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~~ Kaho Na...Pyaar Hai~~
Chapter 7- part e ~ A Date ?
[continued from last part only]
With that she tried opening the car door.
"Dont try so much baby, Its child-locked for crazy and stubborn child like you." He winked at her with a smirk.
She just gaped at him shocked that he child-locked her door.
"Now you are caught with me till whenever I want or maybe...eternity." She gasped at his words.
"Rey stop it... its not a joke ok. Bhai must be getting worried for me.
"Dont worry about him. I have already messaged him. By the way madam do you even know what the time is? Its gonna be 1 now," he smirked at her cutest shocked face.
She was shocked beyond limit that she almost shouted,"What? Its 1 now?I thought it will be maximum to maximum 10.. you were driving from freaking 4 hours... Rey where the hell are we?"
He had to rub his ears because of her sudden shouting," First of all stop shouting girl... and yes its 1, There is no network in our phones and I dont know where the hell are we now as I told you I lost the track while thinking about you."He actually blurted out the truth unknowingly... and yes he actually did lost the way.
"Me?" She questioned while studying his expressions.
"I mean... Ria.. not you.. why would I even think of you when I have a hot and sexy girlfriend like Ria," Rey stammered at first but then he lied to her while looking here and there.
"Oh yes..of course," she felt angry and hurt for some unknown yet known reason,"now will you please tell me how are we going to go home?"
"I dont know,"he shrugged.
"Its all because of you that I am stuck here at this late night," she told him in frustration, worry and anger, "Its such an abandoned area with only trees on either sides.There is no one passing by either... hey krishna ji ab kya hoga..."
"Its all all because of you and your stupid girlfriend Ria,"she pointed her index finger at him.
"Taani, can you please be quiet for sometime? I am already starving and hell tired after driving for so long just because of you..." he let out feeling a bit frustrated because of hunger and tiredness. He was feeling damn exhausted too after thinking so much.He was even having slight headache so at last he kept his head on the front steering frustratingly.
His words shushed taani as she started feeling guilty.But Rey felt guilty too for his words so he raised his head to apologize to her but got confused as he found her searching something in her bag.
She took out her lunchbox from her bag and forward it to him. His sorry hung in his mouth as he looked at her questioningly. She gestured him to take it with her eyes.
Rey took it and opened it. At first his mouth watered seeing his favorite rajma chawal and gajar ka halwa but then he looked back at her with shock and confusion as something striked him,"Taani, Its full and untouched that means you have not eaten anything since morning?"
"No, Rey I had biscuits and tea in the morning. After that I didn't feel hungry so didn't have it,"she replied.
"Are you mad or what taani? You neither had lunch nor anything whole day and saying so casually like its not a big deal at all," Rey said disbelievingly. He also noticed how pale and weak she has become from some days.
"Because its actually a no big deal for me Rey. Mera mann nahi tha to nahi khaya simple," she shrugged casually.
"God, taani when will you learn to take care of yourself?"
"Rey stop it and start eating."
"Yes, I will after all who can miss rajma chawal and gajar ka halwa cooked by the best chef Taani but you are also having it with me and thats'final" He said with finality..
"No, Rey please mera bilkul mann nahi hai," while she was saying this, Rey put a spoonful of Rajma chawal in her mouth making her eat while taani kept adoring him unknowingly.
" kitne dino baad kisine itne pyar se khilaya hai,"she thought.
He actually forgot that he was hungry too knowing that his taani had not eaten anything since morning. He was going to feed her again but she held his hand and took the spoon to his mouth and made him eat it. Both held each others'loving gaze...
"Mmm, Taani, its so delicious..." Rey moaned savoring the delicious taste of rajma chawal.Taani smiled at him adoring his cute child like antics.
Like this they fed each other first rajma chawal and then gazar ka halwa while adoring each other and enjoying each other's company.
"Arrreee bhaiyaaa.. bhaiyaaa"Rey looked at her dumb-foundedly and then glared her angrily," Taani stop it, mujhe aise joke bilkul pasand nahi hai..." (he thought she is joking and calling him bhaiyaa)
"Hunh Rey what are you saying? I am notjoking.. look there, cycle pe ek bhaiyaa jaa rahe hain.. ask him the route to go back," Taani pointed behind him outside the window where a man on a cycle was going.
Rey looked at her confusedly, then look behind and actually found a man on a cycle.. and took a breathe of relief..
"Oh to tum unhe bhaiya bula rahi thi... mujhe laga tum mujhe..." he stopped in the middle when he found her curiously looking at him.
"Hunh... kya laga aapko?" Taani questioned him in confusion.
"Kuch nahi," he shrugged.He stopped the man and asked him the route to go back.When he turned he found taani still thinking on his words and finally she joined the dots and solved puzzle of his words and started laughing,"o god, Rey...(hahaha) aapko laga .. kki ..(hehe) kii maine aapko bhaiya bulaya (hahaha) Rey, you are impossible."
He just got lost in her cute laughter and kept gazing at her intently as the sound of her laughter was like pouring rain in the desert of his heart, soothing him and giving him peace. She stopped laughing as she found him gazing at her intensely.
"I wont ask you to stop laughing today... its been so long since you smiled or laughed with heart,"Rey said subconsciously with glassy eyes reflecting his unshed tears.Taani looked at him for a moment and then turned to the window to control her feelings and her... love.
"Isn't it funny Rey that the one who took away all my smiles and happiness is talking about my happiness... the one who is the reason of my pain want to see me happy..just so funny...isn't it?" she said holding onto her tears with sarcasm and hidden pain while looking outside the window.She again turned into her cold self.Rey felt hurt cross his heart as she said those words but he felt even more hurt knowing how true they were...
"Cant you forgive me once, Taani? I am sorry for my mistakes.. i really am,"he held her hand and said tenderly keeping her hand close to his heart but she kept looking out and didn't spare even a glance at him.
"No I cant. Not now. Not EVER.,"she pulled away her hand from his and replied with closed eyes trying to fight her tears and feelings,"Because I Hate You and I Will Always Hate You."
Her heart wanted to laugh at her lie but she crushed her broken heart as the expert she was in doing that like always.
"Kar lo jitna hate karna hai, Taani but ek din tum khud kahogi ki tumhe mujhse pyaar hai...bahut bahut pyaar hai," Rey thought with a little smile on his face and tears in his eyes. He will wait for her...Always.
"I dont want to talk about all this...so Lets go, Rey." She said turning into her stone form like what she had become. She bit her lips and pressed them tight to stop her tears that were threatening to flow.
Rey also gulped the lump formed in her throat, turned away suppressing his hurt and pain and started driving without saying anything...
She kept looking out feeling the cool breeze as the roads and trees passed by...
"Dude, stop hurting her, she is already upset for God knows what. Just let it be and keep her as happy as you can," his heart screamed at him.He turned to look at her and found her asleep again while looking out because of tiredness. But he frowned seeing her shivering slightly , her lips quivering as she was feeling cold.
He stopped the car slowly. Then bending towards her, he closed her side window. He took off his jacket and covered her with it without waking her. She also snuggled into his warm jacket more in sleep making him smile a little.
He kept looking at her lovingly not wanting to look away at all. He raised his hand to tuck the strand of hair that was disturbing her but stopped in between thinking she might not like it. Looking away unwontedly, He started driving.
After 3 hrs of driving, he stopped the car in front of her house. Rey rested his head at the back and tilted his face towards her still resting his head against his seat. He kept admiring her sleeping form and felt undefined emotions stirring in him.
"Ahh.. ahh.. ,"Taani woke up suddenly all scared as some street dogs barked... Rey jerk up suddenly and looked at her scared face which actually broke his heart. That fear in her eyes pierced something in him.
He immediately held her hand,"Relax Taani...dogs hai bas, just relax ok." She nodded her head relaxing a bit.Then He left her hand not wanting to make her feel awkward or uncomfortable. She looked around and found that they were in front of her house...
"Hum kab pahunche?" She asked him shocked.
"Umm... around half hour before.."he replied rubbing the back of his head sheepishly.
She gaped at him,"Then why didn't you wake me up?
"Mann nahi tha bas..."Her jaw dropped at his answer and He just shrugged casually thinking how could he tell her that he didn't want to leave her and she was looking so cute and so lovely while sleeping hugging his jacket that he couldn't wake her.. just couldn't... he wanted to laugh at his thought when he actually felt jealous of his jacket.
"Rey, you are impossible." She shook her head at him.Then her gaze fell over his jacket that was covering her and giving his warmth to her. She felt a bit shy thinking that she was snuggling into his jacket for so long,"umm your jacket??"
"Vo you were feeling cold so..."she nodded understanding him and then as she was going to remove his jacket, he said," its ok , rehne do... college main de dena."
"No its ok. I will manage..." she tried refusing him but he cut her saying,"its just a jacket taani. Please rehne do. Tumhe thand lag jayegi."
"Aur aapko nhi lagegi?" She questioned him.
"Taani, Just keep it," He said after adoring her for a moment for her care.
"Ok fine.. ziddi kahin ke."
" kya main ziddi hun?"He gaped at her shockingly
"Haa haan aap ziddi hain, bahut bahut bahut ziddi,"she stuck out her tongue calling him ziddi.He chuckled seeing her cute antics...
"Batao duniya ki sabse zyada ziddi ladki mujhe ziddi keh rahi hai." She narrowed her eyes glaring him for his so callednice words making him stop laughing and gulped down.
"Vaise Taani thank you for this special and memorable date with you," he said genuinely with a smile on his face.
"Date?"
"Haan date he hogayi na... Dance... long drive...dinner... and a beautiful special night with you... isse memorable date to koi ho he nahi sakti."
She blushed a little at his loving words feeling shy and overwhelmed remembering their special night. He was right that its special and memorable in its own way.
"Bas kiss aur romance ki kami hai," he said naughtily teasing her but her eyes popped out at his words in shock.She gasped in shock.
"Kya Rey...kuch bhi..." she chuckled with a cute blush to avoid it as a joke knowing he was joking too.
"Kya kuch bhi Taani.. maine sach he to kaha," he winked at her.She shook her head and smiled.
"Rey, stop joking and Open the lock now... mujhe jaana hai..."
"Nope,I wont..."he smirked naughtily,"until you kiss me on my lips. C'mon lets complete our beautiful date." Taani gasped in shock as those shameless naughty words escaped his mouth. Her cheeks heat-up and a cute blush started forming on her cheeks but she controlled herself seeing the teasing glint in his eyes and gave him her best (fake) death glares...
"REY...STOP IT NOW."
"Taani,I am serious." He made a serious face making her even more shock. He chuckled inwardly seeing her one moment cute blushing face and other moment fake angry face...
"God,she is so damn cute." He thought.
"Rey Open. The. Lock. Else I will...I will..."
"You will?"
"Yes I will call the bhai out." he started coughing at her words. Now it was her chance to smirk and enjoy.He wont admit ever that the possessive brother in swayam still scare him to death.He glared her after he stopped coughing.
"Ok fine, I am opening it but dont think that I am afraid of Swayam, your so called possessive bhai,"she chuckled at his lie,"Ya sure."
He came out of the car and then opened the door for her. She came out wearing his jacket properly,"Finally, my home sweet home."
Rey just smiled at her,"so bye."
"Hmm bbye.. umm Thank you so much, Rey"she smiled thanking him hesitatingly and turned to go but he held her wrist stopping her. She turned back and he left her wrist unwontedly.
" vo... i am sorry," she frowned at his words.
"during rehearsals, I didnt mean that you cant dance or cant supervise us. Neither I meant that I am better in dancing... so sorry if it hurt you."He completed stammering feeling guilty...
"Its ok Rey.Nothing hurts me now... so relax," she replied with a smile.Her words pierced his heart feeling even more guilty for everything. He gulped the lump formed in his throat because of overflowing hurt and pain.. he looked in her eyes deeply wishing to take away all her pain.But she looked down tucking a strand of hair behind her ear as if hiding all her pain from him.
"So what was my mistake during practice Taani?"He asked genuinely wanting to know his mistake.
She blushed for a moment remembering their close dance but she felt hurt remembering Rey and Ria's dance, how ria kissed him and hugged him and their relationship. She felt anger seeping through her unwontedly but she controlled herself and hid her emotions quite well.
"Ummm.. vo..vo" she didn't know how to say but still she choose telling him the truth not wanting to be biased for any reason," vo .. dil.. aap dil se nahi dance kar rahe the.. aur ye dikh raha tha ki aapka dhyaan kahin aur tha us waqt so that was your mistake."
"Oh..ok.. I will do better next time," He replied genuinely.
"Ab tumhe kaise bataun ki mera dil to tumhare paas hai aur dhyan to tumpe tha to dance kaise karta vo bhi ria ke saath when I was feeling like betraying my heart, betraying you whenever she used to touch me," He thought.
She raised her eyebrows asking if he said something but he nodded his head in a no silently saying that he didnt say anything.
"So main chalun?"
"Nahi.. I mean haan...haan chalo ," he nodded.
"Ok so bye."
"Bye."She turned to go but stopped and looked back at him.
"Ab..vo Rey, why dont you stay here... as in with bhai... you must be tired too," she said hesitating.
"No its ok..." he didn't want to make her feel awkward in any way so said so even though he was dead tired.
"Rey, please stay. Its already 4. You must be so tired and exhausted. So just stay. I dont have any problem," she replied understanding him.
"You sure?"
"Yes."
He locked the car and went in along with her opening the lock from her spare keys. Dont know when swayam slept in his room while waiting for taani after getting a message from Rey that they got stuck somewhere and just coming back. He slept in swayam's room and she went to sleep in her room after wishing each other good night.
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