Chandan ka palna - Page 20

The inlaw tug-o-war...

You are still stuck on the "this must be a love scandal thing? Himani lowered her voice

"No... no... nahi Mum

"Hum jaante hain beta, Vibhu ne hamey ishaara diya subah

"He cant keep his mouth shut can he? Bani was F-U-R-I-O-U-S

"That makes the two of you Himani mumbled and walked away as Bani sizzled alone

A daughter-in-law who feels left out/loaded with insecurities and comes up with a conspiracy theory for everything around her.
A MIL who will not take s**t and calls spade a spade(especially when it comes to her daughter)
A FIL who wants the MIL to take it easy and patiently...

Well captured written scene Nisha ! I can sooo picture this happening in the Gupta living room !

Originally posted by: jaschick

The inlaw tug-o-war...

You are still stuck on the "this must be a love scandal thing? Himani lowered her voice

"No... no... nahi Mum

"Hum jaante hain beta, Vibhu ne hamey ishaara diya subah

"He cant keep his mouth shut can he? Bani was F-U-R-I-O-U-S

"That makes the two of you Himani mumbled and walked away as Bani sizzled alone

A daughter-in-law who feels left out/loaded with insecurities and comes up with a conspiracy theory for everything around her.
A MIL who will not take s**t and calls spade a spade(especially when it comes to her daughter)
A FIL who wants the MIL to take it easy and patiently...

Well captured written scene Nisha ! I can sooo picture this happening in the Gupta living room !

Yes this scene and the other scene when the vaidyas were talking about noises and construction renovation happening at their place. Adds so much meat to the narrative. Time and again we get glimpses of how Nisha constructs the scene in her head as if it's happening right in front of her and our eyes. This is why I enjoy being part of this so called timepass'..

Nice hai

Originally posted by: Ashu25

Nice hai

Am enjoying this

I had a blast reading yp all the chapters in one go.

Agla kab Nisha

Good to see you Ashu !

Frog who shall never be kissed

She nagged her mother all day next day to call Vaidyas. She even got home early from work to try and catch Chandan

Himani called Mr Vaidya first then Mrs Vaidya who then found Chandan hiding between two cupboards trying to avoid Gauri and Garima

"Betaaa... unko kyon pareshaan karti hain aap dono? Lakshmi could be heard moaning

"Teeku MAASI? Chandan grabbed the phone from his Dadi and jumped on the nearest bed

"Ghar par kaam chal raha hai, shor bohot hai Lakshmi's tone was apologetic

"Arey koi baat nahi, inki jaan to Chandan mein basti hai, inko baat karni thi Himani gushed

Chandan and Teeku spoke for a good 20 minutes. Teeku doing a face time finally to show him the books she had bought for him in her lunch hour

"Can we read everyday and every night? Chandan asked excitedly

"One book a day?

"No 17, hundred and milliom he said firmly

"Its MILL "say MILL

"MILL

"EE

E

UMMM she said accidentally

He rolled on the floor letting his phone fall off his hands

"u said UMMM

"U said UMMM "See what I can do maasi he said doing somersaults swiftly

"Chandooo

"Chandooo

Chandooo she called

"Your room has big windows she said in awe as the phone lodged between pillow and the headboard, she saw him roll on the alphabet jigsaw mat delirious

"Are you coming today? he asked froma distance

"No... I cant...

"But its good morning

"Its going to be good night she explained

"NOOO... U said mohning sun is owaynj he pointed out the window

"U are going to hit ur head a voice warned the boy

He sat up frozen

"Umm Chandu rubbed his nose vigorously

"Chandooo... meri baat sunen she said urgently

The voice? Walked over and grabbed the phone

HARD AS A ROCK... HARD ROCK... OMFG

He wore the same black tee...

"Did u want to talk to someobody? he asked coolly

"Umm.. NO she said grumpily

"Maasi Chandu hollered

"Can I talk to him? she asked

"U just said no he said silkily.

Chandu came running to where he was

"Can I show her one moh twick?

"Umm

"Chandooo I will see it tomorrow love... Maasi jaayen?

"Are u coming tomaaaro? he made a longish aaa sound for effect

"I will she nodded, her eyes lighting up

"Can I show her a PIKCHOR? Chandan asked

"U can have the phone Harit offered to hand the phone to Chandan

Chandan quickly grabbed a sheet of paper with a green blurb on it and showed it the wrong way in front of the camera

Teeku waved her arm to indicate she couldn't see

He looked on coolly letting the boy figure it out all by himself

He did "I MADE FROGGG he said, a routine accourance in Malviya Nagar when it rained hard

"I love it... awe... I love it... Chandu u are the best artist she cooed

Chandu walked away beaming

"Is that it? Harit asked Avantika

"Yep she said hanging up before him

"

Ooo... she hung up the phone !

OMFG!! She's going to pay with Interest!!! 🤡

wo wo wo...hes not going to be happy with this. her overindulgence in chandooo and her complete neglect of him will soon start irking him.

The voice made a neat entry with the ooh effect!!!! Well!! Who's going to read out the story of a frog prince to her??!! The princess is a little lost here 😊 but the prince is no frog waiting to be kissed 😳 Have a feeling in time she will taught to lower her defences!!!
😆 . He should already be irked!! The setting is getting a little spicier !