Maneet FF JOURNEY CALLED LIFFE - Tr 1 - Compiling all 23 Parts (Old)

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Taahir

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Chapter 6 - 9

Again the way Geet met Dev and Maan meeting Neha both of these couples either fell down on fell on the other but both had intense eyelocks and both these couples shared the same sensation of having shivers run down their bodies

It makes me think again just how simaliar these couples were

Maan is a strict boss actually I adore that in a boss as I always felt one should draw the line in personal and proffessional fronts

yet at the same time he is so kind so caring when it comes to Komal he is her father figure and these few minutes both spend with each other probably lightens their day with happiness

Maan and Geet already getting off on a bad note and now she finds that it would be impossible to tell him about her leaving to fetch Komaal

with Maan now been the owner of Indian Paints as well its an awesome move for his business but this move of his has certainly put Geet in the dog box this would mean there will be days that she'll be late at home and she cannot attend to Komal

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Chapters 10 - 13

Geet been angry and frustrated at her boss writes a letter to Komal's papa and when he reads the letter he is angry at Geet's boss he feels if he sees him he can beat him

at the office paints falls on Geet's clothes and she has to wear denims where she feels uncomfortable

but the moment Maan finds out that she is changing he shouts on her that anyone could walk in but Geet tells him that was the only place for her to change she also tells him that she is unable to fasten her buttons and Maan helps her but this time both feel like thay have felt the first time when Dev fastened Geet's buttons and Maan fastened Neha's button both feel awkward that how could they feel the same and immediately come out of ther past moments

Daadima having a pooja at home and it seems like for some reason Maan was drawn to Geet even she has been searching him with her eyes yet I feel both are still unaware about this

again Maan and Geet taken to past moments when they held the pooja thali but this time Maan burns his palms and he leaves the place while Geet feels guilty for going into the past and not seeing Maan's hand

it has to be extremely difficult for both experiencing together at present what they have already experienced with their loved ones

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Taahir

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Chapters 14 - 19

I'm hooked to this story every chapter is just so Fabulous

at the pooja Geet manages to talk to Maan she didn't hurt him but told him his Daadi and siblings are there wanting to see him happy she tells him every person goes through a bad painful phase in their life but its how they handle themselves to take themselves forward and it reminded me of Vicky speaking to Maan telling him that Neha's soul will be disturbed until he moves forward and marries and I think Geet's words had a way to soothe Maan that he eventually comes down and completes all the rest of the formalities of the pooja

this indeed seemed like the first time when he realizes there is a chance that he has hurt Geet and it was so nice to actually note his quietness at the office and trying to avoid Geet

the highlight for me was Dev and Neha both celebrating their birthday's on the same day with the same gesture to celebrate at the orphage that itself tells that these two people carried a huge heart that is something that I love so yes admiration for both Dev and Neha as both taught their partners the same and till present both Maan and Geet celebrate Neha and Dev's birthday by buying sweets and donating funds to the college while reading this section I just had a thought is Dev and Neha angels that actually came to bring Maan and Geet together

Aahan Gosh I just hated the fact when she danced with Maan , so reading now that Maan actually dropped her was awesome and he did feel terrible while Geet herself could not understand why the tears and it almost seems like they connecting with each other on some level I'm not sure but maybe by soul or heart

the guy that again tries to misbehave with Geet this time gets punched in his nose thats a good one Maan

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapters 20 -23

Again many instances that happen to Maan and Neha happened to Dev and Geet

but I was drawn by the fact that Maan hides Neha's photo while Geet too hides Dev's photo why

and the fact that Maan and Neha made a secret promise while Dev and Geet made a secret promise

Both Maan and Geet confused as too why they thinking about the other why are they not seeing their loved ones in the photo instead they seeing each other and I think this fact scares both of them because its much easier living in past memories instead of moving forward and making new memories

I was awesomely surprised reading that Maan was into the bomd squad but left his career because he could not see fear in Neha's eyes

though Maan lives with Neha's memories at present he wants to ensure Komal and her mother are safe that no problems come to them and he feels that Komal's mum is just adjusting to the new atmosphere and her boss he feels its more like she is forcing herself while in reality he sells Indian Piants just to get away from Geet and when Geet reads the notice she surely must be disappointed that he did not speak to her and she also has Komal , Geet needs her job

please do PM when you update again as I'm loving this story

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: poongs123

Hey Poongs

How are you?

I will be creating a new thread for the new posts. Will be updating in one hour.

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Updated PART 24 here

Thread 2

Edited by Vaidhumom - 8 years ago

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poongs123

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Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hey Poongs

How are you?

I will be creating a new thread for the new posts. Will be updating in one hour.

Hi aka I m sorry I dint see ur msg before ... let me check tat thread

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Thank you all for your encouragement so far for JCL🤗

keeping you informed that I have started compiling GEETIKA as well. Please refresh your memories before I give in new posts. Eagerly waiting for your likes and encouragements.

GEETIKA (Repraising and compiling all 61 parts in one Thread)