FROM THE TIME I SAW YOU - An AR FF - #Thread 3

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Rihoo Haws

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Posted: 6 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: millee18
This part was a roller coaster ride. It got everything from care to love to being scared. I felt all the emotions ❤️

Can't wait to find out what happens next :) please write soon

Thanks Millee...

Glad u love and enjoy the part...

Let's see what will happen in coming parts...

Keep reading and loving...

take care :)

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Rihoo Haws

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Posted: 6 years ago

#252

PART 113 SEND IN PM'S FOR THOSE WHO HAD COMMENTED IN THREAD

FOR UPDATES, DO LEAVE COMMENTS

ENJOY

TAKE CARE

LOVE U ALL

WITH LOVE,

RIHOOHAWS

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Sweet_28

@Sweet_28

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Posted: 6 years ago

#253

Just loved the last part.curiously waiting to see what's their in her reports... do pm the other parts too...

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T.Peru

@T.Peru

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Posted: 6 years ago

#254

Great update

Update soon

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Maulik solanki

@maulik1992

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Posted: 6 years ago

#255

113...its saddest and emotional part... Arman to tut hi gaya he... Even wo ridhima ko face bhhi nahi kar pa raha... Wo glass se ridhima ko sote huwe dekh raha he...wo sab se pahele ananya ko sab batana chahata he...

Arman ko dekh kar hi anjali ko pata chal gaya k sab thik nahi he.. Usane arman jyada pressure nahi kiya Aur time diya...

Ananya and Billy hospital aye Aur ananya ko dekh kar arman ne usako turant gale laga diya... Sach me ma Aur bete ka bonding hi alag hota he.. Kuch na kehake bhhi sab samaj jati he...

Anjali ne bhhi sab ko bata diya... Aur ananya and Billy ne ridhima sath he.. Aur usse kaha k arman fresh hone ghar gaya he... Ridhima kush he...

Anji and Dr shansant ne Dr. Kirti se bat ki even wo bhhi sock he... Ridhima ko infection he.. Arman bhhi tabhbhi waha ata he..

Love too see way Dr. Shansant and anji give supper to arman.. Arman ko himmat de rahe he k wo ridhima ko sab bata ye.. Aur usse taiyar kare sab face kar ne ke liye...

Sad thik he and arman ko dekh k ridhima usse ghar lejane ko kehati he... Sab un dono ko akela sod dete he... Arman usake pas ake bethata he Aur ridhima ko kehata k agar infection thik nahi huwa to she have to terminate her pregnancy.. And both are lost in each other eye.. Broken

Please sab thik karado.. Jaldi update karake...

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TaniDMGlover

@TaniDMGlover

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Posted: 6 years ago

#256

First of all thank youuu so much for updating quickly I was genuinely waiting for the part (you already know that)

Coming to the part...I can't even begin to tell you how much I have loved the way you have written down the whole scene! End of the cliffhanger hai hai (I am yet to be upset for this) but even the way you have build on the suspense throughout the part was amazing!

I loved how you showed Armaan's emotions he is torn between two things! Ek to be is already so upset about having to loose his first child and secondly he knows how badly this would hurt ridhima which in turn will hurt him more!

I also loved how you showed Ananya and Anjal's roles it was so well written like brilliant!

Then of course the end when Armaan breaks the news to ridhima...As a mother it's going to be so hard on her! Like just when Armaan tells her that she has to stay for the baby the way she gets hyper...She is obviously attached to her baby and it's such a heartbreaking moment which you have captured so perfectly!!!

I loved every bit of this part...EXCEPT that you ended it again on a cliffhanger. I know as a writer how important it is to do it but ab for this I am not a writer I am just a reader who is damn excited to read ahead sooo pretty pls update soon (now only if possible :p)