Rosid & mishbir ff: Dil toh pagal hai part 5 pg8 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Finally RoSid met.. yeayyy!! And got lost in each other at the first sight itself aww. Sid changing his name as hritik was expected hehe. Roli and abeer scenes were cute and funny. Enjoying reading them. Update next soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Nice update dear...the flashback scene was funny..Rosid first meeting was superb.... eagerly waiting for next update.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

roli saying mdk story to abeer n his reaction was funny.roli abeer akhil fb scene was funny.guess that guy is Sid. roli lost in him was unexpected.he helping her to get up n holding her when she was about to fall down was romantic. abeer noticing it n enquiring about him was nice.both abeer n roli are hesitating to proceed thinking that his name may not be hrithik.finally a hrithik on stage.abeer too dancing with him was superb.never expected abeer to dance with him.is this hrithik actually Sid? which actor played abeer in the original movie?

Avsarala srinivas , very good actor

Actually in that movie he is just neighbor to heroine and he treats her like elder sis, here I made Abeer as cousin

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Posted: 5 years ago
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is he a hero?are both pairs given importance in the movie?

Originally posted by: vardhinirosid

Avsarala srinivas , very good actor

Actually in that movie he is just neighbor to heroine and he treats her like elder sis, here I made Abeer as cousin

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

is he a hero?are both pairs given importance in the movie?

Except heroine ( played by roli in this ff) every one are debutants in that film, this guy is now playing supporting charcters, it is better to call him as good performer than hero,

No he.has good screen space in movie but his love story is limited one, but her Im trying to give equal screen space

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 4:

After rocking performance

Hritik came down

He occupied near by chair

He ordered apple juice and sipping it

Abeer who saw him sipping apple juice got smile he remembered roli love for hritiks favourite apple juice

Abeer came and occupied chair opposite to hritik

Hritik saw abeer

Hritik: hey

Abeer smiled

He forwarded his hand to shook

Abeer: abeer abeer rajvansh

Hritik too forwarded his hand

Before he could open his mouth

Abeer: no need to introduce your self hritik

Hritik smiled

Abeer: by the way superb performance dude

Hritik: thank you buddy ofcourse you made it rocking by joining with me

Abeer smiled

Abeer: so glad to meet all rounder, who is an artist , singer and dancer

Hritik: how you know about my drawings

Abeer: just stalking you

Hritik raised his eyebrow

Abeer: kidding dude. Morning went to art exhibition and got to know about that

Hritik: oh

They chatted for some time

Soon they mingled with each other and became friends

Abeer liked him

But still he want to know more about him

Why not its about his little sister life matter

Even though how much he fight with her he loves her

Abeer: ok dude again when we gonna meet again

Hritik: yeah i will stay here this week , as i have some works , next week im going to my native

Abeer: ok then lets meet tomorrow and give your number

They exchanged their numbers

Abeer left

Hritik: atlast found a friend in this city

Hritik is in car

He was driving but his mind is some where

Hritik stopped his car near by

Hritik: oh god why this girl is disturbing me this much just i saw her once at morning why my mind is reminding her again and again, why im feeling restless please god please stop this mind from distracting

He took deep breath and started his car towards his flat

In roli room

Roli closed her eyes

But she is not getting sleep

Why not that stanger is not allowing her to sleep

Roli: oh god why he is disturbing me this much, i even dont know who he is

She held her head

Roli: but to be fact he is so handsome just like my hritik

Those eyes oh god still piercing me

that sharp nose

His perfect body

His arms which caged her inside him

Her cheeks becoming red while remembring him

Roli suddenly came into reality

Roli: oh pagali why are you imagining this much, and how could you think about a guy who you dont know and mind it you should think about hritik only

Roli saw book near by

Its novel named love story

Roli: chalo hope it will distract my idiot mind

She started reading story

And unknown to herself she is imagining her in heroine charcter sanam

And that guy in hero name hritik

Roli got smile unknown to herself

Roli: kash his name also hritik in reality

She again remembered some thing

Roli: oh god roli you really lost how could you think his name should be hritik

Roli is getting crazy

She thrown book away and sat hugging her pillow

She saw remote beside her

She switched on tv

She is just changing channels

Nothing is helping her to distract

There she saw music channel

Her fingers stopped pressing remote switches

Song is playing

Roli smiled: thank god..i know hritik only you can help me

She smiled and started watching song keeping her both hands under her chin

But soon she went into imagination

And started imagining that guy in hritik place

And herself in rani and kareena place( ha ha dual role)

Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Chori Se Chupke Chupke Baithi Hai Dil Mein Chupke

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Andekha Anjaana Sa Pagla Sa Deewana Sa

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Chori Se Chupke Chupke Baitha Hai Dil Mein Chupke

Jaane Woh Kaisa Hoga Re

Andekhi Anjaani Si Pagli Si Deewani Si

Jaane Woh Kaisi Hogi Re

She lost in her own world

Abeer reached home

Abeer saw jugnu who is busy in kitchen

Abeer shouted: jugnu where is your baby

Jugnu rushed to him

Jugnu: bhai you know some thing happened to roli baby

Abeer looked at him confusion

Jugnu: today na apples are over and i went to her room with orange juice

I thought she will shout at me

So i kept cotton in my ears as preventive care

But you know what

Abeer: what?

Jugnu: she didnt shouted at me, infact she took orange juice with smile and drank it, i think she even didnt recognize it as orange juice , she is in different world

Im in shock bhai, dont know what happened to her, im getting scared, its like silence before tsunami

Abeer smiled

He understood now everything

Abeer: bro dont worry, nothing happened to her, and from now on you are going to get more shocks like this

Jugnu looked at him confused

Abeer: pyar hogaya bhai pyar hogaya

Jugnu screemed leaving heavy plate in his hand

Abeer shouted with pain holding his feet as plate fell on his leg

Jugnu: sorry bhai really sorry

Abeer: uff this is the problem with you and roli, cant control your emotions

Oh god why you gave two pagals in my life

Jugnu pouted

Abeer: ha dont show your cute face now

Jugnu: bhai tell who is he

Abeer said about hritik

Jugnu: wow bhai lets go and talk with roli

Baby and tell his name is hritik

Abeer: jugnu i know about my devil, im sure she fell for him , she will die in happiness if she know his name is hritik

But we have to wait, im sure he is good person but have to test wether he can bear our crazy girl so its takes time untill then just chup

Jugnu kept finger on his lips

Abeer smiled

Ok im going to see what pagal no 1 is

doing

By saying this abeer went to her room

He saw roli who is lost in her own world

Abeer smiled

Abeer went to her and stood infront of her

He thought she will shout at him

But she didnt react

He understood she is dwelling in her own world

Abeer called her

No response

Abeer shooked her with his two hands holding her shoulder

Roli came out of world

Roli: bhai what happened

Abeer: that should be my question

He said rasing his eyesbrow

Roli stammered : bhai woh nothing im just thinking about my bhabi

Abeer : aha..

Roli: ha bhai you are searching for my hritik na so i thought to search amrita rao for this shahid kapoor

Abeer: .no need to take that much strain, i can search for my own, now tell the truth what you are thinking, i know you are telling stories to me

Roli: nothing bhai

She said with blush

Abeer: hmm your nothing saying something and yar you can give shocks to me but dont give shocks to that poor soul

Roli looked at him confused

Abeer: jugnu is in shock state that you didnt say anything when he gave orange juice instead apple juice

Roli: what he gave orange juice he is gone today

She shouted jugnu name

Jugnu with in minutes stood infront of her

Jugnu scared looking at roli

Jugnu: wha what baby do you need any thing

Roli:what juice you should give to me

Jugnu saw abeer

Abeer showed tongue to him in teasing manner

Jugnu: woh apple baby

Roli: what you gave

Abeer is teasing him standing behind roli

Roli shouted : tell

Jugnu: orange

Roli moved towards him

Jugnu thought roli gonna hit him

He started crying closing his eyes

Roli and abeer started laughing

Jugnu opened his one eye and saw roli and abeer who are laughing by hifieng each other

He understood they both are playing with him

Jugnu: ja cutty i wont talk with you both

Roli smiled

And went to him

Pulled his cheeks

Roli: arey jugnu we are just kidding , dont you know we love to tease you

Still jugnu kept puppy face

Roli: arey baba give your cute smile

Abeer: he wont give like this. I know how to make him smile

He signed roli

Roli understood

They both started tickling him

Jugnu started laughing

Jugnu: arey bhai stop roli baby you too na stop

Roli: you said ja cutty

Will leave only you say friends

Jugnu: ha friends

Abeer and roli stopped

They trio hugged

Next day abeer went to meet hritik

They spent some time by chit chatting

Jas in her room

She is thinking some thing deeply

At that time she felt some one closing her eyes with hands

Jas: varsha

Varsha: yar how could you identify me

Jas: why not, how can i forgot my bestie smooth hands touch

Varsha smiled

Jas: yar i missed you so much

Varsha: even i too, thats why after my religious trip, i directly landed in your house

By the way what you are thinking that much seriously

Jas: dont you know about what im thinking

Varsha took deep breath

Varsha: roli marriage

Jas: ha yar you know how much i love her, now getting tensed to give her hand to some stranger and to a not known family , how much happy i will be if she get saas like you, you will take care just like own mother

Varsha smiled with pain

Varsha: hmm some things are not in our hands, im not that much well fated to.get roli as my bahu

any ways im sure roli will get good guy

Jas,: i hope, and i gave that responsibility to abeer

Varsha: then no need fear , abeer will take care

Afternoon

Abeer came to home

Jas, varsha , roli went out for shopping

Jugnu is watching tv and cutting vegetables

Abeer came and sat in sofa

Advertisements are coming in tv

Abeer felt bored

He just about to change channel

Jugnu shouted

Jugnu: bhai dont change

Abeer looked at him confused

Jugnu: bhai today in village special program, all village girls are competing for rangoli compitation and you know what even my village girls are participating it , now itself they announced my village name also

Abeer shook his head

He left remote

And took out his mobile and started browsing it

Jugnu is talking something and another thing

Abeer is just noding his head looking into his phone

Jugnu: bhai you to see know? See how much beautiful my village girls are

Abeer: uff always about girls

You wont change

They are announcing winner name

So the winner is misthi from vrindavan

Abeer didnt hear this

Jugnu shouted:

Wow vrindavan my grandpa village i know my grand pa village girls are so talented

News channel is interviewing misthi

Jugnu started praising her , im proud of her bhai she won the compitation

Abeer raised his head and saw excited jugnu

Abeer smiled seeing jugnu happiness and looked at tv, he couldnt see girl face clearly as she stood in side ways and another girl who stood beside her covered her almost

When he was about to looking into his phone

He felt something

He again saw tv and he saw the girl ear ring

Abeer got shocked

Abeer: ear ring

This is the same ear ring i saw in my dream

He was shocked

Reporter is saying girl to turn towards camera

Abeer heart started beating fast

He was looking into tv intently

When that girl about to turn

Power gone( no live telecast available in mobiles and apps for this channel😝)

Abeer: shit

Jugnu looked at him confused

Jugnu: bhai what happened

Abeer: jugnu woh ear that dream woh ring that girl

Jungu: bhai kya hua

I didnt understand

Abeer hit jugnu head

Jugnu rubbed his head

Abeer: jugnu that ear ring yar, my dream girl ear ring

Jugnu: what

Abeer : yar i have to find her

Jugnu: bhai dont worry i will find her

Abeer hugged him

On other side

A girl is in bus top

She heard a guy is playing song with mouth organ

(Dheere dheere se)

She lost in his song

She is listening that soothing music

She felt a heavy wind touching her

Her hair is flying in air

She took her fingers and tucked her hair behind her ear

Then she found her ear ring missing

She looked here and there

She felt some one called her

But she was busy in searching her earring looking in different directions

Then she felt some one tapping her shoulder

That touch ,her heart stopped a bit

She was about to turn

She felt pain on her back

She screamed rubbing her back

And got up

And saw the owner who destroyed her beautiful dream

She found her

She: ammoji you again disturbed my dream

Ammaji: oh god this girl, misthi dear there will be time to dream, what is this, its evening 5 , you are sleeping and dreaming

Misthi pouted her lips

Ammoji: ha dont keep puppy face, i will let you sleep if its new dream but no its again that old cinema type dream

Misthi: ammaji you have right to scold me but not my dream, if you not disturbed me i might have seen my dream guy

Ammaji: you never see that guy, because these dreams are trash

Misthi: no those are not trash and see soon i will meet my hritik

Ammaji: hritik? Who is he

Misthi: woh when i said hritik, i said dream guy

She covered up

Ammaji scratched her hair

By that time post came

Misthi took that and opened it

She shouted and hugged ammaji

Misthi: ammaji i got my dream job, call letter from rajvansh designers

Ammaji: wow congrats dear

Im so happy for u

But she remembered something

Ammaji: but baby will your brother agree with this

Misthi became upset hearing this


( Sorry for less rosid in this update, will give rosid centric update next, i want to give equal space for both couples)

Edited by vardhinirosid - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Tq guys for comments, and sorry for late update..my bro came, he is not allowing me touch phone,he want to me to spend time with him in teasing mom and grand ma and torturing them😅

And this update im writing from 4 days when.he is not around me atlast i completed

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

So finally Abeer and Hrithik became friends and Hrithik too was happy to get a friend in this city.... roli's behavior of not scolding jugnu shocked jugnu and he shared this with Abeer.... Abeer telling about Hrithik and the plate scene was funny...jugnu is so excited to know and was going to tell Roli but Abeer stopped , he is so responsible towards his sister that he himself wants to test Hrithik .... Roli and Abeer teasing jugnu was so funny , it nice to see their friendship....so now Abeer's dream girl is from jugnu's village...and again he couldn't see his girl but liked that jugnu told to help him....ohh so mishti too having dreams and now she got her dream job too.... waiting for their first meet.... update soon...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Awesome update. Roli and abeer teasing jugnu was funny and cute. Can't wait to see roli meeting sid, I mean hritik again. And mishti also dreaming about the guy. Waiting for mishti and abeer meet too. This story is really entertaining. I'm loving it. Update next soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Abeer made the friendship with Sid... Can't wait for rosid meeting... Abheer find his dream girl but didn't see her face... Mishti is also seeing dream... Who is mishti brother... Eagerly waiting for next update...

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