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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
I hope that they find each-other!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
Hi Davia

I've just read all the 9 part and now i'm waiting impatiently plz plz update soon

Meenu here
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
Hi Davia,
Awesome part.
Jai knows that Bani is in Mussori and that where she work and everything....oh this is great.
Bani saw him......walk away...stupid girl...but it's ok...he will find you.
Their wedding anniversary....i hope they meet in the mandir.
plz plz cont. soon....waiting egarly.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
haila...just read all 9 parts and i must ay i just loved it...haila krishan is so cute...pulling on jais pant leg...i can totally picutre it too...awwwwwww 😊 😊 😊
and i must say...im loving cobra here...oops roshni...kya karu aadat se majboor hoon... lol... 😉 😉 😉
jai jaldi jaldi mandir jaao...meet up with bani...hope they meet soon...cant wiat for bani and jai to meet...JB reunion...i see it coming...hopeflly soone... 😃 😃
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Davia what a place to stop it! Finally Jai knows where his Bani is and will get to see his kids, lekin hurry up and update dying of suspense, what a place to stop!

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
my next part.ur expetation hope get fulfilled.

10. bani got up early as the kids was sleeping and rano have come here for holidays.she asked rano to take care and asked her to lock the door and she left.both were in mandir(u can give ur own music in background.)she was climbing the steps .he was climbing back of her.she stood there and was praying that today she wants to see her husband face for once.as it was their wedding anniversary. She wanted to see him from far not from near.but she want to see him.jai was praying that bani should not be married to anyone .and he should make bani convince to come back to him.and both wished a lot.both were standing near.when jai finished and turned he saw his life front of him .when bani finished and turned she was shocked..both couldn't believe it first.when jai called bani. She was like /… "mr.walia." a smile appeared on his face and hugged her. And plainly said I love u bani…….. she stood there shocked he then released her and again on seeing her eyes said I love u bani..water came from her eyes.he wiped it and said.kya tum muje maaf karoki? Bani was not able to answer it.but just hugged him back. And started to cry. Jai then holded her and let her cry. And after a while he just took her hands and went to the god statue,and took the sindoor placed near it and filled bani's maang..she just gave him her smile which meant yes… .they forgotted the whole world.then he said to bani "chalein"she nodded yes.he took her to his place.both were silent .did not speak a word through journey.both were happy. He then stopped the care.both got down.

Then. He came near and wished her "happy anniversary bani' she was surprised as he remembered and said "wish u the same". Both were not talking but their eyes were speaking.suddenly bani felt something near her leg ,when she looked down she got afraid and went to jai's arm shouthing. Suddenly it started to rain . jai asked bani to come in . both were wet.when he saw bani like that ,he slowly touched her cheecks,both felt something .he then slowly started to kiss her .he first kissed her lips and continued .then he picked her up and went to bed and layed her out.thenhe came top of her removing her duppatta.and started to kiss her.all over. Then slowly the scene fades away.few min later bani woke up an realized where and in which state she was..she did not find jai.she then picked her clothes and wored it .just then jai comes out from shower on seeing bani trying to zip her top he went and zipped it and kissed her. Shoulders. He was in his robe he then wrapped his hand around her waist from back. Bani said muje aab jana hai ,rano mera intezaar kar rahi hoki.jai said I wil drop.i will change my clothes and come.ccan u make a coffee if u don't mind.she said yes but she goes he grabs her hands and says I love u bani.pls don't leave me alone.and he comes foreward and kisses her for head. And leaves to change. Bani then makes coffee. And takes to jai .he then goes to her saying wear this ,showing a packet..she then ye kya hai ,he replys taking coffee ,kolo when she opens she finds a pink lenga ,he ask her to wear it.she then goes to the barthroom have a quick shower come out wearing it..jai sees her in that dress and give her a smile saying "u look beautiful in this dress,bilkul ek dulhan ki tarah." She shyly chalein.he nodded yes and both went. .on the way way.jai asked can we have dinner tonight together at 6;30 as I want to talk to u.she nodded yes. Then he dropped her at home.he just left.she thought how he will react when he comes to know about the kids.


davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
g8 part davia. so now both have expressed feeling of love, but bani shld have told him the truth about the kids as if he will come to know about someone else about bani having 2 kids that can create misunderstanding, please just let bani tell jai asap about the kids and no misunderstandings. anyways dono taraf hai lagi hui............... waiting for dinner part.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
WOW g8t part 😳 😊
cntinue soon 😃 😛
i want to see jais reation 😃 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
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kya baat yeh 😳
i am glad that bani forgave jai 😳
i can't wait to see jai's reaction when he finds out about the kids 😳
please write soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
wait and watch for keshav's reaction on jai truth .
davia

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