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Posted: 18 years ago
great parts davia, please continue soon.

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Posted: 18 years ago
here is ppart 18 and 19 for all for waithing patiently..thnks for it.

18 and 19

bani was in her room now.sying pata nahi kitni aur logg mr.walia ke peche padhe hai?sab ko meri hi pati mile kya???????? Line marne keliye…. Itne saare log unpar line marthe hai to unhonein shaadi kyun nahi ki pehle??????(tab tum kahan se aathi bani..?????)mein unse ye poochunki… wo aab tak aaya kyun nahi???????.. she then hears a knock on the door..she says mr walia hongee and goes and open she was like ……..yye koun??????? That man says man room service:sab ne kaha ki room ko clean karneki..kya aab kuch deer keliye b… few min later she come out dress. He was ready waithing for her.. and asks chaleein and I saw ur shopping for the kid..u both soo many I think what I agve u is finished haaan????? Anhin mr walia jai something was left I thought of buying some more of it but later thought I need tosave a little as I wil keep it for our future and uy some more later after the baby is born.. as I don't want to pamper from now itself… she says bb to chaleein.. .

they r in te shoping mall now both shop for each other and but some more toys and dress for baby.. .both choice will be same when ecver they choose something for the baby.. jai sees a red dress and but for bani without knowing to her.. he goes and get it… he then smiles having some wicket plan… .. then bani and he goes to have their lunch. One of jai's old gril friend come and hug him from back..and says hi… he get excited and too seeing bani near by him he openly tries play with her by saying why don't u joint with us ronitha????(I really don't know how it came to my mind just wrote the name..)bani was like we planned to have it alone but know she one his …. Ronitha as like how r jai I missed u soo much… and I stil love u as before but I heard that u got married and ur going to all over be single once more as ur going to get divorced why don't we get married ,first atleast roshini was there but now no one… on the other side bani was fuming .. .she goes to him and pull sher out saying he is still my husband. and bani comes saying sorry miss .. haan ronitha I am his new hone wali biwi hoon miss ina…and putted her arms around his..qand give a broad smile ( as ronitha does not she was j's wife)she was like jai… this is not fair u get one after one… but ye tumein kahhan se mili ,bani replies abhi pass mein todi der pehle.. she was shocked on her answer and says bye jai I have to goo my husband is waiting… and runs away… and bani leaves jai hands and says chalein in a angry tone..and he was like bani she turns and gives a cold stare and both leave.. in the car he was trying to talk to her 'bani" she says asks in a angry tone kya hai aab to bahut kush honge aap ,aakir u have met ur one of ur girlfriend..i don 't want to talk to u better u don't otherwise the one week will be for whole life.. he was like oh no… and kept quite all over the journey bani was all angry by now.. and after reaching hotel he says bani I hahve some work why don't u move and hands over the key saying he will join her later but still she was angry…. And leaves but he was laughing and thinks tumein mein manaloonga bani..

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mam room sservice aap ko kuch der keliye bahar jana hoga we need to clean the room.. and she gets frustrated and leaves scolding..


ahar ja sakthe hain taaki hum apna kaam pura karlenge varna sir daaathenge..she says.. teekk teek hai kitne deer lagenge.. mam half an hour??????? What half an hour..and she moves taking her purse..and he says mam aap chahein to to aap dura kaamre mein reh sakthe hein…nahi mein teek hoon and she leaves and thinks where to goo and she goes.. to gate and she finds a icecream shop opene today and she gets tempted on seeing icecreams and moves towards it…and enters it.. she sees everyone was eating icecream and only one place was left near the corner and she goes there and sits the waiter comes and say..order mam…she says bring strawberry ,vennila and chocolate witrh double scoopand one cone after that with chocolate strawberry and vennila scoops one vover another…ok it and he replies yes mam and leaves but bani calls him and says don't forget the wafers over it.. .
and she watches others..so many where there..and alwhere enjoying with their family and she watching it with mixture of emotions remembering all the past.. and then she sees two litlle girls who where sitting with their mom and eating their icecreams actually trying to eat.. as one was having cone and another was having..cup and one tries to eat and it falls over dress and her mom syas beta eat it without spilling and wipe it and another kid haing cone licks the icecreams and it all over her mouth and it was really ccute.. she thinks woow kitni cute hai twins.. aagar muje bhi twins hoo mei bahi aise samal rahi hongii na..and imagines herself mr walia and ther kid eating icecream together.. and she was made to come back by the waiter saying aapka icecreammm and she then eats whole icecream and the next one also comes and she eats that also.. and she asks for the bll but the waiter informs her tat today icecreams are free for all who ever comes today will have a fre icecreams… and no bill as it will be paid by the person and points out at the person who was sitting opposite litlle away from her table.. when she looked he showed his hands and she gets angry and says which person that one ru sure ?ye mam ok come with me… and she oes to him and he stands up she says "muje muft mein kane ki aadat nahi hai.. and nd keeps a thousand ruppeees note on his hand and thnks but no thnks.. and leaves that person was none other jai…he was like abhi tak gusse mein hai.. and he orders to send whole day bill to the office and moves he knows the shop owner and sooo ..and goes to bani and calls her name and stops her by holding her hand and says bani suno thooo kya hua bani.. I wanted to give u surprise but u r still angry with me…she turns .. and then he contiues bani I am sorry.. and he says bani I … dekho bani I did everything for u bani as I ,when I saw u eating icecreeamm I just loved to se u like that soo I wanted to give treat to all who came there to eat icecream… because of.. and u placed the money on my hand..and u shd not have done it.. I did for u.. and u r still =angry I said u I am sorry… she was like .. gave him a stare.. and goes t room he just goes following her… they reach the lift and both enters at the same time and a kid also enters.. with his parents… that women was scolding her husband.."dekho ji.. us icecream shop mein.. ek pati ne apni patni.. pregnant hone ki khushi mein .sab logon ko muft mein icecream kila raha hai aur aapne meri pregnancy ki kabr sunkar.. aap behosh hogaye… and u never even did something like tha.. both jai and bani was watching it.. and giving each other a side look..and she says jo aappne patni se bahut pyarr kate hain woo log hamesha kuch na karte hain.. aur tum hoo ki…
then the child pulss his father 's pant and mother's pallu and ask aap log.. kya kar rahein hai… papa aap behosh kyun hue?????? Pregnant mathlab kya hai…???????????????? And jai just laugh at that.. and the lady turns towards it and says.. aap ko sharman nahi aayee pati patni ki baat sunthe hue.. aur aap haas kyun rahe hain???? Bachhe to aise hii sawwal pooche gaanaa after wo apni baap par jo gaya hai…he way then says sooryy ,bahut cute sa bachha hai..aapka ,wo tho hain kyunki qo muj par jo gaya hainnn(jai phir se… bechara phas gay..)bani givens him stare saying..to keep quite.. he was ohhh no… and the lady continues to say so and soo the kids keeps on questioning them.. inbetween thank god they reach the floor..
and both jai and bani goes out… and he keeps on saying bani suno thoo and she goes towards the room and just opens the door and gooes inside the bathroom before he cold reach… and just goes and stand in front of mirror..and just wash her face.. and when she looks upp she get shocked…

preview:bani and jai having dinner..

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Posted: 18 years ago
g8 parts davia. great nauk-jhok b/w H/B, i think JW is having a line of ex-gf and now bani shld understand that he has eyes only for her and ex are ex 😉 and jai shld not torture her with making love with her ex 😡

please continue soon and thanx for PM.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part davia 👏
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part davia thanks for the pm again
poor jai 😆 but i know he will manaofy bani soon.......... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
thnks for all th replies..
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Posted: 18 years ago
hope u all enjoy..it..

she get shocked on seeing it and tuns and she goes near it ,it was beautiful red dress –a bridal out fit…. And she read the message after taking the dress from its hanging position and reads it.. "kyat um aaj meri dulhan banogi????????? Kya aapni pati ke saat suraag mano giii? Agar nahi to mat pehna… agar haan to pehn lena.. tumhara taiyaa hone kii samman us kabd mein hein.. lena…,I will be waiting"she then get ready…with a smile…and almost after an half an hour she comes out…it was now evening…he was waithing there wearing the dulha dresss.. a white sherwani… thinking these womens take soo long time to get ready… and on hearing bathroom door open he goes there.. she comes out dress in it…with her hea lower feeling all shy and thinking how will she face him.. as she was feeling something inside her after reading that note…and both looks each other and she was meets his eyes because of shy ness.. and just huggs and closes her eyes tightly…and he sayss abb lag rahahei kiii ye meri bani hai hugging her back…bani u look beautifull today…and he picks her up with his strong arms…and and asksk open ur eyes bani… as now what is there to feel shy????? Mr walia pls.. bani if u don't then I will carry u throught the hotel like this.. she sayss nahi and open her eyes.. and lowers it… and he asks kya hum apn=a personal suite yani honey moon room chalien.. and was about to move she says mein is taraf bahar nahi jaa sakthi.. muje saram aarahi heii…ok then just close ur eyes it very near to our room bani and no one is there and she closes her eyes tightly and he goes inside the bathroom and close the door and she opens and ask it ni jaldii aagayii???? And sees they were in bathroom… and she was like mr walia… haan bani I thought of starting it with a bath.. as u aeee tt icecreams and it was full in u.. she says mr walia.. okkk .. wait.. and he opens the door and takes her to the bed which was full decorated with,,,,,, rosess candles… and it was fully a suhaag raat roommmm with a welcoming look… and now she feells shy all over again.. and he gently.. make her stand..and ask kaise laga?? Ye sabb w??????????????????? and turns to him and sayss……… aapne muje jaan bhujkar bahar beji thin a????? haannn he replies..

then she says mr walia in a cute lookk he sayss haannnnnnn muje bhook lagi haii muje bhi to bed mein jakar beito I wil come and open ur ghoongat .. with a smiles she laugh and says… muje kana kana haiii asli wali appko nahi.. he sayss what.. parr ,muje pata hai aapne phle se hii order ki ya hai.. kushboo aar a haiin to chalienn he replies haann with a frowning face and she pulls him to eat.. and both sit and she start to keep things..in the plate.. he gets an idea and says bani we will eat in the same plate remember masii words.. haan muje pata haiin… hum ek hi plate mein kaheen ge… and and she takes a piece bring nears his mouth and he opens his mouth and eats it.. he get angry and kisses her .. in her lipps. He oves him and say abhi nahi baad mein.. , and he sayss if u don't feed me I will do that again.. and then makes her feed him and he feed her…

after finishing… he saysss now we have fishined eating now can we … she replies.. haan but we will talk first then.. that ok/????????? He sayss but u shd not sleep….she blushes .. and she sayss teek hai.. and he carries her to the bed and place her carefully in the middle of the bed…and she sit up and covers herself wih the goonghat an he slowly sit next to her opposite side and slowly opens her ghoonghat.. and she has her eyes lower and was smiling litlle and… he slowly lift her chin withhis fingers and says bani she sayshmmm bani look at me.. don tbe shy this is not our we are seeing but it is special time now soo pls don't be shy.. pls look at me…she has her eyes still lowere so he gen tly kisses her lips.. she turns awy breaking the kiss and start too feell shy…and he kisses her hand taking it.. she was like we decided we will talk removing her hand from hi gripp but he says no talking later now only … I know u understand…she sees him and says nahi first talking…. Then he says okkkk we wil talk..but what???????? She laughs…

he then gets up and sits next to her and both rest in bed board.. and he was having hand over her shoulder and says now talk.. and other hand playing in her… she thenn she askkss aap ne aabbb tak shadi kyu nahi ki…he was like ye kya sawal hai… pls bata yei na…… and he was like i din't feel like getting married as I din't feel any one will be fit for me.. who bares my rudeness,scolding ,,who will look after me ……… anddddddd and she asksssssss he says muje bani nahi mili isliye…. Jooooooot she says.. dekha. Bani I said we shd not talkkk as it may let to some other thing.. so why don't we and was about to kiss her she pusses him saying nahi…. He says bani don't test my patience… I diid and had early dinner for u and do it for a long time varna u sleep away that why.. don't play games…
she was like mr walia… this is not fair u promised to talk.. I din't promisse enough of talking now only the moves.. no she says..he says ok fine.. and turns other side…and start to do something on his cell she then slowly tries to c all him mr.walia…jai….he doesn't look then shouts in his ears gulaab jamoon…… and laugh he turns and kisses her she gets stunned and she tries to push him but he itself leaves and say if u call me like that I won't stop with kissing next time remember it…she get shocked.. and she starts to hit himmm and he holds and tries to protest himself from her beating and both look each other for a while and slowly he leaves and starts to kiss her in her cheecks forehead and lipss an done led to another and they end up in th bed offing the lights..

preview :jai and bani alone in walia mansion.
Promo the week test starts

davia
Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow davia .... what a update... suhaag raat.. bechara jai... he is too impatient .... bani is still shy from him... my god this girl ... provoking him..ha??
g8t prt 😊 👏
ps. n i think jai looked very hot in white sherwani 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part davia 👏
jai n bani ki dusri suhaag raat lol......... bt war gud thn da 1st one i guess 😳
😆
cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part.
loved it.
plz cont. soon.

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