To the futur......the end on pg 40 - Page 21

wery well
very nice
nice twist
and thanks for bringing my huda
in the picture
hope to see a good side of him 👍🏼

So finally u hve unveiled d mystry man!!!Nice Part Prerna....time for some flashback now,may b!!!!!Plzzz continue soon!!!Gr88888888 job!!!

gud job prerna.....so HE is huda,I guessed wrong...post the next part soon!!!!!we' all waiting...

Prerna, your FF is too good... but I have a grouse...
why do you keep them so short???
thoda size badado na please???!!!!

Waise this part was too good... the reactions to Shalini... and the start of the fb shaayad... about Huda and Jhanavi...

great job hon!!!!
👏

wowwwwwwwww its huda very nice keep it up

oh my god that was huda.too good.ur fanfic is completely unpredictable.gr8 going.pls contnue soon.

lovely part prerna...well,see,i knew it cud be huda 😳 ....anyways,u were really gud...keep it up!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Part-14

Jhanvis world swam round n round like a tornado within her head....even meeting his gaze made her insides squirm....y...WHY did she feel dis way...?? "jhanvi....." his voice...it still made her ears long 4 more..."tum...yahaan....?" gathering every bit of courage,she began.."bahut jaldi notice kiya..." he managd a smile....'no..' she told herself..'dont luk at dat smile...' "woh....bas....yakeen..." "yakeen nahin hua?" she asked...but huda jus luked down...silence prevailed 4 about a minute..."woh....main...main naina se mili" "phoolan se?" asked huda suddenly alert..'he still luvs her..'jhanvis head silently throbbed..."haan...woh.." "kaisi lagi..?" 'y cant he hav dat luk 4 me..?' she wundered..."woh...bahut..bahut achchi hai..." huda smiled..."haan yaar...is jatt ke liye wahi sahi hai na? maine tujhse bola tha us din..." jhanvi forced herself 2 smile..."tumhaare liye woh perfect hai!" she sed..."arrey yaar...use koi yeh kyun nahin samjhaata hai..??" "dont worry....dekhna...bahut jaldi..woh khud hi yeh baat samajh jaayegi..." "tujhe sach mein aisa kagta hai na??" asked huda.."haan huda...trust me..." huda smiled.."chal yaar...ab bahut raat ho gayi hai...main chalta hoon...kal subah...strategy meeting ke baad baat karenge..." jhanvi nodded.."gud nite.." "oye gud nite ji!!" he sed n left wid a smile....jhanvi smiled too....n she kept smiling...till he'd walked out her door...n den...as if sum1 had turned off d light switch..her smile switched off too...

the next morning,the entire contingent assembled 4 the strategy meeting in the main tent..raj presided over the meeting,explaining and discussing the various situations that they mite hav 2 confront...the peak..Peak 963...that they had 2 capture....n no matter wat personal problems each soldier was facing,they all listened wid rapt attention....n dis was one thing jhanvi noticed..'they may be fiting an internal battle..' she thot..'but wen it cums to the country...they're all 2gether..' "yeh peak....Peak 963...humaara target hai...humaara mission...aur aaj...is waqt...is peak se zyaada...humaare liye kuch bhi important nahin hai...does every1 get me???" asked raj...his voice vibrating with passion and vigour...and it was this voice which had all the soldiers attention...dis passion..which made them feel the patriotism in their bones..."YES SIR!" they cried in unison...n raj smiled....knowing...that they wuld fite their lives 4 it....n dats all he wanted 2 be convinced of...

as the meeting ended..n d soldiers filed out...jhanvi walked upto naina.."uh...cptn naina singh ahluwalia..?" she asked..."yes.." sed naina..."wuld u mind if i asked u a few questions..?" "no..not at all.." "ok...so...CAMERA.." called jhanvi..."aaj humaare saath hai..famous soldier cptn naina singh ahluwalia..laddkh-leh border ke paas,Camp 1313 ke contingent ka yeh ek hissa hai...toh..cptn singh...aapko kya lagta hai...is jung ka outcome kya hoga..? achcha..ya bura?" "har jung ka outcome bura hi hota hai...logon ki maut hoti hai..khoon behta hai...dooriyan badhti hai...do deshon ke beech dushmani bhi zyaada hoti hai..." "toh phir...aap is jung mein lad kyun rahi hai?" "yeh kehkar hum sach se muh nahin mod sakte...ki sach bura hai...aur sach yeh hai ki yeh sab ho raha hai...kyunki log mar rahe hai...toh kya iska matlab yeh hai,ki haath jodkar hum apna desh kisi aur ke hawaale kar de?? nahin...shayad yeh jung hum jeete...shayad nahin...magar isme ladke...humne ek baat toh pucci kar di hai...ki humaare andar ladne ki himmat hai..aur hum aakhri saans tak apne desh ke liye ladenge..." with this,jhanvi made a slashing movement beneath her chin,n d cameras stopped rolling..."dat was amazing!" sed jhanvi wid a smile.."u really do feel a lot about patriotism,dont u..?" she asked..naina smiled...n then...as if rememmbering sumthing,she turned spoke up.."jhanvi..dat day..u sed sumthing bout sum1 talking bout me...? wat did u..?" jhanvi stopped still...."naina..i..." suddenly..d lunch bell rang.."meet me outside after lunch.." n wid dat...she turned n walked away...n naina was left...puzzled...

ritu strolled out of the tent area to find raj sitting at d edge of d cliff..."zaraa...door ho jaayie colonel..warna..." raj turned n saw her.."warna kya dr mishra?? main girkar mar jaaoonga?" "aise samay mein aise thots apne mind se hataa dijiye cptn...waise hi bahut stress hai..." "hataane se kya hoga dr mishra? sach toh nahin badlegi na? saur sach toh yehi hai..ki kal...aaj...kabhi bhi...hum mein se koi bhi mar sakta hai..." ritu stared at him silenly for a minute...n den...smiled..."magar sach ko thode der dimaag se hataa dene se...shayad dimaag ko bhi chain aayega..." "waise...aapko mere dimaag ke chain ke baare mein itna kyun concern dr mishra?" asked raj...ritu was silent 4 a minute..."main yahaan apna kaam kar rahi hoon colonel...aur mera kaam yehi hai..ki aap thode time toh at least,stress-free rahe..." raj luked up at her...n smiled..."stress free..? kya aap sach keh rahi hai dr mishra..?" "aapko kya lagta hai colonel...?" but before raj culd answer....d lunch bell rang....n widout anuther word...raj turned n left....n ritu was left all alone.."jawaab toh dete jaaiye colonel shekhawat..." she whispered 2 herself...

as soon as lunch ended...naina hurried out....n she spotted jhanvi at d cliffs edge...she climbed upto d spot.."so.." she sed...jhanvi turned....n smiled..."so...wat?" "u sed u'd give me d name of d person who.." "who spoke about u..?" aked jhanvi..."uhh..ya.." sed naina...silece for a minute...n den.."naina...has it ever been dat ur confused.." "confused...bout wat?" asked naina.."urself..i mean...ur own feelingss....d truth...d lies..." "i hav....sed naina.." "u hav?" asked jhanvi...naina nodded.."many times.." "naina....i want to tell u a story..." "a story..?" asked naina...."ya...n wen dis story ends...den u'll hav ur answer...." naina luked puzzled....but.."o....so..shoot!" she sed....n so...jhanvi plunged into her tale...all the while wundering...'am i really doing d rite thing...??' but rite or wrong..she knew she was meant to tell it....

hey guys!! 😃
thnxxx 4 dose wunderful comments!!! 😳
i've posted d next part...n its a bit longer dis time... 😛
n ya...as u hav guessed...at least part of d next part will be flashback... 😊
hope it wasnt too boring!
doooo comment ppl!!! 😳
dey really keep me going! 😳

well i have to admit ---- you are a very very good writer..... 😛 its absolutely outstanding 👏