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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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here goes my next part. a request is that i want u all to reply for the couples.it may be any couple.no problems.until now i have got 3 couple name suggested.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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here goes my next part. a request is that i want u all to reply for the couples.it may be any couple.no problems.until now i have got 3 couple name suggested.

He was passing threw bani's room ,the door was open and saw bani standing there near the windows. He saw felt it was late and bani has not gone to bed . she need rest he thought and went to her and said 'bani , why din't u sleep it is late and u need to take rest. They just looked into their eyes. Then there was a thundering and lightening which made bani to get scad and hug jai.( heeeeeeeee y hey hey situ starts…….)tightly .jai just holded her by his strong arms . she felt so nice and protected in his arms and her head was on his chest and could hear his heart beat . he stroked her back making her feel good . she then slowly spoke mr. walia pls muje yahaan akele chod kar math jayeyai bohut dar lag raha hai. He then said bani u said that I can't sleep in this room , but if u don't want be alone ,I don't mind if u sleeping in my room .she then said then we will go there . they just came out of their hug. He searched the answer in bani's eyes and he got it as yes and the eyes said she was ready .he then slowly picked her up by his arms. And took her to the beautiful room which was ready for them .he slowly layed her in the bed .he just came over her slowly and started kissing her in a gentle manner . .he then started to nuzzle her neck and unpinded her pallu and bani hands were on his neck caressing his back and hair and the scene slowly fades away( rest in ur imagination . the song was alo playing ofcourse jiya dhadk jaye )

A few minutes later both jai and bani were in each other arms. Outside it was raining . then the clock hitted twelve .bani just wished him " happy birthday" he was so busy in her that said " what" she laughed and replied " happy birthday to u ." he just replied " I love u bani." And started kissing her. She then broke from kiss and said we need to sleep. As "my munna's papa will scold me if I don't sleep ." jai replied " munna's father means my father ,oh no he is dead bani and how can he scold u that to now?" bani laughed and replied " I am not talking about massi's munna but my munna who is in my tummy."jai just laughed and both with a smile went to sleep in each others arm.after making love for one more time as jai wanted to .she couldn't refuse his birthday wish.
Mor 7:20 his phone starts to ring .alarm in phone. Jai was hugging bani from her backside and sleeping ,he just moved his left hand over bani and searched for his phone near his side and realized how bani's pink saree was lieing over bed and floor ( half on bed over him and half on floor)and laughed and picked up hi phone on near by desk and of the alarm. And turned towards bani and saw how sweetly and childishly she was sleeping . and a smile appeared in his face . he thought it was the best birthday in his life and it was just a beginning.he was staring at her and again his phone rang and it was none other that massi .she wished him happy birthday and asked him how is Bangalore . he then realized and just laughed and said Bangalore is really good and he is happy here very much. Then massi said adi wan't to wish him.adi simply on coming on phone said jai I hope u r enjoying there and taking the plessure of the climate. I heard there the climate was good. And then he wished him happy birthday. Jai on other side just replied thanks and said yes we r enjoying here( adi knows it .he is also in the plan)and do u want to speak to bani means she is sleeping right now near me.(adidya understood that mis und was cleared and both r having good time.)adi just asked did u get the deal .jai replied yes .so ur enjoying there .i better keep the phone adi said . and placed the call.jai then moved to bani's face and kissed her in forehead . he saw the the sindoor spreaded over (after suhaag raat scene they usually show it.).and laughed..he wented to get ready.

davia.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
loved it
keep it up
👏 👏 👏
pinkmonkey_2004 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
ohh...nice..i like it....very cute..but could u make it a little more neat?? It's a bit hard to read and could u put some of it in hindi, too? More realistic that way! :D
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
ok. i will try.sometimes while writing i get confused.so it happens. writing in hindi i am trying to write more.day by day iam trying to improve.thanks.
davia
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
Davia,

Loved it alot. So Jai got his Birthday wish at last and why wouldn't he, he is Jai and we all love him. 😆

Cant wiat for the next part from you.

Love
Krishna

p.s. Davia, when you update could you please put the page number along with the part updated in the subject.
😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
davia,
g8 part. so jai got his favorite cake (bani) on his birthday, what better he can expect from god. please update soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
Lovely part Davia! Keep going on the great work ! 👏
Please continue soon ! 😉
ridizzz thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Beautiful update.
Bani gave him his birthday gift.
That is so sweet. 😳
Phone conversation was funny. 😆 😆
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
its really gud hope u carry on soon 😉

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