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sad that veeba r thrown out of their own house.glad that advay gave them shelter.thanks 4 including advay's love track.sad that chandni's father sent ppl to kill him.glad that advay survived after d accident n became a rich person too.when chandni decided to leave yash realized his mistakes n traced advay n apologized n even united adni.that was very nice.good choice of actor in yash's role as jenni mohnish had good father daughter chemistry in DMG.Chandni seeing Advay alive,advay saying that he is her advay n their hug were emotional.Happy that they got married.I'm really happy that u made Jenni 'Chandni'.When u talked to me abt ur dream to c JenRun in a show I wished that in Dil u make JenRun a pair.But i never thought that like i wished secretly u will make them a pair in Dil.thanku so much.glad to c Adni,Veeba n Ranjan in d same house.its interesting.
can u plz show the honeymoon of Veeba n Adni as they r recently married?plz show beach romance,candle light dinner n rain scene on Veeba n AdNi.expecting more AdNi romance
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Posted: 7 years ago
That will be in the next episode.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

sad that veeba r thrown out of their own house.glad that advay gave them shelter.thanks 4 including advay's love track.sad that chandni's father sent ppl to kill him.glad that advay survived after d accident n became a rich person too.when chandni decided to leave yash realized his mistakes n traced advay n apologized n even united adni.that was very nice.good choice of actor in yash's role as jenni mohnish had good father daughter chemistry in DMG.Chandni seeing Advay alive,advay saying that he is her advay n their hug were emotional.Happy that they got married.I'm really happy that u made Jenni 'Chandni'.When u talked to me abt ur dream to c JenRun in a show I wished that in Dil u make JenRun a pair.But i never thought that like i wished secretly u will make them a pair in Dil.thanku so much.glad to c Adni,Veeba n Ranjan in d same house.its interesting.

can u plz show the honeymoon of Veeba n Adni as they r recently married?plz show beach romance,candle light dinner n rain scene on Veeba n AdNi.expecting more AdNi romance

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Thanks a lot.Jaggi saved Advay.But who is Jaggi?

Originally posted by: kavsy

That will be in the next episode.

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Baldev's college friend. He told Baldev to withdraw from the competition with rajveer

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Thanks a lot.Jaggi saved Advay.But who is Jaggi?

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Part 11

This is the ending part of this FF. Please give a detailed comment, mentioning your fav scene, & fav couple.

Veeba

Veera: I have a surprise for you.

Baldev: What?

Veera: Our mom had come. She gave me this bangle.

Baldev: I appreciate her love and concern but we cannot accept it.

Veera: Why? She has given it to me with so much love.

Baldev: Have you forgotten that my parents had not accepted you as a DIL? When they have not accepted you, how can we accept their gift? I will work hard day and night and get you a bangle but please don't wear this one.

Veera: It is all useless talk. Mom did not reject me. It was your dad who didn't accept me.

Baldev: I agree but you know very well that dad's words are final. Whatever he says everyone has to accept.

Veera: Fine, I will remove it.

She removes it and throws it on him.

Baldev leaves for the workplace angrily.

Ranjan

Gunjan: Your mom had gifted me this bangle.

Ranvi: What is the use when the house has not accepted you? Yes, mom did support us but dad's words are final. We cannot accept it. If you want, give me a month's time. I will buy for you.

Gunjan: Let me wear it.

Ranvi: Would you like to live on your husband's income or your in-law's income?

Gunjan: I know that you love me a lot but I can't discard what mom has given me. I consider your mom as my mom.

Ranvi: Fine, your wish.

Gunjan: Fine, I will remove it. She angrily removes the bangle and throws it.

Ranvi leaves for the workplace angrily.

Advay sees Ranvi & Baldev upset at his office during the lunch break.

Baldev: What is the matter Ranvi? You look quite upset.

Ranvi: You also look upset. Did you have a fight with Veera?

Baldev: Yes, my mom had gifted her the bangle. I told her we can't accept it. So, she lost her temper. When my parents had not accepted her, how can we accept their gifts?

Ranvi: That is true, I too had the same fight with Gunjan.

Advay comes. He said, "I am not only your boss but also your friend. Take this money & buy the jewelry for your wives.

Baldev + Ranvi: But you will cut from our salary, right?

Advay: Well, I will but it will be in installments.

Ranvi & Baldev are shocked. They said, "Sorry, I cannot take this money. I will buy it when you pay my salary.

Advay: I want to tell you guys one thing. It was your father who broke the relationship with you & your wives but not your mothers. You should understand their position. Your mothers have accepted them wholeheartedly. But yes, why don't you guys unite your fathers & FILs. Why not convert their enmity as friendship?

Baldev + Ranvi: We tried but we failed. If they were friends, they would have accepted our wives as well.

Veera & Gunjan are waiting for their spouses.

Veera & Gunjan meet each other.

Veera: It is going to be late evening but Baldev has not come. Did he tell you anything?

Gunjan: No, he didn't tell me anything. Even Ranvi has not come.

Veera: I have not behaved well with Baldev. I have not understood from his viewpoint.

Chandni comes. She said, "Advay called me up. He told me that Ranvi & Baldev are still working. I think we should go to their workplace.


Veera, Gunjan, & Chandni go to the office. They meet Baldev, Ranvi, and Advay.

Advay: I had to spend more time in making these guys understand.

Chandni: Even these girls never understood from their viewpoint. They want to gift their wives out of their earnings as their parents didn't accept these girls.

Advay: Mother accepted them. Otherwise, why would they come all the way to gift these bangles to their DIL's?

Chandni: Yes, there is a point.

Advay and Chandni go to the couples and said, Come, let's go home. We will sort out everything.

Everyone goes home.

Veeba

Veera: What do you think you are? Just because we had a fight, does it mean that you should leave me and go?

Baldev: It was nothing like that. Please let me explain.

Veera: I don't want to hear anything. I will never forgive you for this act. I hate you.

Baldev takes out the bangle from his pocket and shows it to Veera.

Veera: It is the same bangles

Baldev nods.

Veera: I'm sorry, Baldev. I have never understood from your point of view.

Baldev: I'm sorry too. It has never struck my mind that mom had accepted you. That is why she came all the way to gift it to you as a part of her blessings. I think we should give one more try to convert the enmity of our parents into friendship.

Veera: Yes, I agree with you.

Ranjan

Ranvi takes out the bangle from his pocket and said, "I am sorry, Gunjan.

Gunjan: It is the same bangles

Ranvi: Yes, you are right. I have not realized that mom had come all the way to give it. She has accepted you wholeheartedly. I think we should give a try to unite our parents and in-laws.

At Mehra House

Mehra: What was the need to give the bangle to Gunjan?

Ratan: You might not have accepted her but I have accepted her. I have always listened to your requests. Can't you listen to one request of mine? Veera is happily married to Baldev. They are happy with each other. Baldev is working hard day and night and has not borrowed money from anybody. Just because the father is bad it does not mean that son also has to be bad. Please give him a chance. I have also met Bansuri gifting the bangle to our Veera.

Mehra: I don't mind accepting them but will HP have the same thing in his mind?

Ratan: Once you befriend him, everything will be fine.

Mehra agrees.

HP House

HP: Who told you to gift a khandani Kangan to Veera?

Bansuri: Whether you accepted Veera or not but I have accepted her wholeheartedly. I am leaving the house. I miss my children a lot.

She packs her bags & leaves.

HP feels defeated.


Mehra & Ratan goes to Advay's house.

Veera: Dad, What a pleasant surprise! I knew you will definitely come.

Mehra: I had to come. I have made a mistake in understanding Baldev & Gunjan.

He extends his hands towards his children & hugs all of them.

Baldev & Veera meets Bansuri.

Baldev: Mom, what a pleasant surprise!

Bansuri: I had gifted Veera a khandani Kangan for which your dad confronted me. It is very difficult to live with him. I should have joined you guys when you all had left. I am very sorry.

Baldev: No mom, you don't have to be sorry. At that time, you thought as a wife and now you are thinking as a mother.

Suddenly, someone touches Baldev's shoulder. It is HP.

Baldev: Dad, I never expected that you will come.

HP: How could I not come? I knew that you guys would do well but it was my ego which was holding me. After your mom left, I was all alone. Please come home with Veera.

Suddenly HP feels somebody touching his elbow. To his surprise, it was Mehra.

HP: If I have lied to you I am sorry.

Mehra: No, I had got the wrong information from Rajvijay's father. He tried to mislead me. You may not be running the corporate companies but you are definitely well-off. I am very sorry.

Both hug each other. HP takes Baldev & Veera home. Mehra takes Ranvi & Gunjan home.

Adni

Advay: Our plan has really worked.

Chandni: Yes, it was really great.

Flashback

Advay: As I am Mehra's client, I went to his place and gave the news about Ratan meeting Gunjan.

Chandni: As HP's client, I gave the message about Bansuri meeting Veera.

Advay: It was necessary for these ladies to take a bold step.

Chandni: Otherwise our plans would have failed.

Flashback ends

Bansuri and HP perform Veera's grahapravesh.

Mehra & Ratan also perform Gunjan's re-entry rituals.

Veeba & Adni go to Goa for the honeymoon.

Veeba

Veera & Baldev go to Poland for the honeymoon. They go for the boating and the candlelight dinner. The next day, they go to Casino & try for gambling. They win the huge amount.

Baldev then said, "We will catch you next time. I have got the flight today.

Both of them leave & go to the park near their hotel room. Both of them begin to dance with the other couples.


Adni

Advay & Chandni go for the night dinner in the hotel room. Advay orders for the Champaign.

Chandni: I will open it.

Advay: There is a way to open it.

Chandni successfully opens the lid, but it falls on another person's plate. Advay laughs. He said, "That is why I said I will open it.

Chandni: This is my first experience.

Advay: It happens.

The other customer shouts at the manager thinking it is waiter's carelessness.

Advay & Chandni then have a candle-light dinner at the hotel.

The next day, both of them sit on the horse & on the top rollers.

All 4 of them come back to India by the weekend & resume their duty

They all live happily ever after.

THE END

Edited by kavsy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear...Eagerly waiting for next update... & thanks for the pm.

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