To the futur......the end on pg 40 - Page 22

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Posted: 18 years ago
its very good.. 👏 i loved this part.. esp the ritu-raj convo
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey preru keep it up swty
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great part 👏 👏 👏
i am waiting for jhanvi's story
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awsome Amazing! Well done! 👏
I like Jhanvi!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice part Prern!!!I wnna kno abt Jhanvi.......Plz post nxt part soon!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
dat was mindblowin yaar prerna! 👏 plzz do post da next part asap.... n if im not wrong, da story is abt jhanvi n huda...rite?? 😕 😕 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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owsome , oustanding
,prena i think naina ki idol nahi ho tum
tum toh puri naina ban gayi ho
really jhanvi interwiing naina
the dialouges were just as if it was really naina speaking out
wery well done
i think this is one of ur best parts 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Prerna... hum ne to notice bhi nahin kiya ki bahut lamba tha!!!
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eagerly awaiting the next part now!

Accha tha... but I wonder what Huda's and Jhanavi's story is gonna be! 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
All praises for ur writin 👏 👏 👏
story is getting better and better!
really like ur work 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Part-15

*Flashback*

It was the summer of 2011....i had recently graduated from college after doing a course of mass communication,and i had decided to pay a visit to my grandparents who lived in the fields of haryana owning rich farm fields. It was a refreshing change from the crowded city of delhi and a nic way to rejuvenate and get ready for my interview with a major news channel. It was nice to meet all my relatives after such a long time,and everyone was eager to know about my future plans.....i was happy,contented and at peace....it seemed as if everything was perfect in my life...my career wuld be set,i had dun wat i wanted 2 do in life...everything was going smoothly...in fact,it seemed too good to be true....and it was...

i had been there for about two days wen there was huge celebration in the village..this celebration was because an army officer was returning after his studies...he had been successful, and he was cuming home for a few days before joining the actual duty....'army officer..? hmmm....shuld be interesting..' i thot...little did i know how interesting it really wuld be...

he arrived...amidst a grand procession...his parents were proud....deir faces glowed wid joy....deir boy had dun it.....i had often wundered wen my parents wuld beam like dat...dey had always told dat dey were proud of wat i'd achieved,but i wanted to see it myself...sumday...

dat evening, i had a chance to finaly meet d celebrity....he was tall n handsome,wid one of d most chaming smiles...a voice which culd whip d ladies off deir feet...but dere was sumthing bout him,dat was special....n wen a went closer to him,wen i talked to him...wen he smiled,i culd see it....he smiled wid his mouth...but dere was an innate sadness in dose eyes....n dis sadness touched me.....n it warmed my heart...a heart which had been frozen all dese years...frozen because of not being able to fit in...frozen,because it had no one to tell its sorrows to....jus frozen,to hide dose sorrows beneath layers of ice....but for d first time,dis heart was warmed...warmed by dat one glance....

we talked...we laughed....n sumhow...in dat one nite....we became inseperable frnds...as d days went by...we learned more bout each oder.....in fact,so good was our equation,dat our parents began to form plans of our marraige....n dey fixed it....wen i heard....i knew i was ready....despit my career...despite having to do so much more in life...i knew i was ready...but.....he wasnt.....

i had opened my heart and told him about how,in college,i had been betrayed by a frnd over a mere piece of homework...i had been used n ditched by a boyfrnd over xtra credits...how i'd vowed never to get entagled wid boys agn...yet how,his frndship ha made me feel sumthin else....but he hadnt dun d same wid me....n dat day....d day our wedding was decided,he finally told me..opened his heart to d fact, about y he always seemed so sad....n wen i heard dat, i knew...dere was no way dis wedding culd take place....

he was ready to go n tell his family d truth.....but i remembered his fathers words.."mera beta is rishtey se bahut khush hoga...warna....woh mera beta nahin kehlata..." he culdnt do dis...i remembered dat pride on his parents faces...he culdnt make dat vanish....it culdnt jus be wiped off......n so....i did it instead....i told my parents about wat happened in college...wat i'd dun....everything bout jatin.....wat he'd dun to me...n y i culdnt marry.....n it was all over..

i left haryana dat very day......"

*Present*

Jhanvi luked down wid a smile...."funny..isnt it naina..? dat ppl we barely know for a month...end up changing our lies forever..?" naina stared at jhanvi for a minute...n den..."i know who ur talking bout jhanvi....." jhanvi luked up n stared at her..."den u no wat i want u to do.." "i cant do it.." "he luvs u naina...he LUVS u.....hes ready 2 give up nething 4 u......cant u see dat.....plzzz dont be so selfish..." naina smiled..."selfish....perhaps u can say dat....but jhanvi...i cant do it...i cant accept sum1 i dont luv.....coz it'll ruin his life..." jhanvi stared at naina in 4 a minute...anger,grief,sadness...her eyes changing wid every emotion....she turned n left...."but i no jus wat to do..." sed naina to herself..."n it must be dun..."

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Posted: 18 years ago
deres d next part ppl!! 😃
plzzz plzzz do comment..... 😳
n thnxxx soo much 4 dose amazing comments before!! 😳 😳
i hope u guys like it! 😳

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