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Posted: 18 years ago
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here i am with my one more new one. actually which i wrote first.but i din't update.

This story starts when bani was walking in the road and jai car come 's in front of her and stop .he asks what happen and she reply's she is not feeling welll.he ask her to get inside the car she refuse him saying he have to go back to the party she will go by taxi. He asks her what happen ? she reply's nothing .she is about to take a step forward,he makes her turn towards him and again ask what happen?(don't worry 19th june won happen in the road) she reply him she will leave him and go she will leave the house. And go..she starts to repeat it again and again and she says him to go and enjoy the party everyone must be waithing for him. and roshini must be waithing for him ..and some more she starts to blabber like this.. jai was standing there confused he felt something is wrong and instead of arguing with her he just take her hand ,but she removes his hand for first time , but our jai next time give more pressure and force and make her sit inside the car and he to get in.but bani keeps on blabbering some sentence.. and he thinks that it is not good to take her like this to wm. because if any one see her like this or it may create a problem so he decides to take her to his mom house (remember the the dead anniversary of jai's mom everyone goes there .)as no one is there and only watch man will be there(asual servants were on holiday)so without creating a scene it will be in peace he thought..he was diving there but our sweet bani was still on her bug-bug .but jai was not totally paying attention since he should concentrate on drive.she repeats the sentence asking him to go and enjoy with ……… and reply's saying " I am going there only"bani starts to cry little more…

The house comes .jai is ike thank god the house came.he open s the door of bani and ask her to come out she once again repeats him to go he says he will go but she have to also come. She says she want to go home and pack her things to leave the house (oh god kya badi problem hai na)he says that they have reached the house then without any further arguments she gets down but feels as if they have not reached wm. But without choice she have to move ..but she again ask jai to leave her and go to partyas they have reached the house.. but our jai got little frustrated and asked her to shut her mouth in her angry tone and just pulled her arms and drag inside the house and take her towards the door of the house(a question arrives here that is where is the key? Ohh ohh very simple it is always with watch man and he gave the keys to jai when they where entering the gate itself) and open it and just drag bani inside she was crying a little but when she entered she was like where r we.????????

And got scared and started to cry this time jai in quite anger mood ask her to say what happen and when he see her crying and waters flowing from her eyes he slowly make bani turn towards him and lift her chin and ask her what happen and like june 19th th it starts… and slowly he picks her up and take her to his bedroom(yes he has bedroom as this was the place where he was grown so ..)and he slowly lie her down on the bed and he comes over her ……….(as I am little weak in romantic scenes .)he started to kiss her and she start to responds and henced proceedssssthe night and the scene fades away. The night turned out be a cnange and a new beginning of both the lifes.which will turn to make them realize how much they r important to each other on their new life.a beginning , aturning point in life or something else. Keeppp gusseesing.

Preview bani's letter to jai .placing in his cubbord .a confession of her love.jai apologisig for the night .

davia

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kinnu410 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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first of all congrats for ur ff
good start
great so jun 19th has happened
great hope they realise thier love for each other soon'continue soon
waiting for next parts
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Posted: 18 years ago
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next part tonight.but u all be dissapoint at first but later it wi be good.because even i was dissapointed on writing that parts.but later u will all enjoy.because u will all see jai and bani 's kids...
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome ff starting.
Loved it.
Congrats on the third one.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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my next part.
thanks for ur comments.

it is a long one.so bear with me.


2.Morning the sun rays hits their eye.jai get up first and sees bani sleeping next to him only blankets covered.he feels guilty for taking advantage of bani he then picks up the clothes and moves to bathroom.he gets showered and come back and opens his cubbord and takes his old clothes means (it was his old room so his clothes were there.)he then wore it. He saw a packet and remembered something and took it out so that he will give bani to wear as she does not have any other.her sarre was spoiled last night as he threwed the saree and went and fell over a dusty place.he was feeling what he done was wrong and etc… he took the photo album there in adrawer.(u know what is in it.full of jai's photo's ,his schools and college one.)and started to see and place it as he felt bani moving and turned to her. She slowly got up covering her self with blankets feeling shy .jai said I am sorry bani. It was only a mistake what we did. And asked her to get ready.he told there is a package near her .it contains a dress.he asked her to wear that as her sarree was spoiled.and left from there closing the doors.he came out down.he was feeling so guilty…on what he did …. And was fighthing with himself.

In the room bani was feeling angry as it was not a mistake to her but it was a special night to her and her life.tears felt down but she wiped it. And went to get showered.she came after a while.she saw the door was unlocked from inside. So she locked it. When she turned she saw a photo album she was in towel.she slowly picked it up and saw it was written jai walia's photo album. And started to see one by one , a smile appeared to her.and felt shy on seeing she was only in towel and went and took the package and wored the dress. It was pink chudidar.baby pink. She then wrote a letter to jai saying what happen the night was not a mistake and many more and how much she loves him… and placed ( there was a letter pad there as the drawer was half open,in it.) it in cubbord.she opend the cubbord and saw jai's things. She then placed the letter inside somewhere.hoping one day god will show mercy on her if j read this..she comes out after 45 min. she saw jai waithing for her. He simply said .chalein as we r late.they left.both were silent in car. She carried the stuff saying it was the saree of her in a packet..they reached home .everyone was tired of yesterday party and still in sleep .it was only 9:30 and was Saturday ,so everyone was in their room.no one has come down for breakfast.jai and bani were moving towards their roomwhen massi spotted them and asked where were you both ?why did u leave earlier from the party? Jai said "meri tabiyat todi karab hogi thi is liye we went to near by hotetl and stayed there.(joottttt )"massi asked whethere he was alright now jai replied yes.and then massi asked them to come down for breakfast.jai asked massi to leave for breakfast aand they will join them. Massi thenleft with a laugh as she felt something must have happen and on seeing the dress change she was able to understand.but din't expose it as she did not want to embrass them.later in dinning table.everybody was eating (roshini and jig and all were present.)jai and bani comes down.jai was changed but not bani as she was wearing a dress given by jai and did not want to change.massi adi just greeted jai . roshini raised up to see bani and jai together and was shocked on seeing bani's dress.she remembered the dress as it was the same dress which she rejected when jai insisted her to buy and wear it for her birthday..flashback :before few years. in a shopping mall. Jai and roshini were there shopping. Jai on going to coffee shop saw a pink chudidar displayed over there in a shop.he just liked it on his first sight.and insist ted rod=shini to come along with him to buy a dress for her in that shop.
Jai: arrre roshini dekho wahan who dress.
Roshini:kahan ? and saw it.no jai not again .u know .i don't like such colours and that to a chudidar no way.pls jai I hop u understand.
Jai:come on roshini .everytime I go for ur choice.once u have to go for my choice. After all we r engaged now.atleast now hear my words.plsssssss .pls believe me u will look so good in it.
Roshini:jai pls.don't force me.i don't like mean ,I don't like .if u want u but it .
And left with a angry face. Jai then went and brought it thinking after marriage he will make her wear .that time she won't refuse.flashback ends..roshini gets angry and get up and leave.jai was silently having his breakfast bani was sering him. Suddenly their hands get touched . both look at each other. Adi couging brought to them to the reality and breaked their glance. And jai excused himself saying he his leaving for office as he was having a urgent meeting.

Sometime later . bani was in her room cleaning the mess created by jai by spreading the things here and there .means files etc… .she then suddenly saw a red file placed on the table.some papers were looking out of the file.she then picked it up to arrange it properly.she was shocked as it was divorce paper..tears start to flow from her eyes.thinking she and jai will get divorced soon.she felt that , jai doesn't have any feeling towards and thinks he still love pia and not her. Her hopes was lost.she decided that she and rano wil leave the house.today itself.and she started to pack her thinks .then massi came in saying bani beta and when she saw her packing she question her " bani ,tum saman pack kar rahi ho? Kahi ja rahi ho?" bani replied lieing that "massi , actually muje call aaya ki meri chachi ki tabiyat bilkul teek nahi hai aur who hamein aakiri bar dekna chate hai.isleye mein aur rano ko aaj hi jaana hoga.aap phikar math kijiye hum shadi ke din tak louth jayenge." Massi said "massi said " mein samaj sakthi hoon ki aagar jaldi nahi hoti to shayad tum nahi jathi ,is shaadi ke mahoul chodkar.lekin aapna kayal rakna." And bani said to rano to pack her things and be ready as they will leave the house. After she comes from meeting jai walia..

In jai's office.jai was busy in his work.he ordered not to be disturb by any one and no phone calls as he was busy at a meeting.bani comes to jai's office.she first enquires to his secretary that he was free or not she said he was in board room in an important meeting.and she said he has stricktly orderes not to disturb . then bani was asked to wait in his cabin(afterall she was the boss' wife .)she then entered his cabin ..she waited for half an hour to say good bye.but no use. He din't come .so she wrote a letter saying she has sighned the divorce paper and she is leaving today itself she won't return in his life again.and she wished him a good luck in his life.she placed the letter in his desk with the divorce file and left to home.she then took the blessing of massi and left saying she has almost finished every work for wedding and massi doesnot need to worry.she and rano left. In railway station. Rano asked whether they r going back to mount abu .she replied no.she said we r going to delhi to her friend's house..rano was shocked.she said she will explain everything to her later.
In jai's cabin,roshini enters and she doesnot find jai and goes near his desk, she just thinks soon u wil be mine jai.and she was about to turn but her eyes felt on the letter.she took it and on seing it is from bani she opened it and read all and was happy on reading it. Then jai entered the office .he question roshini and asked her what she was doing.she said she came to ask him something and she found out this letter.and gave it to jai he was shocked .he asked roshini whether she did not played any games.she replied saying she swears that she did not do anything.he then called massi.massi asked him whether bani came to inform him as her chachi was not feeling well and she left for it. He just said yes and placed the phone. Roshini was just feeling out of the world as bani left .jai felt as if his world is finished.and excused himself and left.he was on his way to home .he called bani. She picked up it .he asked her "ye sab kya hai bani?" she replied himsaying "mr.walia hamari jindagi keliye yahi sayi hai.waise bhi aap chate hain ki mein aapki jindagi se chali jaavoon ,meine divorce paper sign kar diya,aur massi say bhi kehidiya ki mein aapni chachi ko deknai jarehi hoon.i won't return in ur life anymore." And placed the call .she was having tears in her eyes.she even switched of the phone.

Preview :3 yrs 9 months later.bani ".happy birthday to you and you"
23 yrs and 9 months later,


davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cant wait continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh great part.
Little sad and made 😭 😭 a little but it was good.
Oh the leap and that to 3yrs and 9month.
9 months ha something fishy. Let me guss their child bday. loved it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey davia
congrats on ur third ff..
i love this one..
although i love the other two too.
please can u please continue soon..
really want to know what will happen
next


thanks
❤️Nirali❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part
continue soon pls
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Posted: 18 years ago
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davia,
g8 parts but confusion leap is for 3 years 9 months or 23 years 9 months. please continue soon.

swati

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