FROM THE TIME I SAW YOU - An AR FF - #Thread 3 - Page 27

Originally posted by: Sweet_28

Just loved the last part.curiously waiting to see what's their in her reports... do pm the other parts too...

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Great update

Update soon

Originally posted by: maulik1992

113...its saddest and emotional part... Arman to tut hi gaya he... Even wo ridhima ko face bhhi nahi kar pa raha... Wo glass se ridhima ko sote huwe dekh raha he...wo sab se pahele ananya ko sab batana chahata he...

Arman ko dekh kar hi anjali ko pata chal gaya k sab thik nahi he.. Usane arman jyada pressure nahi kiya Aur time diya...

Ananya and Billy hospital aye Aur ananya ko dekh kar arman ne usako turant gale laga diya... Sach me ma Aur bete ka bonding hi alag hota he.. Kuch na kehake bhhi sab samaj jati he...

Anjali ne bhhi sab ko bata diya... Aur ananya and Billy ne ridhima sath he.. Aur usse kaha k arman fresh hone ghar gaya he... Ridhima kush he...

Anji and Dr shansant ne Dr. Kirti se bat ki even wo bhhi sock he... Ridhima ko infection he.. Arman bhhi tabhbhi waha ata he..

Love too see way Dr. Shansant and anji give supper to arman.. Arman ko himmat de rahe he k wo ridhima ko sab bata ye.. Aur usse taiyar kare sab face kar ne ke liye...

Sad thik he and arman ko dekh k ridhima usse ghar lejane ko kehati he... Sab un dono ko akela sod dete he... Arman usake pas ake bethata he Aur ridhima ko kehata k agar infection thik nahi huwa to she have to terminate her pregnancy.. And both are lost in each other eye.. Broken

Please sab thik karado.. Jaldi update karake...

Originally posted by: TaniDMGlover

First of all thank youuu so much for updating quickly I was genuinely waiting for the part (you already know that)

Coming to the part...I can't even begin to tell you how much I have loved the way you have written down the whole scene! End of the cliffhanger hai hai (I am yet to be upset for this) but even the way you have build on the suspense throughout the part was amazing!

I loved how you showed Armaan's emotions he is torn between two things! Ek to be is already so upset about having to loose his first child and secondly he knows how badly this would hurt ridhima which in turn will hurt him more!

I also loved how you showed Ananya and Anjal's roles it was so well written like brilliant!

Then of course the end when Armaan breaks the news to ridhima...As a mother it's going to be so hard on her! Like just when Armaan tells her that she has to stay for the baby the way she gets hyper...She is obviously attached to her baby and it's such a heartbreaking moment which you have captured so perfectly!!!

I loved every bit of this part...EXCEPT that you ended it again on a cliffhanger. I know as a writer how important it is to do it but ab for this I am not a writer I am just a reader who is damn excited to read ahead sooo pretty pls update soon (now only if possible :p)

Originally posted by: NishitaRahman

Mindblowing emotional part.ridzy is sick.hope jaldi ridzy teek hojaye.beautiful outstanding story.thanks for pm.eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: maha23

Thanks for the pm hope everything goes well in the coming part

Originally posted by: geetika314

great update this is , hope ridhima get better

Originally posted by: Sweet_28

Such an emotional part... hope she gets better soon... eagerly waiting for the next part.