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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing part ana dear 👏 the party scene was really sweet 😉 exceppt nikil 😡 now i can't wait till kash dumps him 😃cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part 👏 👏 👏
continue soon !!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Paru_M

amazing part ana dear 👏 the party scene was really sweet 😉 exceppt nikil 😡 now i can't wait till kash dumps him 😃cont soon

hey paru dear

no thanku yaara

yaar u don't have to wait

as kashish is gonna dump him😆

lolz

ana

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ravinder duggal

nice part 👏 👏 👏
continue soon !!!!

thanku dear

i m gonna cont😳

lolz

ana

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Posted: 18 years ago
#85

thanku dear

😳

here is next part

lolz

ana

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Chapter 5

Almost one month passed ………..Kashish and nandini give there exams.............…it was 5th march and the day of wedding of nandini………………Mr.Oberoi tried to fulfilled every demand of the groom's side and almost was succeeded in that except the car issue…………..karan mom demand 4 a car but as he wanted to save money 4 other daughters too………..he refused to fulfilled that………..but due to karan love 4 nandini………..karan mom's wasn't able to stop the marriage……………all the matter was between Mr.Oberoi, karan and karan's mom……….

Marriage proceed beautifully…………….all the dhol dhamaka, dancing and applying henna help to make it more beautiful………….in last nandini and karan got married and Mr and Mrs Oberoi send nandini to her new home under the veil of there blessings.

After some days of nandini's wedding…………nikhil mom come to Mr.Oberoi house to and said

"mr.oberoi…………..i was thinking as now u r free from nandin's responsibility………I want u to get free from kashish responsibity too………….we want to get married kashish an nikhil"

"what……….what r u saying……….u know that I want kashish and nandini marriage at the same time………….but coz of u……………ur saying that nikhil is not yet settled I end my wish"

"I know that but nikhil is forcing to get him married now……….what could we doo?"

"Mr.Oberoi………….i need some time to think about that"….Mr.Oberoi was about to left the room when kashish came in the room

"Papa…………….we don't need to think about anything?"…….kashish said in anger

"what do u mean?"……….Mr.Oberoi asked tensed

"I mean"…………she take the ring from her finger "coz of this thing………we are always bound to obey them……………but now"……she place the ring on Mrs.Khanna's palm "we are not longer bound to do anything"

"kashish……………what the hell r u doing?"….Mr.Oberoi said in anger

"r u mad"……….Mrs Khanna said…………

"no …………..i m saying it in my all senses"

"dhapak"………Mr.Oberoi in full of anger slap her hard………..kashish face was covered by her hairs

hearing that voice kripa and anjali too come out from there room………..and were shocked

kashish look at his father with teary eyes

"kripa, anjali………..take her away from my eyes"……Mr.Oberoi was soo harsh that make even anjali and kripa shiver

kripa and anjali come to her with fear in there eyes

"lets leave dii"…………anjali said in a scary tone

both handle her from her shoulder and take her away but kashish movement was emotionless…………….it was seemed that they are holding a dead body

"Mr.Khanna………….. i m sorry 4 kashish behavior………..i will look after that"

"now what r u gonna say………….ur daughter has said it it"…….Mrs.Khanna left in anger and Mr.Oberoi become red

anjali and kipa come to the room………….but as they entered………..kashish fell on the floor

"mama………..papa" kripa scremed at full of her voice

"dii………..wake up diii………..talk to me dii"……..anjali said while tapping her face…….Mrs Oberoi come to the room instantly while kripa and anjali were rubbing kashish hands and feets and were constantly calling her……..

but Mr.Oberoi didn't move even a single bit on the voice of the kripa ………while Mrs.Oberoi runs into the room

Mrs.Oberoi came and splash some water on her face…………….kashish came to senses and again closed her eyes………….kripa and anjali make her lay on the bed and Mr.oberoi instantly call the doc

After some time doc came and check kashish nerves…………….gave her an injection and said

"her pulse rate was too down…………..it was about to reach the dead end……….thank God u call at right time…………otherwise…………anything can happen to her"

kripa, anjali and Mrs.Oberoi get tensed

"I have given her injection and….." he give them a paper " here is the list of some medicine…………..give her on right time…………..and tell her to eat fruits"

Doc left and all came into the room quiet depressed………….kripa sat near her feat while anjali said near her head and start combing her hair but tear were constantly flowing from there eyes

2 days passed…………………kashish was now stable…………..coz of that Low BP………….her health get down………….. but she didn't accept defeat yet……She has decided to do something…………..as now she don't want both of her sis to break there dreams coz of money

Mr.Oberoi was really hurted with kashish decision………….Mrs.Oberoi being a mother was with kashish but 4 her most imp relation is of her husband………….so she decide to be with her husband…………while her sis were with her

A new Morning………………..kashish get up………on the ring of alarm………..and make a ponytail of her hear and was about to come out of her blanket………but saw the pic of Nikhil………..which was placed beside her alarm clock…………..she look at that with anger and throw that on floor……………and went into wash room and splash some water on her face…………

She get ready and came outside………………..her mother was serving breakfast to kripa and anjali…………..

"mama…….i m leaving"

"why r u telling me?"…………..she said that in anger tone and put bread in kripa's plate…….

"Mama"………..anjali said that in shocked tone and went to kashish and said "di…atleast do breakfast"

"no……"she said that in hurt tone……… "when no one wanna make me eat………why should I do it then"…………a tear flow in her eyes………….kripa stand up and came to her

"but dii………………where are u going."

"kripa…………I m going 4 an interview…………..i don't wanna be a burden on anyone"

"di but……….." before anjali and kripa can say anthing kashish left

"Mama………………u didn't do good to her"………..kripa said in angry tone

"I m not the one to listen up to u…………….do ur breakfast and go to collage"

"if di can go without breakfast……………..then we can too"……….anjali said that and left for her room to pick her books and bag while kripa look at her mom in disbelief and too follow anjali

In collage……………kripa and anjali didn't attend even a single class…………they both were shocked about her mom behavior towards kashish………….as far as they know…..nandini and kashish were there heart…………there soul……….and now…she didn't even care 4 her.

"what is happening in our home anju?"……….kripa said that while a tear drop from her hand…………..kripa was the lil one and more ladli one that even anjali can't even wanna see tear in her eyes…………….and care 4 her a lot

"might be coz God want to take our exam………."

"exam?…………but what kind of exam is this………….that even Mom get angry to dii"

"that is the real exam kripa"…………anjali hug her "Mom is fulfilling her duty of being a wife this time………..she had fulfill the duty of a mother many times……….by hiding our mistakes from Papa…………..but now she have to fulfill her other duty too"

"but why now……………..Dii need her right now…………..and how can she left her alone while she need her the most?"

"coz………….Papa too need her"

"but Papa is wrong………. It is the question of dii's life"

"What can we do now except supporting dii………….and will never let her feel that no one is with her…………….k"……….anjali said that and look at krips

"ok"

the stand up and left to attend there class…………..and on the other side in home………….Mrs.Oberoi was sitting on dinning and was holding her head…….a tear fell down from her eyes, then another

"What should I do God…………..if I didn't support my husband…………it will make my husband weak…………and if I didn't support my daughter………….it will make my daughter feel lonely………..what should I do?"…….she start crying bitterly and place her head on table.

Kashish was going here and there in search of job but no one gave her that post of which she demand and was capable of……………..it was a hot day rather then the other days of March……………Kashish was feeling thirsty but don't wanna waste a single penny on water as a single penny was more imp to her in the search of a job.

She came home at 7 in evening……………….kripa and anjali were worried 4 her…….Mrs.Oberoi was too…………..but didn't show it………so she silently gathered cups of coffee and went into kitchen……….as kashish enter at 7………anjali and kripa run to her and take her file from her and make her sit on sofa………..anjali ran into the kitchen and give a sneak peak to her mother who was showing to be busy with washing cups………….and find a glass and fill it with waer and then leave to give it to her sis……….kashish on finding water, drink it in one breath and ask 4 more and kripa bring that 4 her……………

In one day…………kashish face was looking so pale……………her skin was completely seem to be as burnt………….the sine on her face was vanished now…………..her eyes seem to be teary…………..her lips wasn't finding the words to tell anyone her feeling………...anjali and kripa was observing her…………

"di……….should I bring something to eat"……..kripa ask her by holding her hand

"no….." she place her other hand on her's and give her a weak smile… "I ate burger from a coffee shop"………..she was lying………..kripa and anjali know that…...……but can't force her…………

Kashish stand up

"I m tired ………….i m going to have a sleep" she said and left the room with tired steps

kripa sit beside anjali and place her head on her shoulder ,said

"1st time ever……………..di tell a lie to us"

anjali tap her cheek with one hand and said

"yes……but right now dii can't say anything else…………she can't share her feelings, her pain with us"

"than what…………do we leave dii in such condition?"

"no……….in this situation……………only two person can make her heart's feeling light…………..one is mom………….but she will not do it…………and other is…."

"dani dii" kripa cut her b/w and stand up to make a call to nandini

"hey kripa…………don't call her yet" anjali stand up beside her and make her cut the call "otherwise she will get upset………….we will call her tomorrow morning"

"ya……..that's right" kripa place the phone down and ledt with anjali to there room………but were really tensed 4 kashish

kashish mom heard all that and too get tensed about her more…………she quickly start making the food…………….and make Pasta……………kashish fav

Mr.Oberoi was not at home yet…………..she got some food and went into kashish room………..without even knock…………..she enter into room………..and find kashish sleeping………….she didn't even change into her night suit…………..she place the food on side table and move her hand to touch kashish forehead……….but stop herself…..but later she place it on kashish forehead………and then start combing her hair

Kashish was looking so weak…………..she just go through fever and today she left without eating anything……

Kashish felt someone combing her hair but didn't open her eyes…………as she know that if she open…………..these hands will not longer remain there……….she make her eyes remain close and felt that affection, the love of her mom……..

Tensions were seem to be gone away from her………….she was feeling so light that nothing ever happened………….but she felt a tear on her hand and she open her eyes quickly

On seeing her getting up……………Mrs.Oberoi wipe her tears and sit stright in front of her………….kashish to sit up…………..Mrs.Oberoi take the plate in her hand and make a bite of it and feed it to kashish………….kashish open her mouth and eat it……..

Pasta was exactly like that she like……………on eating a bite…………a tear flow from her eyes……….Mrs.Oberoi left the plate and left to her room on seeing her teary eyes

"Mama……….i know that u r with me………………but papa need u more than me…..i will never ask u a question why u leave me like this…………..coz I already know its ans"

kashish didn't felt like eating but know that if she not……………her mom will get really hurt of that so she start eating it and eat only half and place plate on side table and again cover herself with blanket

in kripa and anjali room………………both were restless and wasn't able to sleep……

"anju………r u too not feeling like sleep"

"yes………how can I when I know that neither mom nor dii is feeling like this"

"anju………….lets go to dii room………"

"ok"

both stand up from there beds and slowly move in to kashish room……….they find her covered with blanket but know that she is not

"dii"………kripa said in a low voice

kashish remove her blanket and see them

"what r u doing her so late…………..u have college tomorrow na?" kashish was surprise to see them……….

"yes but we are not able to sleep in our room………….can we sleep with u"

"ya sure"…………kashish get up and anjali and kripa join the beds of nandini and kashish and bring there blankets from there room………..and all sleep together, hugging each other.

so guys
here's next part
hope u like it

lolz
ana

Edited by cool_SK - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
😳 wow ana great part yaaar finally kashish got fed up and broke up with nikhil good for her ..her sis's are so caring anju and krips 😳 even her mother but she can't leave mr oberoi alone and its goood that kashissh understnds her mom's feeling ..once again tooooooooooo gooooooooood aur dhamakedar part continue soooon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
👏 hey dear i jusr read all yourff its mindblowing pl conti soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsme reeally cute just loved it great kashish broke up with that disgusting nikhil
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: golu_1677

another great part. cont soon



thanku golu
love to hear that u like it
so sorry late ho gai iss time
but my exmas are comming na
but abhi cont karti hoon

lolz
ana

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