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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#161

davia,
what a hot part yaar, one more suhaag raat with bani, i think Jw knows well how to keep his woman happy and manno bani. promo sounds interesting please continue soon.

swati

Edited by swatinarang - 18 years ago

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 18 years ago

#162

Wonderful part Davia ! 😳
Faint and blush ! 😆
Please continue ASAP ! 😉

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amisha

@amiee

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#163

that was awesome pls cont soon...........

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Aparna Dhar

@koolkat86

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#164

hey,
finally caught up with both ur fanfics.
sorry wasnt replying had exams on my head.
hey when are u updating KK?

please keep updating and continuing this great work.

👏

aparna

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daviashree

@davia389

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#165

very soon may be on sundayyy
davia

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#166

ok so on sunday
so i'll be waiting 😃

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daviashree

@davia389

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#167

hii evryone thnks for patience.. for waithing.i hope u all enjoy it.

Morning the sunlight hit them both…..jai was the first one to open his eyes and look towards her she was sleeping in his arms almost over his chest like a innocent baby…he smiles.. and kisses her forehead and sayss I love u bani u look beautifull in ur sleep also..and he slowly moves.. without disturbing and goes to the bathroom before entering he turns around too see the room and the bed.. how everything was scattered and the clothes were lieing here and there and banii was only covered with the bedsheet..and he placed the pillow and she was hugging it and sleeping.. and he goess in thinking and smiling…kash meri har subhahh aese hii hoo………and 20 min later he comes out fully dressessed in a dark black pants and a white shirt..sleeves rolled up to his joint.. and he was brushing his hair.. and he see her moving through the mirror and smiles and goes and sits next to her saying good morning jaan.. she slowly opens her eyes and sayss wish u the same.. and feels she was not in the clothes.. and ask him :mere kapde.. aappne usee kahaan ,mean where r my clothes… ??????? mere rehte hue tumein kapdee ki kya jarrot hai? And u look beautifull with out the clothes and comeon banii don't be u know I have seen u fully .. and there is noo need to feel shy… she covers herself with..the bedsheet and says.. plss mr.walia.. aap shuru maat huhi ye.. muje nahane jana hai aur uske baad ghar bhiii pls move and don't forget to order chai and breakfast as my munna needs it and asking to move he refuses to move.. and ask her to give a kiss she refuses but he sayss if u don't then I will pull the bedsheet from uuuand u know what I mean darling…she sayss okk but I will give u after the breakfast now now..pls…. and makes a face of pleading he then was not able to refuse and says ok.. and moves and she quickly goes to the bathroom .
Few min later she comes out wearing a pink sarree which was given by him..by the time chai and breakfast was arrived..he looks at her.. she goes to the mirror and start to apply her sindoor feeling shyyy and then she searches for mangalsutr and then she goes to the bed and starts to search saying mangalsutr kahan haii ye jaii bhii na pata nahii kahan uttar ka pfehnk diya.. abb meinn kya kroonghi?????? And some one puts the mangalsutr in front of her showing it she sees it and sayss mr walia mera mangalsutr and was about to take.. he moves it away…. Showing and indicating by placing his hand over his lips asking for a k*ss she says.. mr walia abbhh bhi na. pls give my mangalsutr..he says no until I get what I want.. she says bahut ziddi hogayee app massi ki pyar ne aapkoo bikaad diya haiii always demanding and until u get what u want u won't leavee he sayss haan mein aisa hii hoon…. Agar tumheinn ye chhiye too she wityhohut choice says okk and he sayss that good now come and give me..and he stand there she slowly moves towards himm and he comes forward and holds her face and slowly their l*ps meet and it beguns.. few seconds later she pulss away.. and sayss mere mangalsutr.. and he wears it around her neck. When he finishes sayss it was only a short kiis but I need a large one next time.. varrna… and sayss she ur too much mr.walia… .then he asks her for breakfast.. they sit down to eat.. he feeds her from his plate saying it has high salt.. he has already bited hald of thr parata and ask her to check it and she eats it thinking she needs to check but his plans were different and she realizes it and sayss mr waliaa app bhii na??????????kya???/ he says and both smiles and she k*sses him on the cheeckks and smilless muje kana haii romance nahii karma.. woo sabb baad mein.. kya banii badth mein kehte rehtii hoo I meannn after reaching wm u know that one weekkk plsss isloyaa baniii coming near here she pushes himm saying abhii nahii as per plan we need to reach wm today night before they come on toommorrow ..baniiiiiiiiii he makes his face and she goes near himm and sayss mr waliaa abb hameinn kane ke badd kuchh karma haii .. aapkoo pata haii kya hai???????/ he turns with a excitement saying kyaa wahii haina……… muje pata haii too humm chalein kane ke badd haann bed par naaaaaaaa nahiii baharr jana haii what??????? She smiles and sayss hamein mandir jana haii baghwan se ye prathna karne keliye kiiii kiii he sayss hameinn bilkull aap jase ek chota sa golmol sa chota saa gulab jamoon bachha chahiye.. woo bhii one baby boy .. banii this is not fairr uu need a baby boy but I need baby girll(let us wait and see what they will have a baby of boy or girl or both one one ……….)mr waliaa… teek haii let us eat and go too mandir.. and they have breakfast and move to mandir.. and both enter the mandir and doo the rituall both raise the hands for too bell and they doo and he fills her maang with sinddoor when she wa praying… and she opens her eyes and starts to smile.. and he asks chaleeinn?/// she nodds yes.. .whilee returning.. she sees a toy shop she ask him too stopp as she needs too buyy the toy.. he was like baniii tum bhii naa…

They enter the shop,she sees a huge teddy bearr and she call suniyee muje woo wala chhiye woo bada teedy bearr aapne paas rakne keliyee.. plss muje wwo chahiyee he sayss okk .. lelooo and they buy more toys ,which consist of small soft toyss and bigg onees and more rabit ,teddy small and little bigg they buy all and moves too the carr..and reach hotel everything s are placed and the room was now filled with toyess and he smiles bnaii ye tumneiin too puraa shop le agayii we brought all the stuff as if we r not going to have one baby but many .. both miles and then rest of the day they spend happily an later in the evening they pack their stuff and he was like banii jana jarrori hai kyaa??????????? She was haann jaroor rii haiii aapkoo yaad haii na 1 week u have too pretendd and u have to stay out of me… okkkkkkkk and he was like baniiiiiiiii jaiiiiiii and she says time too goo and both leaveew with all the stuff as no one must have reached there..and both enter the housee one only one servant was left and other were on leave as no one was there. He asked the servant to placee all the stuff in banii's room.. and he sees banii and sayss banii saab too yahan nahi hai too humm nahii mr waliaa u promised me… and ask himm to get ready for the dinner..

Preview:all returns..and jai and banii having some private moment chori chupiii and the games beginn

Promo:jai sayss "I want to kiss my baby banii"she feels shyy .. and they r in hospital as jaii was in the hospital bed bandaged..

davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago

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swati

@swatinarang

Sparkler

Posted: 18 years ago

#168

great part davia.
but what happened to jai, why he is in hospital, lagta hai romance karne ki liya chupte chupte tum ne us ko kahin se gira diya hai 😭 😉

swati