Restless Heart--THE END pg-42 - Page 19

WOW!!!!!! that was AMAZING, AWESUM!!!!!!! & 222 GUD!!!! 👏 👏
u have a grt talent of writing, every1 here does, i LOVE ur FF's!!!! 😊
especially KPKS!!!! 😃 i hope they get together soon!!!! continue soon!!!
i also think the idea of V-Day is bogus, 1 of my friend broke up with her
boyfriend, today, it was sooo sad!!!! 😭

Originally posted by: mansi1219

hey

love this one as well.. dont kno why i hadnt commented before.. so here it goes. i love the suspense.. it seems like all your ff's are full of it.. nice to know that u will cont. on a regular basis now.. yay... it was a nice valentines special.. aww i hope they get together soon.. i almost cried listening to the lonliness that kripa was going through... wonder how angad coped wit the day..

ur an awesome writer... 👏 👏 ..

luv
mansi

i duno why u never commented either, but im hoping u will from now on!! lolz jk thak you soo much, and lolz...im sry dun cry loniless is a part of life😆thank you soo much and plz keep readin and commenting.

Hey Karishma, I just noticed your sig it says snow day - you also have no school? Its so unfair when I was in school I never had a holiday, but my bro gets it 😡.

Awesome part!!! 👏

You write sooo beautifully! 😊 I loved the way you described nature. Excellent!

In the beginning, I thought you might bring them together for the day or something, but I personally preferred it w/ them being separate. 😃 😃

I will be waiting for your regular updates now. 😊

yeah i had no school yesterday n i cudnt have been happier. dats y i think dis part turned out decent, cuz i wasnt tried after school n had enough time n stuff. well thanx soo much for the comment and im sry for makin ya wait so long.

Originally posted by: ixi-shaj

wow! 👏 that was brilliant. u waited sooo long just for V. day. im angry 😡 u have to update sooner!

well i cant make any promises, but i'll try my best to update sooner from now on. was it that long? it was only like a 2 weeks i think😆

Originally posted by: koolaries4

oh gosh... cant wait... awesome.. oh gosh.. dear angad n kripa... how i hate judaai.

juda hoke bhi!!! lolz sry i luv atif n jal 😆thanx much much much!!!

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Absolutely amazin part... i jus luved it!!!!!!!!!! 😊

thank uuuuu so much. i kinda liked this part too😆

Originally posted by: Numera*

haha yeah valetines day is kinda pointless like y should this one day be the day to tell ppl how u feel lol anyways that was soooo romantic!! totally loved it! so i dont remember somethin, um remember the part where he was like making a mental note to return...did he return, was that the day he came as santa?? and then he just left right so hes not coming back?

lolz yea im not into V-day, i mean...we basically celebrate St.Valentines getting his head chopped off for getting lovers married. 😆lolz but maybe dats jus cuz i didnt have a valentine dis year😆 weel yeah angad did promis to come back, but he was drunk n stuff so the letter proved that he didnt mean what he said n he's pretty much gone for good. the santa thing was before.

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

awww wowww tht was such a superb part!!!! u truly captured the emotions n the moment!!!! wat else can i say??? lol loved the superman bit 😆 😆 😆 but neways great part...n btw i agree with u valentines day is jus a money making day lol but i still like it neways 😃 continue sooon n yea u do deserve the claps👏

awww ur so nice thank you!!!!!! i swear i feel all happy inside reading these comments. n yeah..well i have to have a lil bit of comedy in everyhting

Originally posted by: brainychild92

agree. i dont like valentines day either.. its just too loveyduvey for me.. lol

i loved this part.. but i just hope angad doesnt say, sorry..

i hope they coffess and cant wait for the more frequent updates! cuz this one took too long!

continue esoooooonn

well i didnt know so many ppl agreed with me on V-day. well angad is gone so he cant rly say sry any more and yeah i'll try with more parts since my feb break is next week.

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

hey. dat was such a cute n romantic part. i luved da way you described the moment with such detail and so beautiffully as well. awesme part. cont soon. 😃

thanx so much. i glad u liked it, i tried to make it more of a emotional n spiritual thing rather than a physical things

Originally posted by: erier101

awesome part!! it was so full of emotion, man karishma, ure parts are so powerful i wish i had that talent!! they haev so much meaning, so well-written! i jsut love them!! and i agree with u on valentines day, i belive it to be like every other day, i swear, this year, didnt feel a thing, someone even broke up!! sad!!! well anywways, loved teh part liek always and continue soon 👏

aww u have talent too, and alot of it trust me. n yeah some writers here, i rly envy them for their talent in writing. aww sum1 broke on valentines day?? dats so sad, i dun get why ppl have to do it on dis day i mean, it wudnt kill u to wait a day or do it a day eariler. thanx lots erier!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

WOW!!!!!! that was AMAZING, AWESUM!!!!!!! & 222 GUD!!!! 👏 👏
u have a grt talent of writing, every1 here does, i LOVE ur FF's!!!! 😊
especially KPKS!!!! 😃 i hope they get together soon!!!! continue soon!!!
i also think the idea of V-Day is bogus, 1 of my friend broke up with her
boyfriend, today, it was sooo sad!!!! 😭

oh thank you soo much, thats soo sweet. lolz im sure ur happy theres no vedika in this one😆awww why on valenites days...lolz honestly i kinda laughed wen i first read this...poor guy😆

Thank you all so mcuh!!!! This story is gona be on full role now. we're up to part 12 right..i hoesntly thnk it'll be ending like at the 20th part. i dont want to drag it so i'd rather move with the plot n end it wen i shud. i persoanally really did liek this part, i think its one of my best (and i dont have much to choose from wen it cums to the bestof my work😆) well anyway, thaks again guys. i decided to cont From The Dark after Restless Hart is done..i hoping i finish Restless Heart by early-march.

OOO i jus became i IF Rocker😆

Luv Ya

Karishma***

ya, i am REALLY glad there's no Vedika in this 1!!!!!! 😆
it REALLY was the BEST prt!!! 😃 will miss this FF when it ends!!! 😭


p.s. congo on bcoming an IF-Rocker!!!!! 🤗 🤗

wow i just read all ofd this ff, u r amazing, loved every part and ur Angad and Kripa, both smitten with one another but away from 1 another. 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

ya, i am REALLY glad there's no Vedika in this 1!!!!!! 😆
it REALLY was the BEST prt!!! 😃 will miss this FF when it ends!!! 😭


p.s. congo on bcoming an IF-Rocker!!!!! 🤗 🤗

lolz yes i know your very happy about that.and thanx lolz

great part

thanxxxx

Originally posted by: Iqbaladdict

wow i just read all ofd this ff, u r amazing, loved every part and ur Angad and Kripa, both smitten with one another but away from 1 another. 👏 👏 👏

ohh thank youuu. i hope you keep reading😃

Karishma

"Sahil stop running so much, your going to fall", yelled out Kripa. All day Sahil had been running from sofa to couch to chair to bed to table to floor. Kripa had grown tried of his antics from the morning. Betty was still on leave and Kripa really was tired. It was a cold, windy day in New York. It stopped snowing so, it was either icy, or snow that looked like dirt. And it really wasn't a sight to see. These days to save money the government doesn't clean the roads as well as they used to. The wind outside sounded like it was fighting with it self, if sounded like it was tearing the sky apart.

"Mommy, I can fly", proclaimed Sahil as he jumped off the sofa. "Yes, I know you can…but how about you pretend you can mind peoples minds! Isn't that cooler?", asked Kripa getting a hold of Sahil. "I can read peoples minds?", thought Sahil aloud to himself. Kripa picked Sahil up and sat with him on the sofa. "Yes honey, you can read peoples minds. See that's fun, cool, and safe…you don't have to jump off chairs and give mommy a heart attack to read minds now do you", said Kripa hoping Sahil doesn't pulled about flying stunt.

Sahil thought, he analyzed, he thought again, he observed. For a five year old, Sahil at times acted as if he was Isaac Newton. It made Kripa wonder…her son, the next Isaac Newton. Now there was a thought. As for Sahil, he had finally finished his analyzing on the mind reader offer, and he accepted. "Okay mommy, I'll be a mind reader", decided Sahil. Kripa smiled and kissed her little boy on the cheeks with a big wet one. Just as she was about to leave, Sahil held her hand a made her sit down again. "Mommy, can I read your mind?", asked Sahil. Kripa smiled and said, "Well Sahil you can do a lot of things…the question is may you read my mind". Sahil put his hand on his head. "Uff, mommy! Fine…mommy may I read your mind please", asked Sahil making a face. Kripa laughed, "Why yes you may".

Sahil stared into Kripa's eye's, and chanted words he had just made up. As his look got deeper into Kripa's eye's, the stranger Kripa felt. As if Sahil really was reading her mind. Sahil then smiled at Kripa and said, "Mommy…you have a complicated mind". Kripa raised her eyebrow and put Sahil on her lap. "So, does that mean you cant read my mind Mr. Sahil?", asked Kripa in a challenging tone. "Mommy, the question isn't if I cant read you mind, its will you let me read your mind", said Sahil very intelligently.

"Well, of course I will…you may try again", Kripa said setting Sahil in front of her. This time Sahil didn't gaze into her eye's for 10 whole minute. This time Sahil simply touched Kripa's hand and told her to close her eye's. Kripa did as Sahil told and after a minute or so Sahil asked Kripa to open her eyes.

"So did you read my mind?", asked Kripa pretending to be very anxious.

"Yes mommy, I did read your mind" said Sahil.

"Well, what's in my mind Sahil Kisna Malhotra?", asked Sahil. She used her middle name, which he hated just to tease him a little.

"Mommy! Don't use the ugly name", Sahil demanded putting on a sad and angry face. Kripa laughed a hugged Sahil, or more like squeezed him.

"I'm sorry. Please! Tell my about what I'm thinking", pleaded Kripa putting on her innocent face.

"Okay…but only because I'm a profesnenal", Sahil said fold his arms together.

"It's professional baby, but go on".

Sahil looked at Kripa and smile. " Mommy you miss daddy", said Sahil innocently. Kripa quickly blinked her eye's so the immediate tears wouldn't fall. All her sense came to order. She suddenly heard the wind tearing up the sky, her hands felt frozen cold on the leather sofa even though she was right next to the heater. There was a thump feeling on her head and there was a lump in her throat.

Kripa cleared her head, and throat and spoke to Sahil. "Honey, how about you stick to flying for now. If you begin to read everyone's minds, trust me you'll lose your own", she said in a low pitch. Sahil lowered her head and looked at Kripa. "Don't worry mommy, I wont lose my mind", said Sahil just as he got up to play around the house again. As Kripa watched Sahil run into another room she thought…her son, the first human mind reader. The CIA is going to love that one.

Kripa was in her bedroom resting. These day's she'd been feeling very tired and a little uneasy at the stomach too. She had even vomited once yesterday. It was flu season, so Kripa had obviously caught the flu. She just hoped that Sahil didn't catch it too. Especially with Betty out. Her mother had pneumonia, so Betty was at the hospital with her these days. Kripa prayed that Sahil not catch the flu. She couldn't bear Sahil catching the flu, or enduring any kind of pain at all. Even it was a minor as a fever and upset stomach.

Just as Kripa thought about how important Sahil was to her and how hollow her life would be without her baby boy, she heard a crash coming from the other room. She quickly got up and ran to see Sahil on the floor. "Oh my God! Sahil! What happened!", screamed out Kripa. "I cant fly", cried Sahil. Kripa picked Sahil up and placed him on the bed and checked out his bruises. "Mommy, I'm fine", said Sahil and yet tears were falling from his eye's. Kripa began to cry too, "Where does it hurt sweetie, show mommy where it hurts".

Sahil had some pretty bad bruises on his legs and he scraped his arm. Kripa bandaged him and he them fell asleep. Kripa sat there by her son, her eye's pouring with tears. She was so angry with herself. So angry that she couldn't take care of the one thing she had left in her life. Her Sahil. She thought back to all the people in her life, and how she lost every single one of them. Her parents, her friends, Das, and even Angad. They were all gone and now…even Sahil was hurt.

Kripa went into the balcony for a minute. The world in front of her looked disgusting. It angered her. It was dull, dark, dirty, and pointless. Everyone running after absolutely nothing! No one, including her had any purpose in life. Kripa looked at the dead tree's. AS crazy as it sounded she envied the tree's. Nature had such order…how they would die for the winter, and come back alive in spring. And humans? Although they were called the most intellectual species to date, and yet our lives are simply full of chaos. Kripa heard a sudden noise from behind and quickly turned and suddenly everything became BLACK.

Kripa regained her conscious hearing people talking in a loud pitch. You could tell they were trying to keep it down, but it only made the noise worse. She slowly opened her eye's and closed them again seeing the bright lights hanging over her head. "Welcome Back Mrs. Malhotra", said a lady voice. Kripa slowly open her eye's again. She could easily recognized the person in front of her as a doctor. So she was in a hospital, now the only question was…what the hell was she doing here?

"Mrs. Malhotra you fainted at home", said the doctor.

"It's Ms. Sharma now doctor", corrected Kirpa.

"Oh…I'm sorry", said the doctor. "Well, as I said…you fainted and your maid Ms. Betty Rogers brought you here", added the doctor.

"Oh, where's my son?", asked Kripa suddenly remembering Sahil's injury.

The doctor smile and said, "Betty told me that you'd asked that. Don't worry, Betty is at home with him".

Kripa took a deep breath and closed her eye's again.

"Ms. Sharma, I don't know if this will make you happy or sad but…congratulations. Your pregnant.

To Be Continued…

Comments Please! Hope you guys liked it. And I'm sorry, there's no Angad in this part. But there will be soon. Promise. Well this was the first of the ten concluding parts of this fan-fic.

Karishma****

I KNKEW IT.. when u said she vomitted!! thats excellent news! i am so happy.. angad aka das will be back in her life rite! and 😃

continue soooonnn

OMG, YAY!!! she's PREGNANT!!! 😃
i LOVE Kripa & Sahil's relationship!!! they r soooo CUTE!!! 😊
its getting interesting!!! i cant believe ur ending it!!! 😭
i'll miss this FF!!! 😭 😭
anywazzz, AWESUM prt!!! 👏
continue soon!!! 😃

lol i dont know if that made kripa happy or not but it certainly made me happy lol!!! continue soon!

hmm so interesting awsome whers angad