Maneet FF JOURNEY CALLED LIFFE - Tr 1 - Compiling all 23 Parts (Old)

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Prerna

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Welcome back di
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khwaishfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

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thanks 4 reposting! superb fab updates! well written! Loved the flow of the story! Maan lost his fiancee and Geet her husband! Geet has a daughter Komal! Maan saves Koamal! he bonds with Komal! he is happy wen she calls his Papa! Geet allows Maan 2 meet Komal! liked the letters btwn Komal's papa n Komal's mama! bt Maan n Geet meet unaware that Komal knows Maan! Geet works at Indian Paints! Maan took over the company! Geet invited to KM! Dadi likes Geet 4 Maan! so Dev n Neha born on the same day! Maaneet at the orphanage! they were gng 2 b introduced bt Geet had 2 leave thanks 2 Maan! Maan was in the bomb squad bt left 4 Neha! dadi gets 2 knw more Komal! she is upset as she wants Geet as Maan's wife! Dadi unaware Komal is a child! Maan n Geet r falling 4 each other! Geet j seeing Maan with Ahana! she is confused abt her actions! Maaneet decides 2 stay away frm each other! Maan is selling IP! Geet angry! update soon!

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Prologue and Character Sketch is very Intriguing and Captivating

Geet married Dev while Maan had to marry Neha

and both Dev and Neha lost their lives in a plane crash causing

Maan and Geet to live their lives without their loved ones

Maan still has his family while Geet did not have her family or her in laws by her side

will start reading from chapter 1 tomorrow

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its_me

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Once again welcome back dear

Reread all the parts one more time...

please continue soon...

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Sheetalvasa

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Welcome back!

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: khwaishfan
thanks 4 reposting! superb fab updates! well written! Loved the flow of the story! Maan lost his fiancee and Geet her husband! Geet has a daughter Komal! Maan saves Koamal! he bonds with Komal! he is happy wen she calls his Papa! Geet allows Maan 2 meet Komal! liked the letters btwn Komal's papa n Komal's mama! bt Maan n Geet meet unaware that Komal knows Maan! Geet works at Indian Paints! Maan took over the company! Geet invited to KM! Dadi likes Geet 4 Maan! so Dev n Neha born on the same day! Maaneet at the orphanage! they were gng 2 b introduced bt Geet had 2 leave thanks 2 Maan! Maan was in the bomb squad bt left 4 Neha! dadi gets 2 knw more Komal! she is upset as she wants Geet as Maan's wife! Dadi unaware Komal is a child! Maan n Geet r falling 4 each other! Geet j seeing Maan with Ahana! she is confused abt her actions! Maaneet decides 2 stay away frm each other! Maan is selling IP! Geet angry! update soon!

You nailed it perfectly . 😊 Thank you for reading it in so much in detail. 😊 . This message clearly proves how much in detail you have read my FF. 🤗

will update in a day or two. 😳

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Parts 1 - 3

Excellents Chapters

Its sad that both Maan and Geet have to live life without their loved ones

I had thought that Geet and Dev were recently married but Geet has a daughter already

Maan's Daadima wants him to maove ahead in life but I suppose its difficult when you truly

love someone he feels he cannot give Neha's place to anyone at the same time he does not like

thinking about the past but there is always moments or incidents that take him back to his past

both Maan and Geet's present and past are so fimiliar filled with pain and lonliness yet there was

a time when love filled their lives

Maan seems to be very much attracted towards Komaal maybe her childlike innocence brings a certain happiness and craving for this happiness that he finds he wants to spend time with the little girl

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: taahir004
Parts 1 - 3

Excellents Chapters

Its sad that both Maan and Geet have to live life without their loved ones
I had thought that Geet and Dev were recently married but Geet has a daughter already
Maan's Daadima wants him to maove ahead in life but I suppose its difficult when you truly
love someone he feels he cannot give Neha's place to anyone at the same time he does not like
thinking about the past but there is always moments or incidents that take him back to his past
both Maan and Geet's present and past are so fimiliar filled with pain and lonliness yet there was
a time when love filled their lives
Maan seems to be very much attracted towards Komaal maybe her childlike innocence brings a certain happiness and craving for this happiness that he finds he wants to spend time with the little girl

Thank you for your wonderful comments and posting it in so detail.

To answer your this comment below...Yes...you read it right👍🏼. That's a key to the story and keep thinking 😉

I had thought that Geet and Dev were recently married but Geet has a daughter already

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poongs123

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wow aka I also happy to see u after so many years :) eagerly waiting

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

Hey Poongs...Believe me..I really missed you so much..wondering if I get to see you again here. So glad my dear. I have some company to recherish my GEETIKA. will be repraising it in next 2 days.

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Taahir

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chapters 4 & 5

Simply Amazing

Geet has told Komaal whenever her father appears before her he'll take her up in his arms and kiss her and that's the reason Komaal had referred to Maan as papa

after hearing from the headmistress that Komaal's mum is in agreement he can visit Komaal , Maan was very happy he decides to give Komaal's mum a greeting card but at the same time thinks he last had send one for Neha though this is different one so he decides to go ahead on the other hand Geet was amazed that firstly Komaal has a box of chocolates and her papa has given instructions she should get permission to eat them while Geet too decides to send him a greeting card and she too remembers the last she had a greeting card was from Dev

both Maan and Geet's past is very fimiliar and both still living in pain now its only Komaal that gives both happiness