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Posted: 7 years ago
Pout... Ittu sa update... I mean why... Why whyyy...
As usual it was awesome and very emotional but... Yeh kiya, tumne itni jaldi end kardi...
Ittu se humhara kiya hoga kido, this is not fair... Dono koh mila toh diya tumne lekin... Itni jaldi part end...
Yeh bohot naainsaafi hai humhare saath... Aise tohdina hota hai...

I just love the conversation between Ridz and Billy, true it was just a small one but...
Ridz tell him how she felt when she got to know Armaan left her but her heart never believe it...
How she kept waiting to get a reply from Armaan but he never reply and than change his number...
Than only she accept that, maybe... Just maybe Armaan really didn't want her in his life but still her heart wasn't able to fully accept it...
Just his ignorance make her think it but still somewhere in her heart, she knew there was more to the matter...

Do I really need to say how well u had described their emotions when Armaan saw Ridz and Ridz find him awake finally...
*pout* I know tum kahenge, kuch kehne ke liye nehi hai phir bhi itna sab kuch kehdiya...
Kiya karun Kido, tumne itna accha likha, main kaise kuch na khun...
I know how difficult its to write a single part, that too these emotions staff...
By god mujhe toh bohot mushkil hoti hai... Issiliye main bohot kam emotions scene daalti hun apne stories mein if u read my stories :P I know u do but still...
Kiya pata ab time milti bhi ya nehi hehe...

Anyways it was just too awesome... emotional and heart touching that moment when Armaan Riddhima hugs and shower kisses...
but when next second Armaan push her when reality hit him badly, felt bad...
I m so glad that Ridz being so brave and willing to fight for him, them and their love...
I know she would do it, wouldn't let him suffer alone...

Continue super soon..
Mujhe jaldi chahiyeh update... bas kaise bhi karke, I don't know how u will do it, just do it ;)
Love u so much baby...
take care :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



Baat toh sahi hai. Is story ki hero Riddhima hi hai! Which is so nice and refreshing!

And, I'm looking forward to the funny scenes and the AR & the Billy - Ridz. But really badly, for Shanky. Aajkal I'm working on a TDBU outtake that deals with Shanky stuff so thoda uske liye bura lagta hai. He wasn't bad, he just loved his daughter a little too much and trusted Armaan too little.


he was a successful doctor, ridhima was his adoptive daughter, smritidied and that man took care of his girl alone without a life partner. he was supposed to be insecure. anjali had her own terms and condition of living her life and that left ridhima for him, he was a protective father and losing ridhima to another man, of course, all of it affected his course of action in creating a healthy relationship with armaan and being cordial in his reasons of not accepting armaan for ridz. he was insecure and she was his princess.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Meraki.


haha! well i am still your little kido but a lot wiser.

love ya di<3

haan okay.

tc :)


wohi toh.. u r till my kido but a lot wiser :P

kardi comment...
take care :D
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Posted: 7 years ago


Baat toh sahi hai. Is story ki hero Riddhima hi hai! Which is so nice and refreshing!

And, I'm looking forward to the funny scenes and the AR & the Billy - Ridz. But really badly, for Shanky. Aajkal I'm working on a TDBU outtake that deals with Shanky stuff so thoda uske liye bura lagta hai. He wasn't bad, he just loved his daughter a little too much and trusted Armaan too little.
baatein kam...
kaam zyada karo, tabhi hum bechari readers koh padne koh mile :$
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Meraki.



he was a successful doctor,ridhimawas his adoptive daughter,smritidied and that man took care of his girl alone without a life partner. he was supposed to be insecure. anjali had her own terms and condition of living her life and that leftridhimafor him, he was a protective father and losingridhimato another man, of course, all of it affected his course of action in creating a healthy relationship witharmaanand being cordial in his reasons of not acceptingarmaanforridz. he was insecure and she was his princess.



Yes!! SO MUCH THIS.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws



Baat toh sahi hai. Is story ki hero Riddhima hi hai! Which is so nice and refreshing!

And, I'm looking forward to the funny scenes and the AR & the Billy - Ridz. But really badly, for Shanky. Aajkal I'm working on a TDBU outtake that deals with Shanky stuff so thoda uske liye bura lagta hai. He wasn't bad, he just loved his daughter a little too much and trusted Armaan too little.



baatein kam...
kaam zyada karo, tabhi hum bechari readers koh padne koh mile :$


Yes Boss!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DMGThings



baatein kam...
kaam zyada karo, tabhi hum bechari readers koh padne koh mile :$



Yes Boss!!
good girl...
Aur tum Shikayat bhi padlo... its complete now...
and maine uske epilogue bhi shuru kardi...
but at the moment working on a OS... which hopefully will try to post tomorrow night...
hope u will enjoy...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RihooHaws

Pout... Ittu sa update... I mean why... Why whyyy...
As usual it was awesome and very emotional but... Yeh kiya, tumne itni jaldi end kardi...
Ittu se humhara kiya hoga kido, this is not fair... Dono koh mila toh diya tumne lekin... Itni jaldi part end...
Yeh bohot naainsaafi hai humhare saath... Aise tohdina hota hai...

I just love the conversation between Ridz and Billy, true it was just a small one but...
Ridz tell him how she felt when she got to know Armaan left her but her heart never believe it...
How she kept waiting to get a reply from Armaan but he never reply and than change his number...
Than only she accept that, maybe... Just maybe Armaan really didn't want her in his life but still her heart wasn't able to fully accept it...
Just his ignorance make her think it but still somewhere in her heart, she knew there was more to the matter...

Do I really need to say how well u had described their emotions when Armaan saw Ridz and Ridz find him awake finally...
*pout* I know tum kahenge, kuch kehne ke liye nehi hai phir bhi itna sab kuch kehdiya...
Kiya karun Kido, tumne itna accha likha, main kaise kuch na khun...
I know how difficult its to write a single part, that too these emotions staff...
By god mujhe toh bohot mushkil hoti hai... Issiliye main bohot kam emotions scene daalti hun apne stories mein if u read my stories :P I know u do but still...
Kiya pata ab time milti bhi ya nehi hehe...

Anyways it was just too awesome... emotional and heart touching that moment when Armaan Riddhima hugs and shower kisses...
but when next second Armaan push her when reality hit him badly, felt bad...
I m so glad that Ridz being so brave and willing to fight for him, them and their love...
I know she would do it, wouldn't let him suffer alone...

Continue super soon..
Mujhe jaldi chahiyeh update... bas kaise bhi karke, I don't know how u will do it, just do it ;)
Love u so much baby...
take care :)


di agar aage likhti toh bohut lamba part ho jata, aur itna sab kuch hai batane kai liye lekin mujhko ek ek part na flow mai likhna hai, i'll update a little quick if that makes those short updates better. :)
haha! ab i don't have the power to write so long long parts like you do di. 😆

i am going to work on such never touche relationships here. :D
Offcourse as I said it was weird of CVs to show their relationship being too strong but a sudden pull to break it off without a fight.

haha! exactly itna sab kuch likhte ho. i feel so good by these long comments. :)
you don't write emo stuff? haan DMG 3 toh maine likha tha, shikayat 2 mai wo seperation part maine likha tha, A crying on terrace and Ridhima being sacred of sid in UMM bhi maine likhe thai. aise lies mat bola karo. 🤣 off course i read yaa. i read all those going on since past 2 years and almost every finished ones. abhi new shayad nahi padhe mostly because i have to catch up with old ones first. 🤣

that is a reunion which is so real in mind, something which is soo ARish in feels and to write. Yes Ridz my hero here, she's going to be a powerful and independent woman here. :)

haan will do. :P

love
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Posted: 7 years ago
praggs ab tu bhi update karde achi si. atlesat yeh batade ki A ko sach kab pata chalega.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Meraki.


di agar aage likhti toh bohut lamba part ho jata, aur itna sab kuch hai batane kai liye lekin mujhko ek ek part na flow mai likhna hai, i'll update a little quick if that makes those short updates better. :)
haha! ab i don't have the power to write so long long parts like you do di. 😆

i am going to work on such never touche relationships here. :D
Offcourse as I said it was weird of CVs to show their relationship being too strong but a sudden pull to break it off without a fight.

haha! exactly itna sab kuch likhte ho. i feel so good by these long comments. :)
you don't write emo stuff? haan DMG 3 toh maine likha tha, shikayat 2 mai wo seperation part maine likha tha, A crying on terrace and Ridhima being sacred of sid in UMM bhi maine likhe thai. aise lies mat bola karo. 🤣 off course i read yaa. i read all those going on since past 2 years and almost every finished ones. abhi new shayad nahi padhe mostly because i have to catch up with old ones first. 🤣

that is a reunion which is so real in mind, something which is soo ARish in feels and to write. Yes Ridz my hero here, she's going to be a powerful and independent woman here. :)

haan will do. :P

love


Chalo tik hai phir, jaldi update denge toh aise choti choti updates se kaam chala lungi..
Just don't take too much time to update, nehi toh bohot tang karungi main haan nehi toh...
Hehehe, woh toh koi nehi likh sakhti... Meri tarah tohdina itni der tak beit sakte hai long update dene ke liye hehe...

yeah, and I m just loving ur work...
Too awesome :D
I know, even I felt so bad, main toh dekhti bhi nehi woh parts...
but jab Ridz ki divorce huva, and Armaan try to talk Ridz... tab se maine dekha :P till end hehe...

*Hide face* ok ok I do write but... It's so difficult to write yaar... Likhte bhi toh main jaldi solve kar deti hun na :$
Aisa nehi hai ki, half of the story main bas emotional likhti hun... Haan ek likha tha, woh mini ss , bepannah mohabbat...
It was the most emotional story I had write so far, kyunki shuru se end tak, sirf emotional tha usmein...
Just end mein happy hehe... maybe u haven't read it na...???? Padlena, zyada parts nehi hai usmein...
Hayye, main aur jhoot... Kabhi bol sakti hun kiya :P woh toh bas kuch nehi hai issiliye aise bol diya hehe...

Of course, Ridz would be the hero in this and even I m loving it...
Bas jaldi continue karo... :D

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