Ab Kya Kare? {promo&part 27 pg46}

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Here I am with another fanfic: 'Ab Kya Kare?'

So here goes the concept

Kripa Sharma has received an invitation from a University at Nottingham, University of Nottingham Medical School, and as well as other Universities at other places too. But she has accepted the University which is in Nottingham because of various reasons such as for Kripa and her parents that University is the best medical University in the United Kingdom, the accommodations won't be a problem for Kripa as her parents' best friend(s) live there and it's obvious that they'd take care of Kripa, etc…

So she has traveled all the way from Manchester to Nottingham and now she lives with the Khanna family who are best family friends with the Sharma household. The new semester has just begun and Kripa has just begun her life at the University.

Angad Khanna is a guy full of life who also studies at the medical University in Nottingham. He is 2 years older than Kripa but he's just a year before Kripa at the University. But because of his popularity, attitude towards everyone, status, etc…he's well known at the University.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting, continue soon!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awewsome itro pls cont soon lubed it 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

Sounds great 👏 👏

Thanks a lot!!!

Thx hon!!

Thanks...

Originally posted by: desikudi818

sounds interesting, continue soon!!!!!! 😃

Thx.....I will continue now!!

Originally posted by: memze

awewsome itro pls cont soon lubed it 😛

Thx....i'm just going to post a part now...

Hey everyone....I'll be posting a part but it's not exactly a PART get it.....you'll know what I mean when you read.....so it'll be just kind of explaining things a little....but it's not that boring though....you can call it the MAIN INTRO PART (11).....lolz what else to say....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part A


Well the story hasn't begun yet…

The University is closed for a week due to some reasons. So Angad and Kripa don't have to go to the University for a few days. Prithvi is Angad's younger brother who studies at a college. He drops Kripa off at the University and picks her up too on the way back everyday (the days when she goes to University). Kripa and Prithvi have somewhat become close. Prithvi and Angad are very close too. Angad doesn't really like Kripa so he makes excuses almost every time, when Prithvi is not there to handle the situation, so that he doesn't have to bring Kripa to University. Kripa doesn't mind but still does get hurt at times because back in Manchester, no one hated or disliked her; she was adorable and she never disobeyed anyone so she never really heard someone used a loud tone with her.

She's not used to the environment where people dislike her. Here, in Nottingham, the only guy so far dislike her is Angad and the girl is Kannan. Kannan is Angad's friend, not a close one, she likes Angad and lusts for him, she knows and she feels that Kripa is better than her at everything and about everything and is afraid that Angad will get Kripa's attention. So sometimes she does some things which makes Angad hate Kripa more. Kannan studies at the same college as Prithvi and in the same class too. People at the University have started to adore Kripa and some guys are already falling for her. It's just Kripa's first month at the University.

Angad's parents, in fact Angad's whole family except him, love Kripa a lot. They like the way she behaves, her attitude towards everyone and everything about her. For them even Angad is almost the same as Kripa except for some things…for example she's a girl and he's a guy, etc…In the whole Khanna household (in the whole world), only Angad, Prithvi and Kripa know that Angad doesn't like Kripa, Kannan or any other friend of anyone don't know that Angad doesn't like Kripa too but everyone know that Kannan doesn't like Kripa.

Prithvi's, Angad's and Kripa's rooms are on the second floor of the Khanna mansion. Kripa's room is in the middle and Angad's room is on her left and Prithvi's room is on the right. The staircase is near Prithvi's room.


Preview: The real story begans; Part 1 begans…stay tuned!!


Hey please leave your comments and as you know it was Part A not Part 1, that means that it was just like introducing to you stuff…well don't forget that Angad and Kripa do have more brothers or sisters. Don't worry I won't have parts like Part B, Part C……Part Z. But please leave your comments, the other fanfic gets very little…I hope this'll get more. C'mon everyone…….am I that bad? Even so you can tell me……so then I'll stop writing.



Edited by Shazia_haya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow i loved the intro... 😳 😃
kanan..shes reminding me of misthi... 🤢
anywayz continue soon!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

wow i loved the intro... 😳 😃
kanan..shes reminding me of misthi... 🤢
anywayz continue soon!! 😳 😳

Thanks......the next part is being posted in a few seconds now....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

The first day of Angad's and Kripa's University holiday. It's morning, 7 am, and we enter the home. We go to the second floor and enter the nearest room from the staircase. We see the room is a little messy but the bed is very messy. A guy in this towel comes out from the shower, we see his back. He goes to the mirror and we see he's PRITHVI.

Prithvi gets ready in 10 minutes and looks in the mirror and says 'Not bad, huh?' and sprays some body spray (men) and goes out of his room and knocks on the door of the room next to his. No one answers then he goes to the room next to the room which he was knocking a while ago and starts knocking there too. But no one answers. He goes back to his room and reaches the another door which is connected to the room next to his and knocks there. He knows that that door is near the bed in the room, which is next to his, so the person must have woken up since he wasn't knocking but kind of BANGING too…and that also very hard.

The person wakes up and sits on their bed, signs and looks at the bed side clock which shows it's 7:20 am. The person stands up and starts walking to one of the doors, which is being banged, which is connected to the room, to Prithvi's room. We see the person's back and notice that the person is a 'she' because she has long dark brown hair. She opens the door and sees Prithvi standing at the door, who was banging the door without even looking at it, he almost falls down on the floor when his hand didn't feel/ touch the door but he held on to the door knob and the girl helped Prithvi from falling on the floor.

Prithvi stood up 'Kripa yeh kya hai?' we see the girl is none other than KRIPA and Prithvi is showing her his watch. Kripa innocently says 'App ki gha-ree(watch).' and yawns while covering her mouth too.

Prithvi looks at his watch and realizes what Kripa said and puts his hand down. 'Woh to mujhe bhi pata hai lekin tumne dekha nahi ke time kya hua hai?'

Kripa's still not aware of what is Prithvi getting tensed for. (Walking to her bed and sits down and looks sleepy) 'Haan dekha hai, seven twenty hoye hai. Toh?'

Prithvi was surprised by Kripa's calmness. 'Toh?' 'Seven twenty hoi hai or tum abhi tak soh rahi thi. Hamesha tum hi to ho joh hum sab se jaldi jaag (wake up) thi ho or aaj? Aur aaj tum mujhse bhi late jaagi ho or tum abhi bhi aaram se bethi hui ho. Aur bhai ko bhi abhi jagana hai. Woh bhi abhi tak soh (sleep) rahe hai.' Prithvi starts walking to the door which is connected to the room next to Kripa's. 'Aap dono ko aaj ho kya gaya hai. Aap dono…' Kripa interrupts and runs over to Prithvi.

She has realized that why Prithvi was tensed. She stands up and puts her hands up to calm and to explain Prithvi. 'Prithvi, aaj University mein chuti, balke iss purey week mein University mein chuti. Isiliye Angad abhi bhi soh rahe hai. Please app unhe disturb maat ki jiye ga…' she looks down and Prithvi looks at her '…warna woh kham-ha (without reason) upset ho jaye ge.'

Prithvi puts a reassuring hand on Kripa's shoulder. 'I understand. It's fine. But don't forget…I'm here for you too. Okay?'

Kripa looks up and smiles.

Prithvi smiles and cups Kripa's face. 'Now that's like my girl.' He tries to lighten the mood and walks towards the other connected door which is connected to his and Kripa's room. 'Agar tum ya bhai mujhe raat ko bata dete to main tumhe disturb to nahi karta na. Tumhare mistake hai ke tumne nahi mujhe bataya.'

Kripa gives out a laugh and Prithvi feels better. 'Okay to phir mein ab jata hoon.'

Kripa confused asks 'Itni jaldi?'

Prithvi looks a little embarrassed annoyingly.

Kripa laughs when she remembers why. 'Have a good journey!!'

Before Prithvi closes the door he peeps back in. 'Thanks! Lekin uske saath yeh bhi kaafi nahin hai, tum to jaanti ho. Bye.'

'Bye.' Prithvi had closed the door before Kripa could say bye, she knows that even though he didn't hear it, he had heard it since they are just friends; the kind of friendship between a brother and a sister.

Kripa smiles and goes to her bed and lies down. Since Prithvi had just freshened up her unknowingly so she can't go back to sleep. She planned to get ready and go downstairs. So she got up and went to the washroom in her room to take a shower.

Look out for: Some new characters appear. Will Angad appear yet or not?.........Stay tuned!!!

Hey please leave your comments……let me know if it was good or bad……..c'mon…..I'm not the person who'd get angry at you for telling me that I'm bad or something…………but I really want to know how much you like or dislike my fanfic……..Please grade out of 10 if possible.

Edited by Shazia_haya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome part shazia it was too too good continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

Awesome part shazia it was too too good continue soon 👏

thanks.......now that's what I'll call encouraging...well it has encoraged me.....to write more........and just for future reference (don't take it the wrong way)...my real name's Sumra .

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