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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
Davia,

It really was such a cute and heart warming part. Loved it a lot. 👏 👏 😃

So Jai and Krishna meet at last, Krishnas wish coming true. 😳 Wow she recognized her father from his pic ture but our Keshav didn't. 😆

Loved him protecting his sister from "strnager" and complaining to mom about it too. 😛 😆 😆

Cant wait to see, 😉 😆 I menat read 😛 , what happens next. 😃

Love
Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
Just caught up! Lovely parts. Keshav is soooooooooooo like his Dad and Krishna is just sooooooooooo cute. Hope Bani and Jai meet soon.

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
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very sweet
update soon waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
oh how cute father daughter bonding hopefully jai and bani meet soon............
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
g8 emotional part davia. please continue soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
Father and daugther meet lovely. 😊
Father and son also meet funny. 😆
Krishna is so smart. she knows that he is her father.😉
Now plz Jai and Bani meet soon
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
finally caught up with all the parts
it is really good one
keep it up
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
thnkx for reply and patients.my next part.

9. Inside the doc's room keshav was shouting when the doc was placing the medicine and had tears in his eyes.bani was trying to make him comfortable but she was not able too.she felt "kash aap yahan hote mr.walia to shayad aap keshav ko samal lethe."after done she picked keshav in his arms and went out .and took Krishna in her hands and went out.jai has already left.later in night.both and jai and bani was near the windows standing and thinking about each others.jai remembered the little child and her sweet smile .he felt soo attach to her.he decided he will meet her parents.the child reminded him of bani,the cute smile and hers face was resembling bani a lot.he then recives a call from detec that bani was not there and she did not return there after leaving with her sisters to Mumbai.but they got a information that bani and her sis rano was seen atlast at delhi by rano's friend.and they r trying to trace out them in delhi.he asked them to do it fast.

Next day in hospital bani was asked to meet the trustee as he wished to bear Krishna expenses.she then knocked the door ,she was asked to come in..when entered she was surprised to see the trustee was soo young and asked her whether she was the trustee,she replied (I know sab log yahi socha hoga khi wo jai hoga par ,wait for little time and have patients as bani will not go to jai but he will come to her…intezaar ka fal mita hotaa hai.)no .she said her boss has gone for an important meeting.after receiving a call and apologied to her as he was not able to meet her.but he has asked her to meet tomorrow.and he also said not to worry about the operation as he will take care of it.bani said to her to say thanks to him.

Jai was in the place where the detective have asked him to meet him.he was then informed by them that rano was working for a so and so company.and her sis was in mussorie.and din't get any other information.the only information they got about bani in mussorie was that ki she was working as a chef in a hotel called swadish.he was surprised,shocked and happy as it was the same hotel which he has come to buy .he then said thnks and paid them .rest he will itself find.he was totally in a happy mood .he was not able to wait as he wanted to reach there as sson as possible and find bani… he directly went to the owner of the hotel and said he has decided to but it.the deal was done.he became the owner now. He then went to the hotel and said they will have a holiday for a week for the renewal of the hotel.(bani was not there.when entered ,she was surprised to see every staff gathered .when she asked they said so and so. She was like thank god. And felt happy and left..on leaving she saw jai standing and was talking in his cell phone.she immedietly felt as it was only her imagination but he was still there.and she thought if she stands there and if he sees her ,it may create problem and many questions will be arrived.so she left the place.on going to her house she was thinking that tomorrow is the same day when she and jai was married before few years.she thought jai must have forgotten her and the day and she also thought he must have got married again and been settle but for her everything was same.now her kids are her world.she then went home.here jai then asked the manager to bring every staff profile and placed it in is car.as he did not see bani.then he took it to his place.he then eagerly searched for bani's and started to read .he founded her address.he wanted to meet her but ,thought tomorrow will be perfect day as it was their wedding anniversary.he thought he will go to mandir and then he will go there.he couldn't sleep well.even bani din't.both in the morning left for the mandir..

preview:will they meet or not keep guessing.
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part.... 👏 👏 👏
hope they will meet on their wedding anniversary
plz cont ASAP
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Davia,

Cant wait for them to meet soon and tomorow being the wedding anniversary the temple would be a great place to meet. 😉 😃

Cant wait to see what you come up with. 😃

Love
Krishna
Edited by kubare - 18 years ago

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