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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome jus awesome...jus read it i luved it pls do cont soon..
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Posted: 18 years ago
was short... but the wait was long...
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey. i just caught up 2 ur fan fic.its totally awesome. i luv da plot. its really unique n interestin. cont soon. cant wait 4 da nex part. 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
i dnt really read ffs except 4 one here but saw urs so had 2 check it out.i didnt know u wrote.but i dont know why im surprised. have good wording i noticed that on ur posts on kyph section."adam and eve" 😳 great siggi by the way never had the chance 2 tell u.anywyas i ahvent finished reading the whole thing.just 3 parts.and so far its very interesting.keep it up.

-Jessi
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Posted: 18 years ago
Grt part hun!

Lol - really? Small world!! Why did Angad just leave - why are matters of the heart so FREAKINGGG confusing! lolz! Just in general btw not just in ur fanfic!!

continue soon!

Chandini (",)
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Posted: 18 years ago
awww why cudnt it b angad.......n why has he left!!!! n wonder what he said 2 sahil, i hope kripa goes after him or he comes bak soon enuff......its a great part!!!! continue soon!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Numera*

omg lovedddd it!!! continue soon hun!! i really hope kripa finds angad i mean being rich got some advantages lol!

Lolz...I wonder

GRT part!!!!! 👏 👏 i REALLY like the concept of ur new FF!!! 😃
PLEASE continue soon, cant wait for the PASSIONATE part!!!! 😳 😳

thank you. i'll try to do my best with the "passionate" whatever...lolz. 😉 take care. n yeah i kinda like From the Dark too...

great part

thanx love!!

Originally posted by: erier101

awesome part!! thanx for the suspense karishma, last time i could sleep a bit but this time i cant wait for teh passionate part!! 😡 😳 ...lol..torture...i love the concept of your new ff!! lookin forward to that one 👏

lolz well u noe how i love suspense and torturing u all. thats y a write in teh forst place😆 thank you lolz for all the claps. and hope From the Dark gets good response too, i like the concept their too.

Originally posted by: mitali_s

omg omg...amazing part...i am having butterflies in my stomach...u hav to cont soooooooooon 😡 ...cnt w8 for the nxt prt...nite afta divorce!!!!!!!! means wen he came home post accident lol wen did it happened...cnt w8 to know!!!!!!!plz continue 😕

yeah...it was just never mentions before. hehehehehehe...lolz. thanx for the comments

Originally posted by: kaira

great prt 👏 👏 👏

thank uu so mcuh

hey hun my real names Rach😊

hey Rach, im Karishma.😆

Originally posted by: del_geo

Loved the part. did i read passionate somewhere?? 😳 lol. I think Angad said something to Sahil, other wise he wouldn't be so happy after his father leaving him. Can't wait for the next part. continue soon

no u didnt read passionate...u read...ummm....massionate. lolz. yeah im thinkin Sahil knows more then meets the eye too, but then again im not the writer😆 j/k😆..c i forgot to say thank you.

Originally posted by: bhumishah

awesome part cont soon

totally...radical😆 j/k...thanx hun

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome jus awesome...jus read it i luved it pls do cont soon..

oh you just read the whole thing or this part? anywayz..either ways thank you lotz!!!

Originally posted by: koolaries4

was short... but the wait was long...

hey a you really an aries? lolz...yeah im an aquaries. lolz i heard these two signs dont get along😆sry..i jus wanted to share that fact thingy. anywayz sry for the wait, yeah..its just with the regents and ym sweet 16tb and all that, i didnt have time. promis i'll make it up

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

hey. i just caught up 2 ur fan fic.its totally awesome. i luv da plot. its really unique n interestin. cont soon. cant wait 4 da nex part. 😛

oh thank you, yay new reader!!!! thanx, n yeah im trying to make it different..but lolz, im still a love story fan soo..lolz.

Originally posted by: maurader4evr

i dnt really read ffs except 4 one here but saw urs so had 2 check it out.i didnt know u wrote.but i dont know why im surprised. have good wording i noticed that on ur posts on kyph section."adam and eve" 😳 great siggi by the way never had the chance 2 tell u.anywyas i ahvent finished reading the whole thing.just 3 parts.and so far its very interesting.keep it up.

-Jessi

cool, another new reader. thank you, yeah i love this siggy. and well...have fun reading, hope u like it.

Originally posted by: Chandini

Grt part hun!

Lol - really? Small world!! Why did Angad just leave - why are matters of the heart so FREAKINGGG confusing! lolz! Just in general btw not just in ur fanfic!!

continue soon!

Chandini (",)

lolz thanx luv. n yeah..c u talk like her too, well not talk but type😆 yeah..matters of the heart the confusing..i hate guys...well not rly...but ugh.

awww why cudnt it b angad.......n why has he left!!!! n wonder what he said 2 sahil, i hope kripa goes after him or he comes bak soon enuff......its a great part!!!! continue soon!! 👏 👏

lolz...WOW alot of claps!!!!!!!!!!! makes me feel so speacial😆. thanx much much much

Okay Guys👏👏👏 here's three cheers for you guys for being so great. Luv Ya all. Hey dont ya miss Sahil, i miss him. I think i'll add a few cute Sahil parts next time

KArishma




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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 fanfic dude!!
luv it n by da way when r u continuing??
waitin 4 da romantic part n ya miss sahil too he is cute..! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

jst cot up wid ur fan-fic....its mindblasting !!!!

i luvd d story !!!

cont soon !!

Edited by lildude13572003 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
It was Valentines Day night. As Kripa looked out her window while lying in bed reading her novel, she thought it was the perfect night for lovers. The perfect night to celebrate the word called love. The full moon with all its radiance giving light to this dark world. Perhaps pollution in New York had gone on strike because Kripa hadn't ever seen the night sky this clear. The star sparkled from every corner, and there were so many stars that Kripa couldn't tell which star she saw first. The love stories of the past written onto each on every dust of wind that blew telling us all secrets and stories from that time…that time when love was more than just a word. Kripa prayed to God, if there really was a God. She prayed for all the lovers to make the best of this night, she prayed for the lovers to stay put this night, for a night so beautiful, so graceful shall come…never more.

As Kripa's thought drifted from the love stories of the past, it came to a full stop at her own. At first she couldn't understand whether to find her self as being lucky or ill fated that she had two lovers…none of whom are here with her this night. Surprisingly thoughts of Das didn't come to her. Not once did she think about her previous Valentines Day with her husband. It made her feel guilty, it made her feel like she was cheating Das…as if she hadn't done enough of that already. Kripa was alone, Sahil was asleep and even Betty had plans tonight. Here she was with her loneness and her sole friend…the silent wind.

Kripa thought back to that night. It hadn't been the first time she and Angad slept together. This was after their "divorce", after Angad's accident. It was a night never mentioned before. It was their night…as husband and wife. A night she could never forget. Honestly she hadn't remembered what really happened the first time Angad and she had spent the night together…it was more of a blur unfortunately. But this night she remembered perfectly, and the best part of it all was that she hadn't regretted a moment of it.

It was after his accident, it was night Kripa and Sahil had brought him home. Kripa's fear of losing Angad…or of losing Das again, it took the best of her. She let all her guards down, and simply let herself out of this shell she was in for the past year. She finally let these feeling which society named love erupt.

"Here, you lie down", Kripa said slowly helping Angad onto the bed. "Kripa, its just my head…I'm fine", Angad assured Kripa. But he had to admit, he liked the attention and concern he was getting. It was actually turning him on. "So, how are you feeling?", Kripa asked slowly caressing Angad's hair with love and affection. Angad's train of un decent thoughts of him and Kripa ended there as his head banged back onto reality. "My head just hurts a little, that's all", he said holding his temple. Kripa got out a cloth she had soaked in hot water and put it on Angad's forehead, "Don't worry…the doctor said you'd feel a little weak and might get a fever some time tomorrow but besides that, your as fit a superman".

Angad couldn't contain himself any more. He broke out in laughter and held his stomach because it pained as he laughed so much and repeated what Kripa had just said, "As fit as superman. Kripa, I think you've been spending way to much time with Sahil these days". Kripa was embarrassed now. She felt the blood rushing to her cheeks and she blushed and quickly turned the other way, "Okay…yeah it's corny", she said re-soaking the cloth. "I guess…I have been spending a lot of time with Sahil", Kripa said laughing. "I guess I don't have anyone else to spend time with, so I might as well", she added quietly so Angad wouldn't hear. Yet he did hear, and it strangely made him happy.

Kripa got up to put the bowl away when Angad quickly grabbed her arm and pulled her back next to him. "Would you like to spend some time with me?", he whispered to her, slowly touching her back. As Kripa entire body quivered at his one touch, as she felt her heart working double time to pump blood to her brain, as she felt her brain give out, a storm of thought flew through her mind. Most of which didn't make any sense. She thought about her mother, her son, about World War 2, about how to make tiramisu, all of which had nothing to do with her and Angad and this moment.

Kripa gathered her thoughts and got up. Her friend the silent wind was screaming into her ears telling her to turn back, to simply run into Angad's arms and stay there for as long as possible. The wind blew hard and strong, and Kripa saw Angad's face from the mirror. It was begging her to come to him, to be one with him, to love him and let him love her. Everything had just stopped in this one moment where Kripa was standing in front for the door either to leave or to stay. "Kripa", said Angad warily. "Don't say a word Angad", Kripa replied in a low almost silent tone. Kripa slowly turned herself to face Angad and slowly, quietly shut the door behind her. She walked back up to Angad slowly and fell into his. Angad quickly embraced Kripa will all his might, almost squeezing her in his arms. Angad realized that Kripa was a small woman. Angad was able to hug all of Kripa without using all of his arm, and he loved it. She was so small, so delicate…like an angel made of glass. The only thing that was missing was the wings…but tonight Angad was going to teach Kripa how to fly, how to soar upon the sky and reach for all she wanted. Because right now they both knew all the wanted was each other.

Angad moved his mouth towards Kripa's a kissed her with such passion that neither had ever felt before. The earth had just stopped moving and time had just stopped ticking at this one moment…their moment. Kripa threw her hands around his neck and kissed him back. As their feet entangled and their bodies relaxed upon one another, Angad slowly kissed and tear of joy that fell from Kripa's eyes. Kripa kissed Angad down his jaw line as they wrapped their fingers into knots. As night fell upon the sky, and the crickets left their homes to sing to the world, and the moist rain fell outside their window soon was impossible to tell which body was Angad and which was Kripa. Perhaps that's because they now realized that they were one…different bodies but one heart and one soul.

Kripa's walked down memory lane ended there as she heard a bunch of teenagers screaming on top of their lungs, declaring their love for one another.It was sweet, it was cute, it was annoying hoestly. She hoped to Gid her Sahil would be more decent and go upon a hill top miles away from civilization when he declared his love. Or just let his mother pick a girl for him, she liked that idea too. After the noise had ended, Kripa began to re-gather her thoughts. She thought back to the morning after.

As the morning light fell upon Angad's bed, it warmed his entire bear body. He had a light smile of his face and he reached next to him and hold Kripa in his arms. To his surprise their was no one there. Angad quickly got up and looked around the room, and walked to the bathroom to see if she was there. Was it a dream? Did Angad dream of making love to Kripa? It felt damn real to be a dream. Angad walked back to his bed and put on his clothes and he tried to figure out what had happened. Just then the door creaked open and Kripa stepped in with breakfast for Angad.

She set of food on a counter table next to Angad's bed and greeted him good morning like any other day. She then was about to leave when Angad held her hand and stopped her. Talk about dejavu. " Kripa about last night", Angad took a pause after that to see how Kripa reacted but there was nothing. "Angad, I have t go check on Sahil, you rest and eat your breakfast", Kripa said blankly and she literally pulled away from and left the room.


Kripa sat in her room, with her book. Kripa didn't regret that night for a second, but it was the morning she regretted. Oh how she regretted not being next to Angad when he woke up. Not being in his arms. Not hearing the three sacred words from him. Not being able to tell him how much she truly did love him.

Yes, they were one heart ans one soul. One heart that had been broken. Divided into these two bodies. And now here they lived, miles apart with two incomplete, broken hearts.

To Be Continued…

Well I hope you all enjoyed it. Sorry for the delay, but I wanted it to be a Valentines Day Special. Although I firmly don't agree with Valentines Day and I find this day to be moronic but still…anyways I love where the story is going now. I have everything planned, and even the way it ends…so no more delays guys. Trust there to be a lot of updates since my break is coming up.

Karishma****

Edited by Desi Pride - 18 years ago

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