| Holding On & Letting Go : AR FF | chapter 15 - pg 76 | 11 Nov - Page 13

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

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Hayye.. kiya kahun main Kido...

It was so emotional... Abhi toh tumne bas teen part update ki...

Aur har part pe u hold the emotion so well, It make me just speechless...

As I keep reading, it make me hold my breath with every word...

So glad that Billy was there with Armaan all this time, even Armaan call him to save him because he was in so much love with this girl that he want to be in good health just for her...

Woh khud tik hone ke liye research karke, treatement lene ki decision li but... After the first potion, woh khud darr gaya tha apne haalat dekhke...

us waqt bhi woh sirf Ridz ke baare mein socha... Woh nehi chahta tha Ridz usse, us haalat mein dekhe...

Aur Ridz, yeh bhi kam paagal nehi hai apne hero ke liye... Kaise dekhe bhaag ke aagaye, lift thak nehi liya bas usse uswaqt apne Armaan koh dekhna tha...

I m so happy, yes u read it right... I m happy ki Ridz ne khud apne tarike se yeh matter face karne ki baat ki...

Billy toh hai help ke liye, sab kuch batane ke liye lekin woh Armaan ke muh se sunna chahta tha...

Because than only she could be more strong, woh apne pyar ke liye zarur himmat rakkhenge...

Aur yeh kiya kido...???? Is this even long...

Ek minute mein khatam hogayi... Shuru ki toh next second end...

I wouldn't complain for not making them meet, kyunki dono koh mentally bhi prepared karna chahiyeh...

and u r describing their emotions so well, main toh yeh sad parts bhi enjoy kar rahi hun...

I could feel it while I read it... the connect a reader and story should have, I feel it...

Ab yeh toh meri favorite bangaye... heheh as hardly any story be my favorite...

Main tujhe bohot tang karne wali hun update ke liye...

Continue super soon...

take care...

Love u...

Originally posted by: Prizi

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sanjuuu what a beautiful update girl
I'm in love with this update... i never knew you can pen down this emotional stuffs so beautifully


u knw fr a change I'm glad AR didn't met yet... Matlab u knw aamna samna... fr a change im loving ridhima's perspective

lov u

cont soon

Originally posted by: nilusoni

Wonderful update

Armaan ridhima both are mad for each other we know it

Very happy to see the way Billy handling things and armaan called him that's amazin

Omg armaan's condition is soo worse but ridhima understand that because she also suffer same pain but the way she is determined to make every thing right I am happy

Very excited for ar meet

Thanx for pm

Continue soon

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Okay. I'm gonna comment properly tomorrow cause I've just read it and I'm not even home yet. :p

Had gone on a picnic with my cousins.

But this was just so!! <33333

Made me tear up!! So good, Sanju. But please, make AR meet soon!

Originally posted by: Meraki.

Hey Di!! Itna sab kuch kehkar kehti ho kya kahun. 🤣

Haha! It's going to emotion for further parts as well and later it would be great, promise.

Love Ya Di!

It's defo going to be a different story, realistic, emotional and happy.

Yeah CVs never told us about Billy being there at the mental hospital and it still drives me crazy.

Billy wasn't a bad father I think, he just took everything lightly. A's parents were so much involvd in their own problems that Billy took the joking way as a resort to every problem.

Offcourse, I don't think after all those ups and down Armaan would've had just left like that. It's okay to be selfish at times along with being selfless.

Armaan got scarred of a number of things, I didn't reveal it all in depth and there would AR conversations in upcoming parts about all of it.

Well, love makes hard things go easier.

Ridhima was independent yet CVs sorted out the Indian beti way so I am gonna try and change that situation. :)

It would be too easier to listen by another person but knowing everything from the person who faced it, it's the real deal, somewhat it would be a way for Armaan to let it out and heal himself and Ridhima moving a step forward to help him in his pain.

di dialogues kam hai isiliye chota sa lagta hai. baby steps di.

that means a lot di. seriously.

love

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Dil garden garden ho gaya, bebu!!!

Thank you so much!! This chapter was just, absolutely, completely beautiful and love, love, love!

That start ka scene, where Riddhima was just observing him. And then the 'Basket' wala tattoo!! Such an Armaan thing to do! <3333
(Waise, I'm also planning something similar for TDBU. Matlab, tattoo. Not Armaan's condition.)

What Riddhima told Billy, about how she understands Armaan's condition, and how she didn't believe what everyone was saying after she first woke up, how she left him countless voicemails till he changed his number. It was so sad, but yet, so important. Because, it really was difficult for me to digest that Riddhima gave in so easily in the show. Shanky ne kaha aur usne maan liya. She didn't even question him. That's not the Riddhima I know. Armaan ke maamle mein woh itni easily believe nahi karti! So, I'm glad you showed that.

Billy's love for Riddhima is just so amazingly beautiful. It's like that of a father for his daughter. And jis tarah se he's accepted her so easily, it's so heart-warming. I'm really loving the touch of Billy POV here. Absolutely amazing. Now, we gotsa wait for the Shanky POV after he gets to Panchgani. (Koi gal nahi. Uske liye wait kar sakte hain.)

And then, Armaan's disbelief at seeing her there. All the love and surprise and just... The happiness he felt. It was so good! I adored that.

Ofc, the meeting took the cake. Un dono ko kuch bolne ki bhi zaroorat nahi. The other understood everything so easily! I just... That scene was so beautifully written! I absolutely, completely, wholly loved it!

And then, Riddhima's determination to make everything better was a cherry on top. She'll pakka do it. She'll make Armaan want to get better. And they'll live happily ever after!

Ab, I wanna read ahead, so please update ASAP! And, all the very best for the test!!

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Pata hai what I feel after reading ur reply...

meri babu kitni badi hogayi, itni gehri baatein karne lagi...

but mere liye toh tum wohi choti si cute si kido hi rahegi... hehe...

CVs toh bohot kuch kiya hai, but I m so glad that u are writing from that point...

Where Ridz got to know about Armaan truth, why he left her... and his condition...

Pleasure is all mine baby...

Will comment in next part soon..

take care :)

Originally posted by: Meraki.

mila diyamadam. 🤣

You had to!!

IKR! not having AR meet. 🤣

Ridhima's injury was physical and it would be revealed in further chapter wat had Ridhima get treated while Armaan's is more on the mental way and his willpower. Off course he would.

Ridhima can only try you know, Armaan will have to work on his own to get up from dark pit. Me too. Too much happy.

I am going to answer every question of mine on every character in depth through this. i LOVED HIS CHARACTER AND IT WAS SO FUN, I am going to have some fun soon in upcomming parts because well what's AR without some fun parts, right ?!

IK! Elders sometimes just forget everyone in their own problems and as said it's better late than never, A's still his little kid you know, and I am so ready to write about more on these relationships which weren't looked upon.

Love Ya!!

Originally posted by: DMGThings

Obviously, Armaan will have to do it himself. Lekin, having Ridzy's support will change a lot for him. I mean, jitna Armaan Riddhima se pyaar karta hai, having her in his corner is going to make all the difference for him, in his determination, his will to get better, his efforts to get better.

Originally posted by: Meraki.

Haha! Off course AR finally met. Next two chapter would be dealing with some flashbacks, more of Ridz-Billy and AR. Thank You, it turned out well I guess! :D

Yes, what's Armaan without a tattoo in time of despair?! :p

Haan sure sure. It's seriously so easy to guess such things that Armaan would do.

Yes! Ridhima wasn't trying to feel his situation yet but she's willing to be open about everything, every reason of his. The things a doctor might not agree with but she faced it and so she understood. those dark times. Yes! Ridhima accepting the situation way too early was doubtful. and even if she did, how could gang just accept that ?Nikki too?! like WTH! and o there had to be some logical explanation, right?

Yes I m so excited to write about the duo. Good Father In Law-Daughter In Law relation is my fav. Alsothing those two people had a great impact on A's life, good or bad whatever. Yes I am going to have Shanky's POV too. tbh it was quite unfair for everyone to think shanky being an ass in the show, they never explained his course of actions.

Yes I so can imagine Armaan rubbing his eyes againa nd again cutely. 🤣

I myself was so excited for them to meet. Thank You Thank You.😆I am new to these reuniting scenes kind of so happy reading what you said about that.

Off course, Ridhima is so ready to be bang on. She's my hero of this story. She's a girl, she's supposed to be confusing but she's so strong and independent to stand for people who make her feel home, Armaan being the cortex of that home.

yep will do.

thank you

love