Rosid & mishbir ff: Dil toh pagal hai part 5 pg8 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Wow sounds interesting eagerly waiting for updates ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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I guessed the movie while reading Sid's CS itself😆 I too like the movie. Here you made mahesh babu hritik. And the coincidence is sid looks like both MB and hritik sometimes. Eagerly waiting for the updates though I know the story already. And the title is apt for roli's craziness😆

Edited by manasa5124 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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It sounds interesting update yaar ❣️ I've not watched the movie !!! waiting for your further updates

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting character sketch dear..... eagerly waiting for next update.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome lovely cs just love it misbir or rosid together awesome really can't wait update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 1
A handsome guy is sleeping on his cozy bed peacefully
A cute smile appearing in his lips
May be dreaming about some one
Let's enter into his dream and see
He is on bus top
Along with him so many people are on bus top
And place where less. So every one sat where ever place they found
By sticking each other
He took out his mouth organ and started playing song
( Dheere dheere se Meri Zindagi mein aana)
At that time heavy wind blown
And strings of hair touched his face from back side
He understood some one sat backside to him
He removed that hair with his hand
Again they touched his face
That fragrance of hair is pulling him
He turned slightly
He found a ear ring
He took it in his hand and smiled
His heart is wishing to see her face
He thought for a while
Ok I will ask her whether this ear ring is her
So that I can get chance to see her face
He turned back more
And called her but she didn't responded
now he again called her by tapping her shoulder
She about to turn back
But a big sound came
He woke up suddenly
Guy: shit, what a beautiful dream, in one more second I might have seen my dream girl
Then he heard that big music sound is increasing
(Dil na diya…di di dillll
Dil na liya dil na diya
Bol bolo na bolo kya kiya
Dil na liya dil na diya
Bol bolo na bolo kya kiya
Aake duniya mein bhi agar
Pyar na kiya toh kya kiya
Aake duniya mein bhi agar
Pyar na kiya toh kya kiya

From Krish movie)

He kept two pillows on both sides of his ears
He shouted: jugnuuuu
With in second a cute teddy bear like guy came
Jugnu: ha Abeer bhayya
Abeer: Yar what is this, morning itself started,that roli ki bachi that half ticket because of her again my dream got effected
Jugnu: bhayya that means today also you didn't see your dream girl
He asked sadly
Abeer nodded with puppy face
Song sound increased more, even their voice also not reaching each other
Abeer shouted: jugnu first go and stop that music
Jugnu frightened
Jugnu: bhayya no I can't
Abeer; jugnu are you going or not
Jugnu nodded and started going to the opposite room
He stood at enterance of room
He started praying o my Lord please save me today
He tried to knock door
But it is already opened
He tiptoed
He didn't find any one
He slowly went to music system and about to stop music
A ball hit his hand
He shouted with pain
He knew the owner of this act
He saw her
She was in black tea shirt and black jean
Jugnu: roli baby ( he treats her like kid) he got scared
She came to him
She started dancing
Main aisa kyun hoon, main aisa kyun hoon
She hold his hands and started swirling him

Jugnu could able to balance himself and fell down
Again she came to him and helped him.to stand

She again started dancing with him
Sorry not dance
She started pushing him pulling him throwing him in which ever direction she want
Main aisa kyun hoon, main aisa kyun hoon
Main aisa kyun hoon, main aisa kyun hoon
Main aisa kyun hoon
Main jaisa hoon main waisa kyun hoon

Now jugnu is totally on floor in shavasan taking deep breaths

When he opened his eyes he didn't find her
He took deep breath
He thought this is the best time
He again went to music system
Suddenly song got changed
And he heard anklets sounds
He saw roli in traditional lehanga
He was confused when she went and changed her dress
She started dancing
Bole chudiyan, bole kangna Haai Again pulling jugnu
She held his towel which he wear around his neck
She danced pulling his towel
Poor him suffocated by her act
main ho gayi teri saajna Tere bin jiyo naiyo lag da main te margaiya
She took his turban and kept herself

(Le jaa le jaa, dil le jaa le jaa Le jaa le jaa, soniye le jaa le jaa)


She pushed him again to floor

And she again disappeared

Now he decided any cost to stop song

He went to music system

Next song started

She came in sports dress with shuttle bat in his hand

Jugnu understood now he is gone

He decided to carry away with her.flow

He started dancing for the song playing

Kehdo ki tum mere dil mein rahoge
Kehdo ki tum mujhse dosti karoge
Kehdo ki tum mere dil mein rahoge
Kehdo ki tum mujhse dosti karoge

Roli placed hands on her hips
Dehkoongi sochoongi
She went towards door
And called him
Jugnu went towards her
She signed him turn back
He turned
She hit is back with bat and She pushed him and sang

kal parso kuch kahoongi
By her hard push jugnu fell in Abeer room directly and shouted with pain

Abeer rushed to him

Jugnu cried : bhayya my all bones were broken, I can't deal with her, she shown so many variations from song to song
Now it's ur turn go bhayya

Abeer: see how I will deal with her, how dare she? Pushed my jugnu he said holding jugnu shoulder
Jugnu kept puppy face

Abeer reached roli room and stood at enterance

Abeer looked back at jugnu
Abeer; now see
He about to knock
Roli opened door
She raised eyebrow like what
Abeer gulped saliva
Abeer : woh woh, roli you have water in your room? I mean my water got completed
Jugnu hit his head himself
She bend side wards and looked at jugnu
Abeer: yeah he told he will bring but I only said why to go downwards as you are having back pain na and said I will take from roli

Roli went inside and gave bottle to him and closed door

Abeer came to his room
And drank water

Jugnu is glaring at him

Abeer: what

Jugnu murmured: for water this much buildup

Abeer: oyy stop murmuring, I know what are thinking, I too went to deal with her but all of sudden remembered something

Jugnu: what bhayya

Abeer folded his full hand tea shirt up and saw so many marks on his two hands
Jugnu shocked

Jugnu: bhayya how this happened

Abeer: these all are that devil gifts, once she dig her nail , it will reach deep layer of skin, it took so many years to come to this normal marks. I don't want new ones
Jugnu; poor Bhai

Then they heard another song from roli room
( Kaho na pyar hai
Kaho na pyar hai

They both hit their head with their hands
Jugnu: Bhai why only hritik songs?
Abeer: our fate
Jugnu: I'm also hritik fan Bhai, but what is this daily torture
Is There is no other way to get rid of this torture?
Abeer: hmm let's think



Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arzena

Wow sounds interesting eagerly waiting for updates ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you Yar😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasa5124

I guessed the movie while reading Sid's CS itself😆 I too like the movie. Here you made mahesh babu hritik. And the coincidence is sid looks like both MB and hritik sometimes. Eagerly waiting for the updates though I know the story already. And the title is apt for roli's craziness😆

Yeah Manish resembles both of them to some extent , because of Telugu readers like you I'm trying some changes in scenes 😂 otherwise I might copy pasted movie🤭

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ratchuchinu

It sounds interesting update yaar ❣️ I've not watched the movie !!! waiting for your further updates

Thank you so much😍

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayeshakapoor

Interesting character sketch dear..... eagerly waiting for next update.

Thank you so much😍😍

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