Taarey ss ~ Kaho Na...Pyaar Hai, updated ch-14/11 june

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Hello friends, I have shifted my taarey story- Kaho Na Pyaar Hai in this forum.
(Its completely different from the actual film)

Taarey story ~

~ Kaho Na...Pyaar Hai ~

Chapter-1 ~ Prove me that you hate me ~
[Reposting only ch 1 here for preview]

this story starts when taani was leaving after knowing d
truth about fake break up n rey was trying to stop her somehow. gang and rey
were acting that he met wid an accident n taani came to his house n just got to
knw tht it was just a mere act to stop her.tani was really hurt to knw this.

tani says while crying -phir se jhuth sirf jhuth ...kya zaruri hai baar baar jhuth bolkar mera dil dukhana rey. i m going tommorrow rey. i am going away frm u forever n ever . u have already hurted me a lot.at least stop hurting me now and just let me go.

Rey ~ vahi to nahi kar sakta taani ... I cant let you go I just cant let you go because ...he hold her shoulders and say ~ I LOVE YOU TAANI , I ALWAYS LOVED YOU AND WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU FOREVER AND EVER.

Taani say while removing his hands. tears were still flowing from her eyes reflecting how deeply she is hurt ~ jhuth ye bhi jhuth because if you have ever loved me na then you would have never hurt me and never broken my heart as well as my trust .

Rey say with teary eyes ~ nahi taani ye sach hai meri zindagi ka sabse bada sach ki tumse beintehaan pyaar karta hu aur hamesha karta rahunga ... I did all that for you only my love . I did all that to make you independent . I did all that so that you could meet yourself , so that you could know who real taani is and what are her capabilities , so that you could know that you can achieve anything if you wish and believe in yourself , so that you could shine and be proud of yourself . I did all that because I love you and wanted you to love yourself as well.

Taani ~ no rey u have never loved me kyunki pyaar kisiko badalke (change karke ) nahi kiya jaata rey . you did all this for yourself rey because you wanted your girlfriend to be ambitious and successful like you . you never tried to understand me and my feelings rey . and I am sorry to say that rey you have lost your taani in the process of changing her . vo taani jo aapse dewangi ki had tak pyaar karti thi vo to kahin kho gayi rey . you know.. rey ...for me living life and being happy in every moment was more important than anything else .main meri zindagi mere apno ke sath aur unke liye jeena chahti thi , apni zindagi ke har pal ko pyaar se aur khushi se sajana chahti thi. i never wanted a luxurious life , I wanted a happy life which is filled with love and only love . I thought love and happiness are more important
than money and success.
but ... But ... you know what rey you proved me and my thinking wrong . I guess nowadays money and success are more important than love and happiness . now I just want to be successful in life and get money and fame just like others. Be happy rey ...kyunki main independent to ho gayi rey .. infact itni independent ki ab mujhe apki koi zarurat nahi hai rey .ab meri zindagi main aapki koi jagah nahi hai aur na he kabhi hogi.. because I have started hating love now , ab main pyaar se nafrat karti hun rey , aur aapse to beintehaan nafrat karti hu main rey .

(rey was shocked hearing her . now he was regretting his decision.He was really hurt to know that how much pain he has given to his love that she is completely changed now so much so tht she has started hating him and love as well but he need to correct his mistake and for that he need to stop her anyhow . tears came from his eyes too seeing taani's tears )
Taani turned to leave after saying"I hate you rey and will always hate you forever and ever"

But rey hold her wrist before she could go. Taani turned ,Rey say smiling a little through his tears ~ nafrat karti ho na mujhse Taani ?

Taani say looking down while her uncontrollable stubborn tears still flowing down from her eyes~ haan ..nafrat karti hun main aapse bahut... bahut ...bahut zyada nafrat


Rey ~ ok then prove it... prove me that you hate me taani . stay here and prove me that you hate me. prove me that I no longer affect you taani . come on stay here and prove me.
Taani look into his eyes shocked . she remained silent , don't know what to say .


Rey ~ kya hua taani ...Darr lag raha hai ki kahin yahan rehne se tum khud ko mere paas aane se rok na pao aur mujhse pehle ki tarah he pyaar karne lago ya main yu kahu ki tum apne pyaar ko chupa na pao . (he go close to her while increasing taani's heartbeats and say in her ear ' because I know you love me taani and you cant hide your love from me ) he came back to his position and saw taani looking down trying hard to act normal and showing tht he no longer affect her


Taani say while wiping her tears and controlling herself ~ no mr. reyansh singhania you are wrong again I hate you and will always hate you ...

Rey ~ so stop running away from me taani , stay here and prove me wrong. prove me that you hate me so much taani.


Taani ~ ok fine I will prove you that I hate you so very much mr. reyansh singhania . I am not going anywhere and will stay here until I prove you that how much I hate you. I will complete my graduation from st. Louis only and show u that you cant affect me and my life now. Rey smiled and said ~ great


Rey thought " prove to hoga taani but ye nahi that you hate me, yeh that you love me and will always love me . I have hurt you na now I will only heal your broken heart . I have given you pain na, now I will only take away all that pain and give you love and happiness ."
~~~~~~

Since I have already posted chapter 2 to chapter 7(a) in d3 forum so just giving its link from chapter 2 to chapter Ch 7 (a) . After that i will continue it here only :)

INDEX~

CHAPTER 2~ Hidden fear and feelings ~
(Part a and b)

CHAPTER 3 ~ Feel the love ~


CHAPTER 4 ~ But I Hate To Love



Chapter 5 part a ~ Misunderstanding


chapter 5 part b ~ Jealousy


Chapter-6~ A Plan~

Chapter 7-part a~ Dance practice

Chapter 7- part b ~ Dance and Mystery~ In the next post.

Chapter 7- part c ~ The night is not yet over ~

Chapter 7- part d ~ A long drive



chapter-8~Missing you, love

Chapter-9~A promise of hatred~

Chapter 10~An unexpected visitor~

chapter-11~Burning heart
Page -14


Chapter-12~Melting In Your Arms
Page 14

Chapter-13~With you always

page 15

Chapter-14~Haunting Past
Page 16
Please do like as well as comment from heart. Your feedback is really important.
Silent Readers please hit like and give your precious comment too so that i could know at least some people are reading my story and i keep updating :)

Thank you :)
Take care and keep smiling :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Recap- Rey and Taani's cute argument over which song couple dance should be performed. Ria then put chits in jar from which taani select one. "Mere haath mein tera haath ho" song from fanaa movie is selected for Rey and ria's dance performance. Taani got lost in her memories and stopped Rey in between and told him that he is doing wrong to which he argues and ask her to dance with him and tell him his mistake but Taani refuse to dance with him. Ria had to go but she intentionally hug and kiss Rey on his cheek making taani burn in jealousy.

Chapter-7 part b ~ Dance and Mystery
Its continued from last part only after Ria left.

Ria's hug and kiss burned something in taani. Though she tried hard to look away and avoid looking at them but still something pained inside her... may be her crushed heart. That memory of dil ibaadat sequence when she kissed on his cheek first time added more to her pain and brought crystal droplets in her eyes though she hid them very well.

Rey and taani both looked at each other for a moment. Then taani turned to go but Rey held her wrist firmly.

"Leave my hand,Rey."

"No first you have to tell me what was my mistake?" Rey said to her.

"I have already told you,"taani replied.

"But i didnt understand."

"So?"

Rey pulled her to him such that her back crashed with his chest and whispered in her ear,"So dance with me and make me understand."

"No I wont," She replied.

Rey took out a remote from his pocket and played that song still holding her firmly by his other hand.
He kept the remote back in his pocket and dangerously whispered in her ear,"But you have to."

Then With one hand he held her index finger and twirled her around holding her finger in the very next moment..

Mere Haath Mein Tera Haath Ho Saari Jannatein Mere Saath Ho... (2)
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa

( this is just a practice and trailer so i am not adding full song.. you can play the song in other tab if you wish )

Then he pulled her to him , held her hands and intertwining his fingers with hers, he outstretched their arms doing a dance move.

Then after doing some dance moves, he turned her around such that her back was facing him then gaining her consciousness back,she tried going out of his grip shyly but he held her both hands and pulled her back to him. Sparks flew and fire ignited in their racing hearts with intoxicating proximity.

Jitne Paas Paas Dhadkan Ke Hain Raaz
Jitne Paas Bundon Ke Baadal
Jaise Saath Saath Chanda Ke Hain Raat
Jitne Paas Nainon Ke Kaajal
Jitne Paas Paas Saagar Ke Lehar
Utne Paas Tu Rehna Humsafar
Tu Jo Paas Ho Phir Kya Yeh Jahaan
Tere Pyar Mein Ho Jaaun Fanaa

He slide his hands down her bare arms intoxicating her while nuzzling his face in the crook of her neck.. His touch was like it set her whole body on fire and she was like a cold breeze relaxing him, relieving him and giving him much needed peace and calmness. At the same time she used to burn him in the fire and never ending passion of love.

Then after doing some dance moves, he lifted her up holding her little bare waist leaving a tingling sensation within her. Her eyes were closed, breathing was ragged, heartbeats were raising synching with his beats and breathes were mingling. Their passion and love was speaking volumes silently while he was bringing her down.
At last he put her down and then kept his forehead on her shoulder while holding her close. She shivered slightly feeling his hot breath on her bare skin. His close proximity always took her to some other world making her lost in him and his love. He used to leave some different sensations in her with his touch of love which she has never experienced before but his touch was as if it could arise every buried desire in her.

He pulled her close and hugged her tightly as if embracing the most precious treasure of his life in a deep wish to love her eternally and keep her close to him in his embrace forever and ever. She also hugged him tightly unconsciously finding solace and home in his arms and buried her face in his chest. She still had her eyes closed as if she was living the most beautiful dream of her life- the dream of love or the dead dream of love may be...

~

taani's phone ringed bringing them back to the real world.

Gaining her self consciousness back and calming her heartbeats, She broke the hug and detached herself from him.

She put the strand of hair behind her ear while looking down hiding the blush that crept her cheeks with his close proximity. She went and picked up her phone that was also kept on that cube.

She didnt want to look at him. Though unwontedly and uncontrollably she stole few glances at him from the corner of her eyes.

He was looking here and there and sometimes at her trying to avoid the awkwardness. At the same time he was also confused and scared of her reaction.

She fidgeted with the hands holding that phone while trying to steady herself from his effect but she frowned seeing an unknown number calling her.

"Unknown number. Ye kiska hai," she mumbled to herself but he immediately looked at her with curiosity.

She still answered it anyways thinking it could be some important call, "Hello."

"TAANIYAAA..." a deep voice came from the other side with a heavy sigh that shook her entire self.

~~~to be continued in next part~~~

Precap -
The night is not yet over

A date?

Suspense.. mystery .. romance ... dance .. 😛

So friends how was the update? Do tell me whether you liked it or not in your comments... and do tell which part do you like the most ? What do you think the mystery is all about... :)
Silent readers please do hit like as well as comment for writer's hardwork at least.

- next part is written too. I will update it as soon as you all will like and comment :)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
TaaRey romance 😳
Eager to read who called Taani
Update it ASAP
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update..
taarey dance luvly...
new twist..
eager to knw whose call it is..
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome yr
really loved it alot
taareys dance was sprb yr
mindblowing
taarey k breakup k bad b taani ka reation rey k 6une pr vesa hi h
i love this scene most
taani ko kiska call aya jo vo itna shock ho gai
pla update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tr dance loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awsm update
Taarey dance nice
Next update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wah didu itni jaldi😆
Btw Awesome Chapter didu, Loved it a lot..
Hayye, That Dance was Amazing😳
At last that caller😲
Waiting Eagerly for Next Chapter, Update Soon..
Thanks for d PM..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update...
Loved their moment in dance...
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb taareylious update..
Loved it..
Who is that man..??
He/she called taaniya..??
Waiting for next update..

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