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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Fantabulous work 👏I read both the updates in one go The way u have shown Acharya like a Dhroonacharya I liked it 👍🏼He is the best mentor Chandra could get himself n together they can work n show the people like Malay n Parvatak who they are n anyone taking any panga with them 😉I loved how Lopa swiftly acted n didn't let anyone know about anything 👏So Nalini does care for Neela if not for Nandini 🤓Good for Avantika felt very happy to see her so miserable 😛Loved the way Nandini showed that father son there place 👏Can't wait for ChanDni marriage



Thanks Mansi 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic chapter Sangeetha😃

I liked how chandra saved Nandini's life and convinced everybody for his marriage with nandini👏
Chanakya and chandra's plan as brillant⭐️



Thank you Nonie
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I know he spoke of things in the letter but did not tell her his plan

I think it was just right for her that she did not know
Chandra used all his tricks to convince her and arrive at the solution
At times it is good to leave things to fate and not plan about them
I am speaking of this from Nandini point of view
Nand and Avantika are so similar here
Nandini is the key to power for both as she has the master key for Nand and is the main instrument to get back Nand for Avantika
They both are using her so much to get what they want

Well said !!! Like HP, she has been raised for slaughter.


How I wish Nand too has such a situation where he is forced to do something that he hates
Not the marriage rituals but something else
Uparwaale ke laathi ke maar me awaz nahi hota magar zor hota hai

He is going to do something that he HATES very soon... like giving his dear daughter away, in the hands of his sworn enemy 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I want Karma to deliver justice to Avantika Nand Malay Parvatak in great details

Really some times our own misdeeds catch up with us at unexpected times

For Parvatak, I have already planned his punishment. For Nand and Malay, i have an idea but since they are going to come much later, i haven't paid much thought to him now.
Avantika and Nalini are grey character... As i said, i am bringing all shades to the women in this story.


Hmm I will wait for Avantika past to be revealed
I had deduced about Chandra instructing Lopa about the workers gossip
But leaking Neela love affair to Avantika via Nalini was a master stroke as well
The more I am knowing about Chandra strategies the more I am respecting Acharya


Yes the fact that she cares for Neela is so clear in this chapter
Her main enmity is with Nandini but she wants Neela to be happy in her life

Absolutely...

Yes Lopa just gave her only the part that was required for her to act

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Oh now I got it so the messenger being detained was also a ploy

C&C brought on small storms that left Avantika devastated in their aftermath
Well done team C&C

Correct

The marriage is really the solution to so many things
Acharya knows the Magadh people will also accept her as their Queen
Yes Neela is her daughter but Avantika seems to forget it most of the times
Once the war ends the alliance too ends automatically right ?
The pact was valid for as long as the war continued but now the peace treaty overrides the pact
So neither Nand not Avantika should be liable to still keep their end of the pact

Its like this... you take a loan and start a company. Just because you lost interest in the company and thought of winding it, you dont stop paying the loan back na?
Peace treaty overrides the War. Not the war alliance made by Nand with Parvatak.
Parvatak and Malay have left their kingdom and spent time with them all these days for Nand's war. They wanted Nandini in their kingdom. But C&C has an upper hand now + Nand is in captivity.. After entering into argument with Chandra by insulting Chanakya, they now have neither Nandini nor Magadh.
They cant show their anger on C&C since they are reigning a bigger kingdom than theirs. Obviously they will show anger on Nand and Avantika na? So Avantika was thinking of alternate plan - Nalini in place of Nandini - in case they still insist on marrying Nand's daughter. [They dont know of Parvatak's plan, right? 😉] . Besides, Neela is booked with Ujjain Prince. toh baki Nalini hi bachi hai...

But Nalini if she wishes she can marry Malay of her own free will
C&C really are so smart and intelligent they made Avantika so helpless
They knew all the right strings to pull and now the result is in their favor
I want Krishnavardhan to support Chandra after his marriage and not Nand

No he wont leave Chandra. Thats why Krishna did not participate in the war also. But greedy Avantika and Nand ka expectation ki koi seema nahi hai 😃

How I wish Nand was never released from prison and he stayed there forever
I want time to make Avantika do more unpleasant things for herself

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Uff I just love this ankhon ankhon me ishaara

How romantic and that too in a battle field
Please give them a lot of free time after the war
They need some time to romance and be with each other
One small nokjhok coming right in the next chapter, just for you 😛

I love how you expresses her feelings
First she is unsure of the marriage
And then she is curious how he will make it happen
Means her subconscious has already accepted the marriage

So she is sticking to her gladiator plan from the last night
She is making this the final day of the war
I loved how Chanakya spoke to her first at that place
C&C are going about in a grand systematic way
Also it helps that Nandini is up for suggestions and negotiation
She can do anything for the greater good of the people
Acharya is guiding her in the right path in the right way

Yes, Acharya was guiding her and she was also following both of them... Nandini did not know what Chandra's plan is. So she knew she had to play along, with the suggestions of Chanakya and Chandra ...

Ugh just why is that Asur even here ? can some one please take him away
He is a proper barbarian and does not know how to speak
Asur is trying to remind Acharya of his favors on him
But thankfully Acharya is not as weak as Dronacharya
And he has a strong student like Chandra with him
So he can counter any attack made on Acharya

Here, Chandra was acting like Arjun - standing up for Drona's insult by Drupad.

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Chandra did so many thing with just one reply

He countered back for the insult to Acharya by Asur
He too made the same suggestion as Acharya as a King
He knew they can't refute it as he is the King
He also challenged Asur and hyena to a fight
Which he knew Asur wont ever accept not let hyena accept

This is why i enjoy reading your comments ! You were visualising what i had visualised but did not write !

Asur situation now is like aage kuan peeche khai
In Bengali we have a proverb that means crocodile in water and tiger on land
I can understand how helpless he feels

Nice proverb !! Kuan is crocodile and Khai is tiger?

Malay was rushing to fight Chandra but Asur stopped him
Why ? He should have just let the fight happen
All would have known who is a great fighter

hyena ka dingdong karab hai... Asur ya hyena marenge toh pothe ka naam aur nishan nahi hoga 😆

And now the expert of low blows strikes nasty again
What else can be expected from hyena ?
I fully understand Nandini dilemma for her reply
She has to keep in mind the welfare of her people
as well as Chandra's image in public
So she has to reply with caution but effectively

A Queenly behaviour ... She has to play along the lines of Chandra, without Asur and Hyena sniffing it, and get a favourable reply for herself too.

I just loved how she silenced Asur and Malay
She really struck them with the right dose of truth
A declaration in open court is always stronger and more effective
than a verbal agreement done privately

You put it more beautifully than my words 👍🏼

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Wow so some of Chandra's men were disguised as Gandhar army

and they spread the rumor of Malay impotency
Again another grand master plan that gave fabulous results
To any outsider the scene on the war field would have matched this rumor perfectly
Now Nandini's men too know about it and they will spread it further
Asur and Malay ki ab to watt lag gayi
Ab to woh dono gayo


@BOLD - I was not sure whether my visualisation came out clearly in the words. But this line ensured that you were able to visualise the same thing I imagined.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Reserving
I will read this tomorrow. I am too sad at the moment.

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