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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Numera*

that was awesome!! omg angad is soo mean!! its not bout what happened its bout what could have happened but im sure kripa was sad about what kannan said!! continue soon!

Hey thanks............I'm not sure but I think you might kind of like the next part.......

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Jus read ur ff, poor kripa, i really h8 that kannan n angad is gettin on ma nerves as well a bit. I like prithvi... hes sweet 😊

Thanks.......lolz.....Angad's getting on your nerves....well let's see how you think about him in the next part......

HEY EVERYONE THE NEXT PART WILL BE UP TODAY, 23/01/07, WHEN I GO HOME. I'M AT SCHOOL NOW.....SO.....AND ONE MORE THING.......MY OTHER FANFIC ISN'T CLOSED.........I WILL BE STARTING A NEW TOPIC WITH THE SAME NAME, STORY AND EVERYTHING......IT'S JUST THAT I GOT THAT TOPIC CLOSED SO THAT I CAN START/ CONTINUE THE FANFIC IN A NEW...FRESH....maybe BETTER WAY!! I HOPE YOU GOT WHAT I MEAN...and it's been a long time since I last updated that fanfic....but'll I'll be continuing it....and promise to try my best to make it interesting....since the way the story is....it kinds of makes people think that it'll be boring or something but actually it's not like that. HAVE A NICE DAY!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ab Kya Kare?

RECAP: Angad looked at Kripa who was standing on his left a little further away then looked back at Kannan 'Woh bas kuch ladke Kripa ko…' Kannan outraged now finished for Angad '…chear (touch) rahe the, right?'

He left. Everything and everyone became still. After about 30 seconds Kripa started to move from her position and that instant Kannan started taunting Kripa again. Kripa walked slowly to Angad's car.

He glanced at the still crying silently Kripa and looked back in the front; the road and thought 'Man, did I say too much? I guess not.' He just shrugged and kept driving.

Part 6

They reached home. Angad parked the car. Kripa hadn't opened her eyes even then. Her tears had just dried up but she never budged, she remained seated in the same position with her eyes closed during the whole journey home. Angad was about to open the door to get out when Kripa-eyes still shut (a little tightly)-called out 'Angad' a little too softly. She hardly thought that he'd hear her but he had. He heard her and stayed back. He waited for her to speak again and just when he was going to say something as he didn't feel like she was going to continue, she started.

'Angad mujhe dukh iss baat ka nahin hai ke uun ladko ne mere saath kuch karne ki koshish ki lekin iss baat ka hai ke unho ne aap ko dekh liya hai. Killer Gang ka ek leader hai 'Ronnie' woh jaanta hai ke aap Alliyah ke bhai ho. Mujhe laga tha ke mujhe kabhi bhi kisi ko yeh baat batane ki zaroorat nahin hogi lekin agar mein nahin ab bolu gi to kisi ki jaan khatre mein bhi ho sakti hai…'

Angad interrupted her. 'So why telling me?'

'…Kyun ke yeh Alliyah se related hai.'

'Okay now how the hell is it related to Alliyah? May I ask? Alliyah has gone to hostel for the past 2 years and she rarely visits, it's been more than 6 months since she last visited us. Aur tumhe toh abhi kuch hi weeks hoi hai yaha aiye hoi……….just doesn't make sense. I'm going now, when you get back your senses, do not let me know but let me tell you, it'll keep you out of trouble.'

Kripa opened her eyes -which have become red as she cried with her eyes closed and she had cried just way too much maybe but they had become blood-red by then- and turned sideways to look at Angad straight in the eye 'Alliyah yaha a-yi thi aur woh mere do (two) weeks aa-ne ke baad a-yi thi. Yani ke last month semester shuru hone se pehle.'

Angad laughed and put his right hand on Kripa's left thigh in a little concerned way 'Kripa I think you are out of…….I mean you need rest.' Kripa looked at his hand. He realized that and took his hand back.

'Angad you can think that but…' she took out a bracelet from her purse '…where do you think I got this (indicating the bracelet) from? You can't even say that I stole it from somewhere as it doesn't belong to anyone living here but to Alliyah who has always worn this bracelet ever since she got it from her brother. You must have remembered when you gave the bracelet to her a few years back. The bracelet means a lot to her but that day she gave it to me but everything was messy and too much had happened that day that I didn't realize that I had the bracelet in my hand till she went away and it was too late to return…'

Angad was in a daze, he somewhat started to believe Kripa. He knew that there was no way that she could get that bracelet from elsewhere as it was specially made for his sister. He pondered 'Alliyah yaha a-yi thi aur hum saab se mile begher (without) chali gayi?'

Kripa looked back at Angad to clear his doubt 'Angad, Alliyah yaha a-yi thi, woh a-yi thi aap saab ko surprise dene lekin raaste mein ek accident ho gaya toh usse jaana para… '

Angad interrupted again, he was concerned about his sister. 'Kaisa accident?'

Kripa looked down while Angad was staring at her for answers. She hesitated but began to relate the incident. 'Ronnie met her on the way. I had seen Alliyah's photo so I recognized her immediately. But I don't know how but she recognized me as well maybe aunty had sent some photos to her. The thing was we both recognized each other and started chatting while walking home. But Ronnie came and in the beginning all was well, he told us about his fondness of Alliyah and other things but later he started to misbehave with her, then it got too much. We had been walking through a deserted park and he took advantage of that. He did something to me which caused me to fall on the ground and I was in a daze and he somehow got hold of Alliyah and took her to a corner and started to misbehave with her…' Kripa went into other details then after finishing she said. 'Alliyah could have almost got…but I got some big stone and threw it on Ronnie's head. He fell unconscious but he didn't see me and wasn't sure if it was me or someone else who had hit him that time but when he fell. I covered Alliyah so that she could fix her appearance as she had been in a bad enough state. She wore some clothes on top of her torn ones and decided not to go home but back to the hostel. She couldn't go home and besides no one knew that she was in the city. Angad but Ronnie knew about her living at the hostel and he doesn't know that you all live here. He thought that none of you live here anymore but just come sometime to visit relatives and friends. He forgot about all of you. But he doesn't know that Prithvi is her brother too. He saw you today and now he'll believe that you live here and Alliyah would come here to visit all of you again and he'd take his revenge then. Angad mujhe daar lag raha hai, Alliyah ko kuch ho na jaye. Us din agar mein waha nahin hoti toh pata nahin kya ho jata, Alliyah ka khaal bilkul bura hogaya tha, lekin agar thori si aur daer ho jati toh pata nahi aur kya kya hota.'

Angad didn't know what to say. Kripa did something which he could never pay her back for. She had saved his house's respect, for once he didn't feel negative related towards her, in fact he felt small in front of her 'Kripa main…'

Kripa didn't want him to say what he was going to say, it didn't suit him, she pretended to ignore it. 'Lekin Angad Alliyah kabhi nahi chahe gi ke kisi ko us haasle (incidnet) ke bare mein paata chale. Angad ek ladki kabhi nahin chahe gi ke uske pariwar ko pata chale ke woh almost kisi ke hawas ka chakar ban ne wali thi. Angad please…'

'Haan…Kripa main bhi nahi chahu ga ke mom ja dad ja kisi aur ko pata chale lekin tumne…'

'Nahin…maine kisi ko nahin bataya…Prithvi ko bhi nahin…bas aap ko hi pata hai ab. Mujhe laga ke aap uske barae (older) bhai ho toh aap ka toh haq (right) banta hai ke pata ho. Agar future mein kuch baate ho aur Alliyah uncomfortable mehsus kare toh aap situation ko, agar zyada nahin, kam se kam thora toh samhal sako ge…main toh bas ek ghear (stranger) hoon…'

Angad had been looking out of the window, suddenly unconsciously he said 'You aren't a stranger but like a member of the family.' Kripa snapped out of what she was thinking and doing and looked at Angad. He noticed her staring at him and realized what he had said.

'Um…I think we should go inside now'

Look out for:........Is Angad changing (so fast?)?......Stay tuned!!!

Hey please do leave comments……….hope you liked it [size]

Edited by Shazia_haya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow sumra awesome part tooo goood amazing ..superb 👏 sroy line is great continue soon me waiting 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 part... ok angad is not gettin on ma nerves now... i like him in this part... i hope they become friends now!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part i just caught up cooonnnnttt sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Honii

wow sumra awesome part tooo goood amazing ..superb 👏 sroy line is great continue soon me waiting 👏

Thanks so much.......😊

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

gr8 part... ok angad is not gettin on ma nerves now... i like him in this part... i hope they become friends now!!!

Hey thanks.............but let's see if you would say the same for the next part or not......

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part i just caught up cooonnnnttt sooon

Thanks a lot!

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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
dats was really gd continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: asian_gyal

dats was really gd continue soon

Hey thanks....hope you like the following part!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ab Kya Kare?

RECAP: 'Okay now how the hell is it related to Alliyah? May I ask? Alliyah has gone to hostel for the past 2 years and she rarely visits, it's been more than 6 months since she last visited us. Aur tumhe toh abhi kuch hi weeks hoi hai yaha aiye hoi……….just doesn't make sense. I'm going now, when you get back your senses, do not let me know but let me tell you, it'll keep you out of trouble.'

Kripa looked down while Angad was staring at her for answers. She hesitated but began to relate the incident.

Angad had been looking out of the window, suddenly unconsciously he said 'You aren't a stranger but like a member of the family.' Kripa snapped out of what she was thinking and doing and looked at Angad. He noticed her staring at him and realized what he had said.

'Um…I think we should go inside now'

Part 7

Kripa was still surprised at Angad's behavior followed by what he had said. They both went inside the house and into their separate rooms after greeting Naina. Angad went to his bed and lay down on his back, facing the ceiling and was wondering about Kripa and his sister. So much had happened and none of them said a word about anything, since that incident everyone had talked to Alliyah over the phone many times but she never sounded…well depressed about anything, she was always jolly. If it wasn't for Kripa, their family would have been suffering at the moment; all their name, respect, etc…would have gotten mixed in the mud. Another thought also made Angad wonder "Kripa had not been crying for…….herself or anything but for my family, my sister, I had just thought wrong of her for the…first time…or was it the millionth time…she had the chance to spoil my name but she didn't, in fact she saved it, after so much of insulting her, embarrassing her, etc…she still remained calm. What is she? Why doesn't she say anything…or even do something? Why didn't she spoil my name…wait no…I don't want that to happen but why didn't she say back something…why doesn't she ever?

(Out of his thoughts)

Angad back to his original state…

Angad: Okay so I'm going to…………sssaaaaayyyyyy "Sorry" to her.

Angad thought for a while. 'Ummm….no need for that, why bother saying "sorry" and that too to her. I never said sorry to anyone so why her, why break the record.' He got up to do stuff.

In Kripa's room.

Kripa was half lying on the bed, half sitting. She was thinking 'Did I tell him more than I should have? But he is her brother, he has the right too but was he the right person? Did I make a mistake? Should I tell him everything or the little I told was enough…but come on Kripa he is her brother, you should tell him everything about that day…no I can't…it'll be too much for him to absorb and besides he is her brother, I can't tell him everything at once and besides he might not like it that I know about it.'

She started sobbing silently and thought 'Kya yeh sahi tha…gosh I hope I didn't do something wrong…I only felt he had the right to know and besides Ronnie have now seen Angad and something will happen in the near future for sure if not now, there's no way anyone can avoid this but if Angad helps, things can get better if not completely good. Lekin Angad kya soche ge mere bare mein….ke mein unki pariwar ki private life mein interfere karti hoon? I hope he doesn't get the wrong meaning out of this. Lekin kya yeh sahi hai ke maine saari batein nahi batayi?'

By dinner time everyone was at home. When all of them were having dinner, as Kripa and Angad were sitting opposite each other this time and Prithvi next to Kripa, Prithvi noticed something odd about his brother.

In Prithvi's mind: Yeh bhaiya Kripa ko aise kyun dekh rahe hai?

He glanced at Kripa, who was just eating normally; unaware of the fact that Angad was staring at her……for quite a long time.

Prithvi then thought to himself 'Kya bhai change to nahin hogaye…shayad unko pata chal gaya hai ke Kripa us tarha nahin hai jis tara woh uske baare mein socha karte the.'

Prithvi tried to tease or annoy his brother, he didn't even know himself if it was going to be 'teasing' or 'annoying' his brother but anyway he had made up his mind. Besides it was not everyday his brother looked at Kripa….ahem ahem…actually stare at her.

His mom and dad were discussing something else so they could surely not hear him as they were too busy so even if his brother tried to do something he could persuade his mom to come to his side to attack his brother when needed to.

Prithvi: Bhai aap ko kya hua?

Both Angad and Kripa were now drinking water. Prithvi glanced at Kripa then back to Angad.

Prithvi: Aap Kripa ko itna ghur ghur (stare) kar kyun dekh rahe ho?

Angad spilled the water in his mouth to his side (where no one is sitting as he was sitting on the edge side of the table). Kripa choked on her water as she didn't want to spill water, it would have been so…….of her so she thought it was better to swallow…..but poor her, she hadn't any idea that she'd choke….and that also quite seriously. She was coughing uncontrollably. She used her hands to sign to everyone that she was going upstairs as everyone was concerned about her when they heard Angad spill water and Kripa choking. Kripa ran to her room while Angad gave a you-are-so-much-as-dead sign Prithvi to which Prithvi said 'Maine kya kiya?' Before Angad could reply Naina asked him to go to Kripa's room to see if she was okay as a phone call had come so she couldn't go and check up on Kripa herself.

Prithvi considered this for a while. He did actually witness the shock on his brother's face and the unwillingness he showed but no one noticed it. Prithivi then wondered what was all that staring for…it must have meant something. When his brother got up, Prithvi said 'I'm coming too……..kisi ko kya pata kya chal raha hai.' Angad wanted to beat Prithvi up right at that moment…but it would have cost him a lot so he controlled himself. Prithvi followed Angad up the stairs while looking at his brother's back and doubting him.

Angad went inside Kripa's room and ran to her as to his surprise she was still choking hard. Her face had become all red. He had never seen someone choke that hard on something but the case he proved that there can be people who choke on something really hard. Prithvi just entered the room after his brother and stood there watching the way his brother helped Kripa. Prithvi was kind of surprised that his brother could behave like that towards Kripa as well.

Only a few seconds had just passed when Angad shouted at his brother. 'Yaha pe koi cinema chal raha hai kya ke tu khare (stand) ho ke dekh raha hai. Stupid go get the water!'

Prithvi was annoyed, as he was disturbed while watching a scene which he admired, he jogged out of the room to get water while saying 'How the hell do I know you want that? You both are the doctors here not me! So?'

Angad, tired of his brother's foolishness second time in a row and that too within 5 minutes, tried to calm Kripa. Kripa was sitting on the bed and Angad was kneeling in front of her trying to calm her down by stroking her back and sometimes slapping too (Hey! Not in the mean way…you know what I mean right…when people choke others slap their back…so….). Soon Angad had both of his hands unknowingly on Kripa's cheeks, his fingertips were in Kripa's hair, and somewhere in between her ears were also maybe squashed under his palm. Angad was looking at her concerned. Kripa finally began to calm down, when she was almost coughing no more; both of them held their positions automatically; didn't move a nerve, stayed how they were and were looking at the other in their eyes surprised how close they were. Prithvi came back running with the glass of water but stopped at the door for a while and stared on…surprised at first but later started admiring. No matter how much he liked what was happening; Angad had his hands on Kripa's cheeks and they both were lost in each other, he was sorry that he had to spoil that little moment.

Prithvi: (coughs) Ahem Ahem.

It didn't take them long, they both realized, this time ACTUALLY REALISED, and quickly returned to the position in which they should have been; Angad standing and Kripa still on the bed.

No one said anything and both Angad and Kripa felt awkward and so that explained why their eyes were wandering, a little nervously, here and there.

Prithvi didn't like that silence; it was too common for scenes like the one just happened now, according to movies.

Prithvi (still leaning on the door) with his style asked them 'Uummm…Kya main poch sakta hoon yeh kya horaha tha?'

When no one answered he continued while walking towards them 'Oohhh (teasingly)…toh bhaiya yeh chup chup ke milne ka concept apne kaha se sikha? Hye…yeh love story toh mujhe bahut achi lagti hai but you guys didn't have to hide it from me at least. Mom aur dad se chupaya yeh main samjh sakta hoon lekin mujhe se…..I don't see a reason.'

Prithvi walked to them suspecting them. Prithvi, in a brotherly manner, slapped (just like patting) Angad's back a few times.

Prthivi: Congrats bro!! You found your girl and my bhabhi.

Prithvi then kneeled in front of Kripa while holding the glass of water, just like a knight in front of a queen and said while giving the glass to her (and talks like a knight) 'Bhabhi yeh lijiye…..'

Splash!!

Angad had just swung his hand and the glass broke into pieces while the water was all over the floor and Kripa's bed.

Kripa looked up stunned.

Prithvi started to ask astonished 'Bh…..'

Angad angrily shouted at Prithvi 'Prithvi what the hell are you even talking about? I can't believe my brother, Angad Khanna's brother talks crap. How can you even think about me and…' He glanced at Kripa and then back at Prithvi. '…Kripa. Prithvi you know very well that what Kripa is for me then why this crap. And one last thing Prithvi, I only came here because mom told me to, otherwise you know me and…' He looked at Kripa sternly. '…I'd be hell lot happier to be blamed, even mistakenly, to murder Kripa then being blamed to be in love with her. Understand that Prithvi? And I don't…' He faced Prithvi and pointed at him. '…ever want you to mistaken anything as such ever again. I don't care how deep your friendship is with Kripa but never ever, and I mean EVER, relate me with Kripa in any way and the very last thing for now I hate her a lot more than this and I'm not showing. And for that you both should be thankful!'

With one last glance at Kripa he walked out her room and went to his room slamming the door behind real hard. Kripa and Prithvi heard that. Prithvi saw a tear forming at the corner of her right eye.

Look out for:....Lolz…..well everyone you just have to see now!!.....Stay tuned!!!

Hey please do leave comments........they encourage me …….hope you liked it…..and when I was writing I felt really odd….at times I felt like it might sound like as if a 8 year old is writing…..I mean I have scenes in mind but I'm kind of not good at converting them to words…..lolz……but I'm only depending on you guys……..plz comment …and do tell me what do you think? Is my writing skill very bad…..or was the part boring?…….[size]

Edited by Shazia_haya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was a great part! and no, you didn't sound like an 8 year old... i doubt if an 8 year old could barely even write half of what you wrote.... 😃

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