New AR OS Gallery By Tani---If Tomorrow Comes PartB UPDATED - Page 5

Originally posted by: megbans

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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">i was so amamzing eriously havt to tell you...</font>

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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">it was your best story so far...and m totally bowled with it...</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">i mean kya story plot hai..kya way of writing hai...</font>

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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">and AR moments..seperation n the song in between clearly depicts their emotions...</font>

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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">its just great...</font>

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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">i really loved it...</font>

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<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#0000ff">love u for writing such a beautiful OS...</font>

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Thank You Megs<3
I am so happy you liked it :D
I love you too girl

Taniii

Hellooo Mam,
hope You are doing well..
Aur I am actually Surprised..
You Broke Record Itna Jaldi Update..
I thought It'll Take You atleast 1 & Half Month.. Lol

Ok Now Some Serious Talk About both Updates..
Even If There Were Some Loop Holes your Writing Made It Perfect..
Now You'll Think Which LoopHoles I am Talking..

achcha Chalo Pehle Yai Bolti Hoon What I Find NOt Good ..
Kyuki Pehle Burra Bolke Fir Achcha Bolne se Mood Wapass Achcha Hoga :p..

Only thing Which I find bit Wierd The Way Ridhima Behaved..
In first Update You Showed She Is Famous Actress that Meant She Is Strong..
Achcha Chalo maanna Abhi Blacked Mailed and For The Sake of Love for Armaan She Agreed To do all. .
But Yaar PHYSICAL ABUSE..
sorry But I can't Stand PHYSICAL ABUSE..
how she Let Abhi To Hit Her..
Itna Weak Wo Bi From Glam World.. Can't Digest..
Chalo Maanna Abhi was Phyco..
But She Need To Know How to Keep Him at a Distance When It comes To Physical Violence..
Being a Wife Of Celebrity and Celebrity herself She can't Stand for Herself.. Burra Laga..
You Made Her Weak AFTER having Such Position...

In short I Am Totally Against What You Showed about Physical Abuse..

But Fir PRITUSHI BENERJI AND JIYA KHAN jaese Celebs Yaad aate hai..
To Mere Pass words Nahi Rehte..
Aese Glam Duniya mai Bi Lakiya Safe nahi hai..
Sab Dikhawaa Hai..

But Yaar In Fiction atleast Inko Strong to dikhaana chahiye na..
I Hope You Got want I Want to Say..

Now The Good Points..
Deekho Bad Point 1 hi hai..
But The Good, wait and Check YourSelf..

The Best 2 Scene were
ELEVATOR SCENE.. i wished So Badly That Armaan Understand Her Unsaid Words..
But Alas!
It Was so Touching and Emotional ..
The way He Soothes Her All Pain and Assured Her, I am Here.. I was BEGGING in HEART please Smjhlo Unkahe ILFAAZ..

And next Best Scene Ofcourse Face Off Between AR at Night..
Haayyaa Kya Scene Tha..
Loved It..
Especailly When Armaan Again And Again said So You Don't Love Me..
Ishhh..
And Then Photo Hi Jala Diya..
Photo to Jala Hi Jala Haath Bi Gaya..
And Then when Both Sat Down On Floor..
And Ridhima Na Pata Nahi Itni Ziddi Kyu hai..
Chalo Sab Sort Out Ho Gay Gaya AR mai..

And Thank You Us Abhi Ko 2 Thappad Dene ke liye.. That Physo Deserves Much More..

But yai Khatam Kyu Huwi aese..
I Never thought it will end Like this..

Chalo It Is Your Imagination So You Know Better Then Me How To End..
I am Only Reader.. Writers Ke Dil ka Mijaz se Hum kaese Wakif Honge..

Chalo Buhat Huwa.. Mai Thak Gayi Ab...
So Bye
and Come Back Jaldi Jaldi with another Piece Of Work..

Loads Of Love..

Originally posted by: tanyaarora2912

Taniii

I have read this stry like 10 to 15 times already specially part B

N mind you i m doing this in my break time from studies.

Sometimes I feel guilty about it.

But I knw its ok I guess u should always listen to your heart.

Chalo lets start from the starting of the part.

I ws nt expecting this fr sure and bam my heart sank after reading it.

But tge way you described arman's reaction I ws aweeeddd by it.

Then that flashback ; I wanted to cry coz of armaan's career she was doing this. Such courage are rare and that ws just beautifully penned.

1 long month of sadness and despair from both sides comes the meeting in the lift.

That scene stole the show.

Best best till now I must say you are growing as a writer and your imagination is on point always.

And the length ws amazing<3

After the humiliation that armaan felt but he ws still trying to figure out the situation. I ws dancing ki ab kuch na kuch toh hoga mast sa.

Then when we overheard the conversation of bodyguard I ws overwhelmed hehe ;)

Last but nt the least when they met I just lurrrveee every evry every bits and pieces of it.

Then jb abhi ka sach bahar aane ke baad jo 2 slap padeee maza aa gya..

I seriously want tum epilougue do iskaa plz

I request.

But I understand if you don't want to coz stry is beautiful in its own way.

Chalo nw bahut bol liya kuch miss hua point or phir yaad aaya toh I wll definately let you knw

Tanyaaa...do you know that I have read your comments 10-15 times!
I absolutely love your comments I always tell you that and I am sure I don't need to tell you how much they mean to me!
I am so happy you loved te part! *mehnat safal ho gayi ;)"
And about the epilogue I really don't have that in mind now but kya pata kabhi futur mein kuch a jaye ;)
Chalo ab bas hua mera bak bak nahi to you know I can go on and on! So abhi ke liye bye! And thank you once again

Beautiful update dear... Love AR so much!

Originally posted by: Mpakeez

Hellooo Mam,
hope You are doing well..
Aur I am actually Surprised..
You Broke Record Itna Jaldi Update..
I thought It'll Take You atleast 1 & Half Month.. Lol

Ok Now Some Serious Talk About both Updates..
Even If There Were Some Loop Holes your Writing Made It Perfect..
Now You'll Think Which LoopHoles I am Talking..

achcha Chalo Pehle Yai Bolti Hoon What I Find NOt Good ..
Kyuki Pehle Burra Bolke Fir Achcha Bolne se Mood Wapass Achcha Hoga :p..

Only thing Which I find bit Wierd The Way Ridhima Behaved..
In first Update You Showed She Is Famous Actress that Meant She Is Strong..
Achcha Chalo maanna Abhi Blacked Mailed and For The Sake of Love for Armaan She Agreed To do all. .
But Yaar PHYSICAL ABUSE..
sorry But I can't Stand PHYSICAL ABUSE..
how she Let Abhi To Hit Her..
Itna Weak Wo Bi From Glam World.. Can't Digest..
Chalo Maanna Abhi was Phyco..
But She Need To Know How to Keep Him at a Distance When It comes To Physical Violence..
Being a Wife Of Celebrity and Celebrity herself She can't Stand for Herself.. Burra Laga..
You Made Her Weak AFTER having Such Position...

In short I Am Totally Against What You Showed about Physical Abuse..

But Fir PRITUSHI BENERJI AND JIYA KHAN jaese Celebs Yaad aate hai..
To Mere Pass words Nahi Rehte..
Aese Glam Duniya mai Bi Lakiya Safe nahi hai..
Sab Dikhawaa Hai..

But Yaar In Fiction atleast Inko Strong to dikhaana chahiye na..
I Hope You Got want I Want to Say..

Now The Good Points..
Deekho Bad Point 1 hi hai..
But The Good, wait and Check YourSelf..

The Best 2 Scene were
ELEVATOR SCENE.. i wished So Badly That Armaan Understand Her Unsaid Words..
But Alas!
It Was so Touching and Emotional ..
The way He Soothes Her All Pain and Assured Her, I am Here.. I was BEGGING in HEART please Smjhlo Unkahe ILFAAZ..

And next Best Scene Ofcourse Face Off Between AR at Night..
Haayyaa Kya Scene Tha..
Loved It..
Especailly When Armaan Again And Again said So You Don't Love Me..
Ishhh..
And Then Photo Hi Jala Diya..
Photo to Jala Hi Jala Haath Bi Gaya..
And Then when Both Sat Down On Floor..
And Ridhima Na Pata Nahi Itni Ziddi Kyu hai..
Chalo Sab Sort Out Ho Gay Gaya AR mai..

And Thank You Us Abhi Ko 2 Thappad Dene ke liye.. That Physo Deserves Much More..

But yai Khatam Kyu Huwi aese..
I Never thought it will end Like this..

Chalo It Is Your Imagination So You Know Better Then Me How To End..
I am Only Reader.. Writers Ke Dil ka Mijaz se Hum kaese Wakif Honge..

Chalo Buhat Huwa.. Mai Thak Gayi Ab...
So Bye
and Come Back Jaldi Jaldi with another Piece Of Work..

Loads Of Love..

Hello!!!i am good...how are you ?
And haina I broke my own record Na even I am shocked actually but since I won't be updating for a long time now I said chalo let's finish this ;)

Now coming to the point, thank you so much for the honest feedback I genuinely appreciated it and I am so happy you were honest :)
And of course tarref ke liye bhi thank you ji<3
Thank you again, bye! Take care :)

Originally posted by: phoo_honey

Beautiful update dear... Love AR so much!

Poor Riddhima had to go through every thing, so brutally...Just to protect Armaan. I wish she was able to tell Armaan from the beginning...but that wouldn't have been fun...

Love the separation part, so emotion and upsetting, I was so disheartened to see AR like that...

And the elevator part was another beautiful part that was very touching and emotional.

Love the way you write. Great ending though!

Keep writing...

Thank you sooo muchhh!
I am so so glad that you liked the part and I also appreciate that you like my work! It means a lot :)
Thank you for the kind words :)

please give us an update its been so long since u last updated... please give one sooon

Originally posted by: ...Aayoo...

please give us an update its been so long since u last updated... please give one sooon

Aayu you already know when my next update would be dear <3

Awesome os.love it.keep writing such beautiful os