New AR OS Gallery By Tani---If Tomorrow Comes PartB UPDATED - Page 4

Originally posted by: saniashzadi

Hey dear

Beautiful os ... Loved it thoroughly AR relation is so lovely ... Liked the elevator scene it proved both may live apart bt still understand each other ... nd the way armaan pull out truth from riddhima was sooo touching simply loved it... Please do write more os ... All the best fr ur work

Love

Sania

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

That was really a long and superb update

Loved the way u have written the emotions of armaan n riddhima so beautifully.

Their relationship is soo pure.. though the were apart forsome time bxoz of that idiot abhimanyu modi.

I felt very sad for both of them when riddhima was going n i wanted to beat that modi for beating a woman.

The party n the elevator scene was beautifully written where riddhima was expressing her true emotions infront of armaan. I loved when armaan confronted riddhima abt modi. Finally that evil is out of their life .

I hope u continue writing more stories on Armaan n Riddhima coz u write soo well.

Keep up ur good work dear

Originally posted by: ITSABOUT_DMG

Hey tani

how'z u???

Well This Part had everything...

so Emotional scenes lotsss of accusations ufff

u wrote everyscene beautifully...

especially my fav scene elevator scene

hayye thats the most beautiful sceneof this whole part...

damn this abhi

how dare he torture ridz like that...but loved the scene when armaan slapped him twice with the reasons of him slapping to abhi...it was sooo armaanishhh n asadishhh too...

loved the os alottt

if time permits then please write more ...

love u

take care

Originally posted by: Jennifer_Grover

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Hiii!!!!😃</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"> Now I know that's an overly excited hello but what do I say, I am so glad you updated na. First things first, you made us all wait so long, like ending the part on such a point and then going gayab was so cruel BUT... let me tell you girl, the wait was just totally worth it. I really loved the entire OS...acha since you told me to be honest I will be. I loved PART B BESTTT!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Now see Part A too undoubtedly had some amazing scenes like the career discussion and stuff as I told you na, BUT then it all went a lil pheeka in front of the whole break up scene of Part B. The way you expressed their emotionsss, kudoos to you babes! And elevator scne e toh I dont even have words for it. When she completely ignored him once she gained consciousness, that scene just stole my heart. Like it was a really heartbreaking scene but it was written perfectly. And how he supported her and took care even when he had his heart broken, how his hopes were all raised but then crushed by her the next moment. Though I hate it when it gets all sad sad, (who better than you knows that!)😆But TRUSTTT ME... the entire journey was so beautiful. Their reunion scene was also so wooow. Like finally he came back to her, and bechari Riddhima, damsel in distress! But why fear when Armaan's here na, bas hero ko thodi der lag gayi , but so what, finally he sorted everything was the main point. When it ended I was like, bas itna hi? Like I wanted to read more of it, I mean finally that they were together u know... but I wont complain there, 'cuz I know how dedicatedly you have written the part.b Yes again not to forget you made us wait😛 but you have put in a lot of efforts and written it, so I will be a bit kind here and give you that. Though in a hurry and so much workload you have written a stunning OS samjhi!? , so don't even think it was OK or not so good... it was JUST PERFECT, ok?

I loved the OS and I love you, especially for the dedication, thank you once again for that❤️</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"> Okay ab bas na, kitna you make me write see... you update so late na, then there's so much I have to say after reading such amazing stuff after so long. But chalo I'll cut it "short" yaha pe. Byeee. But this byee only means that I am waiting for the next update of a new OS/ or whatever that you wish... your choice! So you better gear up... Waiting Waiting! 😉</font>

Originally posted by: punamluvshilpa

awesome os tani..yeh abhimanyu ka character bahut hi bura hai.koi aisa kaise kar sakta hai ..riddhima arman ke liye weak ban gayi thi jo usey itna kuch sahna pada. aisa hi hota hai,hum apno ke liye kamjor ho jate hain aur isi ka faida abhimanyu jaise insaan uthata hai...achcha hua ki arman ko sab pata chal gaya aur usne riddhima par trust kiya aur usey wapas le aaya...loved the whole os..its written beautifully...waiting for one more new writing..

love

punam di

Originally posted by: IshaniDeep

nice dear