RAINA-tere mere dil ka rishta... - Page 2

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Nice concept, continue soon

Originally posted by: MANNNAYAK

Awesome concept
will love to read more 😊

Heyaa peeps m back again with the continuation of introduction and character sketch...

Aalekh Sharma (Arjun Bijlani)

A very cool dude...best friend of naina...treats her like sister but at the same time her friend also...best friend...she can share any gossip...anything with him...younger bro of Aakash and is a model in "RV Fashions...but presently in paris for modelling...is an orphan but naina is his family apart from Aakash...respects Rajveer alot...

Aakash Sharma (Ankur Nayyar)

Bestest friend of Rajveer...or can say now only true friend of Rajveer apart from his jiju Rishabh...a business tycoon...but spends most of his time in abroad...but both Rajveer and Aakash talks on daily basis...he cannot hide anything from him...they can share each n every secrets...his only family is Rajveer and his younger bro Aalekh...as his parents died in a plane crash...

Pooja Ghai (Ghazal Rai)

Classmate and a very good friend of Naina...belongs to a reputed family...is least interested in fashion but in fine arts...loves to spend time with Naina...has a secret crush on Ali,her classmate and very good in academics...knows aalekh and good friend of his...

Ali Beigh (Harshad chopra)

Classmate of naina and a very good and caring friend of her...has a crush on pooja but denies infront of everybody...a scholar guy infront of everyone but only his friends know tht how mastikhor also he is...loves to tease naina...also he knows aalekh and his friend...all credits to naina...

Amardeep Hooda (Vikas Mankatla)

Flirtious boy...who flirt wid every girl of college...can only hear naina and his mummyji...openly confesses his love for naina...but now know tht it is just infatuation...respects her alot and never denies her...(rest same as in serial)

Yadhuvansh Sahani (Kunal Karan Kapoor)

Belongs to very rich family...delhi's boy but living in hostel in mumbai...loves his sister only from family...and didn't talk to his parents...wants to prove tht he can do something on his own...fitness freak guy...wid gud sense of fashion...

So guyzz here goes the intro and character sketch next part...it ends here...if any other character will be introduced thn I will update this only...by letting u know...hope u will give ur response to it...and...and...for info about the updates send me buddy request u will get the pm...next update will be part 1...bear with grammatical mistakes...I will try to update as soon as possible...but cant promise anything...as within a day my exams will be going to start so I guess u will get the chapter 1 on or after 1 december...till then happy reading and stay blessed...

Originally posted by: danish1

Please continue with the first chapter soon

Heyaaa all...I m back again to bore uh all wid my stuff...so finally my exams are over now and now m free...but but there remains tension for results too...lets hope for the best...anyways coming to the update...here comes part 1...and I will try to update regularly...I guess on every Saturday...so enjoy the part and do share ur views so tht I can write more better...

Before writing I wanna tell something which will help uh to understand the story better...the plot is in mumbai...so all the places will be of mumbai...but if it changes I will notify...and and I personally didn't live there so kindly avoid if any mistake was found...

PART-1

Graduation day 2017,(NIFT,Mumbai)

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen...welcome to the convocation ceremony of the batch 2014-2018...before starting the ceremony let me tell uh a very important and new tradition of our institute...from last year onwards this tradition started that an overall performance award will be given to one of the student for his/her overall performance from the day one of college...whether in academics or in cultural activities...also attitude towards teachers and classmates will also gonna consider...and this year the award goes to...

A girl in her mid 20's is sitting joining hands...looking towards sky...forcely closed eyes...and chanting something very fast...

Oh god...kanha ji please please please...I want this award...I know I will be the only one but still I pray...please...

And then she opens her hazel black eyes...eyes on which anyone can loose their heart...eyes which can steal anybody's attention...

And...ladies n gentlemen the award goes to...R...

Nainaaa...Nainaa...jldi uth beta...its 9 already...11 baje se class hai tumhari...get up fast bccha...

Offo mamma...aapne fir mera sapna aadha tod diya...kitna acha dream tha...said naina while rubbing her eyes...

And as soon her mother sits on her bed to caress her head...she keeps her head on her mom's lap and closed her eyes again...

Not again naina...utho jaldi...late ho rha hai...abhi tumhe ready bhi hona hai...breakfast karna hai...dreams baad me dekh lena...or ye bed ki kya haalat bna rkhi hai...

As soon the name bed mentioned...naina gets up quickly...bitted her lower lip...and gets in senses...as till now she is in sleepy mood...

Kitni baar kaha hai...bed thik krke soya kr...pr nh...sb yhi rkhke soti hai...laptop...papers...files...phone...novel...bhagwan jaane is ladki ka kya hoga...ek to itni masti krni hai ise...sb chize idhar udhar...fir jb kuch nhi milta hai to pareshan hoti hai...

Naina sees her mother with grinning teeths...

Or ab ye daant dikhana bnd kr...sb bolte hain ldkiyan chize sambhalti hain...pr yha to haal hi alag hai...ek mera beta hai...jo itna samajhdaar hai...or ek ye jhalli...said naina's mom lovingly hitting her forehead...

Pata nhi shaadi ke baad iske sasuraal walo ko kitna tang karegi...sb fir mujhe hi dosh denge...said she while turning her face...wid naina's stuff in her hand to put them in their right place...

Kya mamma...aap bhi subah subah shaadi ki bt kr rhe ho...mjhe nhi krni koi shaadi vaadi...me yhi rahungi aapke pass...

Ha or aapke raajkumar...aapke bete to hain hi devta...sb kaam time pr...pta nh kese kr lete h...

Or unki vjh se mujhe dant padti hai...muttering the last line said naina...

Kya boli...

Kuch nh...kuch bhi to nhi...aap niche chalo...me 5 minutes me ready hokr aati hu...

Ha ha...tere 5 minute mujhe pata hain...not more than 30 minutes naina...its already 9:20...vrna aaj fir late hogi...or mere bete se milna ho to jldi aana...

Oh no...bhai is still here...said naina underbreath and keeping one hand on her waist and other on her forhead...

Bhai gye nhi mamma...

Uski meeting 11 bje hai...to vo aaj late jaega...tu jaldi kr...ready ho jakr...

Yes boss...said naina in dramatic manner...saluting her mom...she entered washroom...

Kya hoga is jhalli ka...with these lines naina's mom stepped out of her room...not before arranging everything of her...

After 20 mins Naina joined everybody on breakfast table

Good morning papa...said naina while side hugging her father...

Good morning...meri jaan...howz the sleep...

Not good...u know what...mamma ne aaj mera sapna fir tod diya...said naina while sitting beside her father...

Are...koi na kl fir dekh lenge...vese nia...(while coming closer to her and her ear)...raat me kitne baje soyi thi...

Vo papa...3 baje...said naina bitting her lower lip...

Janta hi tha mein k kaam pura kiye bina to sone wali hai nhi tu...kaam pura hua vese...

Ha...final hearing aaj hai...

Ohhkk good...vese kewl kaam hi kiya ya chatting bhi chal rhi thi sath me...

Kya papa...aap b...bilkul nh...kaam k time no distraction...

Yeah...good bcchaa...said naina's father while showing his thumbs up...

Ye kya khusur pusur ho rhi hai baap beti me...

Kuch nh mamma...kuch bhi to nhi...said naina resting her chin on her palm...

Kuch nhi mamma...nia firse papa ko butter lga rhi hogi kisi chiz k liye...vese aaj madam ki morning itni jaldi kese ho gyi...

Bhaiii...I was not buttering...or me to roz hi jaldi uth jati hu...

Shal...me late to nh hua hu na...zra time btana kya hua hai...

Enough navi...naina ko cherdna bnd kro...let her eat breakfast...said shalini while coming from kitchen...with a bowl of halwa in her hand...

And naina this is for uh today...ur faviourate suji ka halwa...

Thanks bhabhi...u r love...ek aap or papa hi to mere apne hain...or koi to mujhe pyar hi nhi krta...said naina dramatically...and whiping her fake tears...

Acha bcchu...we don't love uh na...thik hai...me kuch laaya tha tere liye...koi na ab me hi 5 star ka pura packet khatam kr dunga...

Bhaiii...chocolates...aap chocolate laaye mere liye...ohh bhai I love uh...u r the best bhai in the world...me to vo majak me bol rhi thi...ab do chocolates...

Oh...ab bhai b acha ho gya...me hi tujhse pyar nhi krti na bss...thik hai...

Ohhoo mamma...aapse koi kese bina pyar kiya reh skta hai...u r momst lovable mom...I m lucky to have uh...not uh all of uh...love u guyzz...

Bs bs...nautanki ab breakfast kr...fir me tujhe college chord dunga...

Vese mamma...aaj snacks me french fries bnana...said naina grinning...and bhai pehle chocolates to do...

Is ladki ka kuch nh ho sakta hai...me chocolates la rhi hu abi breakfast kar...

Yes boss...said naina giggling...and start eating breakfast...

And the breakfast ended like this only with lots of teasing and pampering...

Bhabhi...halwa was awesome...thankew so mucch...

Its ok naina...my pleasure always to cook for uh...

Vese bhabhi...mujhe yaad aa rha hai...bhai ko bhi suji ka halwa bht pasand hai...to ur pleasure is in cooking for me or bhai...said naina thinking in a dramatic way...

Ofcourse for uh naina...said shalini blushing a little...

And here naveen came up with his car to drop naina college...while bidding bye to their parents...and not before naveen lipsing shalini I love uh and giving a flying kiss to shalini secretly...which didn't go unnoticed by naina...

And now naveen is ready to face his sister as he knows that she had seen him bidding bye to shalini in naveen style...and if naina is the cupid of his love story then she will never leave any chance to tease him...and when it comes to shalini...naveen became speechless everytime...

Chal beta naveen...be ready to face chuhiya...ek br bs iska crush bhi pata pd jaye...fir to ise nhi chodunga...muttered naveen or rather say preparing himself for her teasing...

Bhai...aapne kuch kaha...said naina supressing her laughter...

Hun...ha...nhi...I mean nhi to...mne to kuch bhi nhi kaha...kyu kya hua...

Nhi...kuch nhi...vese bhai ek baat bolu...

To be continued...

So here ends the part 1...I hope u will like it...I did my 100% to write this...but somehow if there remained any loopholes...then forgive me...I m new to writing...and I know I cant create tht magic in raina's story yet I tried my level best...do comment guyzz...to let me know how was it and whether I should continue it or not...if u guyzz didn't liked it thn I will not continue...cuz if there is no proper response then it demoralises me...so do let me know ur views...

So till next update...happy reading and stay blessed...

IMPORTANT NOTE

Hey guyzz...this is something important to say to u all...its being difficult for me to know whether u r liking the story or not...this is my humble request to all my readers to do let me know what do u think about the story...I m getting readers yet m clueless about whether u r liking it or not...its not about just getting readers...its my first time in writing and I know I cant b perfect or good enough...but trust me guyzz I always write with full efforts...and if u guyzz will not tell me thn how can I be sure or I can do amendements in my story...u r free to say anything about the story...atleast I will be able to know ur pov...so please readers do comment...and this time if I will not get atleast 10 comments on first part then I will not update or proceed this story further...hope u will understand...