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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Awesome update
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Beautifully written
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
Hi dear,
Sorry could not read it earlier, was busy in family wedding.
Very well penned, meet aachi thi pur naina's PoV should change.
Update soon can't wait to know what's next.
Take care

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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sridhsc

Hi dear,

Sorry could not read it earlier, was busy in family wedding.
Very well penned, meet aachi thi pur naina's PoV should change.
Update soon can't wait to know what's next.
Take care

no need of sry...
u read n commented that is enough for me
thankew so much for appreciation
her pov will soon change..
yeah will try to update asap...
u too take care...😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Part-8

Inside Rajveer's cabin,RV Fashions

Raj...I want to talk to you...

Ha ha...bol na Aakash kya hua hai...said Rajveer for the first time not making an eye contact...and pretending to be busy with some files...

Raj...dont try to avoid making eye contact...it clearly shows k kuch hua hai...so watch here and leave all your works...now...

Are Aakash hua kya hai...tu itna gusse me kyu hai...maine kuch galat kiya hai kya...

Obviously...tune soch bhi kese liya Raj k aisa ho sakta hai...or me tujhe aisa karne se rokunga bhi nahi...how could u...?? said Aakash in an angry as well as dissappointing tone...

The scene which is going infront of him made Raj so worried...

(Rajveer's monologue)

Are yaarrr...ye to panga ho gaya...ye Aakash to itne me hi naraz ho gaya...or ek mein pagal,jisne itne saare sapne dekh liye the Naina ke sath me...pr ye itna gussa kyu hai...agar ye nahi chahta k me or Naina sath ho...to me aisa kabhi nahi karunga...pyar or dosti dono hi mere liye bohot important hain...pr apne pyar ka izhar karne se pehle hi agar dosti toot jaye...ye me kabhi nahi chahta hun...me pyar k liye apni itni purani dosti ko nhi tod sakta...vo bhi tab jab mujhe ye bhi nahi pata hai k Naina likes me or not...I cant be selfish...me Naina ke baare me kabhi nahi sochunga...lekin sochne me bhi kuch problem hai kya...nahi nahi...ab me Naina se kabhi nahi milunga or na hi kabhi shaadi karunga...ha ye sahi hai...mera pyar bhi safe rahega or dosti bhi...or agar Naina ki shaadi ho bhi jaati hai to agar vo khush hai to me bhi khush hu...kyunki apne pyar ki khushi me hi aapki khushi honi chaiye...or kewl pyar ko paana hi pyar nahi hota hai...pyar ko khush dekhna pyar hai...me ek baar Aakash se baat jarur karunga...agr vo nahi maana tb me soch chuka hun k mujhe kya karna hai...

(End of monologue)

Oye...kaha kho gaya fir se...me itni important baat krne ja rha hu...or janab ko fursat hi nahi hai...pata nhi kis duniya me khoya hua hai...said Aakash while standing up from the couch and clicking his fingers infront of Rajveer's eyes...

Hnnn...haan...kya hua...

Vhi to mein puch raha hun k kya hua hai...me kabse bol raha hu...or The Rajveer singh Shekhawat apni hi duniya me khoye hue hain...sunna hi nahi hai kisi ki unhe to...kese sun sakte hain...kyunki vo kisi ki sunte nahi kewl sunate hain sabko...said Aakash in a very displeasing tone...

Aisa kuch nahi hai yr...me bas ek deal ke baare me sochne laga tha...tu bol na kya important baat hai...I m all ears mister...

Ohoo...all ears...bda aaya...and how dare u to call my sister a deal...

Ab deal ko deal nahi bolunga to or ky...

What sister...konsi behen...kab aai ye...kya bol raha h tu ye...

Dont pretend Raj...I know tu Naina k baare me hi soch raha tha...or me ek baat clear kar du k Naina koi deal nahi hai...

On hearing Naina's name...Rajveer started coughing hard...

Ye lo...yaha me kya sab soch raha tha or ye to naam sunte hi khansne lga...

Listen Raaj...u know very well k mujhe baatein ghuma fira k bolna bilkul pasand nahi hai...I m talking straight forward...jis tarah se aaj tu Naina ko dekh raha tha I m pretty sure that u liked her...or can I say that this is love at first sight bro...??

Taking a deep breath...Rajveer said...I know very well yaarr...that u noticed my odd behaviour...but I was helpless...the time when I saw her downstairs...I was completely lost...and I m definitely admitting the fact that after talking to her a bit and seeing her I felt a connection towards her...to be very honest I dont know whether this is love at first sight or just mere attraction or whatever...the only thing I know is that I will never ever hurt her...and I just want to see happiness on her face...

Tune to emotional kar diya yrr...said Aakash while hugging Rajveer...

Ohhho...bs bs...leave me...I m not interested in u either...

Same here bro...said Aakash with a lil whatever thing...

So back to the topic which we started...

I know this is very early that I started this topic...but I just want to tell u one thing that whatever happens...I am with u always...hmesha...me kabhi tera sath nhi chordne wala hu...tu jab jab galat krega tujhe dantunga bhi...par hmesha tere sath rahunga...and one thing more buddy...if u feel any kind of attraction towards her...then I think u guyzz should meet once again so that u should be sorted about ur feelings...

But but...I want to warn u bro first...that Naina is not like other girls who will fall for your sweet and cheesy gestures...though she pretend that she dont like all this...but I know she likes this...and over all of this she is a state level karate participant also...so beware...and on top of cherry she is not happy with your first impression...

Saale...tu mujhe advice de raha hai ya dara raha hai...or ye kya mtlb hua k vo mere first impression se khush nhi hai...

Hua ye hai janab...k jab aap apne la-la land me doobe hue the tab madam approached for a hand shake...but aap to jane kaha gum the...or use laga that u r such n arrogant businessman jo khudko hi sabkuch samajhta hai...so she is not happy either...

Par ye sb tujhe kese pata...

Aise hi apna bhai nahi bolti hai mujhe vo...said Aakash while eracting his collar...

Ha ha...thk hai ab jyada mt uchal...abhi mera to sb kaam khatam ho gaya hai...to aapki ijazat ho to ghar chalein...everyone is waiting for you...

Bilkul chaliye...me to kabse yhi sunne ka wait kar raha tha...I m very eager to meet aunty uncle and obvio di too...

Ha...kyu nhi honge aap utawale...sblogon k sath milkar mera majak jo udane milega aapko...but I want a favour from you...

Farmaiye...

Ghar par kisi ko bhi Naina ke baare me kuch mt btana...let me first sure about her,then I will myself gonna tell them...

Jesa sarkaar ka hukum...aapka hukm sir aankhon par...said Aakash in a dramatic tone while bowing his head...

Bas kar nautanki...chalein ab...

Han ji bilkul...

Picking up his car keys and coat,both Aakash and Rajveer left the office,heading towards Rajveer's home...

Here other side Aalekh and Naina were also heading towards Naina's house...

In car (Aalekh and Naina)

so howz the surprise...asked Aalekh excitedly...

What surprise...asked Naina while rolling her eyes...agar tu Mr.Shekhawat ki baat kr raha hai...to me pehle hi bta du...bht hi bekaar tha...

Pr tu unse milna chahti thi na...isliye to me tujhe yaha laaya tha...or tujhe vo hi bekaar laga...par kyu...

Seriously Aalekh...u know what mujhe lgta tha k RV ache insaan honge...no matter if he owns such a big fashion house...but I was wrong...

Matlab...

Matlab ye Aalekh k kitna attitude h unme...Oh my god...it doesnt mean that if u own such a big fashion house or uske sath sath aap ache bhi dikhte ho to aap attitude dikhao...

Par hua kya hai...vo to bol...me to pure time vahin pr tha...mne to aisa kuch bhi nahi dekha k Rajveer bhai ne attitude dikhaya ho...

Ab uske liye me kuch nahi kr sakti...u know what when I approached him for hand shake...he didnt responded,or uske baad me hello bole ja rhi hu,dekh bhi nahi rahe the...itnaaa attitude...rakhe vo apna attitude apne pass...

Acha meri chuhiya ab bas kar...kitna gussa karegi...

U know what Aalekh...me na apni life me kabhi us insaan se nahi milung ab...

Acha baba...mt milna...abhi chalkr me aunty uncle se mil lu...ya vo b nahi...we reached home sweetie pie...

Dont call me that...

What sweetie pie...

Aalekh me maarungi tujhe...

Acha aunty k samne maaregi...maar ke dikha...said Aalekh rushing very quickly towards the main door,while exiting the car...

Aalekhhh...tujhe to me baad me dekh lungi...said Naina while screaming...

Dekh lena baad me...mein kahin nahi ja raha hu...abhi chal...said Aalekh keeping one hand on his waist and other on doorbell...

He pressed the bell and...

To be continued...

So my work is done...now ur turn readers...back to work...first enjoy the update and if found anything which u find should be changed then tell me...waiting for ur responses...do comment...

So till next update...happy reading and stay blessed...


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Posted: 7 years ago
#65

PART-9

Naina's house,living room

Namastey aunty...said Aalekh while touching feets of Naina's mother (Nisha) to take her blessings...

Khush rho...bohot khush raho...or aise hi milte raho...

Vese tujhe yaad bhi hai last time tu kb mila tha hum sab se...said Nisha ji while twisting his ears lovingly...

Ouch..Ouch...sorry aunty...aap to jante hi hain...kitna work load increase ho raha hai roz...or fir bhai ki help bhi karni hoti hai...to time hi nahi mil pata...said Aalekh lowering his head and scratching his head...

Ha...bade log...family k liye bhi time nahi h ab to...sahi hai...kya bol sakte hain ab hum...said Nisha ji in a little annoyed tone and facing her back towards Aalekh...just to show her fake anger...

Aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai aunty...family hi to sabkuch hai...I promise abse me regular aapse milunga...is br maaf kr dijiye please...said Aalekh holding his ears and making a puppy face...

While coming forward and turning Nisha ji towards his side he put his arms around her shoulder and said in a very cheesy and flirty tone...

Vese aapko kisi ne ab tak bola ya nahi...k aap gusse me bohot khoobsurat lagti hain...agar uncle ne pehle baazi na maari hoti to aaj aap or me sath hote...beautiful lady...

Chup kar...kuch bhi bolta hai...tujhse to naraz bhi nahi ho sakta hai koi...chal ab bol kya khaega...

Ha aunty bohot bhuk lagi hai...subah se Naina ne kuch khane hi nahi diya...idhar se udhar ghuma rahi hai...

This came as a shock for Naina...as till now she was enjoying the ongoing drama between her bestfriend and mother with Shalini...but as soon as Aalekh took her name she sat straight and ignoring Aalekh she started chatting with Shalini whatever...as she very well know what is coming next...

Ha...mujhe pta hi tha...ye ladki hai hi aisi...Shalini,baccha aaloo k paranthe bnana start kar...me is Naina ki khabar lekr aati hu...

Ji maa...said Shalini suppressing her laughter...as she is also aware of what is going to happen next...

Bhabhi...wait na...me bhi aapki help krvati hu...said Naina completely ignoring her mom...

Bhabhi will not wait for you...aap yaha aaiye devi ji...

Ha mamma...kya hua...said Naina keeping herself busy in phone as no other way is remaining now...

Phone rakhiye pehle apna...

Boliye na mamma...me sun rahi hu...

Snatching her phone from hand...Nisha ji keep it on the table...while Aalekh sat on couch...in relaxed mood...already started enjoying the sight infront of his eyes...

Devi ji aap zara ye batane ka kasht krengi k aapko kabse pata tha Aalekh k aane ke baare mein...

Vo mamma...aaj suba...aaj subah hi btaya isne mujhe...said Naina pointing towards Aalekh...

Bilkul nahi aunty...maine ek week pehle hi bta diya tha...

Folding her hands in front...Nisha ji asked Naina through her eyes...

She first lowered her eyes and while biting her lower lip she says...

Sorry mamma...bhul gyi thi...

Tumhe yaad kya rehta hai Naina...bacchi nahi ho tum ab...aise nahi chalta hai beta...

I know mamma...pr aapko to pata hai na...college k fashion show k liye kitni preparation krni hai or usi vajah se me bhul gyi...I m sorryy...said Naina in a very childish tone...

Thik hai...thik hai...ab rehne de...ja jakr fresh ho ja...or aaja paranthe kha le...mujhe pata hai lunch nahi kiya hai...

Oh I love u mamma...said Naina tightly side hugging her mom...

Han thik hai...bas kr ab...jaa...said Nisha ji irritatingly...Aalekh tu bhi fresh ho jaa...Naveen k kuch kapde hain usse change kar le...mein Shalini ko bolti hu vo de degi...

Mamma mein hi de dungi...bhabhi ko tang mt karo...

Kuch kharab mt karna...

Yes mamma...

With this Nisha ji stepped in kitchen to help Shalini...

Chaliye Aalekh ji...said Naina in a dramatic tone

And as soon as he stepped up...Naina started shouting at him...jyada dimag mt chalaya kr apna...mamma se meri complaint kyu ki...

Ab mere pass hai dimag to me kya karu...tere pass to vo bhi nahi hai...

What do u mean Mr.Aalekh Sharma...said Naina in total angry tone and keeping her both hands on her waist...

I exactly meant the same what u heard Ms.Naina singh Ahluwaliya...said Aalekh putting his hands on either sides of her shoulder...

U mean to say m foolish...me idiot hu..said Naina withdrawing his hands from her shoulder...

Turning Naina towards Naveen's room and keeping his hand on shoulder...he started explaining...

Dekh maine aisa nahi kaha k tu foolish hai or idiot bhi hai...ab tu khud hi bol rahi hai...or tujhe tujhse acha kon jaan sakta hai...its ok Naina...kabhi kabhi sach kadwa hota hai par we have to live with that...said Aalekh in totally explaining tone while entering into Naveen's room...

Again withdrawing his hand from her sholuder she just pushed him towards bed...and she went towards the cupboard to give him some clothes...

Ouch Naina...meri back toot gyi...me ab aunty ko teri shikayat karunga...

Acha hai toot gyi to...yhi hona chaiye tere sath...or mamma ko shikayat karne ke alawa tu kuch kar bhi nahi sakta hai...

Throwing the clothes towards his face...fresh hone ki himmat ho to kar lena or niche aa jana...or so mat jana...lazy to hai hi...said Naina and while saying this she leaves him in the room and stepped towards her room...

Are..Nainnaaa...sun to...chali gyi...pagal...chalo Aalekh bhai...fresh ho jao...and with this...Aalekh made his way towards guest room to get freshen up...

To be continued...

I know firstly I m very late...and now this small update...but I think I have to say this now...I cant promise u that I will make up for this in next update but a thing which u should know is that the updates will be irregular...not once in a month type...but still...so for now thats all...do comment

So till next update...happy reading and stay blessed...

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Awesome update
Love it
Beautiful written
Aalekh and naina's nok jhok is cute
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Beautiful written
Aalekh and naina's nok jhok is cute
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

thankew so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-10

Rajveer's house,dining room

In between munching food from his plate,and some bites in mouth,with very difficulty,Aakash opens his mouth and says,

Aunty (Raksha) bass...I m done...me isse jyada nahi kha sakta,or khaya to mera pet fat jaega...

Chup kar...nahi khaunga bolne wala aaye...apni haalat dekhi hai...ek to itne itne din me milne aata hai...uper se khata bhi nahi hai...kya hoga tera...aise hi raha na to tabiyat kharab ho jani hai teri Akku...

Are aise kese...aapke hote hue mujhe kese kuch ho sakta hai...pr mujhe lagta hai aaj ke liye itna khana bohot hai...ab shaam me bhi to khana hai na...mene or ek bite khaya to shaam me kha bhi nahi paunga...

Chup kar...aise kese nahi khaega...khana padega tujhe...

Calling Ritika,who was instructing workers in kitchen,Raksha says...

Ritika...fridge me se rasmalai le aa to...Akku ki faviourate hai...

Abhi laai mamma...

Decorated with pista and kesar,Ritika brings a bowl full of chilled rasmalai and present it before Aakash...

With pleading eye,Aakash gestures Ritika to ask her mom to stop feeding him...but Ritika is in no mood of helping today...as she is also enjoying Aakash's state...as she is angry on him due to not attending her wedding...

While serving him two pieces...she turns towards her mother and says...

Are mamma...Aakash to meri shaadi me bhi nahi aaya tha...use uski bhi to mithai khani chaiye na...

Are haa...me to bhul hi gyi thi...ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...or de uske bowl me...

With teasing smile...Ritika served him with some more...

Now the only hope is Rajveer think Aakash...who was silently enjoying this and eating his food...

But as soon Aakash see him...he averted his gaze downwards and with extra attention started eating...

As both of them are sitting infront of each other...so under the table Aakash hits his foot with Rajveer's and gestures him through his eyes to save him...

At first Rajveer denies and again started eating but...again Aakash pleaded and this time he thinks to help him...

Mamma...ye kya baat hui...aap kabse Aakash ko hi khila rahe ho...

Me bhi to hu...kisi ko meri tension hi nahi hai...beta thak haar ke office se aaya hai or usko koi puch hi nahi raha hai...or ye janab flight se aaye hain or inki itni khatirdaari ho rahi hai...soch raha hun me bhi thode dino k liye bahr chala jau...kam se kam attention to milega mujhe...

Both Raksha and Ritika both got rooted at their place...they have never seen this side of Rajveer...both were dumbstruck...but then suddenly something hit Ritika's mind...

Mamma...aap Raj ko jakr serve kijiye...me Aakash ko serve krti hu...

Raksha didnt get what her daughter is trying to do...but then Ritika nodes to her and Raksha is now serving Rajveer...same as she was doing with Aakash formerly...

Seeing his plan got reversed...now both the boys are pleading to the ladies...

Ab kya hua Raaj...kabhi humara sath diya nahi or dost ka sath de rahe hain...to ache se hi dijiye...khana bhi khaiye unke sath...

Are di...mne kab mana kiya aapko kisi chiz ke liye...aap bolo to...

Ritu I m sorry naaa...please maaf kr do...me seriously aana chahta tha...pr last moment bohot important meeting me fas gaya...pleeease...sorry...see I m holding my ears also...and by saying this he got up from his chair and approached to hold Ritika's ears...

Ritika hits his palm and says...first go n wash ur hands...and dont try to touch my ears...and in fake anger she left the place...

Ufff is ladki ka gussa...god only knows Rishabh kese jhelta hai ise...muttered Aakash under breath...but but...how is this possible that Ritika didnt heard Rishabh's name...

Dont u dare to say anything about my husband...smjhe...said Ritika turning again towards him and warning by pointing a finger towards him...

Ok maam...I wont...said Aakash like a kid...

U better be...

Acha acha ab bas kro tum dono...jhagda bohot hua...chalo chal kr betho me aati hu...and no jhagda...okkk...

Yes mamma...me to nahi krti hu...aap apne dono ladle beto ko samjhaiye...yhi dono humesha mujhe tang karte hain...

Me sabko bol rahi hun...

Ok mamma...

And the time they got settled in living room,Mr.Raghav along with his son in law Rishabh entered the mansion...

Ohhh...Aakash is here...kisi ne mujhe btaya kyu nahi k Aakash aane wala hai...

Papa hume pata hota tab to hum btate...aapke sahabzaade bhul gye the...

Rajveer...kya hai ye...

Sorry papa...actually mne mamma ko kaha tha...but remind krvana bhul gaya...

Annnhhh...let it be son...ab aa gaya na Aakash...thn forget all...

So Mr.Aakash Sharma...howz all going...

Perfect uncle...sbkuch thik chal raha hai...but above all aapke support k bina ye kabhi possible tha hi nahi...

Aree...that was all past...abi think about ur present and make ur future better...okkk...said Raghav patting Aakash's back...by the way...where is Aalekh...vo aaya hai na tumhre sath...

Ji...vo aaya to hai...abi par uski dost cum sis k sath hai...Naina naam hai uska...aap Mr.Naveen Ahluwaliya ko to jaante hi honge na...usi ki choti behen hai...bohot pyari hai...

And hearing Naina's name gave Rajveer goosebumps and a smile arrived on his lips which didn't go unnoticed by Ritika...

Rajveer...aap kyu itne khush ho rahe hain...aap mile hain kya Naina se...

What...kya di...kuch b bolti hain aap...me kaha milne laga...or me koi khush nahi ho rha hu...me bs sun rha tha...with these words he once glanced towards Aakash and the made himself busy in cellphone...

Aakash smirked and then added...ha Ritu...Raj kaha milega Naina se...kyu Raaj...

Ignoring his words,Rajveer turned towards his mom and said...

Maa...I need some rest...mein room me jaa raha hun...

Thik hai tu jaa...kuch chaiye ho to bta dena...okk...said Ritika lovingly patting his cheek...

Ji maa...Rajveer smiled back and turned to go upstairs but haulted as Raghav stopped him...

Are Raj ruko...aaj itne dino baad sb saath mile hain...chalo sab saath me khaate hain...Raksha table lagva do...

Naaahiii...hum khana nahi khaenge...screamed both Rajveer and Aakash in unison...which made Raksha and Ritika to laugh on their nerves...

Arey...shaanntt...kya hua tum dono ko...ye aajkl k bacche bhi na...kuch khana hi nahi hai inko to...pizza kha liya hoga...ab khana nahi khaenge...

Papa...baat to suniye...

Kya sunu me...chalo tum dono dining room me...

Par papa...

Kyaaa...

Maa aap boliye na...di aap bhi chup khadi hain...aise mt kijiye...

Hum kya bolein Raaj...papa sahi to bol rahe hain...said Ritika suppressing her giggling...

Ritika...kya baat hai bacchaa...

Papa...aap in dono ko chordiye...aap aaiye khana kha lijiye...hum btate hain inhe kya hua hai...

Hum Rishabh ko bula kar laate hain...

As Rishabh was talking to his parents standing in lawn...so Ritika approached him from back only before ensuring that he is not on call with his parents but with some clients...

She hugged him from back and kept her head on his back...

Rishabh got alarmed with this but soon got to know that the person is none other than his beautiful wife...

Hanging up the call...

Ohhh...so finally...is nachiz ki kismat khul gayi...said Rishabh turning towards her and placed his hands on either sides of her waist...reciprocating his actions Ritika tugged her hands behind his neck...

Kya bol rahein hain aap...said Ritika shockingly...

Subah se ab jaakr hum jee bhar k dekh rahein hain aapko...are ab aise nazrein na jhukayein aap...ye hi to hain jo aapke is khoobsurat se chehre me chaar chaand laga deti hain...said Rishabh placing his thumb under her chin to lift her face up as due to shyness she lowered her head...

Are baaap re...Mrs.Khandelwaal pura ek saal hone wala hai humari shaadi ko...or ye kyaa aapka chehra to ekdm strawberry jesa red ho raha hai...someone is blushiiinnggg...

Aap bhi naaa...bs kijiye...said Ritika playfully hiting his chest...

Mamma papa thik hain na...

Ekdam thik hain...apne bete se jyada unhe apne beti ki yaad aa rahi hai...

Ohhh...someone is jealous...

Aisa kuch nahi hai...okkkayy...why would I be jealous...

But I didnt said that you are jealous...it means u r...I know...said Ritika laughing wholeheartedly...

Aap humesha humein tang karti hain...aise kon karta hai...

Hum hain na...humare alawa kon karega...ab ye sab chordiye chaliye...papa aapka wait kar rahe hain...

Chalenge to hum...par aap bhi chaliye...aapne bhi nahi khaya hoga...

Ji hum aapke bina kese kha sakte hain...chaliye ab...said Ritika holding his hands and they entered dining to have their lunch...

To be continued...

I know I know...tooo late update...but what to do...I have had told u already...the time when I will be free I will update...so here is the update...I hope u guyzz will enjoy...believe me I will not leave this story in middle...but updates will be kind of late for sometime...hope u guyz uunderstand

So till next update...happy reading and stay blessed...



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Awesome update
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

thankew soo much,,,i eagerly wait for ur comment after every update...

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