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Posted: 7 years ago

Whispers

They felt, inhaled and held each other with shaking arms. He crushed her to his form mercilessly, her tee sliding up her form. The kiss didn't go any furher, but he inhaled her neck, jaw, hair, every spot he was introduced to in Roorkee on her bed

She found her arms sliding under his black graphic tee, his teeshirt and body still damp from the shower. He felt delicious. She let out a faint cry of appreciation as she came in contact with his bare form

"Aap geele badan par kapde pehante hain? she whispered

He didn't answer, just buried his face in her neck at the concerned scolding

"Why didn't you call me? he whispered irritably

"Aapne kaha tha? she whispered

"Humne phone wave kiya he whispered

She rubbed her ears impudently on his chest "Call ke liye?

"Aapko kya laga? he was angry

"Hamey kuch nahi laga, humne bus yeh suna ki aap ja rahe hain she fought tears

"was there an appropriate response? he was cruel he nipped her neck and felt her whole body shudder

"Nahi... aapne kaha do din ke liye ja rahe hain, aur aap do din mein nikal gaye

"Avantika he warned

"I was told you were going and I could stay back

"and so you stayed for TWO FREAKING DAYS? he pulled away and glared at her

She leaned on the wall, quivering "Aap kya chahte the, hum beg karen? she whispered deeply hurt

"You didn't say anything

"Why should I say something?

"Your words not mine... I assumed you wanted to stay he whispered

"Ab phir hamare kamre mein kya kar rahe the?

"I thought you were not here he whispered

Chandu groaned and tossed

They both stiffened

"I am here... aap kahen to hum ja sakte hain she said tearing up

He grabbed her passionately

"Nice job, playing the blame game he whispered

"Harit she protested

"Avantikaa he whispered and molded her to his form.

"Raat ko do baje taq kya kar rahe the?

"Match tha hamara he grinned on top of her head

"Jeete? she asked softly

"I scored 27 of the 42 my team made... yes he whispered tonguing her ear

"Geele hain kapde she reminded him

"I know... my Mom rebukes me also he said

"To aap hamari bhi nahi sunenge phir she sighed defeatedly

"Arey nahi... aapki har baat hamare liye aadesh hai he teased as she began to fight

"Avantika... baat to sunen he whispered

"Nahi, bilqul nahi she wouldn't let his face come any closer than it was, she cupped his face in her palm and dodged away from it

"Avantika he burrowed,

"Harit she ordered

"Ek text nahi bheja

"Hum to ek aur din rukne waale the... sorry hafta she whispered, as he felt her curves with strong fingers

"Ufff she groaned relenting, he went back to his face nesting spot on her neck

"You were wandering outside with no dupatta on your head? he jeered

"Shikayat karenge? she placed hands on his chest and pushed hard

"Ask nicely, shaayad bacha lein aapko he let his tongue trace her collar bone

"Harit please Ma ko na kahen she begged looking deeply into his eyes

"Done! he nodded his eyes glinting

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Posted: 7 years ago
The shadows of the night whispers be with me, stay with me, you are going nowhere. Tender love, anger, sweet caresses, and careless whispers . Whispers roar I missed you lots 😳
Edited by Errantnomad - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Woow these two talks at this time but how...
😳
I can never!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Just loved the every word of the update...
they are so much in love
Her concern her anger of being left there everything
His anger of not being called or text
Her shikayat his concern their giving it back at each other
It was wonderful
👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Anddd she directly said MA for the first time instead of your mother!!! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
I love this progress.
I actually thought it will go slow.
Thank You Nisha.
She is naive I don't think he will also push her for everything in one go.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Whispers
They loudly affirmed that both didn't want to be apart from each other.
Lovely progression ... Love the fact that they express to each other in person so well. 👏
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Delicious update Nisha
I am so happy Teeku didn't back down or mince her words about how she felt!! 👏

Harit..she is inexperienced but don't worry you can cajole her out of her bad mood😉


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Posted: 7 years ago
"I was told you were going and I could stay back

"and so you stayed for TWO FREAKING DAYS? he pulled away and glared at her

Avantika, this guy does have ego and so do you. But it's damn good that he admitted two days apart were bit to long for him.

I hope they do start texting / calling regularly now about their routine.
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Posted: 7 years ago

She found her arms sliding under his black graphic tee, his teeshirt and body still damp from the shower. He felt delicious. She let out a faint cry of appreciation as she came in contact with his bare form

"Aap geele badan par kapde pehante hain? she whispered

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"Geele hain kapde she reminded him

"I know... my Mom rebukes me also he said

"To aap hamari bhi nahi sunenge phir she sighed defeatedly

Avantika is all wifey on him 😳. This is so sweet nisha !

Small steps ... packing his toiletries, thinking about his clothes to pack, his damp tee after shower, questioning his late night outing ... The way she cups his face ! Love it Nisha ! They are slowly discovering each other.




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