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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was sooo good i love it make the next part long and intersting plezzzz 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kyphkamahbuba

it was sooo good i love it make the next part long and intersting plezzzz 😉 😛

Thanks a lot...............when i write...it becomes really long so once I split one part into 2......lolz.....how mean of me.........but since it's not weekly.....i'll post parts a few times a week...............hope u like it.......i'm not sure if the next part is interesting or not......just cheack it out......I'm posting it in a while....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ab Kya Kare?

RECAP: Angad continued to walk down. Kripa started climbing up the stairs and thought 'Thank god unki shirt kharab nahi hui.'

'Kyun beta? Woh canteen ya bahar se kuch khale ga.'

After half an hour the food was ready and already packed. She went out with the bag and went towards the sofa. Kripa thought 'Angad must have gone back to his room probably he must be on the computer now.' while walking up to Naina.

But some of Kripa's hair got stuck in between Angad's fingers.

Part 3

Angad realized that some of Kripa's hair was stuck in between his fingers. But he didn't budge, it was the first time in his life that a girl's hair were in his hands, he didn't know how it felt but now he knew…and he felt good. The next thing which happened for the first time in his life was…Kripa was the first girl besides his mom who sat in the front seat of his car…in movies they make big deal out of this kind of things but did he really felt different about it…he wasn't sure. Kripa for the first time since she came to Nottingham sat in Angad's car. They drove out of the garage and to the road, Angad lifted his arm and Kripa rested her head on the head-rest. When the traffic light was red, both Angad and Kripa went forward-Angad was on the other seat so he had to move a little to Kripa's side, kind of leaning over her- to open the small cupboard in (I don't know what's the word) front of Kripa's seat. Both had accidentally touched the other's hand while opening, when they had touched each other they both took back their hands (sorry….this bit sounds a little funny but I don't know how to put it into correct words).

Kripa: Sorry…erm…woh Prithvi ki gari mein hum gana lagate the jab Prithvi gari chalare hote the issiliye abhi humne socha ke hum koi gana lagale lekin hum bhool gaye the ke hum Prithvi ke gari mein nahi hai.

Angad didn't say anything. Kripa felt a little sad because she was feeling as though he was angry at her or something. Angad leaned over Kripa again to get a CD (hey some cars have cassette players and some have CD players and some have both….Remember that). He took out a CD (the type of CD which has many songs from different movies not songs from one movie only) and put it in the CD player. The traffic light turned green and they started driving again.

Angad started whistling which surprised Kripa at first since he never behaved like that…actually Kripa haven't seen him doing anything as such before. Angad had one hand on the steering wheel and the other was keep pressing the button 'NEXT' he sometimes looked at the road and sometimes had to look at the CD player. It was a little dangerous because once they almost bumped into a car in front of theirs. Angad still hadn't found the song he wanted to listen-whenever he pressed the button "NEXT" he had to wait for a few seconds to listen to the beginning of the song to know if that's the song or not and he didn't had enough time to press the button "FORWARD"- Kripa noticed him flipping through songs so she slowly put her hand forward 'You can concentrate on your driving. I'll press next for you then you can tell me when to stop.' Angad put the other hand on the steering wheel. Kripa started pressing the 'NEXT' button. All that while Kripa didn't look at Angad she just stared at the CD player. Angad had stopped whistling when Kripa had asked, he was quieter then. Angad stared at Kripa for a while and then returned to his driving.

Kaho Na Pyaar Hai (Kaho Na Pyaar Hai) starts playing.

Kripa: Yeh?

Angad: Nahin.

Kya Mujhe Pyaar Hai (Woh Lamhe) starts playing.

Kripa: Yeh?

Angad: Nahin.

Chori Chori (Garam Masala) starts playing

Kripa: Yeh?

Angad: No.

Rock n Roll Soniye (Kabhi Alvida Na Kehna) starts playing.

Kripa: Yeh?

Angad thought that Kripa liked the song more than he did and that they were near the college anyway so what would it matter if he just said yes to it. 'Haan yeh wala.'

The song starts playing.

Kripa moved back, looked out of the window and smiled to herself remembering the times back home whenever they used to play that song.

Angad started behaving like other guys when they listened to a rock n' roll/ rap song…like nodding their head and all that. (If you watch Karam Apnaa Apnaa you can recall the scene where Shiv and Gauri went to their so-called honeymoon and Shiv started behaving different when the song: Who let the dogs out, started playing…….and I'm not copying scenes or anything…I just remembered that there was a scene like that in one serial so I stated because I felt like I couldn't put the scene into words properly.)

When Kripa turned to look at the other side she was surprised yet again to see Angad like that. Angad noticed Kripa staring at him so he stopped doing whatever he had been doing. Kripa turned back to look out of her window and she smiled seeing Angad like that…he looked as if he was embarrassed which made him look a little cute.

They reached the college, Angad parked his car and they both got out. Angad and Kripa walked towards the college park to see if Prithvi was walking towards the cafeteria and fortunately he was. Prithivi was walking in their direction with his friends by his side. Kripa and Angad paced up and stood in front of him, only then did he realize that they were there.

Prithvi: Bhai aap or Kripa, tum bhi?

Angad didn't say anything so Kripa said 'Haan….main aap ko aaj lunch dene aiye thi, aap waise bhi kaha rooz rooz ghar ka khana college mein khate hai.'

Prithivi –happy-: Haan yeh to hai.

Some of Prithvi's friends say (mainly to Prithvi):

Guy 1: Yaar abhi tumhe toh khana mil gaya.

Guy 2: Ab hume waha kale jaana parey ga.

Guy 3: Tere bina toh maaza bhi nahin ayega khana khane mein.

Kripa interrupts them (she smartly-innocently says): Waise humein pata tha ke aap saab ne jaha toh caf mein khana (food) khana (eat) tha ja canteen se, isiliye humne aap saab ke liye bhi khana (food) banaya hai. Agar dil karta hai toh khalo.

All the guys except Angad scream in unison: YEAH!!

<Hey…they are happy because: 1) They are bored of the same cafeteria or canteen food everyday and 2) The food isn't even tasty or spicy…for them the food is worse than hospital lunch.>

One of Prithvi's friend: Meri behen ne khana banaya hai aur main na khao, yeh kaise ho sakta hai. Yeh Josh ke rules ke khalaf hai.

So that friend of Prithvi is Josh.

Kripa (with style-maybe you can say with a little attitude): Apni marzi main. I'm not forcing anybody.

Josh snatched (not in a mean way) the bag from Kripa's hands and jogged towards one of the benches at the park followed by some of the other guys. All of them walked towards the bench. The last two people were Angad and Kripa. Kripa was kind of walking in front of Angad. When they reached the bench, they both were still standing. Kripa was standing in front of Angad and before they had reached the table, the guys had already started unpacking the lunch. They were all busy with the food while Angad and Kripa were still standing.

Prithvi looked up and told Kripa and Angad: 'Aap dono bhi beth jao warna khana khatam ho jaye ga or pata bhi nahin chale ga.'

With that he returned to what he was doing.

Before Angad and Kripa sat (Angad still was at the back of Kripa), Kripa turned her head sideway and spoke softly 'Khana zyada banaya tha, aap bhi kha liye ga, aapne subha ka kuch nahin khaya.'

With that Kripa went to sit at the other end of the bench. Angad went from the other side to sit at the other end of the bench which would was probably opposite Kripa. But some of the guys knew Angad as well so he was pushed to sit in the middle. The guys talked and sometimes in the middle praised Kripa for her cooking. Angad was into the talking. Prithvi noticed Angad hadn't eaten anything yet so he asked him to eat. Angad hesitated a little but Prithvi insisted on eating at least a little so Angad ate. Though he wouldn't let anyone notice but he didn't eat a LITTLE.

Prithvi then asked 'Bhai, kaisa hai?'

Angad –without looking at anyone but pretended to look at the food only- said 'It's okay not bad.'

Kripa looked at Angad for a while and a small smile crept onto her face maybe because Angad for the first time didn't talk anything bad about what she did or made or etc...

Prithvi announced 'I think we should go now or else we'll be late for class.'

Shaan: 'Haan chalo warna agar aaj bhi main late ho gaya who khuroos Mr. Mehta mujhe phir do (two) essay likh ne kilekahe ga.'

Some of the guys let out a laugh.

Josh: Chalo phir.

They packed their stuff.

Everyone said bye to Angad and Kripa.

Angad and Kripa were left alone after sometime.

Angad started to go and then Kripa followed him. Kripa started to walk quickly to keep up with him.

Kripa: Aap kabhi kuch…

She started to say something then stopped.

Both of them kept walking suddenly Angad spoke.

Angad: Kripa tum wahan betho main gari lekar yaha aajata hoon.

Kripa (a little softly): Theek hai.

Angad went and Kripa sat on a nearby bench. She waited for 5 minutes but she knew that it'll take him about at least 5 more minutes to come. So she just sat there day dreaming when a few figures surrounded her. They were all guys and they looked like thugs. One of them sat on the bench besides Kripa. She shifted uncomfortably. Then the other guy sat on the other side. She couldn't move. She tried to look back but couldn't since some guys were standing behind her too. Then one of the guys from the back leaned over the bench, his face was almost next to Kripa's, Kripa got frightened. He moved a little back and blew softly from a little distance on Kripa's neck. Kripa got furious and very scared. She immediately stood up to leave but one of the guys who were sitting next to her held her wrist.

Kripa hesitantly, while panicking too, asked (she's not the type who'll demand angrily at this point) '…erm…excuse me? Can you please leave my hand?

The guy firmly said 'No.'

The other guys laugh.

Kripa struggled to let go of herself from the guy's grip but it was too tight. Some guys laughed at her attempts to free herself.

Look out for: What will happen to Kripa?...How will she be freed?............Stay tuned!!!

Hey please do leave comments……tell me how do you feel…….I hope no one was bored……but please can you all post your comments……..I'll be waiting…….to continue the next part and if some people have some requests they can post it or PM……and one more thing.....do let me know if anyone want translations –again….no one seem to ask for it-…..and….Thanks everyone..…

Edited by Shazia_haya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part i guess angad will save her right
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part, like always!!!!! 👏 i cant wait to read more!!!! 😊
continue soon!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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now course our main man angad will save her! lol it would be funny if he actually sent them to her!!!! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part i guess angad will save her right

thx......keep guessing...

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

great part, like always!!!!! 👏 i cant wait to read more!!!! 😊
continue soon!!!! 😃

thnaks a lot....😛

Originally posted by: Numera89

now course our main man angad will save her! lol it would be funny if he actually sent them to her!!!! continue soon!

....keep guessing.........

PS: I did thought about that (....abt Angad sending the guys to her n all......).........but still keep guessing.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow sumra awesome part me loved it toooooo gooooood continue soon me waiting eagerly for the next part 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

wow sumra awesome part me loved it toooooo gooooood continue soon me waiting eagerly for the next part 👏

Thanks......I hope you like the next part.........

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ab Kya Kare?

RECAP: They drove out of the garage and to the road, Angad lifted his arm and Kripa rested her head on the head-rest.

Angad noticed Kripa staring at him so he stopped doing whatever he had been doing. Kripa turned back to look out of her window and she smiled seeing Angad like that…he looked as if he was embarrassed which made him look a little cute.

Angad hesitated a little but Prithvi insisted on eating at least a little so Angad ate. Though he wouldn't let anyone notice but he didn't eat a LITTLE.

Kripa struggled to let go of herself from the guy's grip but it was too tight. Some guys laughed at her attempts to free herself.

Part 4

After a few more struggles she freed herself and began to run. The guys ran after her, she had no idea where to go. She just ran wherever she could go to. Suddenly one hand held her wrist from no where. She got more scared and looked up only to find Angad there. She gave out a sigh of relief. The other guys stopped running and walked while smirking.

One of the guys started to speak 'Aye (pronounce as the letter 'A') hero, yeh koi Hindi picture nahin chal rahi, okay. Get out of the scene.'

Angad: 'If I don't.' {not really a question}

Some guys smirked while some laughed.

One of the guys then spoke up 'So then you'll be turned into minced beef.'

Angad gave out a laugh. 'So trying to challenge me, huh?'

'Toh kyun na hum Hindi picture ki tarha hi karle. Mein hero or tum saab zero, iss ladki ko lejane kile tum saab meri se…' Angad smirked. '…ladro (fight).'

Guy 1: Hero yeh teri bas ki baat nahin hai?

Angad (angrily teasing the guys): Acha? Toh kya yeh tum jaise bacho (kids) ki bas ki baat hai?

The leader of the gang (shouts and points at Angad dangerously): 'HEY!!'

Angad held the guy's finger and turned it around so it hurt the guy 'Hey yourself!' Angad started fighting with them. Some were scary cats who just seemed to be good at the talking –making-others-scared- work but actually they were too scared themselves to fight someone especially someone like Angad who bruised their gang's leader already. Some of the guys who dared to fight Angad were badly injured either from the head or elbow or legs but the leader of the gang, who was as well as the guy who blew on Kripa's neck, his arms and face were badly injured and bruised.

Angad held the leader's collar 'Agar einda (next time) kisi bhi ladki ko, khas tor iss ladki ko agar dekha bhi toh tum saab ka woh khaal karo ga ke tumhare maa baap bhi tumhe pechaane se inkar karege aur koi doctor bhi tumhare zakhmu (injuries) ka elaj (treatment) bhi nahin kar sake ge. Understand?'

The guy was too weak to answer. But Angad shook him hard so that he would answer 'Understand or you need more…'

The guy breathed out heavily 'No…no…I understand.'

Angad left him 'Good!' but he was too weak to stand all by himself so he fell down.

Angad went to Kripa who was looking at the grass.

'Chale?'

Kripa nodded her head while a few tears streamed down her face 'I'm sorry.'

Angad gave out a laugh on that 'Kis liye?'

Kripa: Woh aap ko humari waja se un logu (people) se…' Angad interrupted her 'It's fine, they deserved it and anyway whoever lives in my house no matter who he or she is I can't stand someone else misbehaving with them.' Kripa looked up and tried to look into his eyes, when she did, she quickly looked back down again.

A voice from the back was heard, someone screamed 'ANGAD….ANGAD….oh my god!! ANGAD…..ANGAD…' it became louder and louder; nearer and nearer.

Look out for: Who's voice is that?.........up till now is Angad soft to Kripa or still stone-type towards her?....A new character (maybe with a few more) will appear……will that person be a hero or a zero or a villain or the supporting character..........Stay tuned!!!

HEY THIS WAS X'MAS, EID AND NEW YEAR SPECIAL THAT'S WHY TODAY I POSTED 2 PARTS…Hey please do leave comments..................tell me how do you feel…….I hope no one was bored……but please can you all post your comments……..I'll be waiting…….to continue the next part and if some people have some requests they can post it or PM..…

Edited by Shazia_haya - 17 years ago

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