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Prologue
Veera
She is the only daughter of the Mehras who is a business tycoon. She is living with her parents, brother, and Chaiji. She encounters with Baldev and eventually falls for him

Baldev
He is the only son of Hazari Prasad. He is living with his parents and sister. He is spendthrift and is only interested in spending his father's money and wild parties. He encounters with a rich girl Veera and ends up falling for her.

Ranvijay
He is Veera's elder brother. He loves his sister a lot. He is in love with Gunjan who happens to be Baldev's sister.

Gunjan
She is Baldev's dear sister and is very much bubbly. She is in love with Ranvijay.


Mehra

He is Veera and Ranvi's father. He is a well-known businessman. He encounters Baldev's father for his daughter.

Hazari Prasad
Though he is a millionaire, he is a miser. He is very much money minded who dreams of marrying his son to a billionaire.

Bansuri
She is Hazari Prasad's partner but she cares for her children's happiness. She is a typical housewife.

Ratan
She is Ranvi and Veera's mother who is a typical housewife.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice cs
Looking forward to new story starting
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Nice cs dear
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Congratulations on FF

Character sketch is interesting

waiting for first chapter
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hi thanks 4 da pm n great update! well written
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Thanks for starting a veeba ff on dil. the characters seems to be different and eager to know how you will present dil on these characters
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Fantastic update



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Awesome cs amazing waiting for next..
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Interesting
Waiting for the update dear
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Part 1
Very early in the morning at 4 am, Hazari Prasad gets the dream of a bunch of notes coming before him. In his subconsciousness, he is very happy. He gets up in a start and shouted, "Money, Money, I've become rich."

Bansuri wakes up and asks him, "What happened?"
HP: Bansuri, do you know my dream has come true. I have got a lot of money now. I've become rich.
Bansuri: Where is the money?
Hazari Prasad takes out the bedsheet and spreads it. He said,"Here is the money." He is unaware that it is all the waste paper that is around him. Bansuri pinches him to make him realize that it is not money. HP comes to his senses and said, "Oh it is all the waste paper, But I don't know where has my money gone? I think it is Baldev who took that money to party with his friends. "

Bansuri: What is the need for Baldev to take? If he wants money he would either ask me or you.
HP: No Baldev does not ask me anymore. If he wants money, it will only be for loafing around and I don't have money for him if he continues like that.
Bansuri: If he does not enjoy now, when will he enjoy?
HP: Is he going to the college to study or to loaf around? I will teach him a lesson that he will never be able to forget all his life. If he earns, he will know its value.

Baldev is getting ready for the college but finds his bike key missing.
Gunjan: What are you searching for?
Baldev: For my vehicle key.
Baldev and Gunjan search for the key but they are unable to find it.
Bansuri: What are you guys searching?
Baldev: I am searching for my vehicle key. I'm not being able to find it.
HP: I have sold the bike.
Baldev: What? Have you my vehicle?
HP: Yes, I did. I wanted to recover the money that you have partied with your friends.
Gunjan: How can you do this dad?
HP: Yes, I can do this. If he wants the bike back, he has to do what I tell him to do.
Baldev: But what will I do now? How will I go to the college?
HP: By foot, like how Mahatma Gandhi was going. That is the punishment for you.
Gunjan rushes to the college. She said, "My timings are different. I will see you later."
She is waiting for Ranvi who comes and picks her up.
Baldev goes to the college by walk & has come near the college. Suddenly, the dirty water splashes on him from the car.
Baldev: Hey you? What do you think of yourself? You have made my face black. does this street belong to your dad?
Veera comes out of the car & said, "Hey Son of Soordas, if you have eyes could you not see & walk? Your dad has not taught you to walk on the road apart from the manners. Idiot.

Veera leaves.

Baldev's friends come to him and asked, "What is the matter? You have come by walk?"
Baldev: That was for a change.
Billa: I heard your dad sold your bike.
Baldev becomes speechless.
Billa: Doesn't matter. I have a second-hand bike. I can give it to you.
Baldev: I know how to get it back. But first I should teach a lesson to that lady.

Baldev thinks of a plan.
Edited by kavsy - 8 years ago

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