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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#311

Beautiful update Sangeetha!

I like the story far more now and find it hugely interesting with Chanakya coming in with his shrewd tactics. Had wanted Chanakya to come in in first 2-3 episodes itself...

now I really like his smartness in getting both Nand and avantika agreed through different motives and handled separately... Found it superb!

Liked the Brahm Vivah and arsh vivah concepts as well... Newly learnt these terms... so very happy... where did you pick them from? any reference book? or general knowledge?

Could envision Chandra's face while telling nandini to live in the moment... wish you had a pic there!

Will come back later and add comments!

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#312

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.
Reserving
I will read this tomorrow. I am too sad at the moment.

Read it at WP. Am rewriting there by tweaking the story

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Mansi

@Vampire2468

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Posted: 7 years ago

#313

Another wonderful update 👏Chanakya played smart with both Husband Wife 😆Avantika is scared of Nand 😕I loved the smile Nandini had on her face for her people 😊Like Nandini I too think will Helena n Moora accept her 🤔Duru will accept her 😳Nand smiling after meeting Chanakya definitely has some devious plan in his mind?

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting..

Thank you MysticRiver...

Could you elaborate what / which part you found it interesting, and where I can improvise the plot further, whcih character can be used as a surprise package for future plots etc ... it would help me a lot.

Thanks again.

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Another wonderful update 👏Chanakya played smart with both Husband Wife 😆Avantika is scared of Nand 😕
What to do? In the name of obeyance of pati dev and a disciplined lifestyle, they insisted that Patni should listen to Pati Dev... lekin blind belief rakhne ke liye kisi ne nahi kaha ta 😕
But over a period of time, in the name of respect, the women bowed down and cowed down to Men...

I loved the smile Nandini had on her face for her people 😊Like Nandini I too think will Helena n Moora accept her 🤔Duru will accept her 😳

Next plot your favourite Moora probably 😉
i am in two minds to skip Helena ... because I have only mentioned her once in the story, that too NOT by name... and secondly, as per history, she was not even there during the early stages of Chandragupta Maurya... Please give me your frank opinion.

Nand smiling after meeting Chanakya definitely has some devious plan in his mind?

Yep, definitely...

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: LovingAHAA2018
Beautiful update Sangeetha!

I like the story far more now and find it hugely interesting with Chanakya coming in with his shrewd tactics. Had wanted Chanakya to come in in first 2-3 episodes itself...

now I really like his smartness in getting both Nand and avantika agreed through different motives and handled separately... Found it superb!

Liked the Brahm Vivah and arsh vivah concepts as well... Newly learnt these terms... so very happy... where did you pick them from? any reference book? or general knowledge?

There are many types of marriages that our indian custom had. Only Kanyadan concept is well known and followed today. Swayamvar concept is popularly known but not followed.
Although Pisacha Vivah (like demons kidnapping young girls and getting married) is well followed even today, the parents are arm twisted to make it look like Kanyadhan 😉 I will discuss more on this later.

Could envision Chandra's face while telling nandini to live in the moment... wish you had a pic there!

Oops. I had forgotten all about the pics in the last two or three chapters. Will have to spend a day looking for pictures which would suit the situation... Dont have time for it...😕

Will come back later and add comments!

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.Ashleydevlin.

@.Ashleydevlin.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#317

oh I loved it Sangeeta. It's good to c someone averting a war. I totally understand those poor ppl feeling. Good thing Chandra distributed gold bags. I like badal😆...I am happy for nandani and chandra.

I actually liked helena but if its not related to story then leave her out.

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#318

Avantika words here show actually how helpless she is

Even I don't think Nand will do the kanyadaan

Nand still has a lot treasure so they have the means

but this part Avantika is just acting poor

They should not have given them the bullock cart

I really hope they go far away from Magadh

I really don't want them to ruin Avantika's life any more

Wow so he had actually discussed this with Nand

And he had agreed to their terms and conditions

So here Acharya wants both husband wife to feel

that both of them are in control of the situation

I totally get it why he had done this

He really cares a lot about Nandini

He does not want her to suffer any more for her parents

Now I really want Nand and Avantika to fight between themselves

Let them waste their time in this fighting

while C&C retrieve all the gold from the tunnels

and distribute it among the Magadh people

The flash back again proves how greedy and selfish Nand is

But why will C&C let him carry that much gold

Should they not have kept it for the people ?

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#319

Nand smile seeing Chanakya go is giving me bad vibes

I know he is planning something sinister but I hope all his plans fail now

Both husband wife are so addicted to power that it is hard for them to leave

but right now they have no other option at all

I really hope with this finally the era of their tyranny will end

and a golden phase will begin for the Magadh people

Finally CN are alone and have some time for themselves

I am happy that Chanakya gave them some private time this way

Chandra always keeps his promises so I trust him always

But Nandini had so many shocks together recently

That she can't believe her good luck at all now

She feels that again something will ruin her happiness

Poor girl is so used to trauma now that happiness scares her

Chandra is also right they can just enjoy the moment at present

I can understand the worry of the army who did not know what had happened

Parvatak and Malay was their only support here now

and their leaving with a hanging face left them more depressed

From their point of view they had lost and could be punished now

It is so true that kings fight and the common man dies

At the end of the war they are also punished brutally

Grave injustice is done to them normally

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#320

I admire the fact that Chandra addressed the crowd here

I can understand how happy the army was to hear this announcement

His reasons why he asked for the details of the army and their families was amazing

Really Chandra has a very smart brain and is a fantastic strategist

He knows how to keep his enemies in check and also to stay aware of his surroundings

I really don't feel the army will join Nand any more

They are really elated with Chandra and I know he will keep them really happy

Ok so now we get to see a bit of their nok jhok finally

I understand she was feeling shy to get on the same horse in public

But Chandra gave her the perfect reasoning and surprised her

Well he really is very good with his arguments I can see that

She knew Avantika so well so was shocked at her presence today

I love the idea of Lopa being a spy she can really help CN then

Nandini really loves Lopa a lot so was happy to hear her praise

Avantika had degraded Nandini and treated her so badly

So Chandra showed her her true place in return

He proved to her that now she was nothing without Nandini

I love his sense of justice and the way he hahndled all this

OK so he did not tell Lopa about the men's plan to kill Nandini

Then was it just a coincidence the men were discussing the plans

just outside Avantika room and she heard it by chance ?

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