Ab Kya Kare? {promo&part 27 pg46} - Page 2

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

thanks.......now that's what I'll call encouraging...well it has encoraged me.....to write more........and just for future reference (don't take it the wrong way)...my real name's Sumra .

okay sumra jee continue soon me waiting

awesome job sumra!!!

i will give it an 8.. its just nothing EXCITING happend and thats why.. otherwise it would be 10!!!

cant wait till u continue!!!

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.

awesome part! 😉

Thnaks...

Originally posted by: issy

Great Part

Thx!!

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part sumra

Thx a lot!!

Originally posted by: Rajeev_gr8

👏 👏 👏

T-H-X-!-!

Originally posted by: koenigbobo

kooooooool part

Thank you!!

Originally posted by: brainychild92

awesome job sumra!!!

i will give it an 8.. its just nothing EXCITING happend and thats why.. otherwise it would be 10!!!

cant wait till u continue!!!

Thanks but for the begining 8 is a lot too!!......and since I'm kind of new in the fanfic scetion (at writing fanfics) so that's why I don't really know how to make the beginings like AWESOME.....😊

Originally posted by: Honii

okay sumra jee continue soon me waiting

the next part is gonna come in a minute......hope you all like it!!

Ab Kya Kare?

RECAP: The first day of Angad's and Kripa's University holiday. It's morning, 7 am, and we enter the home.

A guy in this towel comes out from the shower, we see his back. He goes to the mirror and we see he's PRITHVI.

Prithvi stood up 'Kripa yeh kya hai?' we see the girl is none other than KRIPA and Prithvi is showing her his watch.

Kripa smiles and goes to her bed and lies down. Since Prithvi had just freshened up her unknowingly so she can't go back to sleep. She planned to get ready and go downstairs. So she got up and went to the washroom in her room to take a shower.

Part 2

Kripa came out all dressed. She went to her dressing table and did some light make up. When she was all ready, she went downstairs. Before going down the stairs, she looked back once more to see if the door which was closed till now has opened yet or not. …..and NO, it wasn't opened so she turned back and went down. She walked to the kitchen and walked up to Naina.

'Hi Aunty.' greeted Kripa.

'Aare beta, tum itni jaldi jag gayi ho? Aaj to tumhari aur Angad ki chuti (holiday) hai.'

Kripa shyly says (while she says she kind of hesitates and sometimes glances at the floor too)'Aunty woh bas aise hi…socha tha ke aap ki madat karloon.'

'Nahin nahin beta, tumhe kaam karni ki kya zarurat hai main sab samhaloon gi.'

'Aunty please agar aap humein kaam nahin karne dae gi toh humein lage ga ki hum aap par aur iss ghar par ek boudge hai.'

Naina puts her hand on Kripa's mouth. 'Nahin Nahin beta. Aise nahin kete. Aise acha toh nahin lagta na agar tum aapne aap ko iss ghar ka boudge samjho. Tum bhi toh meri beti ki tarha ho na, ho ke nahin?'

'.......hoon lekin please kya aap apni beti ko rok the kaam karne kile?'

'…………lekin beta'

'Nahin Aunty mein bas ab kam karu gi.' Kripa makes it final and starts helping Naina.

Naina thinks while working 'Kripa kitni achi ladki hai. Woh kitna saab ka iss ghar mein itna khayal rakh thi hai. Kaash agar mujhe Kripa jaisi bahu ek mil jaye Angad keliye.'

After about 20 minutes of cooking, washing dishes, etc… Naina is still working but Kripa stops while working because an idea pops up in her head.

'Uumm…Aunty kya mein bas karlu. Mein thori thak (tired) gayi hoon.' Kripa puts her right hand at the back of her neck and in between some hair (the ones at the bottom-at the back). ({I hope you understand what action I'm talking about here.})

'Haan haan beta. Itna zaroori toh nahin hai na ke tum kaam karo. Woh toh tumne hi kaha tha issiliye maine kaha theek hai. But it's not a must. Tum phir bahar jakar aaram karo. Yeh bhi bahar a-ne wale ho ge aur Angad bhi, Prithvi toh chala gaya hai.'

'Okay Aunty toh phir mein bahar hi beth (sit) thi hoon.' Kripa starts walking out of the door.

'Suno, beta woh breakfast mein tumne kya khana hai.'

Kripa looks back and answers cutely 'Kuch bhi. Jo aap banai ge woh mein khaloon gi.'

'Teek hai beta.'

Kripa walks out of the kitchen and make sure that Naina can't see her.

Kripa takes out a wet towel (from somewhere but I don't want to go into details as it might be a little annoying for some of you to read since it's not very important otherwise I don't mind going into details) and a broom and starts sweeping the floor and cleaning tables, vases, television, etc…she also uses the broom to clean carpets too since she doesn't want Naina to know that she's cleaning the house so she doesn't use the vacuum cleaner. It's going to be ten and Kripa is about to finish doing the cleaning and sweeping everywhere except the bedrooms when Dilip comes out of his room all ready and ready to eat breakfast, he was awake before too but was doing some work on his laptop in his bedroom with the door closed. He sees Kripa and is surprised to see that Kripa was cleaning the house 'Aare beta yeh tum….' Kripa is a little far away so she sighs Dilip to be quiet by putting her finger on her mouth and trying not to make sound but mouthing 'ssshhhhh…' then when she was relieved about that Dilip would not be saying a word, she came closer and whispered (and does a little begging too) 'Please Uncle…Aunty ko nahin batana.' Dilip understood so he said 'Okay beta lekin tumhari Aunty bhi to sai hai na aisa acha….' Kripa interrupts 'Please Uncle…mujhe acha lagta hai.' Dilip sighs 'Teek hai beta. Tumhe acha lagta hai to karo lekin kabhi zaabardasti se nahin karna, okay beta?' Kripa happily says 'Theek hai.' and goes back to work.

Dilip put his briefcase on the sofa and sat on the dining table and read a newspaper while waiting for Naina to bring breakfast. After 10 minutes Naina, came out from the kitchen and started putting a few dishes on the table with a jug of orange juice and another jug of water. She was just fixing the dishes when she noticed something different about the living room. She noticed that it was cleaner than it usually is at that time of the day; she remembered that she hadn't cleaned the house when she woke up, that's what she usually does everyday so she wondered who cleaned the house if not her. She was just looking here and there at the cleanliness when she noticed at the far end of the living room was someone with a broom. She sighed and walked up to the figure while shaking her head. She reached the figure and before the figure could react she held the figure's ear and the figure gave a soft scream.

'Aunty aap?'

'Tum toh thak gayi thi.'

Kripa doesn't say anything.

'Mujhe yeh jharu (broom) or woh towel do (give).'

Kripa does what she was told to do so.

Naina tried to be a little frustrated 'Abhi jao apne kamre mein aur kuch kaam karlo ja phir TV laga ke dekh lo ja computer mein agar kuch karna hai to karlo lekin ghar ka kaam nahi. Tumhare paas bohut kuch acha karne ko hai ghar ke kaam ke ilava.'

Kripa thought of saying something but nothing better came out, she knew that Naina takes care of her too much. To the extent that she doesn't want her to do the housework. 'Okay Aunty.'

Kripa decided to go to her room and clean whatever she could find to clean or else do some setting of her belongings, study, etc…She started walking up the stairs (she climbed the stairs fast…you can say ran up the stairs) looking at the floor/ down. She didn't notice someone coming down. The person coming down was walking kind of coolly, openly (so it's like the figure is trying to occupy the whole (wideness) of the staircase). There was still some space on the other side but not enough for the other person walking up or down to walk past by the person without touching them. The person is walking down-standing/ walking in the middle (position) -. Kripa looked up when she noticed someone coming down, she saw the person was none other than ANGAD. She stopped on one of the stairs since Angad was coming down and she had no space to walk past him without touching him. He was near her but didn't bother to squeeze a little even, so Kripa started walking up again with squeezing herself a little. When they were very near (like the only distance between them is one stair) Kripa (looking down) said 'Excuse me?' Angad didn't bother so he didn't do anything. Their arms brushed against each other but no one seemed to mind or bother or care but since Kripa was walking up kind of in a hurry she was forced to stop in a jerk. Her hand was almost toughing Angad's shirt. Because there was some net working on the bottom of his shirt so Kripa's bracelet had gotten stuck there. Kripa began to get scared inside 'I hope his shirt hasn't gotted damaged.' Kripa went back a stair down to get her bracelet out but before she touched, Angad expertly used his other hand (the one not near the bracelet-shirt/ Kripa area) and took out the bracelet. (All that time Kripa had been looking either down or at the floor) Kripa, in a soft voice but still loud enough to hear, said 'I'm sorry and (after a pause) Thank you!' Angad continued to walk down. Kripa started climbing up the stairs and thought 'Thank god unki shirt kharab nahi hui.'

Kripa reached her room and did some stuff. When it was about one hour before lunch she went back down. She saw Angad watching TV and his mom beside him; they weren't really watching the TV but just sitting down and talking. Kripa walked up to them, near Naina's side.

'Aunty, woh mein aapse kuch pooch na chaati thi.'

Naina looked up. 'Bolo beta.'

'Kya aaj mein Prithvi ko lunch dene challi jao unke college.'

'Kyun beta? Woh canteen ya bahar se kuch khale ga.'

'Haan lekin meri aaj chuti hai aur Prithvi kaha rooz rooz (everyday) ghar ka lunch college mein khate hai. Thora aaj different ho jaye ga.'

'Theek hai.' Naina is about to stand up.

'Nae nae (no no) Aunty, mein khood bana loon gi.'

'Theek hai beta. Tumhari marzi.'

Kripa went to the kitchen.

After half an hour the food was ready and already packed. She went out with the bag and went towards the sofa. Kripa thought 'Angad must have gone back to his room probably he must be on the computer now.' while walking up to Naina.

'Aunty toh phir mein abhi jati hoon.'

'Theek hai beta.'

Kripa was about to go but Naina stopped her. 'Ruko beta.'

She called out for Angad 'Angad neche aao (come down)!'

After a while Angad came down. 'Kya hua, mom?'

'Kuch nahin beta bas tum Kripa ko Prithvi ke college choor aao.'

Kripa was surprised and a little scared that maybe Angad wouldn't want to drive her there and she didn't want to trouble him so she said 'Aunty mein Taxi se chali jao gi. I'm fine with that.'

'Kripa lekin Angad bhi to free hai, woh tumhe choor aiye ga. Us mein harj hi kya hai. Angad busy toh nahin hai, kyun Angad tum ho ke nahin?'

Angad looked at his mom 'Nahin.'

Naina finalized 'Haan toh phir theek hai, Angad tum Kripa ko choor aao, koi problem hai kya?' Kripa was very sure that he wouldn't agree to that.

'Nahin.'

Kripa looked up suddenly at Angad kind of surprised.

Naina looked at Kripa and asked 'Theek hai Kripa?'

Kripa softly said 'Ji.'

'Okay to phir tum dono jao warna late ho jao ge.'

Angad walked out of the house to his car in the garage. Kripa reluctantly followed. Angad opened the passenger seat (the seat next to the driver) for Kripa first then went to the driver's door and opened that and sat down. He put his key in the ignition (I'm not sure if it's the right word) and Kripa sat down next to him and closed the car door. Kripa looked straight ahead (while looking a little downwards too). After a while Angad started to drive out of the garage, since the car was facing the other side so he had to drive backwards first and while looking back, he had his left hand on the steering wheel and the other on Kripa's head-rest (the head/ top of her seat). When Angad had put his arm/ hand on Kripa's head rest (and….duh!!...he had to look at the back to see where he's going), Kripa lifted her head just in case Angad didn't get bothered. But some of Kripa's hair got stuck in between Angad's fingers.

Look out for: A little more of Angad...a few new characters...........Stay tuned!!!

Dilip-Angad's Dad and Naina-Angad's mom {remember Kripa sometimes uses 'hum' to indicate herself only and sometimes she uses 'main'….so they mean the same thing…but sometimes 'hum' will mean more than one person…….I think some of you know that 'hum' can be used as singular too…..but whenever it'll mean singular or plural…I think the difference could be told easily….but if you have confusion…do let me know so that either I stop using 'hum' as singular or whenever it means singular then I write 'hum (s)' and for plural 'hum (p)'…..you can let me know if you want me to do either of those things…if you don't have problem then I'll keep on continue to write like I do till now.}

Hey please do leave comments……and let me let you all know that in Taiwan there was an earthquake '7.2' (on 26/ 12/ 06) and it's effect came to Hong Kong too……..there were two earthquakes….and because of that (it happened at night time…like 8 pm or something) there was some problem with the Internet connection…so I couldn't go on the internet….believe me I tried many times…I'm not just saying but really I tried many times….but couldn't get to visit India-forums….a few websites could be visited only but most of them couldn't like hotmail and yahoo also couldn't be accessed….that's why I posted a long part…….it was supposed to be shorter but I kept on typing and typing and it became that much…I hope no one was bored……but please can you all post your comments……..I'll be waiting…….to continue the next part and if some people have some requests they can post it or PM……and one more thing.....do let me know if anyone want translations…Thanks everyone..…

great part i is kripa so scared towards angad??? cont. soon

that was a GREAT part!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 PLEASE continue soon!!! 😊


p.s. i hope u didnt get 22 affected by the earthquake.

must say its real goood.... plz continue sooon..
How ever plz tell us why Angad does not Like Krips n i confused abt prithvi ?? isnt he going to the same college n where is he gng then ??

Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part i is kripa so scared towards angad??? cont. soon

thx...I already PMed you as a reply.......but if anyone else wants to ask you can ask me since I'm not sure if others want to know so I'm not posting it here at the moment.

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

that was a GREAT part!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 PLEASE continue soon!!! 😊


p.s. i hope u didnt get 22 affected by the earthquake.

No no........it wasn't 22 at first they said it was 7.2 (the earthquake was in taiwan but in the sea something happened to the internet connections so some companies lost internet connection only a few of them could work but even they became very slow....)

THANKS....

Originally posted by: koolaries4

must say its real goood.... plz continue sooon..
How ever plz tell us why Angad does not Like Krips n i confused abt prithvi ?? isnt he going to the same college n where is he gng then ??

Yah the gang and Prithvi are in the same school....but it's THE GANG......why'd they even bother to get punished or anything.......it doesn't really matter to them if they pass or fail or get punished even (like detention or write essays or etc...) but you see Prithvi and all are like the goodies......and they don't want to get into troubles.........

Angad doesn't like Kripa because ______ (it'll be revealed later)........but his dislikeness to Kripa had increased because Kannan did some things which make Angad don't like kripa even more....it was said in PART A.......

Thnaks a lot........

PS: I really think that this fanfic of mine is better than the other one.......lolz....maybe it's not weekly that's why......😊