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Posted: 6 years ago
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Manzil (Destination) Part 5

Ruhi sat near Aarav.
Ruhi:Aarav...why did you become so violent with that man?
Aarav:Because that guy was flirting with Maa.
Ruhi:Maa herself told you that he was just talking to her.Then why?

Aarav got irritated unknowingly and blasted at her:Because I don't like any man other than me talking to my mother.Only I can get closer to her.
Ruhi was stunned.
She thought:So possessive!Is'nt he over possessive about his mother?
Ruhi:But he was just talking..not getting closer to her..
Aarav:Talking is also like that Ruhi.I don't want any other man to even talk to her.
Aarav left the room in frustration.
Ruhi:For such a silly thing why is he behaving like this?Strange!


Aarav showed tickets to Ruhi.
Aarav:See...our honeymoon trip to Goa.
Ruhi:Wow...I am so happy Aarav.
Aarav:Sorry Ruhi.I can't take you abroad like your father.I can't afford it.
Ruhi:It's ok Aarav.It's not necessary to go abroad.We can make our honeymoon grand in India too and Goa is so beautiful and romantic.

Aarav:Thanks for understanding me Ruhi.
They rubbed their forehead with each others smiling.


Aarav and Ruhi are on Goa beach wearing beach attire.
Aarav Ruhi held hands together and ran along the wet sand.



Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai


They played in the waves.

Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

He wiped the water drops from her face passionately while her eyes were on his face with passion.



Toote Toh Toote, Teri Baahon Mein Aise
Jaise, Shaakon Se Patte Behaya
Bikhre Tujhi Se, Aur Simte Tujhi Mein
Tu Hi Mera Sab, Le Gaya

He pulled her closer and romanced sensually.



Na Fikar, Na Sharam, Na Lihaaz, Ek Baar Aaya
Phir Zarre Zarre Mein Deedar Aaya Hai
Phir Zarre Zarre Mein Deedar Aaya Hai
Behad Aur Beshumar Aaya Hai

They danced in the Goa pub romantically.



Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyaar Aaya Hai
Aaj Phir Tumpe Pyaar Aaya Hai
Behad Aur Beshumar Aaya Hai


Tu hi meri awaaragi
Tu hi dua har sham ki
Tu khamakha, tu lazmi
Tu hi raza tu hi kami

Image result for manik nandini romance pics


Aur tu hi woh firaq hai jisko
Hai silsilo ne mere paas laya
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai


They looked at the starry sky of Goa and chatted.



Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai

The resort room was filled with the fragrance of their passionate love.
Aarav's lips travelled all over her face.


Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai


They both jumped into the bed.Ruhi was on top of Aarav sharing a romantic eye lock with him.



Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai

He placed her on the bed pecking her rosy cheeks.She was lost in him.


Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai(Hate Story 2).

Ruhi realized that she was imagining romancing with Aarav in Goa during their honeymoon and blushed.
Ruhi blushed:I can't wait for the day we go to Goa.

Finally the day came when they planned to go for honeymoon.

Aarav saw Khushi coughing very badly.
Aarav:What happened Maa?
Khushi:Nothing Aarav.A small cough.
Aarav touched her forehead.
Aarav:Maa..this cough is not small.Guess you have chest infection.And you have high fever too.I will take you to hospital.
Khushi:No need Aarav.

Aarav:It's needed Maa.For me,you and your health are more important.Nothing is more important than your health.

Khushi looked at him emotionally.
Aarav took Khushi to the hospital.

Later Aarav came back home with Khushi.
Ruhi:How is Maa?
Aarav:She is not well.The doctor has prescribed some medicines n advised her to take bed rest.
Ruhi:Oh..

Aarav made Khushi have food with his hands and made her have medicine with water.

Then he made her sleep.
Aarav put wet cloth on her forehead
and caressed her face softly to comfort her.


Aarav went near Ruhi.
Ruhi:Aarav..our flight time?
Aarav:Ruhi..how can we go leaving maa here when she is sick?Sorry Ruhi...now Maa needs care.We will go for honeymoon later.
Ruhi became dull.

They heard Khushi murmuring:You both go for honeymoon.Don't worry about me.I will take care of myself.All these years I was taking care of myself alone.

Aarav:No Maa.Now the situation is different.Your son and daughter in law are with you to look after you.
Aarav kissed her forehead.
Ruhi:Yes Maa.Aarav is right.We won't be able to enjoy when you are sick.
Khushi was so weak that she slept off.
Ruhi thought:Wish Khushi Maa had'nt fallen sick.Then we would have been able to go for honeymoon.

After some days Khushi became alright.But due to hectic work schedule Aarav could not take leave and take Ruhi for honeymoon which made Ruhi frustrated.


Aarav brought a new plant home.
Aarav:See Maa..what I have bought for you?
Khushi was surprised:Wow..a new plant.
Aarav:Yes.You always loved plants.Right?
Khushi:Ya..,but...
Khushi became dull.She closed her eyes remembering a past moment.
Flash back...
Arnav placed some plant pots before Khushi.She was surprised.
Khushi:These ones..?
Arnav:Don't doubt Khushiji.I bought this only for you.
Khushi could not believe it:Really?
Arnav:Yes.I know how much you crave for gardening.So as a friend I should fulfill my friend's wish.Right?I know it's just small plants.But...
Khushi:Don't say like that please.Though you did'nt buy a whole garden for me,these plants are very special for me.This is more than enough for me.I am very happy.
Arnav:I feel very happy to see a smile on your face.
Khushi smiled.
Khushi thought:Aryanji does'nt care for my smile.He does't even like me showing interest in gardening.
Khushi watered the plant

and talked to the plant as if it's her friend.
Aryan who returned home saw it with irritation.
Aryan raised her voice:Did'nt I tell you not to do planting and all?
Khushi:But Aryanji...
Aryan:How dare you disobey me?
He kicked the plant pots and tore the plants brutally.
Khushi cried:Aryanji...



Present...
Aarav:Maa..I know that you are thinking of your late husband who never allowed you to even touch a plant.But don't worry.Now your son is there to fulfil all your wishes.
Khushi smiled caressing his face.
Ruhi thought:Aarav wants to fulfill only his mother's wishes.Then what about my wishes?When his mother is around him he sees only her.He even forgets my existence.

Aarav got into the bathroom to bath to get ready to go to office.
Ruhi:Take bath and come.I will make break fast for you.

Aarav:No need yaar.Maa is there to make break fast.Right?She makes world's best food.You just help Maa.

Ruhi became dull.
Ruhi thought:Aarav likes only Khushi Maa's food.He is not even encouraging me to make food for him.
Ruhi went to the kitchen to help Khushi in making break fast.
Khushi:You know Ruhi?Aarav is choosy about food items since childhood.He is adamant that I should make his favourite food items daily.

Ruhi gave a pale smile.

Ruhi rang up Ishita:Ishi Maa
Ishita:How are you Ruhi?
Ruhi:I am fine Ishimaa.I just missed you.I felt like talking to you.
Ishita:That's so sweet of you Ruhi.I too felt like talking to you and I was about to call and talk to you.That's mother daughter relationship.
Ruhi was reminded of Aarav Khushi relationship.
Ruhi:What were you doing Ishimaa?
Ishita:I just fed your papa.

Ruhi:What?
Ishita:You know that your Ravan Kumar papa still wants me to feed him food with my hands.
Ruhi giggled:So funny.Why does he behave like a kid in front of you?


Why don't you refuse to feed him?
Ishita:Why should I refuse it Ruhi?It's lovely to feed our husband.Right?Love increases in such moments.
Ruhi smiled.
She thought:I will also feed breakfast to Aarav with my hands just like Ishimaa feeds papa..
After cutting the call Ruhi went to the dining room imagining her feeding Aarav.

She was stunned to see Khushi feeding Aarav with her hands.

Aarav:Maa...your hands are magical.When you feed me the food tastes yummier.

Khushi smiled.
Ruhi became upset.



Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aarav shouldn't do this to Ruhi, she has come to him leaving behind her parents, he should take care of her as well
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Posted: 6 years ago
#73
Awesome Chapter

Aryan dies but he had no chance to get forgiveness from both
Khushi and Aarav
Khushi has been receiving financial help from a unknown well wisher




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Aarav's possessiveness for Khushiis going to complicate matters..
He postpones his honeymoon for Khushi though she asks them to go ..
Ruhi stays positive as she too can't enjoy when Khushi is so ill ..
But she gets frustrated when Aarav doesn't take a leave afterwards because of work pressure..

Aarav brings plants for her mother ..
Khushi reminisces that Arnav had brought plants for her but Aryan broke the pots n destroyed plants..


Ruhi feels that Aarav takes care of Khushi only n doesn't acknowledge her existence..
It's not the case but Aarav n Khushi r unable to see Ruhi's insecurities..

Aarav must appreciate her if she wanna make breakfast for her ..
Khushi should encourage her to do things for Aarav ..

This 's very well-written update,Jazz.
👏

These pics r really awesome..

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Posted: 6 years ago
#75
amazing update! thanks! superbly written
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Posted: 6 years ago
#76
An Amazing Chapter

Khushi been a mother exactly knew that Aarav is the one sending her money
because he didn't want his money to suffer financially
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Nice update...but very less Arshi moments :(
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Awesome superb update dear
Thanks for pm
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Aarav... action causing ruhi...
but he is little possessive...after childhood trauma
he wants to protect her..


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Awesome update dear!!!👏
Sorry for late... My exams made me late... Aarav planned a trip to Goa... Ruhi imagination scene...❤️... But on d day of trip Khushi became ill... Due to his hectic schedule Aarav became unable to take Ruhi to trip... Aarav brought a plant for Khushi... ArShi flashback scene😳... IshRu phone convo... Ruhi imagined as feeding Aarav... But Khushi was feeding him...Poor Ruhi... She wants to become Aarav's first preference... Loved it to the core dear❤️... Really sorry for late... Thanks for d PM...

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