Arshi ff: Beware Mr ASR, Mrs ASR in action *chap 23 uptd 18 December* - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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yes thank god khushi left him... How can he just insult his wife in front of everyone like that?? what does he think of himself didn't he think once about her feelings before doing all that???



I was hoping it would be arnav's and khushi's child or maybe arav. But now I am hoping for a boyfriend wait before hoping for a boyfriend did khushi and arnav divorce?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read all three chapters
Awesome
Love the way kushi and payal are answering
Fb was sad
How can they do this
Plz pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 7

After Arnav, Khushi and Akash left for office, the Raizada ladies sat down in the living room for some chit chat. Sheetal had already went out saying that she has some shopping to do.

Few minutes later, Payal came and sat with them reading some magazine. Nani, Mami and Anjali looked at each other. They didn't know what to do. Should they start a conversation with her or let it be. Nevertheless Anjali decided to include her in the conversation as she didn't want to offend Payal.

Anjali: So Payalji. I heard that you have a chain of seven star hotels. So how is it.

Payal stopped reading the magazine and looked keenly at Anjali. Anjali gulped seeing her intense stare.

Payal (nonchalantly): It is going good.

Anjali (nodding her head): So Payalji, when did you started your business and how was the experience. I've heard that Khushiji started her business eight years back. Did you also started your business at that time?

Payal kept the magazine aside and looked straight at Anjali with narrowed eyes.

Payal: No. We both didn't started our business at the same time. Kuku was always interested in business and...

Anjali(cutting her): Kuku???

Payal: Khushi, we all call her Kuku.

Anjali (frowning): We???

Payal (sternly): Our family. So I was saying that Kuku was always interested in business and fashion designing. So while she was studying in Harwards she started her business there. She was so talented that her business grew soon. Moreover Masaji had a very big business empire and she being the only daughter was the sole heiress of all Agnihotri properties and business. So she was always interested in business.

I on the other hand was not into business much. But later I started liking the idea of a hotel so I started it. But with Kuku's support it was easy. Then once it all started then there was no looking back and now I am here.

Anjali: And modelling. You like modelling.

Payal: It is actually fun. Earlier I used to model for Kuku's designs. Once she introduced me in one of her collections. And it clicked. But now I love the profession. It is simply amazing.

Manorama: Yes, yes, modelling is so much fun. You know I myself has won many beauty contest. If you needs any helpwa. Tell meesh I will help.

Hearing that Payal started laughing loudly.

Payal: Seriously? You know what you are really funny. You will give me beauty tips. You. Have you seen yourself. You look as if you are living and walking makeup kit. You have so much of make up on your face. Oh god, I feel if a small child see you it will surely get afraid. Anyways, no offence, but I really don't want your help. I am an international model. I can't spoil my image by such a horrible sense of fashion and beauty.

Mami fumed hearing her reply. Anjali and Nani, well they were confused. One side they felt bad for Mami but on the other side looking at Mami, they could see how much true her words are, that they felt like laughing. However both somehow managed to control their emotions and stifled their laugh not embarrassing Mami further.

At that time, Anjali's phone rang. Seeing the caller ID her face lit up. Taking the mobile she went a little away and started talking to the person happily. Seeing her happy Nani and Mami smiled while Payal was unaffected.

After talking on the phone, she came back.

Mami: So whose phone was it.

Hearing the question, Anjali shied.
Anjali: Woh.. woh.. Samar ji.

Mami (smiling teasingly): So what was Samar bitwa saying.

Anjali: Woh he has called me to have lunch together.

Mami: So why are you sitting here. Go and get ready and go.

Anjali: But Mamiji how can I go. Who will prepare lunch. Also guests are here. How can I go like that.

Mami: Oh ho Anjali Bitiya why are you worried. I am here na I will prepare lunch. You go. I will take of everything.

Payal was silently hearing their talk all this time. She was smirking mentally hearing that.

Payal: So Miss Raizada, if you don't mind can I ask you something.

Anjali: Of course Payalji. Why are you being so formal. You can ask me anything.

Payal: Who is this Samar. Is he your friend. You know Miss Raizada, I know a few people who used to go behind her family's back to meet their secret boyfriends and husband. I am not saying that you are like that. It's just that when you were saying about going out it just came in my mind.

Anjali gulped hearing her words. It was an indirect taunt. But she knew that she deserved it. It was the bitter truth of her life. She had done it in her life. She had gone behind her family's back for that scumbag and cheated them. Her sins were too big.

Unknowingly all the past started running in front of her eyes. She felt it difficult to stay in the same room. Somehow mumbling that she will go and get ready, she went away from there. But everyone was the unshed tears in her eyes.

Mami was angry at Payal for saying that. But for some reasons she decided to stay quiet. Truth to be told she had nothing to say. Whatever Payal said was true and she couldn't deny it. She was looking at Payal. The time Anjali went being hurt, she saw guilt surfacing in her eyes. But that went away as soon as it came.

She sighed. She can't do anything. She can't side with Anjali this time. Nani was also looking at Payal and Mami. She expected Mami to say something to Payal. But when she kept quiet she was satisfied. Also she decided to answer the question asked by Payal earlier about Samar. Being the member of the family, Payal has a right to know about what is happening in the house.

Nani: No Payal Bitiya. Samar is not Anjali's friend. He is her to be husband. Their marriage talks are going on.

Payal: OK.

Saying that she went away. While walk to her room, Payal thought about the things that happened downstairs. She had knowingly taunted Anjali. But when she saw her tears she felt a bit guilty. But thinking about what she had done, all her guilt went away.

She couldn't forgive Anjali. She is one of the main reason behind all that happened to Khushi and her. She can't forgive Anjali for that.

***************

Sometime later
Mami came to Kitchen for making lunch for everyone. Anjali had gone out sometime before. Payal was in her room and Sheetal has not returned from shopping. So she was left to handle kitchen.

Reaching there she started to take things for making lunch. But soon realized that there is no groceries left. Next moment she came out of kitchen calling for HP. But even after calling for some minutes, HP didn't come. But Payal came out of her room.

Payal: What happened? Why are you calling out for HP.

Mami: Did you see HP. I have been calling him so such a long time but don't know where he went.

Payal: But why are you calling him.

Mami: Woh there is no groceries in home. So I am calling him for getting it from market.

Payal: Oh but he is not at home. I have sent him outside for some work.

Mami: What? You send him outside.

Payal: Ya I had some work with him. So I sent him to do that.

Mami: OK then. Tell him to come and meet me after he come.

Payal: But he won't come before evening.

Mami: What??? Then who will bring groceries.

Payal: That I don't know. Hey wait, I have an idea. Why don't you go to buy groceries. You know these days it is a fashion to go and do simple household things, then filming it and putting it in FB. I have an idea, you go and buy vegetables, I will film, then we can upload it in FB. You know what people will give you likes. Who knows if some director sees and likes, may be he gives you a chance in his new film.

Mami (excitedly): What??? Is it true. Director will give me chance in his film.

Payal: Yes of course. You don't know all these. These days they select new new heroines for movies from Facebook only.

Mami: Then I will now itself go and get ready and come. I will use my new makeup kit also.

Payal: Yes, yes go.

In her excitement, Mami didn't see the smirk plastered on Payal's face.

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After sometime, in Market.

Mami was buying vegetables from a roadside vendor. When Mami suggested that they will go to some mall for buying groceries Payal took her to Chandni Chowk market saying that it will gain her more likes. Also she suggested her to bargain nicely with the vendors so that her skills can be shown in bargaining.

So believing Payal's words, Mami was bargaining loudly with the vendors while Payal was filming it. Finally after buying all the household things, they started going back when Payal suggested that they should go by bus so that they could show her simplicity. Even she made Mami carry all the purchase by saying that then only people will like her.

Thus they both went to bus stop. After standing in the hot sun for nearly half an hour the bus came. All the while Mami was holding the heavy bags in her hands because if she keeps it down then it will get spoiled.

But Mami was more horrified after seeing bus. The bus was fully loaded with people not even a single seat is available. That means she has to stand in a moving bus for two hours holding heavy weight as it will take two hours to reach home from Chandni Chowk. Moreover she had sent the driver back home with car.

Payal smirked seeing Mami's condition. Now Manorama Raizada will learn her lesson. All the while Payal was filming Mami.

Somehow after two hours of pure torture for Mami they both came back. Mami was very excited to see her video and pestered Payal to upload it in FB soon.

Seeing Payal uploading it in FB, she was very happy and ran to prepare lunch and sweets to celebrate her achievement. But Mami didn't noticed is the caption Payal gave to her video.

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Khushi was sitting in her cabin in AR designs doing her work when she heard her phone ringing with a Facebook notification. Taking out her phone she opened her account to see the video her sister uploaded.

Seeing the video her eyes widened. Arnav who was also with her doing some work saw the change of expression on her face. He came near her and kept his hand on her shoulder.

Arnav: What happened, KAG.

Khushi without saying anything showed the video to Arnav. Seeing the video Arnav's eyes propped out.

"Manorama Singh Raizada's way of saving money"

'Manorama Singh Raizada, maternal aunt of ASR, finding new ways to save money. But the question is why is she doing it? Is it because she wants to save money or is it because she is a ...? But why does the billionaire's aunt have to do all these for saving money.'

Seeing that Arnav was shocked. Seeing that anyone would think that his Mami is a miser who is very picky in spending money. A Kanjoos. A person who won't give a single penny to anyone. Now what will he do. This will not only Mami's but his whole family's including AR's image.

Minutes later, he saw Akash running towards Khushi's cabin. Barging inside he said, "Bhai, did you see Ma's video. It had gone viral on FB. Everyone is asking why Ma is doing all these to save money when we have billions in our account. What will we answer? Oh God. Now what??"

Arnav: Akash relax. We will find a way.

Akash: But Bhai. I don't understand why Ma did all these. I mean buying groceries, bargaining, traveling in bus. I mean Ma never does all these.

Arnav: Yeah. Even I am not understanding it. Anyways we will find a way. You relax.

All these while Khushi was enjoying the brother's misery with a smirk. Trust her sister to do all these. Well seems like Manorama Singh Raizada is getting a taste of her own medicine. What she did to them is now backfiring on her. She made them do all these things. Now she had to pay for her deeds.

Khushi (in mind): Well let's see, Mr ASR, how you save your Mami from this..

So how was it. Well honestly speaking I don't know how it came out. I am not in a good mood. The fan in my room stopped working due to short circuit and the warden in my hostel is not doing anything even after complaining. So I am very upset about it. Anyways hope you all like it.

So how do you think Arnav will save Mami. Also please suggest an actor for the role of Samar. He is a very important character in my story. He will have many shades. Not a negative character in fact you can say a third hero. So please suggest accordingly.

Please comment. Only if comment I will write more. Regarding other stories it will take time. For updates please comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's awesome...the third hero can be Shaleen malhothra



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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love reading story of strong payal and Khushi.. Pls cont soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome now my interest in your story is on its peak.
Please update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I just came across your story. Good one...Awaiting more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hawww.. !!!
Maami to gayi ..
I mean .. seriously ..
She had tortured Payal and Khushi .. for grocery .. as well???
hehe sheetal and arnav .. shocked .. with Khushi .. not sitting on chair beside Arnav .. but head.. of family ..
Aahhahannn !!!
Flashback was sad...
I am thinking .. Arav was on the phone.. with Khushi When Arnav .. listen to her... convo ...
Anjali .. Insulted by .. Payal .. but that Was true ...
huh...
Waiting for next part...
pm me ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wwwooowww...
Awesome story
I love the stories in which Khushi and Payal are strong..
Waiting for the background story
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 8

That evening, Shantivan

Everyone had returned back from their respective places after seeing the video. Nani who was resting in her room after lunch unaware of the happenings also came out.Entering inside the living room all saw Mami happily chatting with Payal. Everyone was shocked seeing the scene.

Maybe this was the first time they all were seeing Mami talking to Payal happily. Arnav and Akash were confused about what to do. Whether to ask Mami about the video or not. Nevertheless they decided to ask her about it.

Arnav: Mamiji

Mami turned to Arnav and smiled.

Mami: Arey Arnav Bitwa come, come.

Arnav, Akash, Khushi, Anjali and Sheetal came inside and sat on the sofa. Nani also came and sat with them. Payal looked at Khushi who was sitting beside her and winked.

Seeing everyone Mami smiled broadly and ran inside the kitchen and brought plates of different snacks and sweets. Seeing that everyone's eyes propped out. Not able to keep his curiosity Akash asked.

Akash: Ma, who made all these.

Mami (smiling): Why Bitwa why are you asking like that. Of course I made it.

Akash: What Ma you made it.

Akash looked at her in disbelief. He doesn't remember the last time his mother entered inside kitchen forget about making so many dishes. Not only Akash, even others also couldn't believe it.

Arnav looked at Akash who signalled him to ask Mami about the video.

Arnav (clearing his throat): Mamiji

Mami: Yes, Bitwa.

Arnav: Mamiji, I wanted to ask you something.

Mami: Ask na.

Arnav: Mamiji, woh video...

Mami (cutting him): Did you see it bitwa.

Arnav: Yes Mamiji, woh...

Mami (again cutting him): How was it Bitwa. Did you like it.

Arnav (confused): Huh

Mami: Did you like the video, bitwa.

Arnav: Mamiji, did you upload it.

Mami: Yes Bitwa.

Arnav: What???

Mami (smiling): Yes Bitwa, I only asked Payal Bitiya to upload that video. How was it. Did you like it.

Arnav and others were dumbstruck hearing Mami's reply. They were shocked to know that she knowingly uploaded the video, also her addressing Payal as bitiya surprised everyone.

But Mami was too lost in her own world to notice anyone's horror-struck face. On the other hand Nani was confused hearing their conversation. But before she could ask, they heard Mami announcing that she will make tea and coffee for everyone. Saying that she went to kitchen.

Meanwhile others updated Nani about the video fiasco. Nani was horrified hearing about her daughter in-laws deeds. One thing everyone knew was it was Payal who was behind the whole fiasco. But they couldn't do anything. Whatever was done was done. They couldn't change it. But everyone decided to not ask Mami anything more about it and embarrass her.

Arnav immediately called the cyber cell and requested them to remove it from Facebook. But the main problem was already half the world had seen it also many people have downloaded the video. So removing it completely was impossible.

On mutual agreement none talked about the video to Mami. Also they were surprised seeing Mami's fondness for Payal after this so not wanting to destroy it none spoke about it. But how can our devil keep quiet. Sheetal tried all her ways to say the truth to Mami but the family members however didn't allowed her to do so.

But it is said that the truth cannot be hid forever, it comes out one day or another. And Mami's truth came out when she went to attend a kitty party conducted by her high society friends. There she came to know about the truth of the video uploaded by Payal. She became a laughing stock in front of her friends.

But that day something inside her changed. The truth that what she went through was what she had made Payal and Khushi go through once, dawned upon her. Here she had to go through the pain and humiliation for one day, that also she couldn't take it but Payal and Khushi had to go through this humiliation everyday all those years back because she never thought it important to give them enough money to buy household things neither she allowed them to travel using Raizada's car.

The person who suffered most was Payal as being her daughter in-law, she had more right on Payal which she used to utilize fully. She also was reminded of the numerous times she had insulted Payal in front of her high society friends by telling about her class and family background.

But today seeing the same high society friends of hers humiliating her, she understood the pain and hurt Payal would have gone through. This made her feel guilty and ashamed of her own self. She didn't feel angry towards Payal for doing as she understood that somewhere she deserved it.

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If someone thought that they would see an outburst of Mami on Payal after learning the truth then they were surely disappointed. On the other hand the incident changed Manorama Singh Raizada completely. She understood the value of Payal and Khushi.

But someone was truly disappointed with the turn of events. Sheetal Kapoor thought that she would use an angry Mami against Payal and Khushi after she learn the truth. But Mami's repentance was something she never expected.

So once again Sheetal Kapoor had to see the flopping of her plan with disappointment. But she was not one to give up. She tried everything in her power to demean Khushi and destroy her self confidence, but Khushi being KAG gave her answers in her own style. At the end of the day all Sheetal could do was console herself for her flop plan and hope that she would be able to come up with a better idea.

Like that few days passed. Arnav and Khushi were working very hard together for their upcoming joint venture. All these days Arnav saw a very different Khushi. A honest, hardworking, workaholic Khushi who worked like a machine. One thing Arnav noticed was Khushi was very talented and had good business skills. She was even better than him in case of working.

All that she did were perfect and well organized. Her designs were out of the world. Arnav was drumstuck seeing Khushi making beautiful and elegant designs within minutes. He also realized that Khushi is a very good painter. All her designs showed her artistic talent.

Khushi's business skills and her method of working was also good. She never wasted a single minute.

In these few days, Arnav also noticed Khushi talking to someone on phone frequently. He also noticed her being so happy while talking to that person. He felt a pang of pain in his heart realising that not him but some one else is the reason for her happiness.

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Few days later

It was New year Eve everyone was planning on how to celebrate their new year. Everywhere parties and celebrations were planned to welcome the new year. Seeing all these Arnav was reminded of the time when he and Akash had sneaked into Buaji's house as Akash wanted to see Payal first on New Year.

How he almost got caught by Buaji and then Khushi helping him. After that how they even though unwantedly ended up seeing each other first during New Year. It was one of the best New Year of his life which he started by seeing the face of his Lady love.

In the evening Khushi and Payal were sitting in the living room discussing how to celebrate their new year and what and all they should do in this new year.

Payal: So Khushi What are you planning to do today night.

Khushi: I haven't planned anything yet Di. I have got a few invites for some New Year parties. But all of them are couple parties. You know na it is said that whoever you will see first on the New Year night, that person will remain in your life throughout the year. So everyone had kept couples party so that they could see that person first on New Year. And you know I don't have a pair so I don't know what to do. If I have to go to any of those parties, I have to take someone with me. And none of my friends are here. So I don't know who to take with me.

Payal: Well That's right. Even I don't know what to do. We don't know much people here who we could take with us for party.

Arnav and Akash were also present there. They were hearing the sister's conversation with keen interest. When they said that they didn't have anybody to accompany them to the parties, they wanted to say that they will come with them but didn't know how to approach them. Lest they get angry.

They were thinking about a plan to convince the sisters to take them with them when they heard Khushi's phone ringing. Seeing the number a small smile crept up on her face. Taking the call she went a little away from there and started talking.

Few minutes later she came back after cutting the call with a huge smile on her face. She came back and sat near Payal smiling ear to ear.

Khushi: Di, guess what?

Payal (confused): What?

Khushi (squealing): We are going to New Year party.

Payal: What? But partners????

Khushi (smiling): Di, do you remember my childhood friend Rohan about whom I told you.

Payal: Are you telling about Rohan Mehra.

Khushi: Yes the same. He called me just now and told me that he got invitation for the same New Year party we wanted to go and asked me if I could accompany him. And guess what one of his friend Vivek who also wanted to go to that party didn't have a partner and when I suggested you they were more than happy.

Payal: OMG. Kuku!!! Are you telling the truth, Rohan Mehra that amazing international model wanted to go to a party with us. And his friend Vivek, I think he is that popstar Vivek Kumar he was talking about. I just can't believe it we are going to party with them.

Khushi (laughing): Yes Di, you are right. He is the same Vivek Kumar, the famous popstar.

Payal: Oh God!!! Kuku I still can't believe it. Have you seen Vivek, Kuku. He is so handsome. His biceps. OMG. I can't just imagine it. And Rohan he is thr Greek God himself. I still can't believe it.

Khushi (giggling): Then believe it Di. We are going to party with the Rohan Mehra and Vivek Kumar.

Payal (dreamily): Oh Kuku. I think I have to go and get ready. I have to look my best in front of them. I will go. You also go and get ready. If you need any help tell me OK.

Khushi: OK Di.

With that both went to their rooms not noticing the two figures who sat shocked seeing everything. Arnav was looking as if he could kill someone. If the person who is going to come in front of him is a certain Rohan Mehra then he can assure himself a most painful death the next moment from the hands of ASR.

Beside Arnav sat Akash who looked as if he would burst out crying any moment.

Akash (on the verge of crying): Bhai, did you hear what they were saying. They're going to party with some stupid Rohan and Vivek. Now what will we do.

Arnav (angry): Shut up Akash. Stop being a cry baby.

Akash pouted hearing it.

Akash: But Bhai...

Arnav: Stop it Akash. I don't know about Payal, but I won't allow any stupid Rohan to come near my Khushi. I will kill him with my own bare hands. Regarding Payal it's upto you to do something.

Arnav went away from there saying that. Akash was shocked realising that now he himself has to find a way to keep that Vivek away from Payal. But determined to do something Akash also went to his room to make plan.

Precap: Party.

So how was it. So what do you think will happen. Will Arnav and Akash will succeed in keeping Rohan and Vivek from Khushi and Payal. Will Akash be able to make plan without Arnav? What will Arnav do to keep Khushi and Rohan apart. For that stay tuned.

Please comment. Only if you comment I will write more. For updates please comment.

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