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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww.. just love your ff cant wait for the next part
your awesome 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww i really like ur ff.. its well written.. i dont kno wats wrong wit angad?? y is he all nice and then mean? what did kripa every do to him? well cant wiat for u to tell us the reason..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

sumra yaar great part enjoyed a lot reading tooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood 👏 continue soon

Hey thanks!!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

so cute and sorry didnt mean to offend u ur ficvs awsome marvellous uniquely different whys angad a jerk 😆

Hey thanks....but I was not at all offended....I'm sorry if I made you feel like that😊

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part...awww angad actually cares for kripa

Hey thanks but........but the story didn't meant that way...I emna the part didn't go that way.....he just unknowingly cared for her......but actually the surface of the part was also that Angad cares for people-who get hurt or something and he tries his best to cure them. So Angad was just healing Kripa....but yah he DID actually took care of her way too much than he should have or he would have if it were someone else, and especially the way he behaves with her yah it was over-caring😆 of him.

Originally posted by: pooja1221

aww.. just love your ff cant wait for the next part
your awesome 👏 👏 👏

aawww....thanks so much.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi1219

aww i really like ur ff.. its well written.. i dont kno wats wrong wit angad?? y is he all nice and then mean? what did kripa every do to him? well cant wiat for u to tell us the reason..
mansi

Hey thanks........well the problem with Angad and Kripa might as well unfold as the story goes on but mainly it's just that (I think I already said this in the first few pages, I think in the concept or the PART A...but it's okay) Angad and Kripa were total strangers and so Angad kind of didn't like her much (reasons but just unfold or you might just know it...just like that😉)..then Kannan did somethings which she sometimes blamed Kripa and Angad believed...as he hardly/ or even almost-never talked to her and he hardly knew things about her so duh...he'd believe a friend who's been with him for a longer time. Kannan plans things and so Angad misunderstands Kripa.....so during these parts he don't like her a lot because till now Kannan might have done loads of things........I hope you got it.....if you don't....next time I'll try to explain clearly as now I was just giving you the rough picture........see I think when I need to write a 2 sentence paragraph, I might write a 5 sentence one instead...with the same meaning...gosh I write way too much and so it seems like there's a lot to read or something....I'm not sure if it's a good thing or a bad one......it might as well be both at different times....okay now I think I'll just stop...I write too much😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aw, GRT part!!!!!!! 👏 👏 Angad ACTUALLY cares, thats sweet!!!!
PLEASE continue soon, cant wait to read more!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

aw, GRT part!!!!!!! 👏 👏 Angad ACTUALLY cares, thats sweet!!!!
PLEASE continue soon, cant wait to read more!!!!!! 😃

Hey thanks.......everyone I'll post a part before Sunday....I think I can on Saturday..........but before Sunday I will.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ab Kya Kare?

RECAP: Angad let out a small laugh. 'Oh surely you didn't get hurt that…' he stopped and thought for a while '…by the way where'd you get hurt…' then laughed a little '…that you need that one.' He pointed at the white bandage roll.

Kripa answered a little hesitantly. 'Angad, I think it's gone a little deeper inside.'

Angad: What rubbish are you talking about, where was it?

Kripa pointed at the area where the glass was clearly visible before but now only obvious.

Angad felt it and said a little hesitatingly 'Kripa…I think we have to take it out.'

Even he didn't want to hurt her; he wanted the pain to be as less as possible and if possible then no pain at all. Kripa didn't deserve it and besides in a way it was his fault too, he thought.

Part 10

Angad was just reaching for the glass when Kripa whispered a low 'Angad.' Angad looked back at her. Angad told her 'Just turn your head.' Kripa did what she was asked to; she turned her head to their back side. Her head was then kind of resting on Angad's shoulder but it was actually facing the bed's back side too. She shut her eyes tightly. Angad used one hand to hold her arm-a little above the wrist-very tightly, it was very tight but Kripa could stand that much, it did hurt in a way but the hurt felt kind of comfortable, as if it didn't hurt at all.

Angad started towards the glass again and then stopped again, he thought about the best way to take it out. There wasn't much choice, the blood was streaming out, he used a cloth to clean the blood then started for the glass piece, Kripa was right, it wouldn't come out. Angad tried harder, knowing that it would be hurting a lot since he was using much more force. He tried to be a little violent but only to take the glass piece out so that Kripa wouldn't feel the pain later on. Kripa felt the pain, she knew he wasn't doing it on purpose; she put one hand on his back, but didn't hold him tightly, as she felt the pain increase. A few times she let out low 'ouch's or 'ah's but she never screamed out loud. Angad knew that it was hurting a lot and Kripa was taking in so much pain.

After a few more struggles; after 10 minutes. The glass piece was finally was coming out. When it came out Angad was stunned. It was a long piece, around 2 cm long and 0.3 cm wide. No wonder it hadn't been coming out, it was too long to be called a normal-glass-piece-stuck-in-the-hand, no wonder it hurt so much. Angad quickly aided the wound. When all was done, Kripa looked at him and examined the bandage wrapping (it isn't like the ones which are wrapped around your neck too-I hope you understand what I mean-the bandage is just wrapped around her wrist multiple times).

Kripa casually asked while examining. 'Angad woh glass kahan hai?'

Angad got off the bed to put the first aid box in it's originally place. A little angry at her silliness, he said. 'What do you think, guess how big it would be like? I can't believe you didn't notice it even.'

Kripa was a little taken aback. 'What?'

Angad came back to the bed and showed her the glass piece, at first she was surprised to see how big it was but then understood why it hurt so much and everything. Angad was angry. Kripa held the glass piece and kind of smirked looking at it as she now understood the pain it had caused her. She put it back down, all that while Angad was looking at her angrily and asked her angrily but calmly (or steadily) 'Kripa, what on earth were you doing that you didn't notice a glass piece that big get into your wrist, how could you be silly enough to let that happen? My god, you're going to be a doctor in a few months time, will you do stupid things with your patients also?'

Kripa looked at him then looked down thinking. 'It was you whom I was thinking about, if you didn't make a scene in there then I wouldn't have gotten hurt.' She wanted to say that but didn't. 'I'm sorry.'

Angad, frustrated, said 'Don't say that to me, I don't have a problem! You get hurt or you have fun, I don't care, that's your problem.'

Kripa looked up and said nothing. After a few seconds she got off the bed, ready to go back to her room. When she was at the door, she turned back to look at him sitting on the bed kind of tired.

Kripa: Angad?

Angad looked up.

Kripa: Thanks.

Angad replied. 'Yah…you're uumm…welcome?'

Kripa nodded thanks again and started to go to her room when Angad stopped her.

Angad: Wait!

Angad got off the bed and went to the door connecting Kripa's room with his's, he knew that Kripa didn't lock the door from her side as both of then knew that Angad would lock it from his side. Angad unlocked the door and opened it wide.

Angad: Kripa agar tumhe kabhi koi cheez ki zaroorat (need) hui toh tum mujhe bulana. Darwarza khula hai.

Angad didn't bother to ask her if she was okay with the door open all night or not.

Kripa went to her room through that door, she sat on the bed and looked at him at the door. Angad went to his bed to get the glass piece, he didn't throw it, he put it in a small zipped bag and put in a box in his cupboard. He was never going to throw that piece for some reason. Kripa didn't see that, she couldn't, but she could see his bed. If Kripa lie down on her bed side ways, she can see Angad' s bed too and same for Angad, if he lies down on his bed side ways, he can see her lying on her bed side ways.

<<<<<<POSITIONING: Remember that Prithvi's door connecting to Kripa's room is near Kripa's bedside and from above you now know how Kripa's and Angad's rooms are connected through the door. >>>>>>

Kripa lied down on the bed facing Angad's door but she wasn't looking at his bed or trying to see him, she was just looking nowhere. Angad came back to his bed and lied down, well facing towards the door too. He was actually looking at her, he knew though she was facing the door as well but she wasn't looking at him. He stared at her till she moved, when she moved, her eyes wandered and she saw him staring at her. Angad quickly acted like he was asleep and moving around in his sleep so he turned over, his back was facing her then. She turned over too. She thought about him. He hit his head for being foolish enough to do that.

Look out for:....Well just....STAY TUNED!!!

Hey please post your comments……I know it's a small part only, but I'll try the next part to be a little longer. I was in a hurry so didn't have enough time to write a longer one….I hope this will do. Thanks for your comments and I hope to get more…..even though it's a small one but the doors are always open for new readers too. And I hope that silent readers start commenting too…..there's no harm in there, is there?[size]

Edited by Shazia_haya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey sumra awesome ff ......... gr8 part yaar 👏
just read yr ff n its gr8
do cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part...he was lookin at her!!! hehehe!!! 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
wow sumra dear awesome part just toooooo goooooood continue sooon

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