Veeba FF - Dil - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks 4 da pm! great update! nice end
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Posted: 7 years ago
so nice that ratan n bansuri gave family bangles to gunjan n veera.but sad that baldev ranvi asked them not to accept it.but i liked ranvi baldev's determination to buy bangles 4 their wives working hard.i liked advay making them understand that their mothers have accepted their wives so they shudnt beave like this n they shud unite both fathers.liked ranvi baldev returning the same bangles to their wives.Ratan making Mehra understand that he should accept them n end his enmity with HP was nice. he agreeing so fast was a surprise.good that bansuri left HP bcz of his stubborness.but finally all of them united n mu btw both fathers too ended.thats nice.Surprising that its AdNi who played behind to unite both familes.they r true friends.happy that Veeba ranjan's grahpravesh too happened.
I never expected u to cut short d movie n end this FF so fast.AdNi track had just started last time.so i was expecting a lot of adni scenes.but it ended.😭U said last time that u will show their honeymoon n romance.but it was'nt there😭.can u plz write an epilogue to this FF showing their honeymoon n romance?its a request.
i will really miss this ff.

Fav couples r veeba n AdNi.fav scene is veeba confession n last update's AdNi part
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Posted: 7 years ago
what a surprise that u added honeymoon now on my request.thanku so much.veeba 4 honeymoon in poland.perfect place.it reminded me of d poland track of veeba.i felt nostalgic.veeba went 4 boating n candle light dinner.wow.but wish u had described those scenes.they earned a lot of money in casino too thru gambling.cool.veeba dance in d park was romantic.
adni champaigne part in the restaurant reminded me of arshi restaurant scene on IPK.adni candle light dinner was romantic.nice edit of AdNi.they did horse riding n all.cool

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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for pm beautiful update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely superb update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update!!
Loved it.
Nice ending..
Very beautifully written.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice story...Thank you so much for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Nice ending
All's well that ends well
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

Advay and chandini.. bring the family
together...

anger is nothing in front of happiness

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Posted by: jasminerahul Ā· 2 months ago

Churake dil mera...Stealing my heart... I dedicate this OS to parthz who requested me to write on AviSha. Hima went to a park and looked around....

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