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Posted: 18 years ago
#71
WOOOOW lovely...loved it.
They meet and spend time together.
Now wanted to see his reactions to the kids and Keshav's reaction...i am thinking its not going to be a good one.
plz cont. asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
aww...jb reunion...yay 👏 that was so good...but yeh kya yaar...so short...aww...ok if ok...as long as i got something...update soon...cant wait for jai to see his kids...
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
Awww such a cute part. Jai and Bani are back together. Hope Jai gets happy when he finds out about the kids.

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#74
my next part.as i am in a hurry.thank god i had saved it.so her it is.thnx for patience.

11. She then asked rano to take kids to eat dinner out.as she has important meeting with some one.in the hotel (the hotel was really came little away and jai and bani was first one ,actually he booked all. Jai and bani both reached there. For a surprise rano with kids came there.the music was placed ,jai asked bani to dance,while dancing he sayss about kid named Krishna and what happen. at end he says he want a baby like Krishna .,bani thought why like Krishna ,I will give u krishna itself and keshav too.he says he has taken all the expenses of Krishna .and etc…. .bai was like.this what I missed u mr.walia.u always think of otheres.which made me to fall in love with. Then we see rano with the kids.suddenly keshav says m,assi and show his one finger up meaning he needs to use toilet.she says chalo and ask Krishna to stand there and rano takes him to gents toilet and ask him to come out soon.krishna see jai and bani and run towards them. Bani says can we sit down .he says ok and they were about to when Krishna comes and first pulls jai 's coat and when bani sees her gets happy and realize that why she was showing her jai 's pic.he then says Krishna tum and picks her up and make her sit on the table.he introduces bani to Krishna ,they both laugh. Then Krishna extends her hand to pick up towards bani .he say wow she liked u also. Bani was totally having fun.. but din't show and picked her up.bani from far away saw rano in front of gents toilet and keshav coming out. .and then rano talking to him and going to ladies room..but kesshav turned to her side and saw his mum and the stranger and her sister.he goes straight to them first he pulled jai's coat and asked " meine aapse pehle bhi kaha tha ki aap hum se door rahi hai aur phir aageye hume parishan karne." Jai was surprised to see someone like his bot who is protective towards his family. He just said beta meine aapk ko……… bani was smiling because of the situation and also little tensed as how will keshav and jai will react to each other as when they will know the truth.
Jai then said beta mein parishan nahi kar raha hoon,nahi aap karrahi hai said
keshav,he then asked jai to be out of them.jai was like no beta,he said I want to
meet ur parents..and talk to them ,keshav was still angry and was on .. jai then bani &n bsp; side and said "lagtha hai apne papa par gaya hai"on hearing bani was like hahahnn ,


keshav said "meri maa bhi yahi kehthi hai, agar meri papa muje mil jaye to mein unhein chodonga nahi ," jai was like "what? Kyun?"he replied saying "kyunki muje poochna hai ki wow aise kyun hai jiski waje se me aisa hoon… " bani was like oh no papa aur beta ek dusre say jagdrahe hein meri waje se.i should stop. Mean while rano comes looking for the kids and when see her didi with mr.walia ,she gets shocked. Inside keshav shouts and pulls bani saying 'mama yahaan se chalein.. muje inse koi bath nahi karni.."jai was like bani mama???????/////// rano cmes in on seeing rano he says masi accha hua hum yahan aagaye varna ye meri mamma aur behen ko kya kartha/// jai was totally shocked surprised and happy to know,bani was like abb kya hoga,I thought today I will tell him the truth but before I could tell it came out. Jai was lost at it and thinking he has scolded himself by pointing to keshav.then he asked bani kya ye dono hamare ?????????? she nodded yes.. then she was scad as he din't speak ,then he came near her,she thought he is going to scold and slap her but he just smiled and said in a happy ,excitement he asked "kya sach much mein papa bangaya hoon ya phir ye sapna hai??????" she saw him and said haan and laughed at his question ,Krishna was down by now. He then lifted bani and turn around. As when a wife says to her husband that she is pregnant for the first time.

Rano was in a total shock. She was like what is going on. Keshav was totally like what is this men doing to his mamma ,,but Krishna was happy as she got her wished ful filled.her mom and dad was together.keshav shouted leave my mom down.jai then realized and let bani down and bended down to Krishna and keshav and said beta and place his hands on both his kids and was smiling.,keshav removed and said kya kar rahi hai aap?and gave him a look, but Krishna was about to go to him.keshav stopped her saying mamma ye kya raha hai,aur ye aadmi aap ke saath aisa kyun behave kar raha hai?very strange.wow lagthi kya hai hamari?, aur … bani cut him of saying ye aapki papa hai beta.she also felt guilty for the situation.rano was like ab kya hoga mero aur….. (ek raaz jo jaldi kulega.. rano ke bare mein.intezaar kijiye.)


davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
g8 part davia and that was so good that jai didn't doubt the paternity of kids and he just accepted that they r his flesh and blood and wow what a milan of kids with children, just hope that keshav also accepts him as his father and then he can ask him question about his behavior. 😆

please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
Like Father Like Son
Keshav is bigger Khadoos then Jai 😆 😆 😆
Good Luck Jai bonding with your son 👍🏼 This will be interesting interaction to watch 😆 😆 😆
I think Rano's raaz is that she is married to Sahil 😕
I am also glad that he didn't doubt the paternity of the children and expected them
Krishna and Jai are so cute and she is smart
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
hey u finally updated krishna is so cute and keshav like father like son can't wait to read what is the raaz for rano
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
Keshav is totally his Papa!!! Krishna is so sweet, she was really cute when smiled cause her parents r now together!!! Rano's raaz, wow I'd like 2 know!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
Nice part! Keshav is like his dad in so many ways. I hope he and Jai get along.

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
promo:krishna's operation ,keshav and jai scenes... and a surprise comes... for the kids...
davia

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