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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#221

It was clear from your story that Lopa had heard the tumbler breaking

Malay would have been a double pervert if he was normal

May be it was God's and nature's way to balance out the evilness of Asur

So Malay is impotent

Thanks. I too love Asur Sasur.

Hope to see whispering rumours about Mala's weakness later in the story

Yes hubby dear will come to the rescue after knowing all now

I think this is also Shri Krishna's policy

If you have to do something minorly bad to get something majorly good for all

Then you should surely do it

Chandra will never usurp anything from Gandhar

Of course when a King is scared of the opponent his people will fear the opponent even more

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#222

I agree we should do something worth while and useful in anger

But I love to think that he imagined it was Malay and Asur in lace of the medicine

and he was pounding them with all his strength

Yes power corrupts even a noble person

Once the kings were really great but later so many of them became tyrants

Look at our politicians for instance

They both are people'e rulers from their souls

It's too hard to stay in control and be calm and cool when your loved ones is in danger

Still I will applaud Chandra for his iron control that he maintained till now

Yes during that time it was as if he was in a bubble with her

Only they were there in that moment and no one else

He knew what she needed at the most at that time

Being Acharya Chanakyas student I know he will make a good plan

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#223

Yes her first priority was Nandini

When Nandini was unconscious she turned to Vaid

She is really a very adorable and cute character

I like her so much already

She does not even know how to hold a sword to threaten the enemy

Still she placed a sword on Chandra's neck speak volumes about her loyalty and faithfulness

I think if she is trained she can make a good warrior

When Malay came Nandini was in full senses

So she was ready to offer herself to him

But now she is unconscious so Lopa tries to threaten Vaid with the sword

She knows that she has to do all needed to protect Nandini now

He is very humble and down to earth and yes that part reminded me of Neha Di too

I infer that Badal is Nandini's horse who may be had helped them to escape from the forced marriage with Malay ? Bijli is Chandra's horse so like Chandra Nandini they too have fallen in love ?

If Nandini is in any problem she will whisper in Badal's ears who then may go to Chandra or may be Bijli who will then go to Chandra ?

Please explain this part

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#224

I love this type of love declarations

They have a special touch in them

Thanks for explaining the master key part

It makes sense now

Yes Nandini as it is in in danger from every one else

But how will Nand know the keys are missing ?

He is absconding right ?

He has not visited them for a long time

I wish Chandra had specified Lopa the reason

But I assume once Nandini wakes up

And knows what all he has taken from her

She will understand the danger reference well

His love for animals makes him more endearing to me personally

Who else cares so much for animals now

I wish to see more of Chandra and Badal flashback scenes

how they got to know each other

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Lopa knows of the Swayamvar only as of now
I will love it if the blood marriage is a secret between just the 2 lovers only
The less details Lopa knows the better and I want Nandini to keep some things totally private too

OK... I will plan it accordingly. I had made two plots based on Lopa knows about all marriages between them, Lopa doesn't know about all marriages.
Based on your choice, I will take base of "Lopa does not know about all marriages" and work accordingly.

Tell me some thing please
In those day ladies used to have poison with them
Some of them even had poison in their rings
Then instead of living such a life why did they not commit suicide ?

Only royal ladies did Priya. Common ladies like you and I will not carry poison in their rings. Common public did not have so much ornaments to wear in the first place. Assume you are a normal lady and you are taking bath in a waterfall, and you are kidnapped by the Prince. Or you are working in a field ploughing, you get kidnapped. Or you are drugged with Ganja (those days it was freely available for army soldiers). Obviously, your defence system will be down fighting by the time you bump all the way on the horseback, fighting with the kidnapper and then tied to the bed. Soldiers standing guard in the fort will never come to your rescue, because Prince or the King is raping.
Only whispered rumour is possible.
Committing suicide is done by all women, AFTER all the entire activity is done. Sigh, i wish they just kill the man before killing themselves...

But I love to think that he imagined it was Malay and Asur in place of the medicine
and he was pounding them with all his strength

Yes, I really loved that inference. Imagining Malay and Asur like Ginger being pounded for Tea 😆

They both are people'e rulers from their souls
It's too hard to stay in control and be calm and cool when your loved ones is in danger
Still I will applaud Chandra for his iron control that he maintained till now
Yes during that time it was as if he was in a bubble with her
Only they were there in that moment and no one else
He knew what she needed most at that time

Very true, Priya. He didn't realise Lopa was around.

I infer that Badal is Nandini's horse who may be had helped them to escape from the forced marriage with Malay ? Bijli is Chandra's horse so like Chandra Nandini they too have fallen in love ?
If Nandini is in any problem she will whisper in Badal's ears who then may go to Chandra or may be Bijli who will then go to Chandra ?
Please explain this part

Yep. Both your guesses are 100% right.

I love this type of love declarations
They have a special touch in them

Me too !!!!!! I like such subtle romance. This kinda subtle romance makes one feel "special", and stays longgg after the person leaves you...

But how will Nand know the keys are missing ?
He is absconding right ?
He has not visited them for a long time

Nand is not absonding. He is in Prison, under Chandra's custody. He was captured two months back. It was given in the Prologue.

I wish to see more of Chandra and Badal flashback scenes
how they got to know each other

Thought of putting Chan-Nan romance as a separate chapter. Post kidnap wala sequence. That time i will cover Badal-Chandra and Badal-Bijli also.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#226

I really feel Nandini should keep some things to herself

Some things should just be between them two

Thanks for taking my choice into consideration 😊

Such women should wear tiger nails

So that if any one tries to rape them they would just claw out their eyes

But I do understand the situation

Things really are the same even now

Just instead of kings and princes it is ministers and their sons

I would love to see him pound Malay and Asur that way 😆

For some time he had forgotten that Lopa was there too

Subtle romance is so ethereal and heavenly

Sorry yes Nand is in prison then how will he know the keys are missing ?

Oh wow that means it will be a flash back

Would love to read more about Chandra Badal and Badal Bijli

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AshtaVasus

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Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Such women should wear tiger nails
So that if any one tries to rape them they would just claw out their eyes
But I do understand the situation
Things really are the same even now
Just instead of kings and princes it is ministers and their sons

I know... But those days, people saw children as children. Today they see them also as entertaining toys. Now that's really frustrating 😡

Sorry yes Nand is in prison then how will he know the keys are missing ?

Patience, dearie 😛