you heard from Pallavi Didi. She was thrown out of the house. Nikhil and I have been searching for her, but we are unable to find her.”

Raghav was shocked. He didn’t expect for her to be thrown out of her own house. That family kept Amruta, why would they throw Pallavi out. “Kerthi are you there?” The phone was snatched from Raghav’s hand. “Krishna is Pallavi ok? What! Oh God! tell me where you are I’m coming to meet you.” She turned to Farhad. “Please take me to Nirvana temple to meet Nikhil and Krishna.” He nodded. She turned to Raghav. “After what you have done to that innocent girl today, you are no brother of mine. I wish I never see your face again. Pallavi was an orphan, who was fortunate to get a family in the Deshmuk’s. But you ruined all that today. After the accusations you put on her, no father in law would believe that his widowed daughter in law is innocent.”

Raghav was left shocked. Daughter in law! Widow. NO this cant be true. He looked at his mother, her silent tears confirmed Kerthi’s words. Oh God,what have I done, he thought.

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Loved it.. please update soon

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Please update next part soon...waiting long for the update...it was beautiful and had tears reading the same

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Please update next part soon...waiting long for the update...it was beautiful

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CHAPTER 3

2 YEARS LATER

The sun slowly crept up the sky, throwing light to chase away the darkness of the night. The slight breeze blowing the hair of a woman who walked out to the garden with a watering can in her hand. She kneeled to the damp earth and started tending the plants. An hour passed, and she finally stood up. She looked at the neat rows of the vegetable plants and a slight smile adorned her face. Just then she heard the alarm going off. She looked back at the building that has been her home for the past 2 years. JRK Ashram & Orphange. She can honestly say, if it wasn’t for the people in this place, she didn’t think she would be alive today. Pallavi Deshmuk, no scratch that, Pallavi Sharma! When she look into the mirror, regardless of the new surname she’s using, she sees no identity, just a girlwho’s fighting her past memories to survive day by day.

The memories came flooding back. After that awful night 2 years ago, she awoke at the hospital the next morning. Everything after being thrown out, was a blur to her. She remembered walking and it had began to rain, but that’s it. Nothing else. There was no one in the room. She was hooked up on an IV and she was dressed in a hospital gown. Her head hurt, and when she lifted her hands to touch, she felt a bandage. Just then the door opened, and in came a doctor followed by an aged couple. The doctor smiled when he saw her awake. “ Good, you’re up. I’m doctor Sharma. How do you feel? Apart from a headache" he said while pointing tothe bandage. “My head does hurt, I’m feeling a bit weak, but no pain anywhere else" I replied. He nodded while taking notes. “You were found by this couple on a deserted road. Do you remember how you got there? Or what happened,since your appearance suggested that you may have been in some accident, or…” he didn’t continue but left it up to her to say what happened.

She looked at the couple that found her. The woman lookedworried, her husband holding her hands tightly as if trying to calm her down. They were genuinely concerned for her. Pallavi knew she couldn’t lie to them, she then told the three people in the room her entire story, just leaving out names. When she was finished, the doctor had a sympathetic look on his face, while the woman came to me and held my hand. “Child, please don’t say you are alone in this world, you have us. We run an Ashram & Orphanage back in Bhopal. We are here for a meeting with the owner. We leave tonight, please come with us.” Pallavi lookedat these people who were offering her a home, while those she thought were her own had thrown her out. Tears filled her eyes then, which were wiped away by the man. “Don’t cry my child, Lord Shiva sent us here to help you. Do not think you are ever alone". Pallavi couldn’t help the tears then, she hugged these two people and cried for the life she’s leaving behind.

When she had calmed down they introduced themselves. “We are Akash & Bani Rathore. What’s your name?” She looked at them, then to the doctor, “my name is Pallavi, just Pallavi.” The doctor smiled, then said to the couple, “please excuse me as I’ll like to do a check up of the patient. It would only be a few minutes.” They nodded an left. He then pulled a chair closeto Pallavi and sat. He checked her vitals, which he told her was good. He askeda couple more questions which she answered and then wrote her some prescription for medication. “ You fainted due to high blood pressure. Given what you went through, I think in a few days you’ll be back to normal. You need to rest, your body as well as your mind, for a complete recovery in minimum time.” He looked at her. “Now Pallavi, I need a surname for the hospital records.” She looked at him, “I’m sorry doctor, but I can’t give it to you. I don’t want anyone to find me. Please understand” she said with tears again threatening to spill. He patted her hands, “I do, I’ll record your name as Pallavi Sharma. Here is my number, please if you ever need anything do not hesitate to call me. You will always have someone you can consider a brother in Hyderabad.” He pulled out a rakhi from his pocket, “my sister sent this to me as she’s unable to visit this year, would you do me the honor?”

Pallavi looked at this stranger, who was offering the protection of a brother. She thought about the couple outside who is offering her shelter. How strange the world can be. Your own would turn their back while strangers comfort you. She took the rakhi from him “this sister would forever be grateful to you” she said while tying it on his wrist. When she was finished, he gave her a side hug,while ruffling her hair. “Now let’s get you discharged, so you can begin your new life!”.

While he did the necessary paper work to be discharged, her mind wandered to the man who took everything from her. Why Raghav? Why did you destroy my life? What did I do to deserve this punishment? Although she wished she had the answers, a part of her didn’t want to know as she was thankful to him for showing her what she meant to the Deshmuks.

Maybe that is why, even today when she thinks of him, there’s no hate. There’s definitely hurt, there’s anger but she can’t bring herselfto hate him. Even after years of waking up to nightmares, reliving that dreadful night, there’s no hate for him. Raghav Rao have broken all the relationships that I held dear to me yet I am unable to hate him.

“Didi" a voice called out to her, which brought herback to reality. She turned and looked at the 2 year old toddler, walking unsteadily through the garden to meet her. Mrs Rathore followed closely behind. She walked to meet them smiling as she saw the toddler take off with a run. She caught him in her arms and swung him in the air, enjoying his giggles. She brought him down to her face level and kissed his cheeks earning another round of giggles . Mrs Rathore looked on, smiling and said. “Pallavi, someone was being naughty, he didn’t want to drink his milk without his Didi.” As if he understood every word said, he hugged Pallavi tightly around her neck hiding his face within her hair. Pallavi turned him around to face her. “Aryan, why didn’t you drink your milk?” He looked at her with his puppy eyes “mish you" he said in his baby words. “Aww baby, let’s go up so you can have it" she said while cuddling him and walking towards the house with Mrs Rathore by her side. “Pallavi anyone seeing you both interacting, would honestly believe you are mother and son.” Pallavi smiled at her. “The love I have for him is no less than a mother, we came here together, him no more than a few weeks old. Maybe we were destined to find each other” said Pallavi as she cradled the little guy to her. “Yes, God always has a way to help people through their difficult times. And I know he would bring colors back to your life one day.” Pallavi looked down at her white sari, “I doubt that Mrs. Rathore, sometimes I think my life was meant to be void of colors, and my heart to remain broken for all time.

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Wow! This is an entirely different take on the Story!



Please continue this. I would really like to read this new concept❤️

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