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Posted: 8 years ago
So the first step has been done... will sudeepta get revealed? Will Gayatri be married off before her tauji comes?
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Ria so many questions. yes there are couple of twists more before everything is sorted out.
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Posted: 8 years ago
yes Shruthi waiting for all the answers to be known... Will u be updating today ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Suman and Sree could finally take a sigh of relief with respect to her father .. One major hurdle is removed finally and for sure there will be more as Mahant and creeps cannot be quiet.. Hope Gayathri is all ok.. uff wish somehow Dinakarji comes back early than planned 😕
prathana lol is still wondering about "S" wish she don't decipher it as sudeepta
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shruthi here you go on my inputs for the last few chapters. Mata Gowri mandir episode where Sree gets bombarded with negative comments first time I didn't understand why would he be called reason behind Murali's death had to reread the few chapters following and come back agin to this. It was simply heart warming when Suman sits with MV to understand her pov when her sons are mad at her. And MV's fear when it strike did he already marry is also so natural.

When Sree accepts the fact that they had married two years ago to MV and family I had thought it will strike to Vindhya or MV that the stipulated two to three years of hardships is almost over and Sree has been fighting the system. But except Dinakaran ji who is missing that piece of he already being married but understands the second part of it, is there something coming up in later episodes that family will understand this and be at peace as well?

Now it is Suman in the front of the battle. And I like her clarity in thoughts. Her argument in the fair was awesome and fireworks everywhere. One thing I felt here was she states Sree as her love, but only the family knows this and not the public so maybe it could have been more restrained.

The doctor coming to Varma household was also a nice piece of missing puzzle from the earlier interaction. Beautiful!!!

Now the whole vanarsena is behind with gautam and kailash along with Aleena!!!

Virender's realization was well written. The slow change and his need and still his ego intact. And Bhavani a typical housewife reminds me of mothers' generation where everyone were fighting from within or very submissive but never lets go of the husband outside the family.

Mahant and gang though they know the results now cannot stop since their ego cannot take that. Too bad how low people can go to.

I liked the idea of deep dan too. It is better to fight from the front rather than shutting ourselves inside a shell. Just shows the confidence on being on the right side and speaks volumes by itself.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Guys I have finished the first cut editing of Seven Vows. Since it is going for publishing I am removing the climax portion from IF. It will be available in wattpad for another month.You can search it there under the user name shruthiravi13

Edited by shruthiravi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Guys couldnt post yesterday due to network issues.
@visa the attack on Sree was supposed to be surprise for readers and then slowly as they reach home for them to understand what is the truth. It is related to horoscope. But still I will check the flow in the chapters.
Coming to Suman addressing Sree as her love, I was thinking how to represent that relation. Because everyone knows the changed dynamics. And she has to address that relation. He cannot be her devar, he is not her husband yet in front of the world. Fiancee is not a term used in those days. That's why I used love as i want to drive the point that Suman is emphasizing again and again the Varma's have not forced the marriage on her. She has accepted the relation.
But yes instead of love I can use respect and the relation can be defined as a friend, which as far as society is concerned blossoms into love.
Visa there is a question on why Suman and Sree has to take this hardship as their marriage was not at all an issue if Sree had told his parents. More than the troubles of they are already married, it is the larger plan of whatever you want to call it Goddess, Prakriti, Destiny, what was it trying to achieve. Because that is MVs moot question. She always had the instinct of something is not right about Murali-Suman, still it happened.
Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shruthi, yes it is a tricky part on how to convey that she willingly agreed for the wedding and it wasn't forced. Respectable friend seems a good option.

One more place I forgot to ask Shruthi, when Sree confesses to MV, there is a portion which states the events that followed confirms that what happened was marriage and Suman blushes. So did MV take it as they had not crossed limits and felt happy or otherwise?

Also I will reread the Sree attack episodes to make sure I didn't miss something in eagerness to read the upcoming episodes
Edited by Vdvisa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very interesting update today Shruthi. So this was the one that crossed Suman's mind couple days ago 👍🏼 glad this helps them be ahead of the Mahant and co's plans
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Posted: 8 years ago
shruti how could they zero down on Mahant and co? For all I know, they have no proof on who are all the allays of Mahant and also does that lorry belong to Mahant?
Please Shruti, in the hurry to conclude, please don't make it haste. Let them express their doubts to Kailash and let him get his hands on the culprit. Suman having doubts is understandable but not zero Downing on Mahant.
Sorry if I am a bit nagging but i don't like the fine story to staggered in the end

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