~TDPODF~(AK,SK&many)will be unfinished forever - Page 8

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ravinder duggal

great story
continue soon



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Posted: 18 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Paru_M

awesome part ana dear 👏



thanx paru dear
love u dear😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 4
(ending part)

On announcement all get ready…………….Karan ask nandini and nandini give her her hand and left…………..kripa make an anoy face but angad ask her…………….she firstly make a "what" look but on seeing angad pleading face sh got melted and got a smile and left with him………….anjali was about to sit with kashish but kavya ask her 4 dance and on kashish nod in yes………….she left with him while gauri had already left with Shlok

Kashish was sitting there but nikhil didn't ask him 4 dance………………….that hurts her as she wanna spend the moments with him………..but he was busy in talking with his friends…………………..kashish went to him and said excause to his friends and ask 4 the dance………..Nikhil firstly make a "what's that" look but later he went with her on the dance floor…….a soft song starts

Kabhi dil k kareeb
Tumhain mere naseeb
Youn lain gain socha na tha(karan and nandini were engrossed in each other)

Aik chahat ka pal
Sab sawaloon ka hal
Yun pain gay
Socha na tha(gauri and Shlok too give each other side glances and smile)

Kabhi dil k kareeb

Ankahin jo abh meri ankhon main hain
Dhoond raha tha kaiye saloon se
Kitni milti hain ankhain yeh
Khwaboon se mere khayaloon se(angad was totally lost in kripa eyes and don't know what happened to kripa……………she was too looking into his eyes)

K haqeeqat main hum

Sapnon ka sanam

Youn pain gay
Socha na tha

Kabhi Dil k Kareeb(kavya and anjali were just looking here and there to avoid eye contact but what happened in there hearts…………(heart want one glance of each other) they were confused about that)

Kabhi tanha bethay bethay younhi
main bhi kabhi gum ho jati thi
Main bhi kahan main rehti thi
Aksar main tum ho jati thi

Yeh ajab se khata

Or us ki saza(kashish was looking into nikhil eyes but nikhil was totally avoiding him……and that was hurting her)

Yeh pain gain
Socha na tha

All sis were dancing near to each other……………..then an announcement occur that all should change there partners with the persn next to him…..

Kashish came with angad, kripa with kavya, gauri with nikhil, anjali with karan and nandini with shlok

They start dancing on Pal pal pal from Lagay Raho Munna Bhai

"jeej………where r u planning to going on ur honeymoon?" anjali asked karab

"where nandini wants………….well I want to go to Goa but nandini want to go to some hill station…………….so lets see"…………….karan said politely to anjali

"kashish……….don't get angry with bhai behaviour…………may be the end of the day will make u happy." Angad said with a smile

kashish got a lil smile and said " ur bro didn't even wish me valentine for once…….i don't think to have a smile in end as the day is about to end"

"we will see"

"only u will see"……………..kashish said with a sad look………..while angad got serious

while others just chat 4 a while

the song ends and angad take nikhil to a side and said the ladies to go and have a seat…….

"bhai………whats that………..u always hurt kashish…………….she is soon to be ur wife………..make her happy………….u didn't even wish her valentines"

"what should I do angad……………..i can't do these things………..i don't know how to keep a girl happy"

"bhai………..i have a plan"……….he said something in his ears and got a smile

its 11:30 and was time to leave…………kavya and anjali became good friends and gauri and shlok too………….gauri, anjali, nandini and kripa sit in the car and there was no more space as driver was too there……………so kashish had only the choice to go with nikhil as he asked her

kashish sit on his back……………..and the guys too left…………firstly nikhil followed the gauri's car but suddenly he changed the track

"what is this nikhil………..why u had changed the track"

"well it's a surprise…………wait" nikhil said with a smile

he take her to a 7 star resturant and give her a bouquet(that was all managed by angad and he asked the hotel manager to be there with a bouquet)

kashish seem confused and when they enter there was a round table full of rose flower and a cake was there on which "To my Valentine, Kashish" was written

kashish asked him what is that……………..

"well I know u were angry with me 4 not wishing u valentine but that was my surprise……….."

"but the valentine day is about to end"…………..kashish said looking at the clock which struck 11:59

"is about to………….is not end yet……………..i just wanna say that other only express there love on only this day……….but I will love u forever and will keep telling u that" kashish eyes got teary and she hug him thought that he is not that bad but on the other hand while hugging kashish……………nikhil was only thanking God that the fish is not out of the pond and think that "Oh God! What is this?" with an fed up look

later they cut the cake and feed each othr and then with sweet smile drop her to her house and left

"kashish……….what make u take so much time?"……nandini ask as she was in bed when kash enter in room

"well nothing…………nikhil only take me to a place………….that was so romantic yaar………….u always say bad things him………….he is not that bad as u think"

"I said that coz I care u……………and don't want u 2 face any prob ok"

"I know yaar……………..but I love him"……………she said with a smile

"then I can only hope that he will love u back as much as u love him"……nandini said and turn her face to other side while kashish got into deep thinking

ok guys
chap 4 end

chap 5 will be here till thursday or friday night

luv u guys

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Posted: 18 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: zeenat_786

nice part!!! continue soon!!



hi zeenat
welcome to my post😳
thanx 4 commenting
hope will make u like it after wards😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
hey ana dear cute part..... 👏
toh yeh nihkhil bhi..... karan ki tarah hi hai.... 😡
hmmmm lets c k kash ko kab pata chalega dat 😡
it was all arranged by anagd 😛 n nikhil really desnt love her..... 😳 ufff tabhi to sujal ki entry hogi..... 😉
hehheehhehe lolz 😆
nywys will wait for ur update... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
wow ana sis great part it was amazing toooooo gooooooooooood really enjoyed reading ... kashish still dosen;'t know how nikhil is urrrgghh but m sure very ssooon continue sooon will be waiting 4 the next part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
excellent part!!!!!
weh i red chap 4 endin i tho u wer endin dis fanfic
i wz reely sad nd quickly opened dis topic coz sumwer in ma hrt i new u wudnt do it......
plz continue soon.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: KulBin

hey ana dear cute part..... 👏
toh yeh nihkhil bhi..... karan ki tarah hi hai.... 😡
hmmmm lets c k kash ko kab pata chalega dat 😡
it was all arranged by anagd 😛 n nikhil really desnt love her..... 😳 ufff tabhi to sujal ki entry hogi..... 😉
hehheehhehe lolz 😆
nywys will wait for ur update... 😊



hey bina jii
yuppp..............u r getting my point right jiiiii
😉

but will tell u the whole story soon😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: Honii

wow ana sis great part it was amazing toooooo gooooooooooood really enjoyed reading ... kashish still dosen;'t know how nikhil is urrrgghh but m sure very ssooon continue sooon will be waiting 4 the next part 👏



hey hana dear
ya hana dear....u will see that soon
me gonna post it till tomorrow
😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

excellent part!!!!!
weh i red chap 4 endin i tho u wer endin dis fanfic
i wz reely sad nd quickly opened dis topic coz sumwer in ma hrt i new u wudnt do it......
plz continue soon.... 👏



hey dear
i just completed the part...................and how could i end it without the meeting od KA😳
will post next part tomorrow

k

luv u dear

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