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Manvi goes in her room to look for Bharat. She saw him, sitting on the floor, resting his back at the bed. He seems to be disappointed, sad, angry and worried, all at the same time. She feels bad for him and gained strength to move towards him. She was trying hard to call his name, but the words didn't came out of her because of his fear.

MANVI- Bharat...

Finally Manvi called him in a low voice.

BHARAT- kyu nahi bataya aapne hume Manvi..?

Bharat directly questioned her making her to look sad. She knew that he is going to ask her this question after he returns. Manvi gulped and tried to speak.

MANVI- me... Me aapko batana... Chahti thi..

BHARAT- then why didn't you called me..?

Asked Bharat further making Manvi more nervous.

BHARAT- waise to aap chahti thi ki me aapko din me 2 bar call karu.. you used to tell me about everything.. ghar me itna bada problem hogaya, and you didn't even called me once..??

Asked Bharat looking at her while she was looking down.

MANVI- me darr gayi thi Bharat... Sabkuch itni jaldi hogaya that... We didn't even get time to think..

Said Manvi in a low voice still looking down. Bharat nods in disbelief and again looks at the front. Manvi motioned her eyes to look at him.

MANVI- I have asked jiju to wait.. for your return..

Bharat again looks at her with his moist eyes. She gulped and continued.

MANVI- but.. jiju said.. you've gone for your.. first.. first project meeting... To.. aise me.. aapko tension dena...sahi nahi hai...

Manvi stammered to say, unknown of Bharat's reactions.

BHARAT- aur aapne unki baat maan li..?

Bharat looks disappointed at her while she bows down feeling apologetic.

BHARAT- mere bhaiya bhabhi.. ghar chodkar ja rahe the.. you feel koi bhi chiz isse jyada important ho sakti hai..? Is this a very small thing.?

Questioned Bharat getting angry at her while she shook her head denying.

MANVI- Bharat..

Manvi moves more closer to him and sit beside him on floor.

MANVI- how can I think that..? Mere bhi to dii aur jiju hai wo..

Bharat looks at her with his teary eyes while Manvi forwards her hand to hold his hand.

MANVI- trust me Bharat.. we all tried our best to stop jiju.. but.. unhone.. maa se keh diya tha.. ki wo chale jayenge...

Said Manvi as she remembered the moment when Ram announced about his plans. Tears started flowing from Bharat's eyes while Manvi tried to wipe his tears.

MANVI- and you know right, ek bar jo unhone keh diya, then he will definitely do that..

Bharat wipes his own tears nodding his head.

BHARAT- whatever had happened here.. it's all because of me..

Said Bharat suddenly making Manvi confused.

BHARAT- because of me.. bhaiya bhabhi have to leave this house.. Lakshman have to leave his wife.. you all have to leave your sister... Papa have to leave his son...

Bharat started crying uncontrollably while Manvi tried to calm him down.

MANVI- aap aisa kyu keh rahe hai.? Aapne kya kiya hai..?

BHARAT- wohi to...

Said Bharat, cutting her in between.

BHARAT- mene kuch kiya hi nahi.. mere bhaiya ghar chodkar gaye, and I have done nothing to stop him..

Bharat said almost in a taunt while Manvi looks apologetic.

BHARAT- aapne ye haq mujhse kyu chhina Manvi..??

Bharat sounded hurt while she holds his hand and shook her head.

MANVI- I am sorry Bharat.. but.. that time.. we were not understanding anything..

Manvi tried to explain herself to him while he looks in front.

MANVI- jiju dii and Lakshman were leaving.. maa was under nani's manipulations. Papa ki tabyet, Urmila udas, Shruti ko kuch samajh nahi araha tha.. aur sambhalne wale bas me aur choti maa... Hum kis kisko kya samjhate bharat..??

Manvi started crying while Bharat turns his head to face her. He feels bad for her. He takes her hand in his and tried to calm her..

BHARAT- shh.. bas Manvi.. I didn't wanted to scold you.. bas mere mann me jo frustration tha.. wo aap par nikal gaya..

Said Bharat feeling apologetic while Manvi wipes her tears.

MANVI- it's ok.. but now.. you're back.. I know ki ab sab theek hojayega..

Said Manvi with a light smile and Bharat nods at her in agreement.

BHARAT- ofcourse.. sab theek tab hoga.. when the three of them will return. And I will make sure, to bring them back..

Said Bharat in a confident while Manvi nods at him. He looks at her and smile sadly getting emotional himself. He hugs Manvi while she calm him down caressing his back...

Shatrughan was in his room, standing near the window, staring outside. Everything was moving in his head, whatever had happened today. He gets angry on Kranti and mandira's deeds. He punched his fist on the window panel making himself hurt. He got a cut on his hand which goes noticed by Shruti, who has entered the room.

SHRUTI- Shatrughan...

Shruti shouted at him as she saw a cut on his back of the hand. She runs towards him and takes his hand in her.

SHRUTI- ye.. ye kya kar rahe hai aap .?? It is bleeding... you stupid...

Shruti started scolding him while he stare her having emotional face. She moves towards the drawer and takes the cotton and detol for him.

SHRUTI- give your hand...

Shatrughan forward his hand while she started applying the medicine on his wound. He kept on staring her while she frowns looking at his wound.

SHRUTI- gusse pe control karna sikho Shatrughan.. you can't hurt others and yourself always...

Said Shruti almost in a taunt while Shatrughan feels bad for her. He thinks about the words he has said to her in anger.

SHATRUGHAN- I'm sorry...

He apologized to her suddenly, while she stops her work in between. She looks at him and find him staring her.

SHRUTI- it's ok..

She said in a low voice and continued her work. Finally, she applied the bandage on his wound and he pulls her in a hug. She gets surprised at his sudden action while he started crying in her embrace.

SHRUTI- Shatrughan...???

She tried to release him from the hug while he nods his head in no and tightens the grip more on her.

SHRUTI- chup hojao.. please... Please cookie...

Finally Shatrughan leaves her and she looks at his moist eyes. She forwards her hands to wipe his tears.

SHATRUGHAN- I'm sorry Shruti.. me gussa nahi karna chahta tha.. but that time.. I was literally.. literally boiling with anger..

Shatrughan tried to explain himself while she shook her head.

SHATRUGHAN- maa aur nani ka gussa... Tum par nikal gaya ... I apologise for my words..

SHRUTI- no Shatrughan..

Shruti stopped him holding his hands.

SHRUTI- you don't have to explain yourself.. me samajhti hu aapko..

Shatrughan looks at her while she continued.

SHRUTI- but now you've to be strong.. gusse se ya emotional hoke.. sab theek nahi hoga na..??

Shatrughan smile lightly at her words and nods in agreement.

SHRUTI- now since you and Bharat bhaiya are back .. we all have to be together and... Bring our dii jiju and laksh bhai back..

Shruti tried to explain him while he nods in agreement. At the other moment he looks at her getting worried.

SHATRUGHAN- bhaiya bhabhi wapis ajayenge na Shruti..?

Shruti gets tensed hearing his question. She gulped and was thinking about the answer.

SHATRUGHAN- please.. sach bolna.. jo tumhe lagta hai..

Shruti looks at him and gave a "don't know" expression.

SHRUTI- jab tak.. maa ke mann ki insecurities dur nahi hojati. Jab tak.. wo khud jiju se lautne ke liye nahi kehti... Tab tak... Shayad... Jiju...

She stammered to answer. She couldn't complete her sentence which she wanted to say that may be Ram won't return until Kranti ask him. Shatrughan bows down and looks disappointed. Shruti feels bad for him and envelopes her arm in his arm and keeps her head on his shoulder.

SHRUTI- but we have to try.. tab tak.. jab tak sab theek nahi ho jata.. hai na.?

Shatrughan nods in agreement while tears were there in both of their eyes...

Tum Ho Gham Ko Chupaye

Main Hoon Sar Ko Jhukaye...


Shruti release him and looks at his eyes which seems to be sad and teary.

Tum Bhi Chup Ho

Main Bhi Chup Hoon

Kaun Kise Samjhaye...


She forwards her hands to wipe his tears while he looks at her. She shook her head in no asking him to not cry. While Shatrughan again embrace her in a hug.

Ab Dooriyan Itni Hain To

Milna Yahan Kal Ho Naa Ho...


Bharat was resting on manvi's lap while she was caressing his head lightly, both of them still sitting on floor.

Sach Hai Ke Dil To Dukha Hai

Hamne Magar Socha Hai...


He gets tears thinking about his words which he said to Kranti today. He gets hurt because if kranti's deeds.

Dil Ko Hai Gham Kyon

Aankh Hai Nam Kyon

Hona Hi Tha Jo Hua Hai...


Manvi looks at him crying. She wipes his eyes while he takes her hand and keeps it near his heart.

Us Baat Ko Jaane Bhi Do

Jiska Nishaan Kal Ho Naa Ho...


While she continued caressing his head with her other hand making him calm and Bharat kept on thinking about his next move- to bring Ram Siya and Lakshman back...

Har Pal Yahan Je Bhar Jiyo

Jo Hai Sama Kal Ho Naa Ho..!!!

*****

Urmila was still awake, looking at her cellphone now and then. She takes the cellphone in her hand and was about to dial the number but stopped herself. She keeps the phone and was about to go to sleep when it rang. She runs towards the table and picks the call

URMILA- laksh... Kaha the aap.? Kabse aapke call ka wait kar rahi thi...

Urmila said getting disappointed while Lakshman smile hearing her voice.

URMILA- hello..?? Laksh..??

Urmila again tried to talk as she was not getting any response from other end.

URMILA- you there..??

LAKSHMAN- hmm..

Lakshman finally speak still having a light smile on his face. Urmila sighed hearing his voice.

LAKSHMAN- didn't you sleep.?

URMILA- I was waiting for your call.. aap se bat kiye bina, kaise sou..??

Lakshman smile sadly hearing her while she was getting tears in her eyes.

LAKSHMAN- milaa... You're not going to cry...

Lakshman warned her while she wipes her tears.

URMILA- me nahi ro rahi.. it's you, who is crying..

Said Urmila while Lakshman hurriedly wipes his tears too..

LAKSHMAN- kuch bhi.. me nahi rota..

URMILA- acha..? Liar.. kitne bar to mene aapko rote hue dekha hai..

Said Urmila teasing him while he pouts at her words.

LAKSHMAN- not done milaa..you can't pull my leg like this..

Said lakshman in a pout while Urmila smile sadly.

URMILA- mere pas to aap hai nahi.. atleast I could tease you on call..

Lakshman feels bad listening to her words. He closed his eyes, controlling his tears while Urmila bows down saying nothing.

URMILA- by the way... Bharat bhaiya and shatrughan are back..

Lakshman gets surprised hearing about Bharat and Shatrughan's return.

LAKSHMAN- what..? Itne jaldi..? I mean.. they were about to come after one week...

Urmila nods at his words.

URMILA- papa ke kehne pe.. Guruji ne unhe call karke bula liya..

Said Urmila while Lakshman looks worried.

LAKSHMAN- that means... Aaj ghar par.. zarur kuch hua hoga...

Said Lakshman while Urmila sighed recollecting everything happened since morning.

URMILA- hmm.. you're right.. wo dono aaye tab.. aap tino ke bare me hi puch rahe the.. and after they got to know, to.. wo log.. maa par bohot gussa hue..

Urmila told him about whatever they said to Kranti while Lakshman nods in disbelief.

URMILA- Bharat bhaiya ne maa Ko bohot bura bhala kaha.. she must be very hurt laksh...

LAKSHMAN- ye to hona hi tha milaa..

Said Lakshman interrupting her.

LAKSHMAN- maa has to face this oppose from everyone... Kyuki unhone.. nani ke bematlab ki bato ko maan kar.. hamari family destroy kar di hai...

Urmila gets emotional listening him while Lakshman was seems to be angry.

URMILA- Shatrughan ne... Nani ko ghar se nikal diya..

Lakshman gets shocked hearing about Mandira.

LAKSHMAN- what..?? Aur kisine roka nahi.?

URMILA- sablog nani par itna gussa the.. kon rokta laksh..?

Said Urmila getting angry herself while Lakshman nods in agreement.

URMILA- Shruti tried to stop him.. but then..choti maa ne use hi rok liya..

Lakshman sighed hearing the whole incident from her.

LAKSHMAN- ye kya hogaya hai hamare ghar ko..? We never thought that we will behave like this with our elders...

Urmila bows down feeling disappointed.

URMILA- sab log maa se naraz hai laksh... Mujhe bhi unpar bohot gussa ata hai.. but kabhi kabhi unke liye bura bhi lagta hai laksh...

Lakshman gets tears hearing about Kranti. While Urmila continued.

URMILA- atleast we all are with each other. But wo.. wo to bilkul akeli pad gayi hai...

Lakshman wipes his tears and looks straight.

LAKSHMAN- isme un hi ki galati hai urmila... If she has left alone, then it is all because of her ..

Urmila bows down saying nothing while Lakshman looks angry about Kranti.

LAKSHMAN- khair... You have a rest now.. mujhe.. kal subah kahi jana hai..

Urmila gets confused hearing him.

URMILA- kaha..?

LAKSHMAN- I'll tell you.. but not now..

Urmila nods lightly while Lakshman smile thinking about his search for a house.

LAKSHMAN- ok then.. you take care of yourself.. samjhi..??

URMILA- hmm.. you too... I love you..

Lakshman smile closing his eyes..

LAKSHMAN- I love you too...

He whisper while urmila gets emotional again. He understood her silence, that she must be crying. He was about to ask her but stop himself staying strong. She disconnect the call crying for him while he also looks tensed for his wife...

*****

Siya takes Ram's clothes from their bag and placed those on the bed. Her eyes falls on the cup of tea which was on table.

SIYA- Ram.. chai thandi horahi hai...

She calls for him looking at the direction of washroom, as he was taking shower. She started cleaning the room when he gets back from washroom.

RAM- hmm..

He gave the towel to Siya and settled down on bed while Siya hands him the cup and started wiping his wet head.

RAM- siya... Today I have to visit our factory.. waha jake ek bar dekh leta hu.. ki kam kaha tak hua hai..

Siya smile at him and nods in agreement.

SIYA- ok..

Ram takes a sip of the tea when something strikes him.

RAM- ghar se koi call aya..?

Siya shook her head in no.

SIYA- ab tak to nahi...

Ram nods hearing her. She thinks about everyone and specially about Kranti. She completes her work and goes near the balcony to keep the wet towel. Ram observed her tensed expression.

RAM- what happened..?

Siya looks at him as he asked her. She smile and moves towards him.

SIYA- ghar par... Sab theek honge na Ram..?

Ram too gets tensed as he get thoughts about Raghuvanshi family. He smile and gets up from his place.

RAM- pata nahi Siya...

He nods his head while Siya gets worried. He keeps the cup on the table and holds her from shoulder.

RAM- but isn't it obvious.? Everything happened in a blink.. sabko normal hone me, it will take time right..?

Siya smile at him and nods in agreement.

SIYA- acha.. Lakshman aapke sath chal raha hai kya..?

Ram shook his head denying.

RAM- I've asked him but he said he is going somewhere.. I don't know kaha ja raha hai..

Siya gave a confused expression. While Ram thinks about his brothers.

RAM- Siya.. Lakshman ko jyada din nahi rokenge..

Siya looks at him as he said about lakshman's return.

RAM- do teen dino me hume ghar mil jayega.. and once everything gets settled, we will send him back..

Siya smile and nods at him.

SIYA- but.. aapko lagta hai.. that Lakshman will return..?

Ram stops in between thinking about lakshman. The next moment he thinks about Urmila.

RAM- I know he will not be ready. But... Hum Urmila ko itna wait nahi karne de sakte Siya.. afterall.. they too have their married personal life..

Siya nods at him in agreement. Ram smile at her lightly and thinks about Bharat.

RAM- siya.. Lakshman ko to.. daat ke.. samjhake ya kaise bhi hum mana lenge... But...

Siya looks at him in confusion as he stops in between. He looks at her getting worried.

RAM- Bharat lautega to use kaise sambhalunga..??

Siya too gets tensed thinking about Bharat. Both of them know that it will be very difficult to handle bharat in this situation. Siya was about to speak when they heard a knock at the door.

LAKSHMAN- bhaiya.. bhabhi..

Ram nods at him allowing him to enter. Siya watches his tensed face.

SIYA- what happened laksh..?

LAKSHMAN- bhabhi.. wo...

Lakshman gulped thinking about how to say. He looks at Ram and continued.

LAKSHMAN- Bharat bhaiya and shatrughan are back in Mumbai...

Ram's heart beat skip for a moment while Siya's eyes widened hearing this. They both looks at each other while Lakshman watches both of them.

LAKSHMAN- yesterday.. Urmila had told me..

Ram takes a heavy sigh and nods his head in disbelief while Siya looks at him.

LAKSHMAN- Urmila bata rahi thi.. that.. Bharat bhaiya ne maa Ko bohot kuch kaha.. he is really very angry on her.

Siya looks at him hearing about Bharat while Ram nods in disbelief.

LAKSHMAN- Shatrughan ne to.. nani ke sath bohot misbehave kiya.. he just pushed her outside the house..

Siya gets shocked hearing him and looks at Ram who closed his eyes in disappointment. Lakshman looks at Siya.

LAKSHMAN- I am getting worried now bhabhi.. pata nahi ab kya hoga..?

Siya looks equally tensed at him.

RAM- jiska darr tha.. wohi hua..

Siya and Lakshman motioned their head towards Ram while he sighed thinking about Bharat and Shatrughan...

RAM- let's see.. what happens next...

Lakshman looks at Siya who was staring Ram getting tensed. While Ram looks concern thinking about his brothers...

*****

References:

Song: "Kal ho na ho sad" - Kal ho na ho (2003 movie)

Edited by ILuvAnya - 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cutie2804

Hey

Sorry for not commenting for last some updates... Actually I haven't read your story yet but will be read soon and will give comment to

Thank you for your all pms 😘😘

Once again sorry

It's fine.. you can read now 😊

Welcome.. stay tuned ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Life is just so strange... A single second can change beautiful day in worst nightmare.. and can even the worst nightmare in beautiful tale for life... All we get to learn is a lesson in each and every second of life...

Hoping for this worst nightmare to end soon from their life.....

Update soon..

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Posted: 4 years ago

❤️... continue soon.waiting to know the next.❤️Jai siya ram..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome part 🙂

I really was feeling bad for urmila she is suffering the most without her husband

Bharat & Shatru were calmed by Maanvi & Shruti respectively

Both were more irritated & angry after what happened & now are thinking to bring Ram & Siya back🙂

Ram too came to know from Lakshman that what happened

It was easy to manipulate Lakshman but here Bharat is not going to listen anything

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

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Originally posted by: Urmila54

Life is just so strange... A single second can change beautiful day in worst nightmare.. and can even the worst nightmare in beautiful tale for life... All we get to learn is a lesson in each and every second of life...

Hoping for this worst nightmare to end soon from their life.....

Update soon..

Absolutely correct my friend 👏🏻

Raghuvanshis were literally a happy family, but one nightmare and the whole family got destroyed..💔💔

Let's see how they are going to tackle with this...

Stay tuned ❣️

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Originally posted by: Srinivasan.R

❤️... continue soon.waiting to know the next.❤️Jai siya ram..

Yes...

Stay tuned ❣️ Jai Siya Ram 🙏🏻

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Originally posted by: golden_aura

Loved it dear

Awesome part 🙂

I really was feeling bad for urmila she is suffering the most without her husband

Bharat & Shatru were calmed by Maanvi & Shruti respectively

Both were more irritated & angry after what happened & now are thinking to bring Ram & Siya back🙂

Ram too came to know from Lakshman that what happened

It was easy to manipulate Lakshman but here Bharat is not going to listen anything

Let's see what happens next

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon🙂

Yes, Urmila is suffering the most 💔 her sacrifices and patience are literally worthy ..

Bharat and Shatrughan's reaction were obvious. Kranti should have prepared herself 🙄

Ram's fear is also valid, it's easy to make Lakshman and Shatrughan understand but Bharat is very sensitive, Ram have a fear if he gets hurt or depressed with this.. let's see how he is going to pacify Bharat...

Stay tuned ❣️

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