Seven Vows Part 4- Part Epilogue updated page 110 - Page 87

Yes Jaya after my editing and my own correction of grammar, I will take your help.

Wow I just loved your epilogue Shruthi 👍🏼 just beautiful ventures and the next generation is also following the path paved by elders. Hats off to you such a beautiful story more like the characters came to life and I was living with them. Thank you for such an experience.

And the author's note wah!!! How you conceived and how the navadurga can be visualized is simply awesome.

Best wishes for the book. Waiting for it.

@visa if we show good things by actions kids will follow, many times only dialogues happens.

Congratulations Shruthi. loved the way u ended on a positive note... All the best to publication work

Hai shruthi.

As expected it was a bang on ending with message inscribed beautifully...Instead of being preachy the characters thru out the story have done in actions and that's the main USP of this story...I adore each and every character of the story but MV Sudhir Vindhya takes my first preference...MV as everyone is an inspiration and torch bearer for modernization...Sudhir I am Spellbound by his intelligence and smartness...Vindhya lights up the environment and I absolutely enjoyed Sudhir Vindhya romance also...SreeMan r at a different level and they r couple goals...Maya needs a special mention and Sudeepta too...Poorni is relatable and intellectual as well...Rest all characters r etched perfectly...and of course I also adore the intelligence of Prathana Devi...She is perfect takkar to every hero of the stroy!!!Mahant gave the required creeps all thru out and so are his allies...As u know I started lately and has done Binge reading the story was crisp and to the point as I felt..later on when I started daily updates it felt a bit dragged especially this fourth thread where Murali murder mystery was revealed...Again its my POV and may be due to binge reading effect I might have felt it so...As I told earlier some dialogues of Poorni nd Vishu did seem over matured for their age for me in first thread and some parts before Jodhpur trip had over detailing...This was my honest review and I hope it doesn't dampen ur spirit..once again thanks for a beautiful story and I can't wait to hold the book...All d best for publishing and waiting for u next story!!!!Love & Peace!!!

@ajay thanks a lot for telling the points. See if you look I wrote Seven Vows as it came to my mind. I only used to check once when I finish the chapter, because I was working in a hectic schedule to give update. I very well know lot of detailing can be cut. And I am telling to everyone the book will be half the size of what is published here 😆😆. Sometimes you will miss the detailing 😃.

Can you tell me if Maya s character is inspired by Jennifer or it was always a part of your story ?

😆😆😆Was wondering when Shekar and co are going to ask Sreedhar about Jagratha 😆😆 and poor Sree toh sharam se pani pani 😉😉.. when his brothers too added making fun of him.. finally Suman became Sreedhar's Sree officially