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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#841

Shruthi sure...more Detail comments will come...

btw any chance for any new story here

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Maria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#842

Ditto to what Jaya wrote ... Happy sad moment ... Finally the marriage happen and all the bad guys are caught ... But sad that the story is over ... Though eagerly waiting for book

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Beautiful...

@Beautiful...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#843

Shruthi wowww.

It's just a memorable update. 👏

A. very happy ending for all and as u said murali is the real hero who with his sacrifice brought change in many lives.

Sad it ended but it will always remain in the readers memory always😊

Waiting for the epilogue shruthi.

Edited by Beautiful... - 8 years ago

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shruthiravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#844

Thanks guys for the support. Yaa I too enjoyed writing it and sharing it with you. Currently not planning anything new as I need to edit Seven vows and some other publishing work is there along with analysis of Beyhadh and Rishton ka Chakravyuh.

Between as of RKC is one of the best shows running on TV. So do give it a try. Some impeccable performances.

I do have ideas and when I feel I can take up something I will start surely and of course will inform you all also.

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K.AJAY MANIKANTA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#845

Wow...this update was a pure Bliss and a perfect way to end this beautiful jrny... Especially the questions that were answered for them when they were taking rounds is simply what Seven Vows meant...It meant to show what true love.is and what can u do when u have someone with so much Trust inscribed on u!!!!I.loved the whole description of marriage and was feeling bad that it ended...But this one is a memorable one I have read!!!

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hugsandkisses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#846

I am halfway through the second thread ! So much to process !! Phew !!

Maya is a character which is very intriguing as of now. Need to read more of her . The way she is pretty but hides it and looks ugly reminds me of a show on colors I don't remember the name . She seems very mysterious.

Also the brains of the family is definitely Sridhar . Wow he has a solution to every problem and he thinks two steps ahead always . You know what the best thing about your story is ? Even though there are a zillion problems the evil never win . The good always manages to prove itself in the best legal way silencing the culprit . I really like the positivity which can be taken from the story.

Also loving the way you made Suman achieve profession success , she started as a dance teacher for Nami but her talent had taken her to Delhi . It does not matter if you do any job big or small. Reminds me of three idiots dialogue kamyabi jhak Mar ke aayegi. It is very apt in this situation. I don't know what is in the rest of the story but am hopeful that Suman will be given a chance to study .Im obviously curious to all the Kundali mystery. What is the big secret ?

Coming to maheshwari . Ufff what a strong character u have etched ! She is impeccable . Cannot believe she is so supportive and open minded even though she must easily be born in the 1950 s . Seriously when she came to know that it was sreedhar s kundli which was matched with suman she has absolutely no problem s in thinking of a future for them together . I never expected that she could do it . There is a freshness and simplicity to this story that tugs at your heart. If you publish it , I would love to own a paper back copy.

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shruthiravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#847

@hugsandkisses yes MV is born before independance, but she comes from a freedom fighter's family. Those freedom fighters who started many progressive thoughts in India which was later submerged by our own netas. In a way through Maheswari I am giving a tribute to them and their high ideals and the dreams they had for the free India. You will understand the roots of Maheswari's thoughts as story progresses.

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Vdvisa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#848

Wow what a beautiful end to the long journey of Sree and Suman. The seven vows they took in secrecy at the beginning is now happening again but with their hearts knowing what they were getting into and with everyone's blessings. Happily ever after 👍🏼 just as I am happy to see them and the family so happy I am equally sad knowing I will miss the characters. Hoping you start your next soon.